Date: 28 Aug 2014 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
sorry but i find this a hugggggggggeeeee unbelievable stretch!!!!! how and why on earth would Edwards Grandpa hook up with his daughter's grandma????? creepy and gross,and the little girl just happens to be alive????? come on!!!!!! reallly????? too much
Date: 27 Apr 2013 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
cried like a freaking baby! his grandfather seems like a bag of douche. I wonder what the article is about. loved the anniversary scene. cannot put this story down to take even a small nap. are we going to get to hear Esme's view of Finn?
Date: 27 Apr 2013 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
uh oh, really don't like Laurent's appearance. creeptastic creepster that he is. So glad that she is allowing Edward his chance. she would have to be crazy as a shithouse rat to let that opportunity to go to waste. another chapter without tears :)
Date: 27 Apr 2013 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
wasn't going to review because I usually sound stupid, but you are ripping my heartstrings out of my chest with this story and I am a glutton for punishment :) in your first a/n for chapter 1 you mentioned that you hope to convey the compassion through your words, one word for you: SUCCESS! I have been slinging more snot in these 5 chapters than a cold epidemic in a kindergaten class. I may not review every chapter but I will go back and rate every single one. loving this journey you are taking me on even though my roommate thought someone in my close circle passed away when she came home to me bawling my eyes out, snubbing and all. she thinks I need to attend some FFAA (Fan Fiction Addicts Anonymous) lol :)
Date: 21 Oct 2012 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
I can't imagine you losing your audience!!! Ur a talented writer. Ur also one who takes pride in their work making sure it uses correct grammer, words, spelling, etc!! There r MANY who don't & it is irritating. :) So thx 4 that!!
I follow u here & on FFnet but prefer here b/c they allow M & NC-17. :)
Keep up the great work!!!
Date: 02 Oct 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ok i ment to leave a note sometime before 1st wonderful story i love it. 2nd the child that was in the picture with Edwards grandfather i have a theory that might just be out there so if im right when/if im proved right im going to smile be but if im wrong it will be a pout and a shrug. Maybe she's not even important maybe she's the final pieace of the puzzle that makes up Edward and Bella's life who knows well bcak to reading!!~!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Sep 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
Another solid story - I'm working through them one-by-one. Really enjoyed Labels. I've had it on my "must read" list for several months.
I love your endings and they always leave me hungry for more. We'll I'm moving on to your next story. I appreciate your work, HEA's and attention to detail.
Hope you're still reading review from completed stories.
Date: 25 May 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome heart felt story!! I just got through reading Trip & I loved it!! Thanks!! I want to add you to my favorite author list, but I am having trouble adding anything for some reason. I must be computer stupid!! Oh!! You did mention that you wanted new fan fics ro read...have you read Heaven, Hell & Harleys? That has to be my all time favorite vampire fan fic!!
Date: 17 May 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks for another great story, I have really enjoyed this one [actually I have enjoyed all of your stories that I have read]. You could probably have a whole other story written now that Jax is nearing her dating years :)
Great job on this story and showing how to bring 2 families together, I look forward to more! Don't know if this will impact your posting decision, but I have always read your stories here on TWCS [even if I am bad about reviewing each chapter - sorry]. Know that we appreciate your work and if you continue to post here I will definitely continue to read. Thanks again!
Date: 09 May 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm proud of Bella for her strength. She is doing the right thing. I think she was classy in how she told Edward how much his absence affected Jax and her. Also, it was so important for Bella to have her own room and to tell Edward that his actions did have consequences...he decimated their attempt at a romantic relationship. She is a mother and now a friend to him. She has to protect Jax and herself in this situation.
Date: 09 May 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am so happy that Edward wants an "exclusive" relationship with Bella and in his mind, they are already "dating"! I hope that Billy makes a good recovery and it is time for Jake's sisters to get involved with helping their dad.
Date: 09 May 2012 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think it is good for Bella to feel a little bit of possessive jealousy regarding Edward...he should have made it a PRIORITY to introduce Emmett's lil sis to Bella at the reception.
Also, I think it is GREAT for Bella to be asked for a date by Dr. Whitlock. She needs to see that she is attractive and datable!
Date: 09 May 2012 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think it is hilarious that E,Em and R caught Bella sitting on her front porch having a "conversation" with her dead hubby! Thank goodness, Edward came over and the confrontation with R and EM happened. Bella really needs all of the information laid out in front of her. She has been on her own for 4years and she is protective of her daughter.
Edward is clearly a good guy and he deserves a fair chance at a relationship with Bella and her daughter.
Date: 07 May 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
I hope they decide to have more children and Edward gets a son to carry on his name and his good looks. I love little girls. I am from a family of all girls. I have a daughter who is now 17 and my best friend. I also have a son 14. I never realized what I missed never having a brother. Edward needs a son. His genes are too good not to pass on to another generation of males. He also will need to dilute the estrogen once those girls start going through puberty. He is going to need an allie.
Date: 30 Apr 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
I love this little family, which sounds like it won't be little for very long. I don't blame Bella. I think Edward should stay in the husband catagory and not doctor. He is great in an emergency, she needs her own doctor to take care of her parts. He should only think of her parts in a nonclinical way.
Date: 26 Apr 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
This was a really sweet chapter. I love that Jax isn't a perfect child, I hate when Tge kids do nothing wrong, it makes the story so fake.
Edward wanting to remove Bella's IUD was hilarious. I'm glad that Bella put her foot down. Even though Edward delivering their future babies would be sweet.
Date: 20 Apr 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
It's amazing how well everyone is adjusting. It is a miracle that they have all found each other. This is a beautiful story and I am going to be very sad to see it go. But hopefully not too soon. There seems to be some more for these 4.
Date: 13 Apr 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 15
I don't know if I've reviewed yet, but I think it is time I do with this chapter. I told a fellow reading friend about this story tonight. She's a Team Ed only reader but I insisted she give this a go. I have had so many emotions with this story from the 1st chp. I'm a big Jake/Bella cannon reader as well as others. I give them all a chance. When I've read a few Ed/bella HEAs I also have to read a few of Jake/bella ones as well to even out things. Soooooo...I really love that this story has a little of both characters, and even though she didn't get the HEA with Jake she will probably get it with Edward. The last dream in this chp had me bawling for some reason. It was a short and sweet dream, nothing over the top, but the whole gist of it made me sad that he was gone. I know she needed to find closure to give the relationship with Ed a chance, but still it was sad but beautful at the same time. So my point of reviewing is just to let you know that YES I am really loving your story and it is very well written and your talent is shining through. Thanks for sharing and I'll try to review more as it goes along. No matter what you want get a bad review from me so feel free to write away. (I know ed should have called at least once before going off to Italy, but the way she handled her trip there was just a really mean Bella. I know she should be mad but it was one of those 'get over it, Bella' moments for me, but you handled it great after his return. :) so good job!!)
Date: 12 Apr 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am so glad that Bella put the word out to the people on the reservation that she was moving on with her life. Leah seems happy which makes me believe that the only one not happy is Embry and he doesn't really count. I don't know why he would think that he could just step into Jacob's spot.
Date: 12 Apr 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am glad that Bella had some closure with Jacob. She needed that. The talk with Edward also needed to happen. As long as they keep talking everything will be fine between them. I like how Leah reacted to what Bella had to say. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
They have come such a long way from where they started. I am so Glad that Bella is finally doing what is right for her and not worrying about what others may think. I'm so happy for the two of them they really deserve a happily ever after.
Date: 28 Mar 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love it! They are going to be so happy together. It was so cute when Edward asked for Bella's keys. I hope she had fun driving his car. I can't wait for their Thanksgiving dinner. Great job...thanks so much!!!
As for the stories...they both sound very interesting and would love to read either one. Doors & Windows & Faith really caught my attention though.
Date: 22 Mar 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, i just read all 12 chapters in two days (which is crazy timing, with the fact that i dont have internet avaliable to me all the time at the moment). I really love this story. I'm glad Edward and Bella worked things out, though i'm one of the stubborn people that think Bella let him off a bit easy....i would have made him suffer a bit more (jk).
I love your story and bummed out that i have to wait a week for another update. i was spoiled :)
Date: 21 Mar 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
I am so glad Chelsea is okay. That was scary for everyone, but they all handled it together. I love that Chelsea called Bella Mom, but I wish she didn't feel bad about it. It's and honor that Chelsea says she feels like Bella is her Mom and Bella knows that. I can't wait for Thanksgiving. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 19 Mar 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well I am thinking this is not going to go the way Peter thinks it will.
I loved Chelsea's reaction to Bella. Edward knew Bella would not turn her back on that little girl. I also love the nickname Jaxie. That is perfect! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 19 Mar 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
I understand that Bella needs to protect herself and her daughter. Edward could have called. Esme or Carlisle could have called. They just needed to let her know something. Bella would have understood and she could have had something to tell Jax. I don't think they will only be able to stay just friends, but it is going to take a while to get past all this. I am glad Bella is there to support him. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome chapter! So much happened. I love that the neighbor knew that Jacob took the flowers. I am so glad that Edwrad followed her to the cemetery and was there for her. It was sad to think about Jacob walking away, but it was time for Bella to let him go. He will always be in her heart, but she also had to move on and live her life.
Everyone meeting at the cemetery was priceless. The toasts were awesome, but Edward's was very special. This was just an amazing chapter. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am soooo happy for Edward. Having his baby back is a dream come true that he never even thought to have. And I'm really glad he was honest with Chelsea about Bella's role in finding her, because without her he would of never known to look.
While I wish everything could pick up where it left off I'm glad that Bella is taking it slow. Jax doesn't deserve to have her emotions played with she is a little girl that should never feel the pain of abandment. Bella is a mess and I hope that she can find it in herself to truly forgive Edward. They both deserve to be blissfully happy and without each other I don't know if that's possible.
This is a beautiful story.