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Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

This would make a wonderful full story! You did very well on it and I really enjoyed reading it

Reviewer: uga Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

WoW.  I don't normally read O/S's but this one just called to me.  *yeah rolls eyes at how cheesy that sounds*  I think we've all known that guy.  Breaking away is not so easy.  Does she make it .... away from him that is?  Or do they find a way to make it work?  This story can go either way but I am sure you know that.  So I laugh at myself and ponder .......

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 1

This feels unfinished. Do you plan to continue? Great job BTW.

Reviewer: twilightobsession20 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was a great scene.  I would love to see this become a story.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved this. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: sweetmama75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

i don't blame bella she deserves better then what he was going to give

Reviewer: twilightmom96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

i like it cant wait for more

Reviewer: kkahiapo Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2012 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

I hope you continue with this story!! I really wanna find out what happens next so... Please continue/update soon!! I will love you forever if you do!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Please tell me you are going to contiue with this I have to know how he is going to prove that he wants her.

Reviewer: 2loveybunnies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2012 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

OH MY GOSH, I WANT MORE!   You have to continue this story!   I am dying to know what Edward's thought are about the way he's been treating Bella and if there really is any sincerity in his words now.   She was stupid to put up with him for as long as she did, and I'm glad that she finally found the resolve to try to break up with him for treating her like shit.    

As much as I want E&B together, I have to say that Bella is doing the right thing.   No woman deserves to be treated that way and it's just as much Bella's fault for letting him do that to her.  

I would love to see how things play out so I hope you'll consider writing more of this one!

 

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