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Reviewer: kopec82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 38

They hace a sex base relationship that's all they do.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2015 3:06 PM Title: 64: Epilogue Pt. 2

absolutely AWESOME!!!! i hope you do come back to write some o/t, f/t ;) i loved how they could have more kids it's not often in stories that have bella go through a trauma birth that she is still able to have more ;) thanks for sharing this on here with us ;D

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 11:01 AM Title: 64: Epilogue Pt. 2

Great read, really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 62

Was worried there for a moment...lovely ending.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 48

They are so sweet!!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 33

Hahahahaha that was funny.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 32

:):):):) Love it!!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 17

Very intense!!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 10

Nice one.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 9

Smooth, swave and liars, love it.

 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

:) :)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 5

Really liking this.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 4

Is he mad or what, cut her loose.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 2

Good start.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2013 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! Poor Edward!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2013 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: yoli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 35

Wow

Reviewer: yoli Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

Love it!

Reviewer: dazzledmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 32

Whewwww........I am so glad that Alice didn't mention that she was marrying Jasper before Bella realized that Edward was using Jasper's name!

Reviewer: dazzledmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh dear....why do I fear that Alice will tell Bella that Tex is Jasper before Edward tells her that he isn't Jasper?

 

Reviewer: blackroses Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2012 10:18 PM Title: 64: Epilogue Pt. 2

I couldnt imagine having that many kids i have 3 and the are a handfull lol.... Great story thanks for writting

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 10

hot damn, that was hot, maybe i should fly first class !!!!!

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2012 7:21 AM Title: 64: Epilogue Pt. 2

Live every bit of this store. Sad to see it finished but happy for the great HEA. Would live to read more of you story's. Thanks for the great ride :-)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2012 9:34 PM Title: 64: Epilogue Pt. 2

Aw, wow, that was amazing!  I really loved it!  Such a perfect ending!  So happy for them!  I want an outtake/futuretake where Bella is still breastfeeding and there is a lemon ;)  You know what I mean, right?  Also, an outtake of their wedding night would be great!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2012 7:09 PM Title: 64: Epilogue Pt. 2

That was a krazi ride for Edward and Bella. Great story... I hope this isn't the end of these two. I would love it if they had more stories to tell.  ;)

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 9:50 PM Title: 63: Epilogue Pt. 1

Oh that's so wonderful that they loved Eli like that

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 9:31 PM Title: 63: Epilogue Pt. 1

Ahh I was right, they kept Tanya's baby! This is such a good story, and while I'm sad that it's ending, I still need to know what happens. Please update tomorrow!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 9:08 PM Title: 63: Epilogue Pt. 1

Aw, thatw as amazing!  I cannot wait to see what happens next in the epilogue!  I want a futuretake of these two lemon filled after they have kids, just to see lemony times again ;)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 2:37 PM Title: 63: Epilogue Pt. 1

Yeah! I'm so glad that Edward and Bella did the right thing by Tanya's baby. I knew that with their kind hearts they would never let the baby suffer alone. 

 

So is Bella pregnant? It would be great if she had twin girls. That would even out their little group perfectly. 

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2012 5:59 AM Title: 63: Epilogue Pt. 1

Sniff sniff but luv it

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 62

Oh my God, I thought you killed Bella, I was like "How could you do that?!?!?!?!?!" Thank you for keeping her alive. But didn't you say Eli's mother was dead? Does that mean that Tanya died with James and Edward and Bella kept the baby? I need to know what happens! Please update soon, there was such a big jump between this chapter and the last.

Reviewer: snoopyvet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 62

You got me I thought Bella got killed in the last chapter. Loved this story you did such a great job
And yes Hope Springs is a great story I am reading it too
Can't wait till you write the epialogue

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 62

For a tiny second I was holding my breath,I hoped you were mentioning Tanya`s death.And I was very happy to see Bella lives.An incredible roller coaster of emotions.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 62

Aw, wow, that was amazing!  I am SO happy they are all ok! I cannot wait for the epilogue!

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 62

i was nervous for a minute

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 62

Got me there for a minute. Sad to see it almost finishe love every minute of it.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 62

That was a little mean making us think she didn't make it like that. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 61

God. That was brutal. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 62

     You had me about in tears thinking Bella had died and Edward was left brokenhearted having to raise the three beautiful children without her.  Now what happened to Tanya and James and that poor baby that Tanya was pregnant with?   I don't want this story to end yet!  It has been a great story and I hate to see it end, but as they say "all good things come to an end".

 

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 61

     Please let Bella be ok and maybe that was Tanya that was talking to him?

Reviewer: jessicanov201 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 62

OK, you had me there, but i am so glad she is alive.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 62

I was so scared you killed her....omg

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 62

So did Bella die? 

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 60

Go Bella! Can't wait to read what's next.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 59

Yah, she's crazy all right. Can't wait to get to the next chapter.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 58

Wow, I'm so worried about Bella and the baby.  What on earth did James inject Edward with?

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 57

Oh my, it started out so happy with the bay eibg a boy and the wedding only a day away. what do they ave planned?

Reviewer: snoopyvet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 37

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 60

Krazy chapter, if I could say so myself.But I must confess I was wondering after reading it, how should James suffer, for a longer or a shorter period?

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 60

Oh PLEASE let them be ok! (by them, I mean Bella, the baby boy, and Edward!)

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 60

AHHHH no you have to keep updating! I need to know what happens. Please!!

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 60

Omg!! 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 60

👍

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 59

I wonder if Tanya checked for bullets? I could see James giving her a gun with no bullets or a gun filled with blanks. 

 

I see Tanya has finally seen what she needs to do for herself and her baby. Hopefully she'll still feel that way after she realizes that she's never getting Edward back. I wonder what will happen to the baby while she's in jail. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 59

     That is one crazy bitch!  Can ya feel me!!   Let her shoot and kill James and somehow let her be overpowered !   Let Tanya have her baby and go back to Alaska and stay there or better yet let her family take the baby and put Tanya's crazy crackheaded self to prison for the rest of her life. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 58

     Damn!!   Don't let them leave the building and please let help come soon!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 57

Oh hell no that bitch didn't !!!   Please don't let them take Bella's baby please!!!   Don't let them get her out of the building. Let Edward come home and have a big old throw down with crackhead James and let him and Tanya get what is coming to them.  Also please protect Bella and Edwards baby and Tanya's baby, it's not that baby's fault who her mother and father are.  I am dying here!

 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 59

Tanya is delusional!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 58

OH NO!  PLEASE!!!!!  Let them be ok!

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 59

OMG this just keeps getting better by the chapter. Love it can't wait to read more :-)

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 58

Omg !! But great chapter:)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 58

Why the hell didn't Edward call anyone else. But from the way you described Charlotte I'm sure she will get worried and call someone when she doesn't hear from Edward.  There is also hope that someone comes sooner rather then later to get Bella for her party. Hopefully Emmett and jasper are coming to drag Edward away and they can kill the bastard. 

 

While it sucks to be left here. I love the drama and anticipation. Great story I can't say that enough. I'm also really happy that it's my day off and I can read the next chapter whenever it comes in. Yeah me. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 57

Poor Bella! I hope whatever was on that rag doesn't hurt her or the little guy. Bella's string, and she has the perfect reasons for staying smart in this awful situation. 

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 57

OH SNAP!  NO!!!!!!  They are supposed to get married tomorrow!  I hope they will be ok!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 56

 I don't like James either...never did.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 55

GAH, that was amazing!  Question...is Dr. Domward from FTLOD 10.5 inches too?!  GAH!!!!!  I loved Edward's speech, so sweet!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 54

Gah, that was amazing!  I cannot wait for more :)

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 56

Frightening prospect even to imagine that J would be near Bella.A chapter well written, seems to be very real.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 56

Okay well that chapter answered my question. While I hate Tanya I hope she doesn't meet James fate. I thought for sure he was going to sell the baby. 

 

I wonder what the real story is with James and his job with Edward because I would hope that if it was only missing time because his wife was sick that Edward would of given him leave. The family medical leave act would of helped. Anyway great chapter, it was nice to see what was inside James' twisted mind. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 55

How long have they been together now a year right? I'm just making sure that Tanya's baby isn't Edward's. I've been trying to remember the time table. 

Reviewer: magilin19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 56

Omg ! 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 54

You got to love pregnancy hormones. 

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 56

Well, that is one very sick, and very scary guy. James is definately off the deep end.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 55

What a wonderful Thanksgiving, start to finish.

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 54

That was a sweet little chapter, definitely need after the last one. Those babies are adorable

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 53

Wow, those two are just wrong on so many levels. That poor, poor baby. That was a sad chapter, all I could think of was the poor, defenseless, unborn baby.

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 56

Chapter makes me nervous to think of what crazy James is capable of doing. Good way of keeping us in suspense I luv it. Can't wait to read more :-)

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 53

     Are they going to try and pass it off as Edwards kid?  It's not his is it?  It can't be because they have not been together for a long time right?  Say it ain't so!!!  Please tell me they get their asses handed to them big time.  That poor baby that Tanya is carrying.  I hope that he or she won't have them as parents for long. 

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 52

     I have drink and smoke in hand!!!!  Whew!!   Intense and making want to drag my husband to the bedroom!!   Edward could teach him a new thing or two I believe. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 50

     Mmmmm Edward!!!   Bella has to get her some!   You Go Girl!!   Love it!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 53

Gah, Tanya is SO annoying!  I hate her...ok, hate is a strong word, but she deserves it!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 53

God that is fucked up. Hopefully she'll test positive at the hospital the doctors and nurses are required to report that. My moms a midwife. But the poor baby is going to be born addicted, watching a baby go through withdraw is heartbreaking. Now I would never normally wish someone dead but I hope she dies in childbirth. And I hope James gets caught trying to sell the baby. I don't know what he has planned for Edward and Bella but I know it won't be pretty. 

I wonder if when Edward and Bella find out about the baby if they will adopt it. The baby will be the twins half brother or sister and it's not the baby's fault that their mother is a piece of shit. 

Reviewer: My Not-So-Secret Obsession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 53

Oh god, is she going to get Edward back by saying it's his baby?! That would cause so much drama. Ahh please keep updating, I love this story.

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 53

I hope Tanya and James will pe stopped from harming Edward or Bella.And in my opinion they should be punished, especially Tanya,maybe through divine intervention, for what she did?I like the way you write, it`s very real.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 52

GAH!!!!!  SO AMAZING!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 51

GAH!  I love dirty talk too ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 50

OH SNAP!  That is one way to wake up ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 49

Oh Bella ;)

Reviewer: chelster4jc Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 52

Awsome thanks for always making my day even better. The whole pregnancy hormonal side of her is great n funny. Can't wait to read more <3 it 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 52

I'm so happy for them. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 51

I'm glad to see Edward got over treating her like glass during sex. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 50

Yep. Defently didn't mind that wake up call. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 49

I'm sure Edward won't mind that wake up call. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 48

Oh yeah I can see them giving the duggers a run for there money. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 47

I'm so glad that sue and Seth are there and are such a big part of the family already. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 46

Wow! Who would of guessed that Bella and Edwards child would be stubborn. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 45

Awww!

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