Of course, this was nothing compared to thinking she was dead, but it had to be a really tough night for Edward. Jacob took great delight rubbing Edward's nose in the fact of his being able to warm Bella. The twenty question thing was pretty interesting, as it shared their thoughts fairly equally. You have to give Jake credit for pushing for every advantage, but I thought he enjoyed twisting the knife a bit too much.

This is good, but I'm almost afraid to read the next chapter. I'm cringing already.  =)

I loved it! All the inner turmoil Edward was going thru not to mention how awkaward Bella must have felt and poor Jake and his feelings - you captured it all beautifully! Awesome job - can't wait to see what's next!