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Reviewer: theadosia57 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2017 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

Thoroughly enjoyed this story, human but not human after all.

Great concept and of course Bella saves the day, glad you wrote it xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2017 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

Love this story

Reviewer: rezma Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

I LIKED IT!!!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2014 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

cool little story thanks for sharing it with us ;D

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

Shame on those silly readers who wouldn't review, they aren't worth worrying about! This was hot, yes, undoubtedly, but it was also a strangely sweet love story! Who doesn't like a love story? I see you haven't written anything in a couple of years, too bad, you're good at it!



Author's Response:

Thank you k1942 you have made my day, I've just finished reading all your reviews and I have a huge smile on my face.

I haven't written anything in a while because I'm an artist too, and while I'm painting I can't write???? It seems like I only have enough artistic juice for either writing or painting, I need to exercise that muscle and do both- but then real life gets in the way. But I do have some ideas brewing...so watch this space and thank you again xxxx

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 12: Heaven Knows

What a wonderful destiny, to be able to save Edward, herself, and by proxy, Alice and Jasper! Loved how she helped avert the apocalypse, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 11: Personnel Hell

Wicked, wicked punishment, that Aro really is a devil! I'm so happy it didn't work on Edward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 10: Seventh Heaven and the Circle of Hell

Didn't I just know that Carlisle would be the head angel? You bet your boots! Now Alice is in love with Jasper, she realizes what has happened to Edward, Aro has him! Oh dear!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 9;Soul Mates

I'm pretty sure that his declaration of love got Edward yanked out of this world and back in front of Aro and his condemnation! He failed, big time at his work when he fell for Bella!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 8: Heavenly

I have an idea, this thing he has with Bella isn't something Edward would want Aro aware of!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 7; Chocolate Heaven

My, my, so a demon can be had for chocolate cake! Amazing!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 6 Heaven's Above

It was just as wonderful as she knew it would be! I, on the other hand wonder what Edward thinks of this ?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 5: Resisting Heaven

I'll give him credit, he really tried resisting her , it just wasn't meant to be! They were made for each other! I'm betting she was setting Jasper straight about Alice, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 4: Falling Demon's

Now I'm getting a clue! Bella has been sent to capture the demon Edward, and will be tempted to give her soul for his love, and he in turn will offer his for her! I sure hope I'm right, because that would just be too cool! Alice has  something similar going on with Jasper, though it's unclear how that's supposed to go! Oh well, at least Rose and Emmett are happy! Boy, why am I not surprised Aro is the head demon?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 Desecrating Heaven

What a shame, Alice is demonic, like Edward! I always like Alice, too, she's lots of fun, unless she gets too pudhy! Now she has an idea of what she's been missing, and might find with Jasper. Wonder what she'll do about it?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 2: In Hell

So, Edward is a demon from Hell, sent to harvest souls? Wow! He would be very good at it, if only he doesn't fall for Bella, hehehe!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

That was a darling way for them to meet! Jasper is correct, Bella is a good friend, and Rosalie and Emmett certainly benefitted from her generosity. Alice, it appears, can fend nicely, for herself!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2014 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

This was such a neat story.  I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

 Camprys2- Thank you for your kind words. xx

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

I feel your different was an outstanding love story. I throughly enjoyed it. I am reading your current posting and decided to check for other stories. I am so happy that I did. The ten rating is for the entire story. Thank you for writing it.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your lovely words here and on my other stories, it is terribly flattering when people read and take the time to review. I hope I don't disappoint, and you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: EdwardCullen-izor Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 9;Soul Mates

dicks.

Reviewer: EdwardCullen-izor Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 6 Heaven's Above

Haha. Naughty much?



Author's Response:

;) that's me!

Reviewer: EdwardCullen-izor Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

Pop pop pop indeed.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

I thought it was awessome, you just need a few to pimp it for you!!!



Author's Response:

You've been busy and thankyou very much xxx

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 8: Heavenly

HOT HOT HOT

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 Heaven's Above

VERY HOT

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 4: Falling Demon's

nice to know demons and angels have troubles too in their love lives

Reviewer: songii Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

this was different.. i read it on my phone while traveling so i could not review.. but i did enjoy it. it had a bit of humor and alot of heat! very original story line! thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

Arr, thanks very much, I did try for original and I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. x

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

that was freaking HOT.  thanks for  the story.  i liked it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing as you read, it was great to read them altogether, glad you enjoyed. xx

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 12: Heaven Knows

cool glad it all worked out!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

Whoa, that was HOT! Guess it's a good thing that demon changed his ways ;)  I really enjoyed your story. Please don't be discouraged. There are so many stories out there to read; and people tend to read what everyone else is reading. Besides, if they are like me, they don't have enough free time to read half of what they would like to read. More people will find your story. So please keep writing. The fandom needs more creative thinkers like you!



Author's Response:

Ahh, thanks for your words of encouragement, they're appreciated xx

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11: Personnel Hell

you go ed!  i am proud of you!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 10: Seventh Heaven and the Circle of Hell

interesting... carlisle is the angel general? what is going to happen? i can't wait to read!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 9;Soul Mates

oh ed where did you go? what is going on?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 8: Heavenly

they are hot together but what is going to happen? i can't wait

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 7; Chocolate Heaven

oh boy.. don't you take jasper's soul i will be soo mad if you do...:(

Author's Response:

oh my goodness you've been busy reviewing....when I read this review and then your name...I thought omg it's Maria, you know Jaspers maker!! and she's threatening me ;0)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 6 Heaven's Above

okay that was HOT!! now what is going to happen?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 5: Resisting Heaven

oh boy bella you are changing him already.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 4: Falling Demon's

oh boy she is already in a fight for ed. Hummm... i can't believe he pulled away like that. oh i wish i had seen jasper when he looked up and saw alice naked! ha! gotta go read more!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 3 Desecrating Heaven

okay so alice is bad too.. i wonder who is the good guys in this? oh bella be strong

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 2: In Hell

so can bella turn ed to the good side... i have my doubts... can't wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

oh boy cant wait to read more!!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

I'm sorry to see the story is at an end!  I loved the originality and depth of this piece.  In the beginning, I spent most of my time trying to figure out who was on what side and who was human.  I got Jasper right off but Alice took awhile.  I think it was the innate sense of goodness you worked into her.  Even she was surprised!  I'm curious, did you get the idea for the chess games from Twilight or Ingmar Bergman?  It was inspired.  Thank you for a truly original, unique yet passion filled piee that kept us guessing right to the very end!  I loved it!  I can't wait to read more from you!



Author's Response:

Great, passionate review! Thanks. Ingmar Bergman, The Seventh Seal ( i think), classic and later Curse of Fenric (Dr Who), I love the image of the devil playing chess for your soul...funny I didn't think of the chess scene in BD!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for all your little smileys...they kept me going ;)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 12: Heaven Knows

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 11: Personnel Hell

:)

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 13:Interview with a Demon

It was amazing, I was so busy reading I did not review, sorry. This is a sleeper I'm sure it will accumulate reviews Just give it time.



Author's Response:

That's a nice way to put it and very diplomatic ;0) thanks

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 10: Seventh Heaven and the Circle of Hell

:)

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 12: Heaven Knows

And they are all safe and free from Aro. Thanks for letting it work out right...I don't like unhappy endings.:)   This Bella and Edward are so cute together. Loved it!!



Author's Response:

I don't like unhappy endings either...would go as far as to say don't think I could write one with a sad ending.

Thanks for R&R xx

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 11: Personnel Hell

Yes, Alice is going to rescue Edward, I hope? I'm glad Edward was strong and resisted those two little demons in his bed. It's so sweet that he and Bella both go to sleep so they can reconnect in their dreams. Now we just have to worry about James getting his hands on Bella. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 10: Seventh Heaven and the Circle of Hell

Oh, wow!! I just knew Edward didn't leave of his own accord! And now Alice is in love, too. Those demons of yours just can't resist the power of human love, can they? Now you just have to get them away from evil Aro!!! Loved this chapter! You have a very creative mind!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 9;Soul Mates

I'm really enjoying your story. You have a very unique story line here. I can't believe Edward just left like that. I have a feeling Aro called him in for a talk ;). Can't wait for the next update. Great job!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you, you're just what I wanted, as you can see this story hasn't met with the best response.

 I was trying for some thing a bit different, glad you apprecate that

It is completed and I will continue to post, again thank you...you've cheered me up.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 9;Soul Mates

"WTF?"

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 9;Soul Mates

:)

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Date: 16 Feb 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 8: Heavenly

:)



Author's Response:

;) xx

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 7; Chocolate Heaven

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to :) at me, it is appreciated.

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 4: Falling Demon's

:)

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 2: In Hell

:)

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

awesome

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 7; Chocolate Heaven

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 6 Heaven's Above

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 5: Resisting Heaven

:)

Reviewer: michele_my_bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 5: Resisting Heaven

Well alrighty then. Let's get it on

Reviewer: mlhughes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 4: Falling Demon's

Good story... more please



Author's Response:

xx Thank you xx

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 4: Falling Demon's

:)

Reviewer: mariskaatje Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 4: Falling Demon's

what the fuck....

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 4: Falling Demon's

Wicked.....

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2012 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 3 Desecrating Heaven

:)



Author's Response:

I do appreciate your smilie faces,

sometimes when I've read a story I can't think of any thing to review, I think I will leave a smilie like you do.

Thank you 

Reviewer: mariskaatje Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 3 Desecrating Heaven

i hope bella and jasper are angels from heaven at least bella i hope she isn't naive as they always make her out to be and is something spectaculair



Author's Response:

All will be revealed shortly,

I don't mind a naive Bella, (sometimes,) but not in this story. Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 2: In Hell

:)

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 2: In Hell

Hot story! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

Interesting...

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

I just found the story. I hope you write more. I really thought it is hot and can't wait to see where you go.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I do like to write most of the story before I start posting it, so I'm currently at 9 chapters and counting, the rest is planned and I will finish it, nothing worse than unfinished stories, arrgghhh!  I do hope you enjoy the rest. xx

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

Gah, so amazing!  I love reading a chapter even after I have beta'd it :)  I cannot wait to see the reactions for the next one :D



Author's Response:

You're a sweetie, thanks xxxx

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

:)

Reviewer: js18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

A birthday present just for me ;)

This story is going to be awesome



Author's Response:

Thanks js and Happy 50th Birthday! ;)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

Oh. I think  this is going to be fun!  - Thank you / Cheri



Author's Response:

My pleasure and thank you x

Reviewer: lindsaywin Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

Really good start-its going to be hot!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks x

Reviewer: bluebelle11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1; Heaven, Hell and in-Between,

I wish I was Bella! I would love to rub some cold drink from Edwards pants. Yes, I'm a perv. :)



Author's Response:

You're in good company!

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