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Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2020 9:12 PM Title: One-Shot

Since you're curious or were when you wrote this, I'm an Edward fan.  If I'd known it wasa B/J pairing, I wouldn't have read.  However, by the time I reached that point in the story, the fact that it is so well-written kept me going. 

Reviewer: ebethkeitz8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2018 11:43 AM Title: One-Shot

This was awesome, you have a great foundation for more chapters. I would have read them all in one day. 

Reviewer: Kellyclo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 5:47 PM Title: One-Shot

I'm so not a Bella fan but after this story I'm definitely yours - you're a very very good writer :)

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 3:41 AM Title: One-Shot

I always love a good AH Jake and Bella story even if its a oneshot.  You were the first author I read that writes Jake/Bella stories and I've been hooked every since.  I am team twilight and I give all pairings a chance but Jake/bella ones hold a special place I don't know why.  I will overlook Team Ed authors putting Jake in a bad light only if they don't run it in the ground. Know what I mean.  I love your writing style...so deep and easy to read.  This one is just that and I thought at first it was Ed/Bella cause even though you list Jake and Bella in the characters they don't necessarily give you ones where they get the HEA.  So I guess I'm one of those die hard fans you mentioned cause I stayed til the end and I absolutely loved it.

Hugs, Stephanie

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 5:44 AM Title: One-Shot

Well your wrong, I an Edward girl but I read the whole thing.  Not sure what I was expecting, but you surprised me.  Well written and fun! Cheri

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:52 PM Title: One-Shot


Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:03 PM Title: One-Shot

Yeah...it threw me for a loop but I did enjoy it!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 7:48 AM Title: One-Shot

I can honestly say that I love this one shot. It's amazing and I love how Bella's personality is and how she see's and observes things. I love her imagination and how funny it is when she creates names and lives for the people around her in the bar. I like how she doesnt let Edward's cockyness get to her and she doesnt back down.

I like how she ended up with Jake, even though I must admit I'm more of a Emmett and Paul with Bella fan. But this one shot made me wanna read more Bella/ Jake things. and I'm glad that she ended up being stuck at the bar not being able to go follow Edward.

I guess it was ment to be that way, a least in this story. And I honestly think this is more reality than anything. Because shit like this really does happen. At least it somewhat happened to a friend of mine.

in all, this was fucking awesome and your a good writer.

Reviewer: bluebelle11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 5:23 AM Title: One-Shot

This is a great story!! Its amazing that sometimes things just work out.

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