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Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2013 11:48 AM Title: Chantilly Lace

you have right about under the blood moon.reminds me of shadowboxer

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2013 8:32 AM Title: Chantilly Lace

i am so glad Rose has pulled the stick out of her ass and is giving Bella a chance.

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2013 7:39 AM Title: Chantilly Lace

Oh lord. Rose doesn't know right? I mean she would go back to mondo bitch mode.

Reviewer: AngelicFront5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chantilly Lace

I am a huge fan of yours. I would li ve for you to continue "A WholeNew Ball Game". Any chance uou will write more?

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chantilly Lace

This chapter was amazing love it very funny and I wonder if they will find out

Reviewer: razlchill Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2013 5:33 PM Title: A Little Help from My Friends

Loving this story.  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 11:47 PM Title: Much Ado

Very cute story! Well written and I've been LOL-ing quite a number of times ;) I'm looking forward to reading more. Your Bella is a tough cookie and Edward is a softy, so they fit perfectly together :P

I'm rec'ing you on my blog, check it out if you want. I'm on inordinately dot wordpress dot com (not sure if TWCS would accept the link) or you can find me on twitter, my handle is inordinately. 

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2012 11:29 PM Title: Nancy Drew (verb)

I have to admit that I am really getting into this story! I can't wait to see how it turns out :)

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 7:33 PM Title: Much Ado

Yay! He finally gave it to her? It makes me so happy!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 9:27 AM Title: Much Ado

I hope you are feeling better good to hear from you.  I love these two and this proposal was perfect.  Esme is going to shit she is going to be so happy and blist lol

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:25 AM Title: Do You Love Me?

So enjoying this story and yes the said it!!!  Can't wait for the Cullen women to descend!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 5:19 PM Title: Silent Lucidity

this story is wonderful .....I am waiting for the other shoe to drop amd it all go sour ...and thanks so much for the recs the we a nice spacer in between your up dates

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:31 PM Title: Do You Love Me?

hey

great chapter!

my gosh....

these two nurses...

they said it....! great!

now it gets interesting... but I hope Alice will make a good wedding!

bye

Lil

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 2:21 PM Title: A Little Traveling Music

they are so perfect together I hope they can both feel the chemistry between them its so sweet to read

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:15 AM Title: Do You Love Me?

Finally! Now we dress shop and shut the snobby bitches up with how awesome Bella looks!

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 5:19 AM Title: Do You Love Me?

Yay! they finally said ILY! 

I can't wait to read about the Cullens coming!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:43 AM Title: Do You Love Me?

Loved it :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:05 AM Title: Do You Love Me?

Yes,yes, yes!!!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 3:45 AM Title: Do You Love Me?

Love it! can't wait for more!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 3:35 AM Title: Do You Love Me?

Just started reading and I have to ask how many more chapters do you see this story going?  Wonderful, and love it so far.  Don't normally start new WIPS well at least not lately since way too many peeps walk away.  Anyway, just curious how many chapters you see this in the end, and what your posting schedule is like?



Author's Response:

HI! Thanks so much for reading! 

UGH - that's my least favorite question, cuz I'm really bad at guestimating how many chapters something will be! LOL We've still got a proprosal, dress shopping, some time to kill, and a wedding... so I'd say around 5 more chapters. And I update every other week. 

Glad you found me and are enjoying the story! 

Sandra

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 3:46 AM Title: A Little Traveling Music

Too fucking cute...These two are adorable!!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:00 PM Title: Executioner's Song

Finally caught up with these two. Well the meeting with Charlie went better than they thought. Hopefully this will stay forever and the harmony between Bellan and Edward will stay or grow.

So lovely. :)

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:17 PM Title: Status

It is getting serious for Bella and Edward. Not much longer and everybody knows about their relationship. Than the engagement, than the wedding, than the pregnancy, than the cute little Bellas and Edwards ;)

 

Well first these two have to say the famous three words.

 

I am curious, how Charlie will react, when they break the news to him.

Reviewer: Alexsgirl311 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:28 AM Title: Silent Lucidity

Wow i got to say i was disappointed with the act... had high hopes thay it was going to be hot but it was rushed and didnt have any spark

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 9:53 PM Title: Executioner's Song

This is moving on well, really enjoying it.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 2:17 AM Title: Executioner's Song

I'm thinking Edward needs a plan that involves a specific ring and three words!  What do all the nurses think about him being taken?

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 9:07 PM Title: Executioner's Song

Ok finishhed reading up to this point. Love it!!!

Author's Response:

Sorry for the delayed reply - thanks so much for reading! Glad you're enjoying the story. :) 

Sandra

Reviewer: momof2jcs Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:14 PM Title: Take a Chance on Me

Just want to say I thanks - your story is great. I just found it and finished this chapter and I will continue until I am up to date. Thank you also for your recommendations - looking forward to checking those out.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 1:10 PM Title: Executioner's Song

:)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:28 AM Title: Executioner's Song

This story always leaves me with the biggest, goofyiest grin on my face.  Thank you!  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:58 AM Title: Executioner's Song

I love Charlie he loves his little girl it is a good thing Edward loves her to.

Reviewer: jkp13452 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:07 AM Title: Executioner's Song

I absolutely love your story! I wish for quicker updates but I can live with what I get! 

 

I also loe corporate affairs! It's such a great story. I have been reading it since it was first published!! :)

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 11:27 PM Title: Executioner's Song

I love Charlie! He's such a good dad :)

I can't wait to see how they will make it work once she goes back to school. 

Love it!

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 7:35 PM Title: Executioner's Song

hey

great chapter!

I love the last sentence..

Charlie is a great father...

I like him very much!

I sooo wanna know when Edward asks Bella the right way..

and give her tat great ring!

bye

Lil

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 7:26 PM Title: Executioner's Song

Oh! Yay. I'm glad that went well. Hopefully we will hear the I love yous next time.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 5:05 PM Title: Executioner's Song

That's right!!  Love matters!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 4:57 PM Title: Executioner's Song

Loved it as always :)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 3:49 PM Title: Executioner's Song

aww she loves him... charlie really is a good father that just looks out for Bella.   now they both need to say I love you's..

Reviewer: sandras Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 5:02 AM Title: Status

i loved edward and bella i know love  can happen  accidentally!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 8:42 AM Title: Status

OME Gun totting Charlie up next! Can't wait for the infamous mustashed one!  LOL, Cheri

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 9:31 PM Title: Status

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2012 9:14 PM Title: Limbo

:)

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 4:09 PM Title: Status

hey
great chapter!
uiii now it gets interesting...
but Edward has to make a real proposal to Bella!
and now first Charlie...
great!
bye
Lil

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 6:36 AM Title: Status

Love it love him he is so sweet.  I cant wait til they go to meet Charlie.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 10:14 PM Title: Status

Things seem to be going well, can't wait until the Charlie meeting. Then the FB status change and Alice friend request!   What will the hospital and school gossip be?

I have two recs for you...... I love dishie 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8625307/1/In-Plain-Sight

I usually don't do an angsty story but I gotta tell ya this one has me hooked, 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8259969/1/A-Dry-Heat

Reviewer: pricana81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 9:54 PM Title: Status

Thank you for posting I'm sure you did it because it is my birthday ;)... or atleast that is what I keep telling myself :)

LOVED IT! I loved that they are doing their best to 

I love his answer to her statement at the end... it makes it so real because every relationship is going to have problems and Edward makes her understand that they will go through and deal with them together.

I can't wait for him to meet Charlie!!

 

Are you part of the Cutestkidsmom FB group? 

Reviewer: Mona Ogg Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 7:54 PM Title: A Little Help from My Friends

I love this story! I don't read many AH Twilight fics, unless I think they're special... and this is very special! It's cute and fluffy and made me smile after a long and frustrating day. Lovely! :)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2012 3:36 PM Title: Status

I love it... I am so glad that they found one another!  

Reviewer: nikkirocsurworld Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 8:33 PM Title: Limbo

Love it! Take your time updating...haha Jk update ASAP!!!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2012 8:44 PM Title: Limbo

I just started reading this story and am in love with it.  Wonderful and thx for the recs.

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 5:47 PM Title: Limbo

hey

great chapter!

soo sorry that the trip is over...

I'm sure it will work out...

but how Charlie will react I have no idea!

I hope he will be ok...

and when not then Edward will be there to help him ;)

bye

Lil

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 7:15 AM Title: Limbo

Oh this is exciting. Charlie may flip when he hears the news.... And then take Edward hunting.

Reviewer: nicky99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:26 PM Title: Limbo

awesome story!!  I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 5:15 AM Title: One for the Money

I'm so sorry the R/L is being such a witch. You will be in my thoughts.

That being said, so in love with THIS story.  Thank you and LOL, Cheri

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 9:20 PM Title: Limbo

Charlie will be fine won't he? After he is sure she isn't pregnant ;-)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 6:22 PM Title: One for the Money

The beach is perfect for them

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 4:17 PM Title: Limbo

Love it!  Your "scenes" are perfect!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 3:23 PM Title: Limbo

I cant wait till they get back and see how things go and when are Rose and Alice coming where are they going live so many ??   Cant wait for answers lol

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 2:53 PM Title: Limbo

Loved it :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2012 8:50 PM Title: One for the Money

She is holding herself together very well quit overwelling for a girl that doesnt come from money.

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2012 2:31 PM Title: Behind Closed Doors

just found this story and i am not ashamed to say that i am addicted

love the 'wedding date' twist that youve put on this

you are phenominally talented

love the quirks that youve added to my favs

ive been waiting for this chap not just for the smexing but for the convo w angela that was long overdue

again well done!!!

 

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 8:18 PM Title: One for the Money

thank you for the update.sorry about your family.I love this story and like Alice can't wait for the wedding.until you post again

Reviewer: aidabye Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2012 1:17 AM Title: A Little Help from My Friends

LOVE IT.

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 9:37 PM Title: One for the Money

Awww - I love it!  Each and every moment is just perfect for these two!  Thank you!

~allidel  :)

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 9:18 PM Title: One for the Money

Awwww......... They have the reception hall and the colors picked out, we just need for Edward to get the real ring and ask her properly!  

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:37 PM Title: One for the Money

Loved it :)

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:36 PM Title: A Little Help from My Friends

hey

great chapter!

my gosh... so much money!

but I really would like a wedding at the beach, too!

I hope Charlie will take it out well..

and not try to killl Edward ;)

bye

Lil

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 12:35 PM Title: One for the Money

:) awwww

Reviewer: cullen-mad Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 8:21 AM Title: One for the Money

I know how you feel my father has just been diagnosised with throat cancer and it's in the lympth nodes he has just started chemo and diets going to be a long road head with more chemo and radio therapy. We are all trying to saty strong for him and my mum and he is ready for the fight, but it still sucks right now. Christmas will be rough with dad being feed through a tube. Hope you are still staying strong and need to keep fighting I know it's not easy but some times there is now other choice, keep fighting this horrible disease stay strong, good luck with you treatment. 

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:24 AM Title: One for the Money

I'm kind of excited for them to go home ow and drop the bomb on Charlie... Fun times!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 3:48 AM Title: One for the Money

Fantastic chapter.

I just recently found out about Just4ale. How sad. The writing world lost a star

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:11 PM Title: Awake My Soul

That was sweet and I'm looking forward to the mess that is Maggie and her friends, can't see her taking this lying down.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 10:40 PM Title: Rose is a Rose is a Rose is a Rose

Got to love your Rose, ascerbic to the nth...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 10:27 PM Title: Bedroom Confessional

So sweet all tangled up and sleepy.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 10:15 PM Title: A Little Traveling Music

I love your writing, it flows so well, is concise, the characters are individual and it is easy to read.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 9:40 PM Title: Nancy Drew (verb)

This is shaping up to be an excelent story.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 12:14 AM Title: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

Shit i LOVE this! Hurry update please?!

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 6:11 AM Title: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

Carlisle is right, if they want to tell the family, how they met in reality they can say it, but if it is private, than nobody needs to know.

Somehow Alice is a little bit over enthusiastic. I mean Edward and Bella are barely engaged and she jumps already on the wedding-waggon. 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 5:46 AM Title: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

First off, love this chapter, love all the Cullan and yes they are crazee!

Second, I have been reading You Came to Early and am obsessed so keep reading, very down to earth and sweet, heartbreaking and wonderful.  Be sure to see the pictures! 

Ok, back to AIL, love where this is going and thank you for explaining about the ring.  See you soon?  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 1:45 PM Title: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

thank you for the update...........I love this  story..I hope their secret is safe..they are in love and really getting married that is all that matters

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 8:11 AM Title: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

:)

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:57 AM Title: Coffee, Tea or Me?

Bella is more outgoing. I love it

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:40 AM Title: A Little Help from My Friends

I am really enjoying it

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:04 AM Title: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

It's exciting every time we hear about the wedding. I really thought he was gonna tell Carlisle the whole story, but it's better this way. I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Sweetie7smiled Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2012 12:34 AM Title: A Little Help from My Friends

Lol!  What an interesting beginning!  This is neat; thanks for writing!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 11:04 PM Title: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

 

Can't wait for another drunk Esme appearance, she's a hoot. I'm sure Carlisle has some of his own secrets. Can't wait to see what hurrican Alice creates and how faulty is she planning on having them get married? Think Bella fits in great with the family especially dishing back wat Emmett serves:-)

Can't wait for the real proposal to come.

You need to check out The Cullen Enterprise by Amethyst Jackson...WIP daily updates short chapters. Also. Under Pressure by JiffyKate...WIP daily updates short chapters based off John hughs 80's films. Frontline by MissAlex...WIP it's a rewrite up to the new chapter 15 and boy is it getting good (is Edward terrorist or CIA operative?)

Loved The gentleman from Washington State thanks for sending it to me.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 9:10 PM Title: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

I LOVE this story. It's sooooo real!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 7:34 PM Title: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

I think Carlisle has a story of his own he dosent want to share ;)  I am so happy for them

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2012 6:22 PM Title: Ring-a-Ding-Ding!

Loved it  :)

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 10:31 PM Title: Behind Closed Doors

Ha, this is gonan be interesting, how will Charlie take it?

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2012 5:54 PM Title: Behind Closed Doors

:)

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 1:40 PM Title: Behind Closed Doors

OMG this is one of the funniest stories out there!! I love it and look forward to your post!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 4:28 AM Title: Behind Closed Doors

Loved it :)

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Date: 07 Sep 2012 2:59 AM Title: Silent Lucidity

I really love this story. Its so refreshing. Can't wait for the next chapter. You are awesome!

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 12:48 AM Title: Silent Lucidity

Absolutely freakin love it.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 5:27 PM Title: Silent Lucidity

I so love this story...they are perfect for oneanother

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 1:58 PM Title: Silent Lucidity

They did it, after lots of cuddling and cute moments before :)

Now the romance can begin and on their wedding day, Edward can propose to her very romantically. And than she can say 2 times yes ;)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 4:37 AM Title: Silent Lucidity

I for one loved it!  Thank you - Cheri

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:17 AM Title: Silent Lucidity

About time! Hehehehehe! So happy. Now I wanna know how this is all gonna work out.

Reviewer: Kalahara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 1:49 AM Title: Silent Lucidity

I'm so hoping when he asks her the whole family is there lol. Great story!!!

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