Date: 12 Aug 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Awesome job, awesome!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
what a great ending
Date: 12 Aug 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
I loved every moment of this story and I am sad to see it end, but it was the perfect ending to this perfect story!!! Thank you sooo much for writing it!!!
Date: 12 Aug 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
absolutely awsome
Date: 12 Aug 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
i wish you and your family the best in years to come
thank you for a hell of a ride. great story
Date: 12 Aug 2012 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Loved
Only the ages don't add well, if Seth is 11 years older than his wife and start dating her when she was 22, he was 33 at the time so he run for offices 2 years later how they have a 4 years old son
22 ---- 33 start dating
24 ------- 35 president
20 ------- 31 son Anthony Charles Cullen
14 ------- 25 married
age dont add to well
Date: 12 Aug 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
I am so sad to see this story end, but you ended it beautifully. I really enjoyed reading about Prezward and Bella. What started with a Jimmy Choo, to their son becoming President, just like his DAD. I laughed, cried, got pissed off, but that goes to show how well you wrote this wonderful story. I hope everything goes well with Cayden in the future and I want to thank you again for writing this great story :)
Date: 12 Aug 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
wow never saw that coming. Then again all things are possible. Thank you great story.
Date: 12 Aug 2012 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
:) loved it...
Date: 12 Aug 2012 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Love you too. Take care of Cayden. It was a wonderful journey
Date: 12 Aug 2012 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
i am sitting round a pool in cyprus crying my eyes out i loved this story and loved the ending but i will miss reading it. x
Date: 12 Aug 2012 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
Wonderful ending!!! Sad to see it over :'(
Date: 12 Aug 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
I'm so sad that this story is over but immensly happy that i got the chance to read it
Date: 12 Aug 2012 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 50 Epilogue 2 - The End
wonderful end to a great story. Thank you for writing and sharing with us all.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
I loved this chapter!!! I am sooo happy for them!!!!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 15 Searching for Connections
I knew it!!!!
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
i love that she had a great foundation and came through as first lady
it has been a great ride and i love there fairy tale
he gets 4 more years. i bet his dad was happy as well
Date: 11 Aug 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
Wonderful epilogue to a great story. Loved it from the first Jimmy being hurled, hooked me right there.
I love all your stories and will hate to see you leave, but good luck on the Original.
xo Bev
Date: 11 Aug 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
looking forward to more
Date: 11 Aug 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
Wow, alot happened in this chap. Marriage, adoption, reelection.... sex. hehehehehe Loved the update :)
Date: 10 Aug 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
the chapter was awesome! BTW i didnt know you had some worries witb ur son lately,, so sorry. I hope things are better now!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
I dont want to see them leave, I love this story!!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
I love it so much... great chapter
Date: 10 Aug 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
Yeah I am as that this is ending. So much action and love and drama!,,
Well done..
Date: 10 Aug 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
good story.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
You have concluded almost all of the expectations into a thoroughly wrapped up tight ending in this fabulous chapter.
The only thing better would be if by a miracle Edward fathers a child with Bella.
Thank you for sharing your story and shedding light on FPIES, the medical condition that continues to baffle the medical community.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT
Date: 10 Aug 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
Oh i am so sad that this story is almost over thank you for writing such a wodnerful story. Please tell me that there is going to be a surprise pregnancy in the second epilogue. PLEASE!!!! i so want prezward to have a child with his DNA :)
Date: 10 Aug 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 49 Epilogue Part 1
yea for wedding, honeymoon (i wanna go to scotland after readin Karen Marie Moning's books), and reelection. Woo Hoo.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
I agree with you, a delightful chapter.
The Cullens, sounds perfect.
Will the doctors be wrong?
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
wonderful chapter. yea for engaged!!!! yummy lemons
Date: 06 Aug 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
this chapter is simply amazing....it took my breath away...i cannot wait for the next one
Date: 06 Aug 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
hey
WOW
great chapter...
the proposal was just perfect for them!
I love it!
bye
Lil
Date: 05 Aug 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
Love it...!!! Cant wait for the next chapters...
Date: 05 Aug 2012 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
Thanks good chapter
Date: 05 Aug 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
I loved this chapter after so much hurt. Poor Emmett.
Date: 05 Aug 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
Perfect proposal!
Date: 04 Aug 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
looking forward to more
Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
Oh, that was wonderful!
Date: 04 Aug 2012 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
Lovely. Simply lovely.
Thanks for the update.
Have fun w/ the family
Date: 04 Aug 2012 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
aBSOLUTELY AWSOME
Date: 04 Aug 2012 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
That was perfect! Everything! The proposal, the pool, the shower, his room, the adoption, everything!
Im gonna be sad when it's all over!
Date: 04 Aug 2012 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 48 Loose Ends
I loved that the chapter flowed from your fingers because it just flowed on the screen!
Great chapter, from start to finish and boy what a finish!
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 36 Daddy and State Dinners
OMG!!! okay I just had a mini breakthrough. So this 'Mystery Person' is starting to sound more and more like a female. but thinking about it when they first showed they said that they "charmed" (i think) one of the girls that worked in the white house to give them something or the other. Anywho if it is a female I think it might be Tanya b.c she hasn't made an apperance yet. but! Onwards to the next chappie.
Ps I know I'm late but I'm trying my damnededst to hurry along.
pps. Great job hun!
Date: 31 Jul 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
glad they are doing better. Poor Bella. PTSD sucks.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
Thanks good chapter
Date: 30 Jul 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
Well at least Bella and Edward have peace of mind about Royce/James. Hopefully without this extra stress Bella will put her energy on getting better and healing.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
He's going to POP the question! Yeah!
Worried about Emmett. He needs a bit of HEA as well as E&B and Jasper and Alice.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 30 Home Again
Okay, so I just started reading your story, (pretty fucking mazing might I add!) but I wanted to get this off my mind. at first when 'Mystery POV' showed I thought it might have been seth's 'donor' seeing as he's not in the picture. However! I'm leaning more towards Carlise now b.c he's against Bella as a whole. I'm trying really hard to put it together but I'm pretty fucking stumped. Oh! I also for a moment thought that it might have been Emmett b.c he gave the suggestion for bella to move in and he was all vague with his "I know things, and I got people speech" also he does alot with technology and security and the mystery person has a live stream. but those are just some of my theories. Great Job hun!
Date: 30 Jul 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
:)
Date: 30 Jul 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
oh my god i love it! throughly enjoyed it.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
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Date: 30 Jul 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
:)
Date: 30 Jul 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 43 The Fate of Seth
:)
Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
looking forward to more
Date: 29 Jul 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
So James and Royce were one and the same. Interesting, now they all can get on with their lives. Damn, Prezward is such a sweetheart. It takes quite a man to step in and become a father to someone that's not his flesh and blood. But he's fallen in love with both of them, so that's not even an issue. It just unbelievably sweet. Besides asking Bella about adopting Seth, I wonder what else he wants to ask her? :) Have fun on vaca!
Date: 29 Jul 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
loving where they are going with their relationship.
they have both been through so much and he is still behind her and seth
2nd bday and it seems seth is a very well loved little boy. has quite a few people behind him. i am thrilled sue has stayed around and that he has quite a few friends of the little guys now
thank god royce/james the same maybe now her nightmares will calm down since he can no longer hurt her or seth
Date: 29 Jul 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
Thanks for the update! Have fun on your trip!
Date: 29 Jul 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
i am really loving this story and cankt believe it is almost over
Date: 29 Jul 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
Yea Bella better. And,the doubt and her mind has been cleared up. Will miss this story, but I'll be missing you more.
Thanks for the update have fun w/your bud and kids on your trip.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
I am glad Bella and Edward are both soon better. Knowing that James and Royce were the same person has to put Bella's mind at ease. I love this story. I can't believe that this is almost over. I will miss these two. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
Love it!
Date: 29 Jul 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 47 Recovery
I love this story and can not wait for the next chapter x
Date: 28 Jul 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies
I have to say that since I started this story, I have been wondering if any of our actual Presidents have partaken in the activies descripted in this chapter.
LOVE this story by the way,
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
I was still a bit skeptical about Brady's intentions, but based in Charlie's confession and how Royce had been so upset about Brady's attachment to Bella and Seth I guess his name had been cleared.
I'm presuming Royce and James are the same person.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
No need to apologize for being late posting. You have your RL to worry about. Sunburns suck because I've been there. LOL Let's just say I should have bought stock in Noxema. I'm glad Charlie let Bella know she wasn't lead on. That has to make her feel a bit better. And Edward needs to stop beating himself up too. Like she said, he saved her life.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
I am glad that she woke up....can't wait for more!
Date: 25 Jul 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
As some one who works in the healthcare field, you would not believe how many woman get pregnant after being told they can never get pregnant or carry a child. Doctors say this at the time of injury. The human body is amaziling resilent. It can heal better than we can imagine. I have seen many a miricle baby on my ultrasound screen. Bella and Edward should not worry about this diagnosis. Bella should just heal and leave it up to God if she should have children. She may be surprized. Many are when they don't worry about it anymore.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
Only 4 chapters left? That sucks because I really enjoy this story. Well all your stories actually. But on to bigger and better things for you! Yea! Now is James and Royce the same person and please write in a nice someone for Emmett. He deserves a happy ending too.
Maria
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
Excellent job!
Date: 25 Jul 2012 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
Thanks good chapter
Date: 25 Jul 2012 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
I'M SO GLAD BELLA IS DOING BETTER SO IS JAMES ROYCE ONE AND THE SAME PERSON OR ARE THEY TWO DIFFERANT PEOPLE?
Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
"Our son" that is what we want to hear.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
Still trying to make me cry aren't you. You and another of my favorite authors' are leaving the fandom to be published. You've really honed your writing skills here and I'm grateful that I was able to read your E & B stories.
As always thanks for updating. and writing.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
oh bella you have been through so much
i hope they are able to get to the bottom of things for your sanity at least
Date: 25 Jul 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
Good one! More questions answered but looking forward to the Royce/James reveal!
Date: 25 Jul 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
oh what a teriffic chapter this is .i couldn't stop reading for a second i was so into it.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
RL comes first. Congrats on your A.
Glad Ed and Charlie are getting along. Poor B. Glad Dad cleared up the Brady part.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
i hate to see it end, but great chappy!
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 46 The Rest of the Story
looking forward to more
Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
:)
Date: 20 Jul 2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 7 Schedules
Frankly I'm surprised people aren't more disgusted with Edward. He disgusts me, lording his position over Bella demanding that he kotow to his desires even though he knows she has a very sick baby at home. If I were Bella, I'd give a little evidence of just the kind of bastard he is. I'm sure the press would love to know what kind of smarmy jerk is behind the smooth Cullen exterior. Oh. BTW good for Seth for puking all over his suit, he deserves it. And, I think that Momma Bear Bella is awesome.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
Ahhhhhhh....please update again soon!!!
Date: 20 Jul 2012 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
wow poor bella. i was cringing as it was happening. ugh james i am glad you are dead. rose oh well you are better off gone.
i hope em is able to deal with it and is cleared of the shooting's
rose was self defense and james well i guess a good story will be told
love it
Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
Oh.... James!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
James Hunter!?!? I thought it was Royce! What I'd I miss? How does Prezward know James? What's their connection?
I love how you took 4 characters & blended them into two!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
Wow, first Rosalie is really Victoria, then Bella finds out that Royce and Brady are brothers and neither was who she thought they were, and now we know that Royce is really James. Oh my, I think I need a pencil and paper to keep track of all the twists and turns. I absolutely love it!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
Go prezward!!!!!! Hope b will be ok
Date: 19 Jul 2012 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
man all this excitment i was throughly impressed. but edward needs to get to bella. poor bella i hope she can recover soon . i don't know the extent of her injuries.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
Both Victoria and James were using an alias. Intriguing.
When did James get hit with a bullet?
Why did the secret service not check to ensure Victoria was dead?
Date: 19 Jul 2012 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
James Hunter, but she called him Royce. And Roslie's name was Victoria. Confusing.
Thanks for the update. GL w/final.
Date: 19 Jul 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
Royal = James Hunter...interesting. I didn't see that twist coming! I loved the press POVs that was a nice touch. Update soon so we can see how Bella is doing!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
Love the update!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
looking forward to more
Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
Ok so Royce and James were the same person and Rose and Victoria was the same person? What a mess! I hope Bella is going to be okay. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
:)
Date: 19 Jul 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 45 Life and Death
Thanks good chapter
Date: 19 Jul 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 44 Royce's Confession
:)