[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 32
Things are definetly lookin up....great job!!!!!!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
OMG such a cute story I'm hooked.... Can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 31
ohhh!!!! Im patiently waiting for more!! I just knew it would work, and the divorce is final too!!! Bella will never be able to leave those babies!!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 31
God. That's was sweet. I kind of like a panicky Edward. And Brooklyn is just too cute for wards.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 30
Yeah!!!!! I know I shouldn't be happy about this, but I can't help it. This is going to be some good drama. I can feel it.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 31
AHHH that's it?!?!?!!?! You have to update again, I need to know how they work this one out. Okay that's a little selfish but other people are thinking it too. Please update soon!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
Did I say I love you yet? I started reading this story while I waiting on you to update another one. Once again I was pulled into the story can't wait for the next update
Date: 01 Feb 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 31
Edward has a panic attack apparently and finally gets it together enough to see Bella consoling Brooklyn and hopefully they will finally be able to talk and move on. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 01 Feb 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 31
OH Wow...they will survive...they will survive! I know it!
Date: 01 Feb 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 30
OH SNAP! That was amazing! I really loved it! I cannot wait for more!
Date: 01 Feb 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 31
shhh, I am at work too :) Great chapter, but I need more, I hope Edward is right in his optimism at the end.
Date: 01 Feb 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oh for the love of all things holy!!! This is gonna be epic....please please please post the next chappie soon!
Date: 01 Feb 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 30
Oops!! There we have it. Now how will this go down? Please let it be a great one!
Date: 01 Feb 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 30
I think we all knew this was coming, and truly I hope she doesn't get too mad because I think they both brought this on themselves. When the relationship went beyond the encounter on the plane, they should have fessed up instead of spending months getting to know each other physically but none of the truth. At least Edward has attempted to tell her, she just never wanted to hear it. Update soon!!!
Date: 01 Feb 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Aha! They meet. Tanya? Tanya who? This should get interesting.
Date: 01 Feb 2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Whew! There for a minute I thought JAcob might be with Tanya. On the other hand I don't know what I'm whewin' about because cheating is cheating, lol. Yes, I agree, Bella needs to get the hell out of dodge. Perhaps she will cross paths with Edward and the airport ;).
Date: 01 Feb 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Children? It seems the love is gone so little ones are the only thing I can imagine that will hold him to her. What a path to walk.
Date: 01 Feb 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella. A very difficult time for her. One can understand the need to get away.
Date: 01 Feb 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
Does she disappear like this often? How does one stay in a marriage that brings nothing but heartache and frustration?
Date: 01 Feb 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi!
Each morning I check here to see what is new and what stories have completed. This morning WBotB popped up #1. The title sends me back along time to a song by the same name. Naturally I you tubed it. So I am back and will read your story. Imagine my delight to find it is also complete and just waiting to post!
Bella is certainly broken in this first chapter .....
".... I know I've got to find some kind of peace of mind ...."
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fCYXZJTylOY
May she find what she is looking for.
Date: 01 Feb 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 29
Love her plan! I just hope Alice does'nt call Tex by his real name before they get there because Bella would have a heart attack. I hope you have another chapter for us tonite!
Date: 01 Feb 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
I can't wait for her to find out that Edward is Masen!! Please let him come clean soon!
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 29
Perfect!!! Boy would I like to be a fly on the wall when they see eachother. Bella will have to remember what Alice told her about Edwards wife. I hope he walks in to Bella lying in the floor with he babies all over her!
Date: 01 Feb 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 29
LOL Edward and Bella are in for a surprise when Edward shows up to get his kids and Bella is there. I wonder how they will move into Edward's explanation of him life with that senario(sp? lol) =) I keep forgetting to write this and it's kind of late in the story, but I love Edward's kids names, Brooklyn and Gunner. I've never heard those names but I love them so much. This is a great story so please keep updating=)
Date: 01 Feb 2012 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 29
OH WOW, that was amazing! I wonder what Alice will think when she finds out Edward and Bella are already together ;)
Date: 31 Jan 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 29
Well that clears that question up. I can't believe Alice didn't figure it out yet. But I guess if Edward hasn't opened up to her yet and Jasper doesn't share then it makes sense.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 28
Ohhhhh! So I wonder if Edward will find one of Brooklyn's precious binkies. Or will they meet at Alice's before he comes clean. God I love this story.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 28
OH WOW...SO amazing! I cannot wait to see her reaction when she finally makes the connection or finds out the connection! YAY!
Date: 31 Jan 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMG this story is so awesome! I love how they met and how Bella met Alice. Please keep the chapters rolling, I check about every 20 minutes to see if there is an update! Got to run at work and all, but will check back in a few.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
Edward is so in love and needs to tell Bella the truth as soon as he gets back. Love it!
Date: 31 Jan 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
I love that Edward is opening up to his family. Now if he would only open up to Bella.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
This Bella! You're strong, you can kick the ass of Tania.
I am totally against treason, but Tania is horrivel.Espero
to solve Edwrad tell Bella.
Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
Im such a sucker for romance, I just want the lies to stop and them to be together and settled. Im nervous for them!!
Date: 31 Jan 2012 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 27
This will be interesting...can't wait til Edward finds out who Bella's friend is!
Date: 31 Jan 2012 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 27
OH wow, that was amazing :) I really loved it!
Date: 31 Jan 2012 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
OH SNAP! I love that she knows Alice...Masen's sister ;)
Date: 31 Jan 2012 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 26
OMG! You are a genius. I have asked numerous people and you are the first to mention this.
I can't believe that Bella already knows Brooklyn and Gunner. I thought for sure this would be the first time they meet. I wonder do they call her Ma?
Author's Response:
Aww... thanks, hon! **blushing** I thought you all would like that! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Krazi
Date: 31 Jan 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 26
It is fixing to get good!! I am so excited I can't wait till the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Things are certainly going to get intersting! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 26
OMG...Bella already knows Gunner and Brooklyn, wonder why they havent called her ma? I cant wait for edward to get back. When spending time with Alice will she see a pic of Edward, Tanya and the kids, think they are happy and run... Im officially going crazy!!!
Author's Response:
Lol! You´re so warm, I see sparks flying! Lol! Thanks for reading and always reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 31 Jan 2012 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
Things are getting stickier...Alice...Edwards brother, Bella, Alices friend...Oh brother!! Things like this is what I was afraid of....Lets have more!! Were greedy!!
Date: 31 Jan 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
AHHH! So Bella and Alice have meet. OMG! Does that mean that the babies are going to meet Bella this weekend. I wonder what she will do when they start calling her Ma.....
Date: 31 Jan 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love it!! I hope that the friend that Alice is talking about is Bella!! I hope Edward is the one to tell Bella. I would love 2 more chapters! Being the greedy person I am.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it! I don't care which you do...maybe if you have time, you can do both ;)
Date: 31 Jan 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 24
That was just one hot chapter. Cake is one great forplay.
Bella is finally starting to crack under the pressure. I really hope that Edward is able to make everything right.
I wonder if Edward leaving has anything to do with Tanya????
I'm really sad that I'm out of chapters...
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love Mrs Cope.... Of course Edward would forget the baby monitors. It's just precious that she kept it in all nthis time.
I'm really glad that Edward didn't give Tanya that Engagement ring because I'm sure that the one he did give her is long gome now....
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
This is really starting to take it's toll on her. I wonder how long it will be before it breaks them. I hope that they can overcome all this.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 21
While I would normally never wish someone harm, I can't help but wish that Tanya would meet her end very soon. It would make life soooo much easier for Edward and really who would miss her.......
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
I don't believe she stopped him.......
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 19
While I think it is a little soon for Edward to be calling Bella the twin's mother I think it's great that he finally is cutting that Bitch Tanya out of his life and theirs. They really deserve someone better then Tanya in their lives and I just might think that Bella will be just what they need. Hopefully she can handle the ready made family.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm glad that Edward is done hiding. I wonder where Edward's life away from Bella is at???
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
Words of Love before names.... While I'm glad that Bella finally confessed her first name I wonder how long they are going to continue this. How long is it going to be before they come clean and deal with the reality of their real lives.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
Okay how long has it been???? Obviously they have been together for a while and yet they still don't know each others names.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMG! They seem too precious for words. I can imagine them sleeping together like that.... You are so amazing with words that it isn't hard to picture them.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 14
OH shit twins. I wonder how they are going to fit into this. I wonder if that will make Bella run....
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
You had me worried for a minute I thought that they were just going to go their seperate ways for a minute there. I can't help but wonder where they are going to go from there. I mean what type of relationship can they have when it has all started with lies. I mean they don't even know their real names.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
Okay I wonder if him giving her the name Jasper whitlock is going to totally bite him in the ass later. I can see him knocking her up and her showing up at Alice's door only to be beat down by the pixie thinking she cheater with Jasper.......
Now I wonder how Edward is feeling about taking Bella's virginity in the bathroom of a airplane. From the tender way he took care of her I'm guessing that it was a suprise that may cause some problems....
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 10
I can't believe he rubbed one off for her before fingering her on the plane . Now that takes some guts.....
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
OMG! This chapter was great. I loved the creepy bartender and how Bella handled him. Then the skanks were running their mouth and Bella put a stop to that. Then her playfully sexy flirting.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow! I'm all the way in Northeat Pennsylvania and I can feel the sexual tension for here......
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow! This move is even harder for Bella then just losing her father I can't believe that she will be starting over all alone like that. I wonder if she told Sue what Leah and Jake did to her?????
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh they meet at last.....
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
God you really hate Tanya and Jacob in this story. Man they are two of the most selfserving people that have ever walked this story world.....
I'm soooo proud of Bella for beating that shit out of him and not listening to any of his bullshit.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well that answers why Edward was searching for Tanya. God I hate that he has put up with that shit for sooooo long. I'm sure that he has put everything on himself and thats why he stayed.
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
God she is dealing with sooo much. I don't know how she is even able to deal with all that on her own.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
I wonder what the story is between Edward and Tanya. I wonder what is going on at home. The mystery continues.
Author's Response:
Stick with me, and I really hope it does! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Okay I want to first warn you that my reviews for all 24 chapters are going to come in rapid fire. But I absolutely love this story and want to review every single one. I read them all this morning on my iPhone while at work today. Now if you know anything about this site and the iPhone or iPad then you sadly know that you are unable to review. So here goes I took notes.....
My heart bleeds for the little bit of information that we have on Bella.
Author's Response:
Haha! I love it! The trick to reviewing on an iPad or iPhone is to type it out in the notes, and then copy and paste! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Welcome aboard this Krazi Train!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 31 Jan 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hey, I hope this reveiws.. I have problems with it sending sometimes. If it does I hope you know that I am loving it so far... It would been better if Bella had kicked Jacob in the nuts... ( welllll maybe that is just me LOL) Anyway LOVE IT!! Update soon!
Date: 31 Jan 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh wow, that was amazing! I am glad he is finally making her listen to what he has to say. Granted, I don't think it was best for him to make her wait until he returned from his trip to do so. I cannot wait to see how she reacts!
Date: 30 Jan 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh wow, that was amazing! YAY!!!!
Date: 30 Jan 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
GAH, some amazing :)
Date: 30 Jan 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 24
No! I need to know what happens! Please please please update soon!
Date: 30 Jan 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
=) I really love this story. Please update soon, I need to know how Bella reacts to what Edward has to say and how she integrates into his life.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 24
Whew!!!!! What can I say? I love it!
Date: 30 Jan 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
Plz let her understand!!
Date: 30 Jan 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
he needs to tell her and fast!! tanya seems to be lurking in the background
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
Yes, thank God.....it's definetly time!! I honestly wonder how she held out this long, so many questions. I hope that something doesn't happen in between time for him to get back. After all, didn't he say he lived 10 min from her hotel? What if Bella and the babies nanny were in the same deli or whatever and the babies recognized her and said ma, and Gunner is Edwards twin, that would be uh oh!!! Bella please don't run, wait for Edward to explain everything!!!! He tried to tell you and you wanted to wait!!!
I love this story. I get so excited when I see a new update!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2012 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think Bella will be shocked when she learns the truth. But, I believe she will stand by him, after all he is leagally seperated and his divorce will be final soon. Tanya must be surviving on the pawn of her ring. Tanys is in for a big surprise when she comes back!!! Bella will love Gunner and Brooklyn, when Tanya comes back and learns about the changes while she was gone, she will tell them how much she hates them and is using them and the Cullen name to get more money. She will end up dead when James fiinds out his money train is over!!
Date: 30 Jan 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
The story is good :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella has all her confidence but what happens when Tanya rears her ugly head again That just isn't going to be pretty. I just hope Edward kicks Tany to the street
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2012 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wait til she finds out she's been cut off. Things are going to get crazy
Date: 30 Jan 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
i stayed up just to see if you would post another one and you did great chapter looking forward to more
Date: 30 Jan 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
Go Bella!!!!!!!!!! She takes everything especially that mmm cock!!! I would too! So at least we know she will stand by him. She just needs to let him tell her and all will be well. I am so hoping you get 10 reviews because tomorrow start another work week and I would love to read another chapter before I have to turn in!
Date: 30 Jan 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh Hell No!!!! That fucking bitch just needs to od or disappear forever. She doesn't need to be in the same state as those children or Edward!! I bet she will shit a brick when she finds out she will get no money from Edward. James will probably dump her ass or they will concoct a plan to get money from Edward. I really can't stand the slut and hope she gets what is coming to her and fast.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 20
Well Bella is scared of what Edward is going to say that is for sure. Edward, what can I say about Edward, I WANT AN EDWARD LIKE HIM!!!! He is a total package and from that picture of what his cock looks like, he is purfect!!!! Damn!!
Date: 30 Jan 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 19
Edward is on the move and taking no chances with Tanya and I am so glad that he does not want her near the children. Now all he has to do is come clean with Bella and I hope it turns out like I am hoping it will.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 21
she reminds me of my sister sadly lol but well written because she is VERY TRUE TO LIFE great chapter
Date: 30 Jan 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 21
Gah, Tanya is messed up! I knew she would be, but not this much.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
Kepp it coming, please. Really enjoying your story.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 20
=) =) =) =) =) I love this story. Though I kind of wish some more real life stuff was discussed, I know they aren't ready for that. So I'll just keep following this journey through the wonderful story you've created.
Please keep updating constantly it's as awesome as your writing=)
Date: 30 Jan 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
i just found this story and im hooked thats for what seems like such quick updates.. i hope bella understands when he finally tells her the truth great story
Date: 29 Jan 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
OH WOW, that was amazing! I really loved it! I hope Bella has his child soon too ;) I found a little mistake your beta overlooked, here "When the damn broke, and she screamed my name," It should be "dam", not "damn"; "damn" is the curse word, while "dam" is "a barrier that impounds water or underground streams", which would apply here :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it. Cant' wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
Glad he's moving forward with the divorce. What was he thinking, staying with her
Date: 29 Jan 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh wow, that was amazing! I am SO happy he is divorcing that witch, Tanya, actually, witch is probably a compliment, but I don't want to write the real word I am thinking of ;) Anyway, cannot wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Goodness!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep the updates coming, this story is totally addictive!!
Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
OH wow...that was amazing! I cannot wait to see/read her reaction to Gunny and Brook!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yes, now that she opened up, his turn. He need to talk slowly, and explain carefully!! Carefully so she doesn't tune him out at the word married, like I said in last chapter. They have a intense love, very rare. Too great to leave. :)