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Reviewer: trbuie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 17

Intense chapter.  Can't wait for your next update.  By the way, Ch. 16 never did load.  Can you re-load it?  Thanks.  Keep writing.  :)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 16

loved it very much can't wait for more thanks.....

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 16

Is her sudden enjoyment of thr flavor of blood because of the 1/2 vamp babies in her belly?



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yes it's explained in thr next chapter after carlisle checks her out...it will be up tomorrow!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

loved it can't wait to read more thanks....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 12

loved it very behind in my reading can't wait to read more thanks

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

Can't wait dor the wedding!

Who are the uninvited vampires??

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 15

That was kind of a funny chapter.  hehehe  I liked the bowl of blood soup and Bella telling Edward to "Stay" when she was getting waxed.  hehehe  Keep writing.  :)

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 14

Yay!! Babies!!! I hope they get Edward to hunt before the delivery again!

Reviewer: christylou Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 14

awww... can't they just bring him blood?

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 13

wow he is going to be one very protective daddy god help the first guy with a bad thought update when you can thanks.....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

fry him can't wait to see what happens next....

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

Good chapter.  It was so sad that Jacob and Tanya were living in the wild.  Gah!  Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

I only read the first chapter and I likr it.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

Well, that was a quick turn-a-round.  Jake is evil, Jake is nice.  hehehe  Can't wait until they team up to get Victoria.  LOL!  Keep writing. :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

Well, that was a quick turn-a-round.  Jake is evil, Jake is nice.  hehehe  Can't wait until they team up to get Victoria.  LOL!  Keep writing. :)

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

So sweet

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Like it so far

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2010 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

wow loved it can't wait to see what happens next update when you can thanks.....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 10

That jacob and tanya stuff "yuk" lol  but loved the rest very much update when you can can't wait to see what happens next "snack time" for bella.....

Reviewer: klingie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh hell...."code red was great"....can't get over the cup though!!!! :)

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

loved it but gross i know its needed but yuk LOL   update when you can thanks for sharing....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

loved it very much and was that victoria gross update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 7

Tanya will never learn.  I am hoping she will play by the rules, but this is Tanya we're talking about.  Jake is reallt a pain in the side.  But I am glad the whole coupling is over...there is no doubt now.

Thanks for your update - thirsty for more, as always!

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it Go Bella Kick Tanya's Ass That was great can't wait for more   update when you can thanks....

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

Wow! my, my, my - you sure have got yourself one pissed off wolf!  I really liking the characters and the evolution and how they are all working together through this connection.  I like good vs. evil and Jake is so dillusional! Well, I am very happy with your update - thank you.  Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve for us next.

Reviewer: bammers Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22 Feb 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 6

wow that was a great chapter new to the story but can't wait to read more update  when you can thanks....

Reviewer: bammers Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow lived it can't wait for the next hpdate hope its soon

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