Date: 06 Feb 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 48
Hope Sue will move when Seth does. I can't wait till the next chapter!
Date: 06 Feb 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 46
Well little baby Cullen is going to make them wait till he or she is born to know . I can't wait to know what it will be.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 48
Everything seems to be going great, I just can't wait till Tanya shows up! Its going to be great, I just know it!
Date: 05 Feb 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 48
=) =) I love Edward being all caring and protective during Bella's pregnancy. And I am dying to know the sex of the baby. Please don't hold off on that detail for too long. Please keep updating, it's as awesome as your writing!=)
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2012 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 48
Love that the families are melding together so nicely. It's good for Bella to have both her families with her
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 47
Short and sweet. Glad Sue and Seth are still part of her life
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 46
Such a sweet chapter. That little one is stubborn but what a wonderful surprise if they have to wait until the birth to find out the sex. I could just picture a little diaper clad Gunner shaking his butt to the music!!
Date: 05 Feb 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 45
So glad he finally gave in. The poor girl was dying there!!!
Date: 05 Feb 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 48
Oh wow, that was amazing! I really loved it! I cannot wait to see what the baby is :)
Date: 05 Feb 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 47
Wow, that was great! I loved it!
Date: 05 Feb 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 46
Wow, that was amazing! I cannot wait to find out what happens next!
Date: 05 Feb 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 45
GAH, that was amazing! I shot you an email, check it out ;) I loved this!
Date: 05 Feb 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 44
That was great. I live that Edward did the same thing Bella did when she caught him masterbating.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 44
Gah, that was amazing! I really loved it! I want an update! I don't watch football!
Date: 05 Feb 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 43
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it! One minor mistake found here "She devoured to giant-sized pieces of Italian Cream Cheese cake " It should be "two", not "to", since "two" is the number 2 ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the head up, but you´re seriously starting to give me a complex. However, I could go over each chapter with a fine tooth comb, if that makes you feel better. Of course, with a full time job, class, and other activities, you´d probably get one update a month, if you´re lucky. Or, we can let my one or two minor mistakes slide. Even the Twilight Saga had typos! Cut me some slack... Or you can beta the story too? Six eyes are better than two! :)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 05 Feb 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 43
Ewwww! That's one thing that never happened during my pregnancy.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 42
I'm so happy for them.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 41
I can't wait until he hears about the baby or babies.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 40
Alright there is no way he is upset she's pregnant. So I wonder what his deal is?
Date: 05 Feb 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 39
Yeah She's pregnant. I was hospitalized 3 times for dehydration and exhaustion while I was pregnant with my daughter. I was lucky though I didn't get sick in the morning mine hit at around 4 pm and lasted until 2-3 in the morning.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 38
That was incredibly sweet.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 44
no football watching for me bring on an update!!!
Date: 05 Feb 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 44
im with you, dont do football. I would love another update.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 44
OMG classic that will teach him to keep Mona bear miserable. She will just take matters into her own hands. Loved it can't wait to read more :-)
Date: 05 Feb 2012 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 44
I like the last to chapters. But still confused as hell. Bella was cringing away from Edward with her hand going to her stomach. Or something like that. I did not see a James Tanya moment in that. Sorry!! Still confused.
Author's Response:
It´s okay, that chapter will be key later on down the line. I assure you that it was between Tanya and James, not Bella and Edward. Remember, Tanya´s still out there lurking, so at anytime she´s going to rear her ugly head. I hope this clears things up for you. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 05 Feb 2012 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 44
I'm with you, Krazi! Screw football and bring on the chapters! This fic is still amazing.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 44
I am with Bella, I love me some Mac Taylor too, but I love me some Edward more! Horny Bella is going to be a force to be rekoned with and poor Edward is not going to be able to keep it in his pants if Bella has anything to do with it. The woman is on a orgasim mission and Edward is the key!!!! Love it and can't wait for the next update. Forget football update as much as you want cause I would rather read your story than watch a football game.
Date: 05 Feb 2012 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 43
Edward is on cloud nine!!! He is the total package. Bella is too! Please update soon!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 43
Glad they are home. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2012 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 42
Ok, so I'm a little confused but I think I might have it figured out. So, Edward is not angry and everyone is happy about the baby, good. I went back to try to figure out what I was missing and realized that there was no pov designation at the top of the "angry" chapter, so now I'm guessing that it was actually Tanya and James. I think you were being sneaky there! :-)
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 41
So it seems he's projecting his Tanya issues on Bella. I'm sure Tanya looked similar after a bender. Makes more sense but he still needs to get with the program here.
[Report This]Date: 05 Feb 2012 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 40
Well the pregnancy is not a surprise, but what the heck is with Edwards attitude? He better get with the program and fast!
Date: 05 Feb 2012 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 43
Yay pregnant Bella ! I wanna see her mood swings plz!! :)
Date: 05 Feb 2012 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 39
Love the Bella and Esme dynamic. Hmmmm, wonder why here stomach is all messed up??? :-)
Date: 05 Feb 2012 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 42
Ok so in Chapter 40 that wasn't Edward and Bella right? Could it be Tanya and James? That really had me doing a double and triple take. I am sure we will know soon. Maybe tonite?
Date: 05 Feb 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 42
Aw, YAY! SO happy for them!
Date: 05 Feb 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 42
Did I miss a chapter??? I am so freaking confused.... He is pissed! She is freaked. Nothing is explained now they are laughing... Huh???? Help please!!!
Date: 05 Feb 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 42
two chapters ago, wasn't Edward asking Bella "what have u done"? u got me all confused
Date: 04 Feb 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 41
Ok I get why he is worried. But not why he yelled at her WTF did u do! I don't get it.... Please update and explain! Thank u!!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 40
Why Is he so pissed?? I mean he knows she is it screwing around on him. She is in the hospital. Where is Esme?? She took her to said hospital.. So WTF???
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 41
He is not thinkin Bellas on drugs......I know he would be happy about the baby. I cahn't wait for the next update!!!!!!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 41
I don't get why he's mad? But good chapter!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 41
Okay Edward is going way OVERBOARD!!! He is going to get his ass handed to him by Esme for sure and I am also sure by Bella once she gets her shit together, the poor girl is overwhelmed and Edward bursting in has not helped her any with her being sick and all. Oh Edward, sweet, loving, sexy, well hung Edward what shall we do with you. We will see what is in store for him in the next chapter and I hope it is really soon. Greedy bitch is in the building!!!!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 40
What the hell just happened? Where is Esme? Why is he so fucking pissed? How long has she been in the hospital?
Date: 04 Feb 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 39
Esme is the mother of all mothers! She loves and loves with all that she has and Bella needs it and in return love the "mother" that Esme has become to her. I hope Bella will be ok. Please update soon!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 41
Ahh please update soon. I don't understand Edward's response to the doctor's words! Why is he mad? He should be extatic (sp?), not mad. I need to know what happens. Please put up a few more chapters today!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 38
LOVE IT ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 41
OH SNAP! I really cannot wait for more! Bella will be fine...I know it!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 39
Very sweet. So glad for Esme. I thought Bella was pregnant but Carlisle wouldn't admit her for that. What could it be.
Date: 04 Feb 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 40
OH SNAP! I don't think it is Edward and Bella though...because Edward really wanted Bella pregnant!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 39
Oh wow, that was amazing! Poor Bella, being sick sucks!
Date: 04 Feb 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 38
Wow, that was amazing!
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 37
Loved the proposal!!! Beautiful, heartfelt and those babies.... so glad about the adoption papers!!! I was wondering abou that. Complete family, for now, more babies please!!! As I have mentioned before, I wonder when Tanya will show her face???????
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2012 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 37
Loved it. Sooo sweet. Can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 36
Aw, that was a sweet one. Can't wait for the proposal. Of course she'll say yes!!!
Date: 03 Feb 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 37
OH WOW...that was amazing! I LOVED the proposal! The ring and the cakes were gorgeous! But, the name of the movie for Gunny's cake is Cars, not Car's ;) Also, here, “You´ve gave me my son back.” should be "You've given" or "You gave", since "You've" is "You have" and you have gave is two verbs, too many ;) Cannot wait for more!
Date: 03 Feb 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 37
That was beautiful!!!! What a loving family they are. I can't wait till the next update. Will Tanya be making an appearance? The bitch needs to be put in her place.
Date: 03 Feb 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 36
Loved the chapter and hope she will say yes!
Date: 03 Feb 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 36
It was nice seeing Edward and Carlisle have a moment.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 36
This story keeps getting better and better!! I can't wait to hear from Tanya, boy does she have some surprises awaiting her, not only divorced, parental rights gone, but when she arrives back at the penthouse to find it empty, ha, the look on her face will be priceless!! Gravy train over sista!!!
Date: 03 Feb 2012 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 36
Wow, that was AMAZING! I really loved it! She will say yes!
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2012 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 36
Yay thank you for some great chapters. Love this story :-)
Date: 03 Feb 2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 36
Goodnight! Thnx!!
Date: 03 Feb 2012 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 35
I feel so bad for the poor guy. He always takes everything so personal. I don't think tgere is a parent out there that wasn't caught in a compromising position at least once by their children. Me included.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 35
Wow, um, yeah. Happy Birthday indeed!! Looking forward to the next one!
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 34
So glad Tanya hasn't reared her ugly head. They need to get those parental rights revoked from her. He, He He, what a sight to walk in on!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 33
Oh Boy!! So totally busted. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 03 Feb 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 35
Let's hope they never remember walking in on Da-Da masturbating! That shit scars you good.
Date: 03 Feb 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 35
I need a smoke after that!!!!!!!!!! Again I say I want an Edward like him! Please update again tonite! PLEASE!!
Date: 03 Feb 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 35
A Happy Birthday indeed (hey Edward stole my line). Hope Mrs. C can keep those kiddos distracted thru breakfast :)
Date: 03 Feb 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 35
OH WOW...GAH! So amazing! I really loved it!
Date: 03 Feb 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 35
I love this story. This situation was hilarious but I can't wait to see how things progress. You are an awesome writer and I hope you keep updating!
Date: 03 Feb 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 34
OH SNAP! I really loved it SO much!
Date: 03 Feb 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 34
I'm gla we got Bella's POV on what happened. I'm soooo glad that Tanya is almost 100% out of the picture.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 34
Plz go on! I wanna know what happens to funny!! Loves how everything is coming out :) great story:)
Date: 02 Feb 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 34
uhh, that's awkward to walk in on, especially with kids :)
Date: 02 Feb 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 34
That cracks me up!!! I am so glad Tany has not shown up and has given Edward the opportunity to get her rights to the children terminated. Please update soon!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 34
Oh boy! You love to make us wait for the fall out. Please give us another chapter tonight! Please?
Date: 02 Feb 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 33
LMAOOO Oh god what is Bella going to do about this little mishap lol. This is hysterical and I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 33
OH SNAP! That was AMAZING! Hopefully they won't be scarred for life ;) Cannot wait for more!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 32
Oh wow...I know they can work it out!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 33
OMG I think I just died laughing. That is just priceless... can't wait til your next chapter!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 33
uh oh, busted! That Bella plays dirty so she shouldn't be surprised he had to take matters into his own hands.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
Thank god you had Bella realize that he has been trying to tell her the truth but she was in denial hearing it. I would have hated to see her run away, so I am happy the babies calmed her down and she is ready to fight for them and for Edward. Yea!
Date: 02 Feb 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 33
I love this chapter....
Date: 02 Feb 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 32
I'm soooo happy!!!!! Bella didn't freak out nearly as much as I thought she might.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 33
I am so glad they worked it all out. Poor Edward, blue balls then balls up near the liver. I hope the kids were oblivious to what was happening but I have to say that is hilarious. When you are a parent it does'nt matter how careful you are and quiet and even when you think the door is locked, BAM busted and cockblocked by you own kids. Please up date soon.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 32
I am so excited that it is out. Now all they have to do is talk and move on. Love it!! Bella couldn't be too angry because he has tried to tell her and she has refused to let him. So suck it up Bella!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 33
I might be able to come up, lol with something to say......after.....I stop laughing!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
- Lol great chapter can't wait n see what Bella will do nxt to get back @ Edward
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Date: 02 Feb 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 33
Lol!! Great job!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 32
Oh,wow. Just wow!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 32
Love it! Love it! Love it! Can't wait for the next date.