Well I think Alice is missing her mess for either depression or Bi-Polar disorder ... which would explain a great deal honestly. Thank Heavens for Jasper's ability to communicate with his brother and Bella's easy forgiveness... Oh can not wait for more.. writer's blocks arrgghh!!! Laters BB Kathy!

Author's Response:

Hi Kathy

Thank you for your kind words.  I've been out of commissioned for awhile and now I'm trying to catch up on my reading.  Great chapter btw.

I'm so happy that you're back!  Sorry about the writer's block, but it looks like you worked through it beautifully.  It even looks like you exorcised some of it in this chapter! 

This was another great chapter.  I didn't think Edward's problems went as deep as they did, so I'm glad that Jasper pulled his head out of his ass!  Looks like good times are ahead in the lab, and I'm intrigued to learn what Alice's problem is...I have a couple of thoughts, but am not sure.

BTW - I checked out the blog last week when I was thinking about this story, and I like the newer pictures.  I missed them after the last chapter somehow.  Thanks for sharing! 

~allidel   :)

im thinking (and have been for awhile) that alice may be bipolar and is currently at a low point and of course has no meds.

Love Jasper and his intellect ;-) they will all be so surprised with the soap!!!

Author's Response:

Hi mountain718

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the last three chapters were fantastic.... Jasper spanking Alice well this Jasper reminded me of "People Like Us" character "Jasper" no not the Dom part of his personality, but the stronger and forceful, powerful in words and action Jasper....(not sure if you have read PLU or not, it's a killer story, if your offended by anything BDSM then it's definitely not your type of reading, but it's a killer story) ... I hope most people understand yhat this is a fanfic and your not trying to be overly perfect in all the details, like you say, and point our your not a surgeon or Orthopedic surgeon, but from this lay persons POV, I thought you did a killer job with all the story line, from the rescue to the bats, all the makeshift items they use and survive with... the shower scene first with Alice and Jasper was powerful you could feel the steam rolling off the words while reading...Jasper was so made at Alice for putting him and everyone in a extremely hanious position...but at the same time he was relieved she was safe...loved the spanking she got...sorry but she acted like a child with her actions and thoughts....  Esme is one powerful momma!!!!!  sorry but that final ease dropping was hiliarious...you all know it was, so thanks for that bit of humor.... oh Rosie honey, yea...no...morning sickness isn't gonna be that quick....dear lord all three of those women are gonna be big time preggers if they don't figure something out soon...maybe that's whats wrong with Alice....hummmm...  love the story and all your pictures...  Later Kathy

Esme and Jasper are too alike...lol! ok kids, mamma bear has spoken and don't even think of crossing her!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Love it!

Wow!  I think I'm even cowering a bit from Esme's speech!  It's funny how this is a long chapter and it seems like so much happened, but at the same time not a lot did happen.  Strange!

I like seeing Alice's & Esme's POV.  I would have loved to learn why Alice keeps acting the way she does, so hopefully we'll get a hint of that in the future.  I also think that Esme was right to lay down some ground rules as far as exploration goes.

I'm looking forward to some more E&B, and hopefully they will get a chance to explore that fishing village.  After some well thought-out planning, of course!  ;)

Thanks for another amazing update!  I can't seem to get enough of this story.  It's always sitting in the back of my mind.

~allidel   :)

Love me some mama Esme

Alice deserved what she got, glad to see them all safe.

Well I cant wait to see if Jasper really does spank Alice.  She needs it.  I am so glad they are getting out of that tunnel.  I dont think they will be going in there again.

I love how Esme was so pissed at Alice, I think Alice needs to grow up and realize she is not in Kansas anymore. lol

Gotta love Mama Esme...kicking ass & taking names!  I'm glad that everyone is back together and heading home.  I'm sure there will be some discussion coming up soon!  Looking forward to it! 

~allidel  :)

Love this story and this chapter, but still worried about Alice.  Not sure she will be able to sit down for the next week.  LOL Cheri

PS Way to go Esme!

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Great and funny chapter. I love what happened to Alice, very funny.

F'ing gross....and I think you know what part I'm talking about. That mental picture just gave me the shivers of disgust.

But so far, I'm lovin the story

Wow, love this story.  Thank you for the quick update, but I'm still worried about Alice.  Cheri

hmm, well when it rains it pours,  now alice is lost .  Thansk for theupdate !!!

Alice Alice where are you?

Wow, I am begining to think you are the queen of cliffies.  Edward & Bella, who knows how they are doing.  Alice missing, and what was that with Jazz in the tunnel getting so confused.  Anyway, will be holding my breath until the next chapter.  Love this story!! - Thank you.  Cheri

Wow that is scarry.  I LOVED the pictures on the blog.  One of them with the Carbon deposits was a little confusing as I didn't read anthing about it in the chapter.  I would have loved to know about that part of the cave and what the Carbon deposits were or what its from. 

Now as for Bella and Edward, I cant imagine the pain he is in with that broken arm but I am so glad he kept his head together so he can help Bella.

Poor Jasper is frantic to get help.  Now he will be the hero.

Great job!

Again I think Edward is dragging his feet with Bella.  The temple and the pictures were just amazing. 

I love it. They have all this wonderful fruit that we will never have the pleasure of tasting and chickens and eggs and pigs.  That have everything.  Its another great chapter.

great story so far,keep going

Wow, again!  Another intense one, but it was nice to see Jasper's POV.  I hope once everyone is rescued and healed, they will get a chance to explore the fishing village that's abandoned.  And I'm also intrigued by the other directions in the lava tube...the one to 'family' and the one that was unmarked.  So much great stuff to look forward to reading.  But first, the rescue.  I have a feeling it will be another intense chapter as well!  Thanks! 

~allidel  :)

PS - I'm trying that rating thing below for the first time.  I have no idea what's going to happen, so if something looks bad then I didn't mean it.  I love this story!

Another wonderful chapter.

Gross he had to taste her vomit. LOL  but at least he saved her life and she spotted land. 

OF course we want you to continue.  I am loving it so far.  I just wish you would include to pictures inside each chapter here on TWCS so we dont have to go back and fourth to see them while reading.

His story is fantastic I'm loving reading, congratulations.
I'll leave here a hint, if they have a diesel engine, since the boat's fuelruns out, they can EXTRACT vegetable oil (which is the biodiesel in Brazil), and power the motor (generator). The diesel engine wasoriginally invented to burn (work with) peanut oil. I hope this helps.

I love that it was in Jasper's perspective. I wish we could have had the rescue too. Keep up the great work.

A nice, exciting, heartwrenching chapter.I can't wait for more.  And Alice is off getting herself in trouble, isn't she?

And your use of "flashlight" made me smile. :D

Oh, and I know that most of the English speaking world uses "Torch," and I'm sure it's a more appropriate word than "Flashlight," but since we don't use "Torch" for the battery powered version, reading that word always brings up images of Indiana Jones type Expeditions, especially when traveling through a dark lava tube.  I was picturing a stick with fire at the end until you mentioned the batteries were dead.  And then I had to go "Oooooh!" and compeltely rearrange my images of the chapter. 

So thanks for fixing it.  And sorry about the nitpicking.  :D

Really enjoying this , the hunt was great fun.

Love this story, but hate the cliffy!  I know I am asking alot, but write fast.  I NEED to know what is going to happen next and how they are going to get out of there.  PLEASE!!  Thank you for giving all of us this wonderful story!  Cheri

Wow - intense chapter!!  I have no clue why the wind would be blowing so strong, but I might need to google or wikipedia that asap.  I feel like I should be rushing somewhere to get help for them....  Thanks for the update and I can't wait to see what happens next!

~allidel  :)

PS - Congrats on the flat selling!

great story so far

This is getting really exciting!  I can't wait for the next chapter.

One tiny question, are the characters in this story supposed to be American, or from someplace else?  If they are American, then a "Torch" is a long piece of burning wood used for light or to keep bugs away in the summer.  A "Flashlight" is a battery powered source of light with a handle.

omg drama!  Naughty lava thingy......

Glad he found her,  how on earth are they going to get out of this mess ;-)

glad you sold your flat :-)

Good, i'm glad they were straightforward with each other (now) but he still has to get her back for going in the tubes with them...lol

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

great update, they will have to make up a calendar so they can track out their menstrual cycles,  Also for thanksgiving and christams and stuff.  Please do not say but ring anymore.  other than that is was really good  !!!  instead, just say anus.  Now on to the lava tube !!!!!!

Omg, Emmett is freaking hilarious! Be careful with that pig, they're dangerous!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Yea!!!  Im so glad they are together!!  I hope they find something useful in that lava tube, Im not ready for them to be rescued but not having birth control, problem....  great update!!!!

*clapping* Thank you for Edward and Bella.

Can't wait to see what Emmett comes up with shelter wise

At least they didn't have to leave the boat and abandon it, they can keep the heavy things handy

You have blown me away with this story and I love it!  Love the interaction and love the characters.  Glad E & R are preggers, hope for lots more news on the rest of our couples on that front in the future...love the thought of 3 new babies on the island!  Looking forward to the lava tube adventure but loved the romatic beach scene you did even more.  Thank you for this story, anxious for the next chapter from you soon.  Cheri

i really enjoy this story along with the history- love it