[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
Date: 21 Nov 2023 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Your Alice characters don't seem very nice (i.e. Chimera), and this one seems like a spoiled, nasty brat!
Date: 20 Nov 2023 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: First Sight
He is so strange! Having massive panic attacks and not realizing it? I hope he comes around soon, and gets his life in order. Are those kids Bella's, or her siblings? Curious to find out!
Date: 20 Nov 2023 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: First Sight
He is so strange! Having massive panic attacks and not realizing it? I hope he comes around soon, and gets his life in order. Are those kids Bella's, or her siblings? Curious to find out!
Date: 20 Nov 2023 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 3: First Sight
He is so strange! Having massive panic attacks and not realizing it? I hope he comes around soon, and gets his life in order. Are those kids Bella's, or her siblings? Curious to find out!
Date: 20 Nov 2023 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 3: First Sight
He is so strange! Having massive panic attacks and not realizing it? I hope he comes around soon, and gets his life in order. Are those kids Bella's, or her siblings? Curious to find out!
Date: 20 Nov 2023 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 3: First Sight
He is so strange! Having massive panic attacks and not realizing it? I hope he comes around soon, and gets his life in order. Are those kids Bella's, or her siblings? Curious to find out!
Date: 20 Nov 2023 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 3: First Sight
He is so strange! Having massive panic attacks and not realizing it? I hope he comes around soon, and gets his life in order. Are those kids Bella's, or her siblings? Curious to find out!
Date: 09 Jul 2023 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: Making Amends
I love this story.
Date: 07 Mar 2021 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes
Such a great story. So much angst and so pain. But aslone the way there was healing and love. And Edward and Bella finally got the family and HEA they deserved. Amazing story, Kasi and Nikky. Another wonderful story by two talented ladies.
Date: 25 Jan 2018 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Salut,
je suis Français, donc mon anglais n'est pas parfait.
J'ai lu cette fic, c'est vraiment génial .
mais je ne comprends pas la traduction de "Sa vue cimmérienne "
Si vous voulez envoyer les synonymes pour mon aider à comprendre Please, thank you.
Nounoute
Date: 25 Jan 2018 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Salut,
je suis Français, donc mon anglais n'est pas parfait.
J'ai lu cette fic, c'est vraiment génial .
mais je ne comprends pas la traduction de "Sa vue cimmérienne "
Si vous voulez envoyer les synonymes pour mon aider à comprendre Please, thank you.
Nounoute
Date: 25 Jan 2018 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Salut,
je suis Français, donc mon anglais n'est pas parfait.
J'ai lu cette fic, c'est vraiment génial .
mais je ne comprends pas la traduction de "Sa vue cimmérienne "
Si vous voulez envoyer les synonymes pour mon aider à comprendre Please, thank you.
Nounoute
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2017 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Great story
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2017 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Great story
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2017 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Great story
Date: 11 Sep 2016 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Great story and fantastic writing. Thank you
Date: 29 Aug 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 23: Birthdays and Unexpected Visitors
Ok, James is a sicko, but if I know you ladies, he will get his just rewards. Rose, unfortunately I think is irredeemable. She just has serious issues against Edward, and therefore everyone else that he loves. She doesn't accept that maybe Bella is NOT evil. Alice, I feel is just realizing how much of a bitch she was to Bella and hopefully she will now see why Jazz wanted to help her so much. She will come around soon if she hasn't already.
Reading on......
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2016 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Great story. Thank you for sharing it.
Date: 01 May 2016 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 32: Getting the Answers
good
Date: 01 May 2016 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 31: Good Luck Masen Family
good
Date: 30 Apr 2016 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 30: The Faith Within
good
Date: 30 Apr 2016 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 29: New Home, New School, New Start
good
Date: 30 Apr 2016 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 28: She Devil
wonder when seth and leah will change their last names
thinking sue might use rose
Date: 30 Apr 2016 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 27: Where Do We Go From Here?
good
Date: 30 Apr 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation
good
Date: 29 Apr 2016 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise
wondering if sue is tanya??
Date: 26 Apr 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 23: Birthdays and Unexpected Visitors
good
Date: 26 Apr 2016 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 22: Gifts and Snowball Fights
good
Date: 26 Apr 2016 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 21: Illness and Surprises
good
Date: 26 Apr 2016 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 20: Snow Storms
wondering if gina had something to do with b getting hurt. hoping she is ok
Date: 25 Apr 2016 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 19: The Legal Side of Things
good
Date: 25 Apr 2016 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 17: Weekend Revelations!
good
Date: 25 Apr 2016 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 16: Trash Talking Turkey Day
good
Date: 25 Apr 2016 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 14: A Cowboy, a Princess, and a Butterfly
glad e didn't put up with alice's shit
Date: 25 Apr 2016 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 13: Balls and Bitches
they really are big bitches. hoping alice gets her ass handed to her at some point. wondering of sue is going to make an appearance
Date: 24 Apr 2016 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 11: Learning Some Background
good
Date: 24 Apr 2016 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 10: ABC Easy as 123
hoping the truth about alice comes out. the women in this are really a piece of work
Date: 24 Apr 2016 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 9: Doctor, Mall, and Names
good
Date: 24 Apr 2016 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
wonder when he will learn her real age
also kind of wondering when the esme, ali, and rose will meet b and what will happen
Date: 24 Apr 2016 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 5: Walls We Build
poor b
Date: 21 Apr 2016 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 2: Warning Signs
thinking b is the one helping him??
wondering if he is having a heart attack
Date: 21 Apr 2016 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes
good start
Date: 08 Mar 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
good story and wonderful ending :) Good job!
Date: 03 Mar 2016 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Loved the concept of ur story... My heart belonged to bella... There are so many places where u showed the path of redemption for edward.. But after reading this story in one go i must say edward doesn't deserve bella. Though i loved forgiving bella but i wish bella could sometimes tell off edward n tells him to go fuck himself. I know they both had painful past, still they both were moulded differently. Time n time again edward fucks up with bella n my heart literally goes for her. According to me, no matter wateva edward did for bella he is one spoiled selfish n hypocratic SOB. Apart from that i genuinely loved tge way u portrayed other characters. Will love to read your other eorks.. Plz ignore any typos n spelling mistakes. :)
Date: 24 Nov 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Thank you for writing and sharing your story!
Date: 24 Nov 2015 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 29: New Home, New School, New Start
I'm really enjoying this story, but for Edward to not immediately try to detain her a second time is really disappointing. I forgave it the first time she visited due to surprise, but for a man who has a punching bag it surprises me he wouldn't try to capture her as soon as he realised Vicky was Sue.
Date: 16 Nov 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Loved the story. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 12: Nicknames
I love the story
Date: 20 Sep 2015 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 33: Wedding Bells
i am loving this story
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 16: Trash Talking Turkey Day
I love how they all wore matching clothes to Thanksgiving like a happy little family.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes
Wonderful story... Not sure why it took me so long to find and read. Meg
Date: 12 Feb 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
This is now one of my favorites😍 read it all in one day d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;
Date: 08 Sep 2014 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
loved this story and all your other ones...
Date: 21 Jul 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Break In
one of the witches tring to get info about Bella OR Sue OR idk.....
Date: 15 Apr 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 22: Gifts and Snowball Fights
When I heard the twins call Edward and Bella, "Beeward" I had thought they would've assumed it to be the shorten term bitch, like "B" word. Well, at least for Edward to have thought so at first since Bella had used "female dog" when she described the name bitch that she used on Gina. What a beautiful Christmas. I wonder what will become of Emmie's and Rose's marriage. It's too bad she is pregnant or else I'd be all for him to get a separation.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 18: Confessions
Bella has her beast, I was afraid said beast was going to pull a New Moon move by keeping her from being in his life. I hope that doesn't happen. As much as angst is good for this plot, I think this had the right amount, for little o'l me anyway. Too much more is difficult too read, but since I am already hooked, (thanks a lot, joking =-) I will be like a hooker on crack, getting my fix with every chapter I read. At the very end, their happily ever after will be a natural high for me. Edward needs anger management, although I love a passionate man, Bella's had enough instability and doesn't need irrational behavior. She has her issues to work on and I love how he has said for her to do it for herself. For too long she has put the needs of others not only ahead of herself, but not doing anything for herself. They need a solid foundation from their friendship and watching them grow and build their relationship has been enjoyed and I am looking forward to more since I am not even half way through this and will start the companion story at the advised time. Since this story is completed and I don't even know if you read them because it may be pointless now, (and this HCV addict clicks on the 'next' tab like a clucker) I haven't reviewed every single chapter. I just do it to show my appreciation for sharing and keeping the story up for others like myself, who are virgins to the story or are hitting it up for round two. Anyhow, I see Edward's struggle within himself over her age, but at 19 she is years ahead on the maturity level in comparison with regular young adults when at the same time in their lives. I was the same, graduating H.S. school at 16 starting my city's local university at 17 with two kids already at age 20 and my third and only unplanned pregnancy, which was a blessing for my husband and I, at age 29. Not that I am married anymore, but not all of us are fortunate having a Beauty and Beast fairytale for life. Although, we should all have it at least for a duration to fully experience life. I'll live vicariously through these two. It makes me grateful, even with my mishaps because the pair have suffered so much, without dismissing Edward's painful events, I especially. think Bella has from day one. She has experienced so much, yet so little, being emotionally and physically abused, neglected and abandoned, held back from hanging a childhood and education, along with being forced from a somewhat dependent, a child whom had her teenage years stolen from her into becoming a responsible independent 'adult' into an overnight mother of two toddler twins instead of just their older sis. Heartbreaking, just so very sad and wrong what the four of them have been handed without deserving. Makes me angry that people hurt people, especially children! Wish I had a fairytale wand to rid them from the world or to change them. And to not be a hypocrite of my own faults to zap the Hell out of me as well for the hatred I have for those.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 13: Balls and Bitches
I hate those bitches, girls like that puts me off. I have always thought us girls should stick together, uplift one another. I am always nice to females and then when a bitch like the three she-devils make an appearance then that is where I put an abrupt stop and rip them apart, much like Edward did with Siobhan. I was glad to see the other's loyalty. Edward you know you want to be" "intimate" with Baby Bella, so open your eyes and heart and love her with your fine ass already. Jeez men. Haha I am guessing the witch is Sue flying in on her broomstick or Siobhan getting beat off with one used. much like a cane by Edward on that whore. Loved how supportive Esme was about Bella; she hasn't seen her son taken with another for so many years. When Edna said Tanya was dead and buried I don't know if out is to be taken literally or figuratively. I am such a literal person, so idioms and alike baffle me.
Date: 13 Apr 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 12: Nicknames
I noticed how he said nobody could see the lingerie items except for him! I loved this chapter, so fun!
Date: 13 Apr 2014 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 11: Learning Some Background
You've managed to write an Aro I like. My guess is that Jane was the one whom had an asshole pimp and now she gets paid to beat the shit out of men. Is there any other kind of pimp? Well I guess Aro is one, decent too lol. That just sounds all wrong. You really write out a naive. and depraved Bella well. My heart always hurts for children. I know she is 18 now but, she never had a childhood, very saddening. Edward may feel bad for using women as he should even if they consent to it they are just as fucked up as he is to get to that type of place. There is always a reason people do the things they do, sex addicts, subs etc., it's an ugly world with his of heaven and Hell.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 10: ABC Easy as 123
Learning how to read will boost Bella's self-esteem and give her the key to unlock the world of knowledge. Edward is very patient with her and kind to teach Bella. That in itself will have her thinking he made a world of difference in her life, as well as she becomes to think the world of him. Okay enough with the "world" word; I am getting on my own nerves! It is a shame that unfortunate things we have gone through can greatly effect us in such a negative way that we take drastic measures for the sake of not risking the chance of ever going through a similar situation. Not allowing ourselves to take chances from fear is like living dead. What will it take for Edward to stop letting fear keep him from fully living? I almost want to say he is a coward but, I know being hurt and having trust issues sucks. Maybe I need an escort that looks like Edward, and $8 grand to blow to get blown during this timeout I am taking on men before I am relationship ready. Fuck I wish haha.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 7: New Job
No filter at all. I wonder how Bella will feel around Jasper come Monday. So Edward thought she was slow, but she is just uneducated from being illiterate. Ignorant but, she is not dumb. She may have an engineer career ahead if math is her strength. Edward and his fantasy slip up. It really grosses me out that he seeks prostitution. The whole prostitution thing really sickens me. A foreign friend of mine said that sex crimes weren't as big of an issue in her country compared to the US. Makes sense I guess, but legalizing something so immoral wouldn't make it legal here. At least not in the near future. Makes me wonder if it would benefit victims, males and females alike? Not that Edward is a violent perp, just a lil' perv lol. Such a great story.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 6: Making Amends
Bella is a genuinely good person. It does bother me that she it's so weak, any female who allows someone to mistreat them. It's too bad that there are girls and women out there that take abuse without standing up for themselves and stopping it. Gets me upset because I care and just want fellow female to be strong and demand respect when they are respectable. Not like your Gina character or worse Jessica who gives women a bad image. Grrr lol. Edward better cool his shit and kiss some ass. Bella is so innocent, I'm so glad nobody abused her sexually or at least not by streaking her virginity. Sad that she is ignorant. I hope to see her grow along with Edward in this story that may cause me to have some anxiety haha.
Date: 03 Apr 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 13: Balls and Bitches
OMG... this story was great.... LUV IT
Date: 16 Jan 2014 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 17: Weekend Revelations!
Why Bella? :( ugh!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 13: Balls and Bitches
I'm so over the bitch triplets!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 10: ABC Easy as 123
Awwwwww and now I don't like rose or Alice either!!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2014 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 8: Birthday Surprise
Poor Bella I knew she couldn't read....
Date: 15 Jan 2014 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 5: Walls We Build
Such an ass
Date: 14 Jan 2014 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 2: Warning Signs
Enter Bella!please!
Date: 14 Jan 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Through His Eyes
Poor Edward :(
Date: 23 Nov 2013 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
Great story! I really enjoyed it; well written. Of course I was looking forward to hear a lil about the grandparents in those last 20 years but.. Thank you for sharing :)
Date: 06 Nov 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
great story loved the ending and for once i actually liked jane
Date: 03 Nov 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 9: Doctor, Mall, and Names
im glad he is starting to see the real bella and he has real feelings for her
maby he will stop going to aros soon please
i know he needs sex but its just tacky for our edward to do that lol
Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 5: Walls We Build
i agree i want to rip off his balls arsehole
i do care what he is trying to live with but its no reason to treat someone with that sort of contempt
well written
Date: 14 Jul 2013 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family
You two are an amazing writing team! This was one of the best stories I've ever read! Any time I laugh and cry and cuss a bit , it's a great story, and that doesn't happen all the time! Loved the peek into the future, with the family growing and changing and all doing pretty well! I will miss all these people, and look forward to reading the outakes. Thanks again for a wonderful story!