Date: 14 Jul 2013 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 34: Magic Times
It was mildly tempting to feel sorry for what Jane did to Sue, but I took a leaf out of Edward's book, and remembered what that horrid woman did. Then it didn't bother me at all! Remy was sure born in a hurry, which I know from personal experience is a possibility! Jane has the perfect job for keeping watch over Bella and Edward, Emmett is happy with Lucy. Taylor and Sally are doing well, Jasper and Alice have baby Corin and Edward's mom is doing real well! Even bitchy Rose is getting married! Life is good, and then some!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 33: Wedding Bells
Justice is coming to Sue Swan, courtesy of Miss Jane! Yay! Edward and his surprises! Talk about going to great lengths! The wedding was wonderful and the speeches were amazing and touching, from everyone! Edward's mom showing up was pretty amazing, too!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 32: Getting the Answers
I would love to know what Jane whispered in Sue's ear, it sure scared her! I'm so glad that bitch is under a death sentence, hope they give it to her! It does worry me though that she hints about an accomplice. Somebody else to watch out for! Sue spewing all that evil crap was just beyond ugly. I was so happy that Esme put on that glove and broke her nose!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 31: Good Luck Masen Family
Edward's proposal was the most wonderful, heart-felt, romantic one I've ever read! Sue was her usual charming self, and I was thrilled the judge chastised her and banned her from his court! He really got a bellyful of her ! Hope her other judge throws away the key when they lock her up! If there is a helper, or helpers, I hope they get their just dessert's too! Edward had a fabulous birthday, by the way!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 30: The Faith Within
Thank heaven the step-monster is in custody! Now if the cops can only hang on to her, as I don't trust their security as much as I do Aro's! Everone is pretty happy about the baby and the danger level being down quite a bit!
Date: 14 Jul 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 29: New Home, New School, New Start
I think the twins will probably be happy about the baby, as will the rest of the family. Edward needs to step up his search for the ring, as it would be nice to have everyone's last name be the samewhen the new baby arrives. As for the step-monster from hell, I'm with Edward, catch her, kill her, and let Aro dispose of the body! Anyone who would place children in a car and set fire to it has no business using up oxygen!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 28: She Devil
There's just no end to the toxic bitch that made Bella's life a misery, is there? Too bad Aro doesn't know some way to make her disappear, forever! It was neater than hell that Bella got a few licks in, punching that prick, Paul in the face! That girl can stand up for herself a lot better now! With all the drama , wouldn't you?that has visited Bella and Edward , you would think they are due some peace and quiet
Date: 13 Jul 2013 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 27: Where Do We Go From Here?
I guess talking all this over is really the best thing to do, as the dust settles from all the turmoil of the past! I'm real glad Alice has seen the light and decided to be a better person, it will surely make her and Jasper happier! Can hardly wait to see Sue/Tanya get her just desserrts, but since it's 3:30am, I'd best get to bed!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation
I must admit, you guys blew my mind with the fact that Seth and Leah are really Edward's children! The background story of Bella's dad and step-mom was a shocker too, especially that Edward had seen Bella when she was a little girl! What are the odds of any of tis ? I'll bet Jane had fun with Harry/James, but he never enjoyed it! It about made me sick to hear that Charlie was going to sell Bella when she was eighteen, GROSS! And the fact that Paul still wants to hurt her is stomah-churning, also! Boy, you two have really got the wild imaginations!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise
This whole chapter has been a whirlwind of information, some of which is pretty shocking! The great parts are when Bella and Edward are loving each other! I'm so glad Edward's talked Bella and the twins into moving in with him. Why has the drawing of Bella's parents made Edward so angry, who are they?
Date: 13 Jul 2013 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 24: First Times
You were right about this being a busy chapter, between Emmett leaving Rose and bringing Cam to stay at Edward's for a while. Rose must be mentally off to divorce a wonderful guy like Em! The real capper though was Harry showing up and terrorizing Bella and the kids and breaking Seth's arm! Hope somebody kills him, but not Edward, don't want him in jail!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 23: Birthdays and Unexpected Visitors
Guys like James need to be shot, after some serious torture! Not really, I guess, but something awful should happen to anyone who treats people that way! I hope Alice and Jasper mend their marriage and Emmett and Rose, too. Don't hold out much hope for Rosalie, she doesn't seem to care for anyone but herself! I pity her poor unborn child!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 22: Gifts and Snowball Fights
What a wonderful Christmas! Everyone is so happy, except poor Emmett! I feel bad for him, he's such a good guy and has such a spoiled bitch for a wife! Bella is worth a hundred of her!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 21: Illness and Surprises
Thankfully Bella is okay and Gina is gone for good. Now if someone would cripple Paul so he never has a chance to touch Bella, that would be excellent! As happy as things are going with everyone but Rosalie, I guess the only bad circumstance would be if Sue Swan and/or Harry show up to cause trouble!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 20: Snow Storms
I had a really bad feeling that Bella would be caught out in that blizzard! I nearly teared up reading about Bella's lack of any love or warmth from her parents and what Christmas had always been for her until Zafrina and Aro!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Legal Side of Things
Again, I really like Zafrina and her snarkiness, she is so cool and such a friend to Bella! Aro has a great mom! I want to smack the crap out of Gina and help Edward beat Bella's step-mom and Uncle Harry! The trip to little Edward's grave had me in tears!
Date: 13 Jul 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 18: Confessions
I'm really glad Edward has a friend like Jasper in his life, especially since he's a therapist! I think Bella and Edward can make some real progress now that they have both declared they love each other!
Date: 12 Jul 2013 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 17: Weekend Revelations!
So Bella has had to be the sole support and caregiver for her siblings since she was thirteen or fourteen years old? She ought to have a damn medal! Edward needs to get his head on straight, after all she's nineteen, not twelve! I hope this doesn't negate all the progress they both have made!
Date: 12 Jul 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 16: Trash Talking Turkey Day
That really sheds some light on why Edward is the way he is! Bella seems to have had a good effect on him, just as he has had on her. It's just unbelievablethat Rose could have spewed that nastiness over Bella and slapped her face to boot! Wouldn't you know Bella would forgive her and pray for her baby? Don't blame Emmett one bit for leaving her nasty mouth! That's a black heart she has, for sure!
Date: 12 Jul 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Break In
I enjoyed Edward taking all the Swans shopping, though the reason for said spree was horrible! It had to be a real slimeball to trash the place and steal from one who has so little! I will cross my fingers that Thanksgiving dinner will go well, but I'm not holding my breath! Wondering when Mr. Clueless is going to realize he loves that girl?
Date: 12 Jul 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 14: A Cowboy, a Princess, and a Butterfly
No surprise about Aro, he's one of the good guys in this story and I like his mom , too! His business may not be what you would want for your children, but his heart's in the right place! I think Halloween was pretty good for Edward, Bella and the twins. Peter and Charlotte are awesome and Carlisle and Esme were great! Too bad about Alice being a bitch, poor Jasper!
Date: 12 Jul 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 13: Balls and Bitches
That encounter between Bella and all the womken Edward calls family, plus Siohban, was very enlightening! I'm so disappointed in Alice and Rose, they were awful to Bella, especially Alice! Siohban was just too much, no wonder Edward told her off! The cab ride home was a pretty big victory for Bella's fear of cars! I'm kind of proud of Edward as he's really turning his attitude around concerning Bella, at least!
Date: 12 Jul 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 12: Nicknames
Parts of this chapter really got to me! I nearly cried when Edward took a tour of Bella's place and he saw how little she has! The twins are always first on her list of importance, never herself! Makes me want to beat up her step-mother and slap her dead father! Bella has been conditioned to think she's practically worthless, hiow could anyone do that?
Date: 12 Jul 2013 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 11: Learning Some Background
Aro and Zafrina have been such good friends to Bella and the twins. Edward is her champion, too. How could he not be as she's so sweet and good-hearted and good to her siblings!
Date: 12 Jul 2013 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 10: ABC Easy as 123
I don't judge Edward for his sexual proclivities, it just makes me sad that he feels that's the only way he can be with a woman! He's scared to let himself love someone, in case they hurt him the way Tanya did. I'm hoping he smartens up and see's Bella that way.
Date: 12 Jul 2013 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 9: Doctor, Mall, and Names
Bella has just wrapped herself around Edward's heart and he hasn't even noticed yet! I'm happy he is taking care of her and making sure she's eating and healthy.
Date: 12 Jul 2013 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Poor unwanted little Bella, what a life she has led! How can people be that way? I'm sure glad Edward knows about her inability to read and wants to help her learn. Maybe he's getting a clue that Bella is like no other woman he's ever known!
Date: 12 Jul 2013 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 7: New Job
Really good recommendation, I read Hope Springs and loved it! This chapter shows that Edward is making an effort to be a nicer guy, especially to Bella.
Date: 12 Jul 2013 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 6: Making Amends
It probably hasn't occurred to Edward that Bella can't read or write, that's just too foreign a concept for him, being a professor and all. He's made a good start at making amends, but has a ways to go! At least now we know there's still a good heart under all the protective layers.
Date: 12 Jul 2013 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 5: Walls We Build
I'm thinking crawling on his hands and knees might be a nice start to apologizing to Bella! How could he project his prejudices on to her when she's been nothing but kind and caring to him?
Date: 12 Jul 2013 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 4: Stalking
Edward was a good samaritan to Bella, can't imagine what he does that will be so bad in the next chapter. I'll wait and be surprised!
Date: 12 Jul 2013 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 3: First Sight
How odd that his cleaning woman was the one to rescue Edward, and even odder that Aro's mother is urging him to get to know Bella! Zafrina is spot on in her analysis of Edward, by the way. The guy has some serious issues!
Date: 12 Jul 2013 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 2: Warning Signs
Not holding out too much hope for Bella and Edward getting along, not with his attitude towards women! I wonder if he's had a heart attack, chasing after the little drunks from the parking lot! Since they got his wallet, it's a good thing someone who knew him found him and called for help.
Date: 12 Jul 2013 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes
I would be interested in what happened five years ago. It must have been pretty bad, as he is a bitter, sad and unhappy man. Seems to be working on a dandy ulcer, too!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2013 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Loved this story from beginning to end,
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
This has been on my TBR list forever and I'm so glad I got around to reading it (so many on the list, yet so little time, ya know?) I loved it! I'm also adding it to my favorites. I'll check out whatever else you two have written and add those to my TBR list too--I don't know when I'll get a chance to get to them, but I know they'll be worth the time to read! Thanks for writing!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise
So my guess is that Tanya didn't die, and that the twins are Edward's. Charlie must have played Eleazar.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 22: Gifts and Snowball Fights
Ugh! Just a wonderful chapter!! I loved it!
Date: 24 Mar 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 21: Illness and Surprises
I'm worried that Paul is still a threat o her. I love this story!!
Date: 23 Mar 2013 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 7: New Job
I had to laugh at Edward--for someone so reluctant to check out Isabella's life, he has certainly become quite the enthusiastic stalker! Lol!
Date: 23 Mar 2013 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 6: Making Amends
In chapter four, Edward learns that Bella will be 24 in September from the college personnel file ( and I can't imagine anyone in HR allowing some random professor going through employee files, just saying). Did she lie to the school about her age and this is why she has no paperwork (which I took to mean I-9 documents like a state ID, driver's license, birth certificate, passport, etc.)?
Date: 23 Mar 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 5: Walls We Build
Did he ever pay her back the five dollars? Does he even realize how much five dollars is to her? And the muffin probably cost at least half that again... I am enjoying your version of Beauty and the Beast starring Edward and Bella--even though I want to junk-punch Edward!
Date: 21 Mar 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Oh my God, this was an absolutely amazing story! So beautiful! Thank you so much for sharing this with us!
Date: 13 Mar 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
I have to say this is one of my favorite stories that I have read in a long time. I felt like I had already read all the good stories and I was do happy I found this one. Great job.
Date: 09 Mar 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 5: Walls We Build
What a fucking asshole
Date: 01 Mar 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
wow this story is defintely going to be added as a favorite...it had me up reading all hours of the night!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 2: Warning Signs
somehow i feel that it not your ordinary heartburn.. hope edward okay
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2013 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Loved it
Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Okay... 35 chapters and six days after announcing I was going to read HCV, I'm impressed.... This story is amazing and I can't even tell you how great the story is written... It were long chapters, but so easy to read and that's what made me come back... Sometimes it was hard to stop reading it, because I wanted to know what will happen...
I still have to read the outtakes and I'm going to do just that, after posting this review...
I hope you write more stories together because this one was amazing... :) Keep up writing, 'cause I want to read more!
Author's Response:
This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed. Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post. There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written.
Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too. We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out. We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest. We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.
I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.
We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)
Date: 21 Jan 2013 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Lord, that was so sad. This Bella is breaking my heart.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2013 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Awww another baby. Sweet.
The foundation for schools was a great thing for her to do. Glad the kids in the family all look out for each other.
Sad as it is, Rose got what was coming to her. Although her grandmother ought to be slapped. Cam is a cool kid to allow her in his life at all. Wow surprised Bella paid for the burials. Dunno if I could be that forgiving.
LOL for Jane's gift to them all.
ROFL for seth waiting for them when they got back. he is so sweet though.
aww for Grandpa E. LOL for Jasper freaking out about Corin and Seth. lol for AJ being scared of Jane.
Thank you for writing and sharing with us all!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
I love how you break everything down... thank you!Date: 21 Jan 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 34: Magic Times
Awww nice honeymoon surprise. Magic Kingdom is perfect for a family vaca/honeymoon.
Glad Sue got such a warm welcome in jail. Hee hee for her "breakout" fun with Jane
Glad that he's hired Liam. So nice of him. Valued Employees??? katie is delusional huh? Wow reminder not to piss of Jane.
lol for Jane being the new secretary. Lauren really is a stupid slut. Ugh Newton again??
Glad to hear the updates on everyone. hee hee for bella going into labor early and E having to deliver. Riley is a smart cookie under pressure. Yey for a normal baby name. LOL. Riley is funny. Remy???
ROFL for Jake getting a girlfriend. Surprised though... I thought Rose would have been involved with the Sue debacle. Ah well.
Author's Response:
I know right, I wanna go!! Jane is badass! LOVE HER!!!! Yeah We made Rose into a royal biotch, but we gave her some redeeming qualities too.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 21 Jan 2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 33: Wedding Bells
So cute that seth planned the party. So sweet all the church's support. Ah so ALice is medicated now. Thats good. Meds can be so beneficial. Aww nice gift from Mrs Marshall. Wonderful speeches!!!!
oh wow his bio mom came??? Ah so there was more to her story. Glad she watched over him even if it was at a distance.
Ah Janey's going to play. Glad Lucy and Em are hitting it off.
YEY for honeymoon time
Author's Response:
Yep, Alice needed meds.... We always wanted to bring Elizabeth back and this seemed the perfect way to do it. LOVE JANE!
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 21 Jan 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 32: Getting the Answers
Yummy way to wake up. hmm that shower sounds heavenly. Need to find Em a new woman worthy of him and Cam.
LOL for Esme freaking out about wedding time frame. Wow Bella is really nice to include Alice. Silly Bella. Of course Aro would love to do it. Glad Jane is staying with B while E is away. Zafrina is so sweet to allow her the dress.
Sounds like Seth had a wonderufl trip. Leah too. hmmm Lucy and Em maybe???
I can see E not liking that idea. The stress with her pregnant isnt ideal I'd think. LOL Flowers indeed. Uh one step forward, two steps back. LOL for make up sex.
oh wow a relative of Tanya's.. wasnt expecting that. At least E did right with burying them. Wonder where the paternal gmom has been?
Lawyers can be hateful scumballs, esp defense lawyers. Poor B. Dear Lord Sue is a true psycho. She really needs to die. Would love to know what Jane said to her. LOVED Esme punching her. oooh wonder where Jane is going.
Ah Sally came to talk to her. Her and Taylor. aww B playing matchmaker
Author's Response:
This was one of my favorite chapters. Glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 21 Jan 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 31: Good Luck Masen Family
At least the judge had brains and denied bail. Good thinking with Matt. Sue's lawyer ought to have a nice accident for helping that coniving bitch. Stupid district attorney for even considering it.
The new house sounds wonderful. Em is such a great Dad and friend. Can't kill the help....true, but the Aro threat works. hee hee.
Glad she got some of Renee's things for memory sake. Wonderful mom letter.
Nice brithday presents. Zafrina is hilarious. Guess Alice is behaving now? YEY Esme for finding the jewelry. I had a suspicion she would have it after E was upset about the ring.
Why the court would listen to anything that bitch would say is ridiculous. Just the trying to burn them alive thing alone, besides everything else. Go very smart judge. so sweet changing the middle names too.
Love what Chas taught her. B is too cute. Yummy weekend birthday present. Yea Katie needs to go. You'd think she'd get a clue after all this time. Glad the kids are happy in their new school. Wonderful proposal.... but ROFL for the rain on them. Good lesson for Em to learn about candy and soda.
Author's Response:
I loved puttign in so many things that are real to my own life. The letter to mom was super hard for me, but I made it through. Glad you have enjoyed this so much.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 21 Jan 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 30: The Faith Within
Glad the kids are mostly doing ok. Ugh Time to sue Ms Crown and the newspapers. Poor B. Not good for baby baking. Glad the church and Marcus came forward with better things to say. Glad the bank guy was being cool. Jane is too funny. Think they should tell the kids soon.
awww B reading to bean. too cute. She needs crackers next to the bed. Em is such a great dad. Seth is too funny. Good that E got time with the kiddies.
Oh wow good thing Ms Marshal came in and told that story. Wow that biatch got the drop on Jane??? sooo not good. Jane is really pissed now. Ugh f'ing bitch knows that B put money in huh? Glad B is standing up to Sue's lies. Jane is such a great friend to her. Glad e1 is taking the lil bean news so well.
Author's Response:
I loved the way Bella grew a backbone.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 21 Jan 2013 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 29: New Home, New School, New Start
Poor B. Going to take a long while to get better I think. Glad she doesnt want to call her mom anymore. Seeing Samantha is a good idea. Aro is great guy to be on thier side. Glad Jane had some fun. Poor real Tanya. At least E gave them a burial.
Glad B is trying to have some normalcy. Painting will help her I think. Wow Sue has real nerve showing up. Damn she really has some hacker helping her.
E needs to be careful with promises. Sue is one crafty biatch. Wow B came up with the name change. Good on her.
Awww gray hairs. OMG is everyone in that school incompetent??? Mrs crown needs to be fired immediately...what a moron. Glad Caius showed up. Those poor kids.
So cute that he asked the kids. house sounds lovely. B's grandpa was smart. Silly Bella thinking Carlisle would be mad. awww for baby. Stress free as possible....yea right. Not until sue is dead.
Author's Response:
I have had a school/teacher mistreat my child because they did not feel we were worthy enough. It is ugly and it happens a lot more than people think. I say STOP BULLYING, hopefulyl people learn that soon.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 20 Jan 2013 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Great story. I love Jane being so protective of Bella and the kids.
Author's Response:
me too Jane rocks!
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 20 Jan 2013 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 32: Getting the Answers
I know it works, but I kind of feel icky with Sally realizing who Anothiny/Edward is.
Author's Response:
Yeah I know, but we had to make it so he had some kind of redemption, and I love how she was about it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 20 Jan 2013 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 30: The Faith Within
Why didn't Edward contact a lawyer and getting legal work going on the slander the newspaper was printing?
Author's Response:
I wanted to do this part alone to show people in another way how what the press writes hurts people... to bad it seems liek people care more about fictional characters than they do the actors who play them.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 20 Jan 2013 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 28: She Devil
ROFl for Harry spilling his guts. Jane must have really been convincing. hee hee couldnt have happened to a better guy. Guess Paul shouldn't have messed with Aro. So happy Bella is doing so well. Good to know the grandpa tried to keep her. Glad to know Caius stepped up to deal with the principal. Wow go Seth!!!! Mrs Crown should be made to eat crow. Ha Ha. LOL for blowjob talk
Glad he is taking her to the ball. Figures Rose would come with her arse new boyfriend. Bella is so sweet worrying about Em. Ugh Royce is such scum. He and Rose deserve each other. Ugh why not take B with you to the interview. I have a bad feeling.
OMG F'ing Sue. So glad everyone was there to help but how did Paul get B away from Em ? Lemme guess Rose and Royce?? At least Alice is doing the right things now. Poor Esme too. HA HA for Felix and Jane having fun at Paul's expense.
Author's Response:
I cried writing this chapter, becasue I was so overwhelmed by the emotions of it all.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 20 Jan 2013 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 27: Where Do We Go From Here?
Poor Bella. Glad Alice stayed with her and comforted her. B's gonna need a lot of therapy after this. They all will I think. Glad Esme and Car came right away.
Alice is acting like a human being. Thats good. Jasper is so right. He needs to knock off the self hatred stuff if he's going to help B.
Esme is such a special person. No wonder Rose is messed up. Psychoness must run in the mothers side of the family. Glad Esme is normal. So glad she came into Elizabeth's life for Edward's sake. So glad the family is there for them all. Kids are so resiliant.
Glad they are talking to Samantha. Its good to make sure kids are doing alright. Hopefully the school will behave themselves with this change in situation. hmm wonder if Alice is an act like in school though. Glad B talked Alice into coming clean.
Author's Response:
Alice needed to get her wits about her and get off her high horse. Esme was such a joy to write, I just loved our Esme. Esme was the kind heart and Jane was the ball buster.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation
oh no? Did Tanya have kids??? Is Seth really little Edward??? OMG my brain is spinning. Oh wow Poor E. Can understand why he would have a panic attack though. hmmm is Sue/Tanya really dead though? or is that someone they killed in their place. Oh wait they did dental records right??? hmmm
Ah The plot thickens. Skankya/Sue might still be out there hiding huh? in Sequim maybe??
Poor E. THey do need to tell B though before it slips out at the wrong moment to her. Aro is very smart about it all.
B is very observatent. Glad she says her or peter. Wow I hope they tell Bella before someone else does. oooh B knows Billy??? uh oh this doesnt bode well.
Sounds like billy tried to go to the cops and they failed B and the kids. Wow Billy's story is so crazy. At least Billy gave him all a good warning at the end.
Oh course Aro finds Harry before the cops. LOL Like the idea of Jane having fun with him. Oh Paul just signed his death warrant. OMG I LOVE your Jane. Oh no F'ing Rose just had to stick her nose in it. F'ing biatch!!!! At least Alice did the right thing for a change
Author's Response:
I bet it was really spinnign when you realized Tanya and Sue were one in the same...
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 20 Jan 2013 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation
This makes no sense. Rose shouldn't ask anything of Bella and Bella shouldn't get it. I know it is a plot point, but it bugs me.
Author's Response:
I know and it bugged us too, but rose knew to play on Bella's kindness.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 20 Jan 2013 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise
uh oh... your AN has me worried.
aww poor Leah. Crap happens though, esp when people are under stress. Poor confused B. Think they need a family session with Jasper. Smart having Peter and Jasper there with the cops coming. Yea B is going to be scared for awhile. awww for the painting lesson. So cool.
Aro is such a great guy having the guards for B and the kids. LOL guess that answers my birth control question. Hee Hee.
Uh oh James is stalking E and/or B. oh wow James is Harry??? Wasnt expecting that. Not liking these two detectives much. Oh wow The story about B's dad explains alot. Can understand Liam being mad. Oh Bella. You were protecting L and S. None of this is your fault. Kinda glad she's not pregnant just yet.
Glad Liam called back. :-) that Bree stood up for her. Ok I wanna punch Spades in the face. Wow They've been targetting E for awhile? I wonder if Tanya was mixed up with them? Wow she's still so scared of a room?
At least he remembered the condom. hee hee. Glad he asked her to move in. Can understand her wanting to contribute. She is so smart about money.
Glad Em can use alot of the stuff and she donated the rest. Bella does love to sketch. Oh no......tell me Sue is not Tanya?
Author's Response:
I loved this chapter too, so much going on.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 20 Jan 2013 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 24: First Times
Yes, Bella and the twins need to live with Edward.
Author's Response:
Yes they do!
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[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 24: First Times
So glad they helped Bree. He's right that she's probably not the first girl he's done it too.
So glad E is helping Bree's family out. Smart ideas for the dad to do to help Bree.
aww poor seth. Sucks that the music teacher did that. So pathetic when they play favorites like that.
Seth is such a good kid. Glad he apologized. Wow the prinicpal is a real witch. Glad E put her in her place. Bigotry indeed. wow Caius is really under some pressure, but at least something is going to be done now. OMG they released him?!?!?! He's in the wind I bet. poor Bree. SHe's probably scared out of her mind.
Wonder if Rose is going to treat the baby right even though its the "wrong" sex. OMG Time to divorce Rose and take sole custody. What a skank.
ROFL for muffin cooking lesson and messy Bella. Yey for Seth. Hmm wonder if Carlisle and Esme bought up the pawned jewelry???
LOL for speechless E. Glad B felt confident to talk to Chas and Carlisle about things. ummmmm is she on birth control???
Happy dance time:
Glad the court went well so far. Em is so wonderful. lol for sneaky scary movies. OMG poor Em. Screw Rose getting the house!!! Alice is pathetic to be on team rose. Hope she either changes or Jazz leaves her. Bella is special. That's for sure. She'd make a great full time nanny.
Awww B really needs to just move in with E. Jazz is a paintball general. hee hee. I still say BS on Rose getting the house. And screw Alimony too.
Oh No Harry!!!! Glad Bella got them out of the house. Poor Seth. ugh Of course he got away. Hope the cops get him soon. B really needs to move in with E now.
Ah So it was Harry that broke in before? I thought it was Paul or that group of thugs. Go Jake. He deserves a friend and a new pink teddy bear.
Author's Response:
I liekd the Bree side of the story, it showed that he had a heart to begin with and knew deep down right from wrong, just had a hard time showing it. I cannot tell you how many people messaged us or replied sayign that this was the best Jake they had ever read, and he was a LIZARD...LOL
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Date: 20 Jan 2013 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 23: Birthdays and Unexpected Visitors
awww sounds like Aro's son has a crush. hee hee. Poor E being hit on by the skanks. That is cool about their birthdays being on different days.
Liked Carlisle's speech. lol for Seth's speech about girls. grr Thought Malice was improving, but here she is following the bitch. Go Jazz!!!!! LOVED his speech. Poor Em. Hope he leaves her high and dry now. But now I'm worried about what Rose will do with the info that Jazz gave.
Hope they decide to move in soon. ugh for burst pipes. At least they get to stay with E longer now. Makes him happy.
She has so much to learn about relationships huh? oooh Poor Bree. Glad she told someone.
Bella is so sweet. Cool that E knows sign language.
Author's Response:
I am so proud of the many different things this story touched bases on.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 20 Jan 2013 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 22: Gifts and Snowball Fights
Glad she is doing better. She def needs to gain more weight. hmmm special gift huh? lingerie I bet. hee hee. the clothes sound lovely. lol for cookies and milk. Nice traditions while they last. Ah So E gets to break the Santa news huh? hmm Didnt ever hear the Coke part of Santa. Cool. Wonderful talk they had. Can understand how hard it is to accept things for herself considering those "parents" she had.
Beeward...too cute. The drawings are a wonderful though. Wow E def went a bit overboard. Glad the kids are so thankful. yummy dressing time.
Love that they got bikes. E is a great role model/parent with them. Those kids are so special.
Glad Aro and Zafrina are coming over. Em is such a trip. Glad Esme is going to help her develop her art. Glad Jasper is there to explain things to them. Still feel sorry for Em, being stuck with Rose. Wow Jazz' parents are really a big part of the blame for her elitist, selfish attitude. Reminds me of Verusa Salt from Willy Wonka. Bad egg. Surprised Em hasnt moved in with Jazz, E, or the 'rents.
Yummy sounding ending
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 20 Jan 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 21: Illness and Surprises
Go Speedy Gonzales. Glad he got her there so quickly. Wet under her coat too? Thats not good. Glad Esme thought to talk to the kids. Poor crazed E.
Glad she woke up. pneumonia sucks though. Gina needs to be fired ASAP and they need to tell Marcus the story and that Gina was trying to get into his office. Glad she wants to quit the college now. Good plan for the kids. She is lucky to have such a great support system.
Assward has his uses. Good to know the boss too. Good to know the bully will finally be dealt with too.
Ah that explains why GIna gets away with murder. Glad Caius and Athenedora believe E. Buh Bye Gina. Go Charlotte!!!
LOL for Jane wanting a piece of Gina. hmmmm maybe she can get a piece of Sue or Harry???? Can't blame Bella for giving notice at the college. At least Alice is trying to be a normal human being. Rose is just pathetic. I feel sorry for Em.
Love the family decoration time. Naughty speedy boy. ROFL for Jane's warning. She's come a long way with her reading. At least she'll sleep in a bed when E is around.
lol for the excited kids. Not working for 10 more days is going to kill her. yey for happy surprise.
Author's Response:
again I love jane... LOL
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[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 20: Snow Storms
Ah Breast cancer. That sucks. At least Carlisle can keep an eye on it now. Glad they found her real SSN. Now she can get real benefits and get paid properly. Oh Man Her grandpa just died?!?! Something else Sue kept from her. ooooh guessing sue will come out of the woodwork if the money comes out to Bella. Glad they talked B into letting them help her and the kids. Wow cool that Aro and Zafrina have kept detailed documents to help B. Angela is a godsend to have on her side too. Glad Jasper is helping her but I can understand E's frustration.
Wow they really need to get her to talk to a female about female stuff. LOL for her thinking she peed. I can feel embarrased for him having to explain this stuff to her. OMG Winkie/flower. ROFL!!! He needs to get a puberty book I think. a little dry humping does a body good. great start to their more intimate times.
Sounds like wonderful Christmas and Birthday plans. Wonderful idea for the bedrooms.
Katie is a snot. If she talks to B like that in front of E, lord knows how she talks when he's not there. Biatch needs to go. OMG for the Santa/Christmas story. lol for the pudding. too funny. Critics...hope Katie doesnt try to screw it up for E out of jealousy.
So glad Esme is going to help him with the presents. the rooms sound great.
oooh yummy pleasure lessons/time. awww first shower. lol for seth's talk with e.
Gina needs to be fired. And E def needs to tell Aro about Gina's talk of Paul.
Glad the critic meal went well. E is so good to his employees. Oh no. Bella should have called someone. Silly girl probably thought she would be bothering someone. oh No Glad E found her. Evil cliffy....glad there is another chapter waiting for me
Author's Response:
Oh yeah lots of little triggers bring sue out to play...
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Date: 20 Jan 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Legal Side of Things
Why do I get the feeling that Sue and Harry are in Forks???
Ah Jazz brought reinforcements huh? Glad they are being supportive though. Really deep there Em. Hope Em can really help legal wise. Jasper really has his work cut out for him with helping B.
aww the flowers are a nice touch. Uh oh Gina is going to be trouble I think. Zafrina is hilarious. Seth is adorable. oooh B is claiming her man, Go Bella. Courting...how cute. Good think her sperm donor is dead, otherwise I think the Cullen men would have a hunting party to kill them. They both have a sweet tooth it seems.
Ugh Gina is so pathetic. Not that I want to leave Marcus in a lurch, but she does need to get away from the college. Nice picnic day.
So nice that B is going to see little E with him. Hope E can start to heal
Author's Response:
I am so glad that you are and have been enjoying this so much.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 19 Jan 2013 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 18: Confessions
OMg So glad Aro looked after her. Makes me feel better that Aro really didnt know. E is going to really beat himself up huh? Happy Aro tries to talk him down.
Oh E. Do you really think she is going to let anyone into her head and heart who will be patient with her and not abuse her? What an idiot to think he can keep her at arms distance after all thats happened already.
Oh E. you are an idiot to think she'll let anyone else help her now. Oh E. You are a goober. KNew B would take it all on herself. Glad he called Jasper to come over. Jeez she's not even allowed to cry???
Glad Jasper came. Wow Sue screwed her up big time. And her sperm donor. They treated her like a slave... a bell, really?!?!?! Glad Jasper wants to help her. E's going to make himself crazy with the "she's a baby talk"
YEY for finally telling each other the truth about thier feelings.
Author's Response:
Edward was really mad wasn't he?? Yeah the Bell thing was over the top, but Nikky liked it and it gave a reason for the kids to call her bells, because a nick name is used as an endearment and sue charlie and harry only ever called her slave, girl or isabella so it was cool to let the babies nickname her.
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Date: 19 Jan 2013 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 17: Weekend Revelations!
Glad Bella is being strong and letting the kids go on the trip. lol for Bella trying to give him an out with Sally. Got to be hard for him that B knows his proclivities. LOL for radio voice. hee hee
Aww for movie and snuggle time. The kids are too cute. Glad Sally is taking care of them.
aww for taking B out. She has 4 "dates" to look out for her. ooh that drink sounds yummy.
Glad she got to dance with E. Stupid idiot putting his hand on another man's date. ROFL for poking her. Awww for first kiss. Glad she trusts E to ask him. Glad he is trying to take things slow. Uh oh she's asking about Aro's girls. Wow, Again SOOOOO glad Aro saved her from that life. OMG no bed? Really want that bitch of a step-person to hurt (dont want to call mom or parent with that step. Insult to proper steps).
LOL for hangover. Loving someone else doenst take away from the first love E. Hope he does talk to Peter. Wow for the picture money.
Hmm FOrks huh? I dont trust Mr Hunter either. oooh so B is only 19. Uh oh. Explains why she was even more secretive than before. Hope E doesnt screw this up for himself.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 19 Jan 2013 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 16: Trash Talking Turkey Day
Kids sound adorably dressed. Cant help but be worried too. Hope Jasper can keep Malice in place. Doubt it though. GAWD I HATE ROSE and MALICE!!!! The kids are so nice.
Rose needs to be cut off my everyone after that rant, Em included. Poor e's hands. ROFL for insulting Barbie. Go B sticking up for the kids. OMG she hit B!!!! Glad Esme threw her out and that Em is leaving her....at least for awhile. It would hurt Em, but I really want her run over by a bus or something.
Glad he is telling her Tanya's story. Wow Skankya really was a Rose clone huh? OMG for he end of the story. Poor E!!!
Author's Response:
you were not alone in the hate for Rose and Alice.
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Date: 19 Jan 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Break In
Glad Esme is on B and Es side. Jasper needs to stay strong. We'll see if the family can control the scummy twins if he goes.
Ah Aro time is ending it seems. Hope he talks to Peter about the guilt soon before he gets sick or has an attack about it.
awww Katie is jealous. Oh no....who broke in? Random or planned out. Poor B Cant even call the cops. grrr. hmm Paul maybe??? or those park thugs??? or someone else. Argh my brain is spinning.
So Glad E got them out of the house for the night at least. Wow Seth is great on the piano. Nice that Esme let him rant. Want them to go over for Tday but afraid of the skanks.
She is good with math thats for sure. aww her tape player too. that sucks. LOL for remembering nakedness. oh Bella. Glad she is self sufficient but she needs to learn to accept help.
Locks for love is a great idea. And she gets a haircut out of it. Leah bought some great smart stuff. Seth is great for music too. The bank wont work because of SSN stuff. LOL for seth and the cashier skank. Glad they chose to go to dinner. Hope they can keep the biatches in line.
Author's Response:
LOL I love how much this story made people gasp and get emotional... To me that meant more than every kind word we got. To have someone feel so much emotion for a fictional character is a sign of a great story, or at least I have always believed that.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 19 Jan 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Cowboy, a Princess, and a Butterfly
ah E's going to try again at Aro's.....not going to work I think. ROFL for taking her to the lingere store. OMG Sue really needs to die. Along with this Harry person. Glad E is trying to reason with her.
Sounds like cute costumes. oooh Snooping E. Thats really going to mess with his head I bet. Hee hee for Aro sneaking up on him. Great idea going to see Carlisle. Hope Malice and the Bitch arent there too.
Awww Esme is so sweet. But yeah, I wouldnt want them around Malice and Bitch either. Char's house sounds great. GRRR Malice arrives. Glad E put her in her place, but I get the feeling she is not going to let it lie and the kids are going to suffer. Jasper should leave her to prove his point.
OMG the chocolate cock thing was hilarious!!!
Author's Response:
I know it right??
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Date: 18 Jan 2013 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 13: Balls and Bitches
Hope Bella isnt getting sick. At least he is seeing Peter now. Ugh Malice and Siohban are up to something again. grrr. Dress sounds pathetic. Too bad E couldnt split up and sit on opposite sides of P & C. Oh no...Bella is there?? this isnt going to be good. Siobhan is one skanky whore. Hmmm does Esme know or just doenst want to be embarrased?? Malice and Rose both need a good hard punch in the face. What bitches. Glad Esme and Charlotte (and the boys) stick up for E and B. Don't think the skanks will let it go though. Smart thinking Bella!!!
Siobhan is so pathetic. She is saying that in front of his family and replacement parents??? Ugh. Glad he told off Malice too.
So sweet helping her clean up. Wow he got her in a cab. Thats an improvement. Glad the cabbie cooperated too.
ROFL for the nightie episode. Wonder when he'll get her to go into that room. Wonder what goodies are hiding in the filing cabinet.
Author's Response:
Yeah I loved the suspense with that one.
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Date: 18 Jan 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 12: Nicknames
Glad Bella is sticking with it and doing so well. Aww jealous E is too cute.
oooh almost called out B's name. He's got it so bad.
Nice of Jazz to think of Bella, but I have the feeling Malice is going to see her in them and have a fit or tease Bella (am I overthinking things???)
Oh wow. I thought he already was seeing Peter. That's not good. ok I get him needing to hear her voice, but Baby Bella?
Awww spending a Saturday together. OMG She's kept the bitches room intact?? argh. Bella is such a special person.
Wow too bad B is so beat down; she could sell all that crap of the skanks. lol for the ogling. ROFL for the Bra thing.
Great play time at the park. aww for tickle time and holding hands.
Author's Response:
I loved the jealous side of Edward.
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Date: 18 Jan 2013 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 11: Learning Some Background
so nice of him to go along. hmm sounds like she's anemic if she's bruising like that.
Ah that explains the kids getting thier shots. Aro and Zafrina. (hate that she calls Sue mom) Glad Jenks is confirming the info before sending it over. They are all so cute teasing each other.
Dont know that she'll ever get in a car again unless its a dire emergency involving the kids. lol for him pulling out the puppy dog face.
lol for seth not wanting kisses from icky girls anymore.
oooh pumping Zafrina for info. Zafrina and Aro are godsends.
uh oh Aro's girls arent working anymore. hee hee. Glad Felix beat up Paul. Hope he doesnt see B outside the "club" and hurt her. Go E beating down that arsehole. Glad Aro kicked him out but I'm still think he'll messing with B.
Glad Aro was there to take care of her.
Author's Response:
Aro as a good guy was great and I loved writing him...
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Date: 18 Jan 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 10: ABC Easy as 123
hmmm more sex isnt gonna help you E <singing in a teasing voice>.
He is such a good, patient teacher. Hope she stays patient and doesnt frustrate herself. Naughty Emmett sneaking to see Bella.
Glad she seemed ok with them all there. Hee hee seeing through Em's act.
Poor Leah. Does suck that the teasing wasn't stop before it escalated to Leah's outburst.
Wow for E's story. I really HATE Alice and Rose now. Too bad Em and Jazz are stuck with them. I think they should find out somehow.....hmmmmm
Awww for pinky swear
Author's Response:
kinda hard to get her out of his mind, it seems to be one tracked! lol
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Date: 18 Jan 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 9: Doctor, Mall, and Names
Hope Carlisle keeps his word about the kids. Bella does a great job with them. I love that E is being so nice to her. Wow car accident. def explains the fear of cars and doctors. Wonder if she has residual damage from it. Hope the blood test comes back ok. awww for lollypop. So nice she appreciates what she has/gets. Was kinda wondering about the kids and school. These days they have to have physicals and shots.
lol for tricking her into eating more. So sweet getting her the glasses she needs. LOL for getting tangled for seth and Leah. hee hee for her talking to Jake.
hmmm Carlisle noticing a difference in E now too.
eek naughty dreams.
Author's Response:
Carlisle is a good guy, just worried...
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Date: 17 Jan 2013 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Glad he thought to tell Taylor about B. Dayum 5 Hours?? wow.
Glad he is happy with her job so far. The bowl is a nice touch.
Jazz is quite obseratent. Isnt he a psychiatrist? not a regular doctor. LOL Jazz calling him on all his stuff is funny. hmm wonder what she got upset about with Jaspers talk about siblings?
ooh Maria notices the difference in him huh? Wonder how long until the others do too?
Uh Rose is in her normal crap form along with Alice. I have a bad feeling about this. Alice really doesnt know when to quit huh? ROFL LOVED him putting Siobhan in her place.
lol For being scared of Ms Cope. hmm so B will take for the kids and not herself. Wonder if some of it is punishing herself for something that happen to the parents? OMG the real story is even worse. Time to hunt down the step-bitch and take her down a few levels.
Like the teaching her to read idea.
Author's Response:
Loed the teaching her to read thing, it was a great idea.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 17 Jan 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 7: New Job
you have my mind whiring trying to figure out her backstory.
Glad she took the job and the tape recorder. I know Jazz will be nice to her. hope Alice behaves. Why do I get the feeling something bad is going to happen at that dinner?
ummm did he call Carmen Isabella out loud???? or in his head???
Wow looks like Bella spends as little as possible on herself to include food wise.
That teacher is just asking for it if that is his real name.
PS Love Hope Springs and the People story!!! both here on TWCS
Author's Response:
I love People like us and hope springs so much and michele has always been a great follwoer of my stuff and that made me happy. She used to pimp out A Sub Search like ALL THE TIME, so it meant a lot to me to return that favor!
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Date: 17 Jan 2013 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 21: Illness and Surprises
What a precious chapter. So cute, the family xoming together.
I'm glad Gina finally got what she deserved.
Author's Response:
yeah me too, hated Gina~
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Date: 17 Jan 2013 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 16: Trash Talking Turkey Day
Glad to get the story of the past. I was confussed.
I'm loving the story, but Alice and Rose are so mean, petty and one demential, they almost don't make sense.
Author's Response:
The pety sides of Alice and Rose does give resolution well I think, and I loved how we brought things full circle for them all.
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Date: 16 Jan 2013 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 6: Making Amends
Wow B talked herself into trouble. Marcus needs to fire Gina. ugh. lol for walking in on Didyme. Oh Gina you skanky biatch. Thank GAWD for the cameras. Marcus is so cool. Wow embry is a real arse. hmm no paperwork.....you have my conspiracy theories going again.
E should feel bad. Surprised he talked to Jazz and not Peter. Replacing her tape recorder is a good idea. Dont know if she'd take the job though....at least not at first.
Ugh for Jessica. grr for me who think they are entitled to touch. Glad he appologized. Is she brain damaged or something? or just uneducated? you really have me wondering.
LOL his verbal filter is def broken. hmm no car for her. Wonder if she would/could ride a bike, as in bicycle.
Author's Response:
You were right abouther willingness to take the replacement... she is so selfless, but it is all she has ever known.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
Date: 16 Jan 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 5: Walls We Build
Crappy dream. At least Esme caught out Skankya before he married her. Really crappy dream. no wonder he's screwed up in real life. ugh for being such an arsehole to B.
Poor B. Hope she'll be ok. What a Jerkward.
Glad Riley is doing well. Glad Ms Cope is nice to her. ok you are REALLY making me not like E. Paul needs his Arse kicked. Yey for Felix. Glad Aro told off E. What a prick.
Glad E is having a bad day. Karma sucks huh? ugh for Gina though. No one should have to deal with that. OK I changed my mind.....Someone needs to kick his arse big time. Poor B. Wish Marcus would have stayed. B is too nice for him.
Author's Response:
the dream was crappy, but it explained a lot about his mental standpoint and how and why he saw things the way he did.
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Date: 16 Jan 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 4: Stalking
Ah off to Aro's huh? At least he confirmed that was Aro's mom.
Was wondering when the family would descend. Agree that Peter would be a better idea.
Ah he sees B interacting with the kiddies. Awwww. THey seem cute. Go E taking care of the bitchy cashier!!!! Wow where was the manager in all this? lame store.
Wow busy schedule. Jessica is a nasty biatch too. Her and Rose would get along. Stalking indeed.
Poor B. Glad he was there for her. oooh Sneaky bringing up the kids. hmmm car...lemme guess, parents died in a horrible crash? a bell? interesting. oh my Was B a slave somehow and not allowed to learn to read? Or was she in the accident too and has some brain damage?
ACK you have me thinking like crazy
Author's Response:
I loved Zafrina callign him Edna! JUST LOVED IT and her character was shadowed from the upstairs drunken neighbor from Will and Grace... LOL
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Date: 16 Jan 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 3: First Sight
Panic attack???? really????
Really Really Really not liking Rose.
Aww so nice of Bella to stop by the hospital. Someone has hurt and/or scared her really bad.
Ugh he is surrounded by skanks. He needs to tell Aro about Gina. What a bitch.
LOl for Marcus and Taylor making him leave. A Psychic?? ROFL. Ah Aro's mom. Thats an interesting twist.
Author's Response:
Yeah Rose is self absorbed.
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Date: 16 Jan 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 2: Warning Signs
Just FYI. I type my review as I'm reading so it may seem disjointed at times as I react/comment on what is happening in the story.
That was really cool what he said/did for Riley and Bree.
Sex wise...so long as its consentual its cool with me. Love lemony goodness.
Yummy Irina time. Glad he takes care of the women too, not just a taker sex wise.
Cant believe his mom dumped him that way. At least he went with a good family.
OMG that dessert sound heavenly.
Housekeeper huh? hire B maybe??? Ugh for even thinking Esme would hit on him.
Meanie to bella. hmmm Can she not read maybe????
Ugh for the little punks. Heart attacK???? aww for sweet mystery woman (Bella I assume)
Author's Response:
I love your reviews they are bits and pices and that is super cool.
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Date: 16 Jan 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes
E is def messed up. But Rose is a royal bitch. jeez. Alice and esme need to get a clue, esp Alice. Ugh
Great start.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered. Thanks, Kasi~
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes
I am 1oo% hooked on this story!! I can't wait to read it .
Date: 10 Dec 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Your story was fantastic. I enjoyed it very much
Author's Response:
This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed. Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post. There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written.
Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too. We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out. We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest. We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.
I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.
We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
absolutely loved it. i was blown away by the twists and turns y'all created. AMAZING STORY
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing this story, it means a lot to both of us. Kasi &(Nikky)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes
Edward's view on women mirror some (my) women's view of men. When all you have received from them be it man or woman is heartache, one tends to seclude themselves. To some it may seem a bit overkill, but to each his/her own. Is Bella the quiet student as well as the cleaning lady? Off to the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, the story is complete and we hope you enjoyed the entire thing. We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)
Date: 05 Oct 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
hi, What a story, I really enjoyed it...I loved all the characters but Jane is the
top...she made me laugh so much.....all the best
Author's Response:
This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed. Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post. There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written.
Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too. We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out. We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest. We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.
I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.
We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
THIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES EVER!!! So good! Just enough angst to rip my heart out, enough stranger-danger to keep me excited, and enough love to keep me sane through it all! :D SO AWESOME!
Author's Response:
This has been a fantastic journey and we are sad yet excited that we finally clicked completed. Keep in mind to watch out for Enduring His Cimmerian View to update, there are a few of those yet to write and post. There is not a real posting schedule for those, but they will be written.
Nikky and I are writing a couple more stories at least together and we hope to see you checking them out too. We have a stalker story coming soon, as well as a BDSM/Olderward story coming out. We also have a pretty large one-shot that will post soon, that we wrote for the Forbidden Fruit contest. We can’t tell you the name of it yet, but there are a TON of great stories entered in the contest.
I started posting the new story collaboration I am doing with Jess2002, it is called Bases Loaded and you can find it under the author name of JessAndTAT.
We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2012 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 34: Magic Times
Ugh, I love Jane....seriously! And I love that this has gone so well for them! So much goodness after all the tough stuff!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, the story is complete and we hope you enjoyed the entire thing. We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 31: Good Luck Masen Family
FREAKING AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, the story is complete and we hope you enjoyed the entire thing. We again thank you all so much, Kasi (& Nikky)