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Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

First, Merry Christmas! Second, thank you for this wonderful chapter!  Beautiful wedding, memorable honeymoon and once again, major cliffie!   You rock!  lol, Cheri



Author's Response:

Hi Cheri

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39 - glad you enjoyed the wedding and honeymoon.

I'm writing chapter 40 now, so it should be posted in the first week of January.

Happy New Year.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: jillapet Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

Oh crap!



Author's Response:

Hi jillapet

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39

Oh crap, indeed!

Chapter 40 should be posted in the first week of January.

Happy New Year.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

Tensions showing...will be interested in Alice's story.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 38. Alice's story will be included in chapter 39 along with the wedding and the honeymoon. I'm writing it now and it should be posted early next week.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

Loved it as always :)



Author's Response:

Hi amcullen

Thanks for reading and reviewing - glad you enjoyed it.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2012 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

I love this story, I know I tell you every chapter, but because of you I feel I know these characters.  I'm 57, never was lucky enough to have children. If tomorrow I found out I was expecting, I would be thrilled. Yes its scary, especially on this island, but Esme has Carlisle and who is to say they won't be rescued before its birth. That being said, I love them being on the island and how they (you) have handled it.  lol, Cheri



Author's Response:

Hi Cheri

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're still loving the story. I don't have any children either, more by choice than any other reason, and the fact that I've never been married. Now that I'm nearly 46, I think I'm a bit set in my ways to spend my life in close proximity with another person. *laughs*

Carlisle is a godsend and Esme will be fine, although it won't always be smooth sailing. I am thinking, however that they won't be rescued until after the children are born. That might change if interest in the story wanes, but for right now, that's my plan.

Regards, Karen

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

So glad they had that intervention, Jazz has every right to be scared but not moody unreasonable firecracker! And Alice, really? ! Sticking Bella with a pin?? What are you 4??? Condition or not, she knew what she was doing and should act like and adult and voice her concerns not lash out!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reveiwing chapter 38 - glad you enjoyed it.

Yep, the intervention was absolutely necessary. Things were spiraling out of control rapidly. Alice is ... well, Alice! She is childish in some ways, because she's also selfish. On the otherhand, she's also very loving, giving and protective. But you're absolutely right - she should have dealt with it in a different way.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Is She or Isn't She?

What a wonderful chapter!  Two new Cullens on the way!!!!  Thrilled and excited to see what happens.  Only bummer, J/A I hope they will be ok...   lol, Cheri



Author's Response:

Hi Cheri

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 37. Glad you're happy about the 2 new babies.

Regards, Karen

Reviewer: archgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

awesome chapter, can't wait  to read  more.



Author's Response:

Hi archgirl

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 38 - glad you enjoyed it.

Chapter 39 should be posted in about a week or so.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

this was a over the top wonderful chapter...  the entire story is beyond exceptional....like I repeatedly state, but this one, in particular is without a doubt, Fabulous.....  thanks again for writing and sharing with us....



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for your great review to chapter 38.

I'm so glad you still loving the story. I appreciate your support, as always.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: melferd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

Re:the spanking

Im as feminist as they come, but even I saw the point. If they were in civilization rules are different.  This kind of '1700's' expirence cAlls for more patriarchial behaviors. Lives depend on everyone rowing together, and in such cases a "when the men were men and sheep were nervous" norm is imperative.  I think everyone has stayed very much on the enlightened side of the force, despite the very traditional roles they find themselves forced to embraced. Lord of the flies this ain't.  So the haters can unpack. Plenty of time for equality when they have breast pumps, disposable diapers and pharmaceuticals at hand again!



Author's Response:

Hi melferd

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 38. I also appreciate your support for the chapter 16 spanking. I think some readers don't always see that the norms of modern society don't always apply when you're stuck on a deserted island, alone, and without modern technology or public services like police, search and rescue and ambulance. In reality, even in modern society, people sometimes act out of character - take for instance a mother, distraught over her missing child, and she spanks him/her when she finds them, before kissing and hugging them. Terror makes us do things, we might not normally do. 

Thanks again.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

I can't wait for Alice's story. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 38. Alice's story plus the wedding an honey will be the topic of chapter 39. After that, I think it's time for some more adventure and pirate drama.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: susanreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 38 - Pre-Wedding Bitches

Thank you.



Author's Response:

Hi susanreader

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 38. I appreciate your support, as always.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Is She or Isn't She?

Jealousy from Alice but fear and anger from Jasper...right? it sill might happen for her and like Carlisle said better for her not to be preggo right now with the other 3,Carlisle will have his hands full anyway

Author's Response:

Hi moutainlion718

Right - Alice is jealous, and Jasper is fearful and angry.

Thanks for reviewing.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Is She or Isn't She?

You won't lose me and I'm over 50.  I think it's great.  Love this story.

 



Author's Response:

Hi neffi1957

Thanks for reviewing and for sticking with me. I'm happy that you love wrecked.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Is She or Isn't She?

I'm sticking around.  I didn't respond last chapter because it didn't matter to me either way.  I figured no matter which way you went, it would still be great!  I'm just going along & enjoying the ride! 

I'm not surprised that Alice is jealous, but I wonder if that tea she has to drink alters her fertility.  I was shocked that Jasper was so angry though.  That will be interesting to see play out.  I'm wondering if Rose is so big just because Emmett is a big guy and she's tall as well.  And last but not least, I think it's great Bella & Esme are pregnant!  Lots of babies coming!

Thanks for the update!
~allidel  :)



Author's Response:

Hi allidel

Thanks for sticking with me. Readership and reviews has dropped off on TWCS the past few chapters, so I'm glad I haven't disappointed you. On the good side, readership and reviews on Fanfic are zooming.

I hadn't thought of the kava affecting Alice's fertility; only that kava is probably not good for a developing embryo or fetus. For that reason, I'm probably not going to include a pregnancy for Alice at the moment. Jasper is worried about his mother because of her age and he blames his father for her condition. He's being irrational; and not thinking clearly. And yeah, Rose is carrying a big baby.

Thanks for reviewing.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Is She or Isn't She?

Sure why not after all it is quite possible in their situation.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and for your support for a pregnancy for Esme.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Is She or Isn't She?

Now if we could just get Alice and Jasper in on the deal, the circle will be complete. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hi GSRgirlforever

Thanks for reading and reviewing - glad you're happy about Bella and Esme's pregnancies. Alice won't being joining them anytime soon. She's jealous unfortunately. Jasper is worried about his mother and blames his father for her condition. He's being irrational.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 37 - Is She or Isn't She?

I think it's great. 



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing; and for your support for Esme's pregnancy.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: katie0422 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Hi katie0422

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36. Chapter 37 has been posted, hope you're happy with the outcome.

Look out for chapter 38 sometime next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Awesome!!!



Author's Response:

Hi IgoteamEdward

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - glad you enjoyed it. Chapter 37 has been posted - hope you're happy with the outcome. Thanks for your continuing support for this story.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Moving House

another great chapter 



Author's Response:

Hi carebear31374

Thanks for reading and reviewing Wrecked. I've read all of your reviews, thank you. I hope you're enjoying the rest of the story.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Making Camp

Ah a fellow Sydney Sider :D

Enjoying your story !!



Author's Response:

Hey carebear31374

Yeah, I live in the inner eastern suburbs. I don't know about you, but I'm over the humidity in a big way and the summer's just starting. But I have a plan to beat it - I had AC installed this morning.

Thanks for reviewing.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Ship Wrecked

Enjoying your story so far :D

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Absolutely loved it as always can't wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi amcullen

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. Chapter 38 will be posted by next weekend. Thanks for sticking with me.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

It it truly very possibly. If they are all still having cycles and having sex they can have babies!  A lot of women give birth in their 50s they have more complications and potential risks..........so I definitely think we need them rescued before Esme gives birth but I think it would be awesome for Bella and Esme to be pregnant at the same time!  Love the hula lessons.  We need to get them to civilization........ 



Author's Response:

Hi bab1067

Thanks for your reviews, and your advice - it's much appreciated.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: vampyreangel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

HOLY CRAP!!!!! both Bella and Esme are preggers Eeeee!!!!!! Hell of an island i tell ya, maybe i should go there...lol



Author's Response:

Hi vampyreangel

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. Look out for chapter 38 next weekend.

It is a hell of an island. Maybe one of the idols is a fertility goddess?

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Hmm it would be kinda funny to have Esme and Bella both be pregnant. They're going to have to build a bigger house hehe.



Author's Response:

Hi Ketia

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36.

Yeah, Emmett better get started on an extension to the house.

I hope you were happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. Look out for chapter 38 next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: lil_nudger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Shot in the dark Esme is menopausal, but Bella's pregnant.



Author's Response:

Hi lil_nudger

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36. The answers to your questions are resolved in chapter 37 - I hope you're happy with the outcomes. Chapter 38 will be posted by next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

oh boy, all 3 preggos??? Alice is the odd one out...lol. I'm up for how you want to take this, it'd be interesting to have Esme pregnant, but if Bella is and since Rose is, better to have Esme there to lend a hand with the babies

Author's Response:

Hi moutainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. I think they'll build a creche as another reviewer suggested. Chapter 38 will be posted next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Love it!!!



Author's Response:

Hi broadwayrocks

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - glad you enjoyed it. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. Chapter 38 will be posted next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

OME I am thrilled and so hopefully that we will have two new Cullens on the way! It really shouldn't be surprising and I say yes, yes, YES!!!!!  lol, Cheri

PS Loved this Christmas chapter! Really enjoying Larry!



Author's Response:

Hi Cheri

Thanks for your review to chapter 36. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. Really glad you liked the luau Christmas and the hula. Chapter 38 should be posted this weekend.

Regards, Karen

Reviewer: gabrylla Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Haha that would be hilarious



Author's Response:

Hi gabrylla

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36. I think there will be some funny moments in store for our pregnant ladies. Chapter 37 is posted and chapter 38 should be ready by this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: sa71728 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Ugh, a big no on Esme being pregnant.



Author's Response:

Hi sa71728

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36. The reviewer support for an Esme pregnancy was overwhelming, so I've proceeded with that storyline. I hope you'll keep reading Wrecked, but I'll understand if you don't want.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: JaMarie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

I think it would be great if both Esme and Bella were pregnant but I can tell that you wrote it this way so that in stead of being pregnant they could have food poisoning. I look forward to finding out what you decide and for Rose to have her baby (which I assume will be a few more chapters not the next one but it is coming.



Author's Response:

Hi JaMarie

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36. You were very perceptive. I did indeed write it in such a way that the 'illness' could be various conditions, including food poisoning.  Chapter 37 has been posted and chapter 38 should be ready by this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Don't know the Island is a safe place  for a 57 year old to be going through that, then again it is a story.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36. Sorry it took me so long to respond, but I was busy writing chapter 37.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: fiesty_pookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Ok so, great chapter!! Esme can't be pregnant though that would be too weird. Bella yes, Esme maybe just menopause symptoms or something...

Author's Response:

Hi there fiesty_pookie

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - glad you enjoyed it. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37, even if it didn't go quite as you wanted. Chapter 38 will be posted next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twilightdi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

I love this story and I'd love to see Bella and Esme expecting at the same time. It'd be humorous to say the least. 



Author's Response:

Hi Twilightdi

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - glad you enjoyed it. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. Chapter 38 will be posted next weekend. I think we might have some humorous scenes in Esme, Bella and Rose's futures.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Loved the chapter!!! I particularly like the discussion about the theories and finding out that Vivi had been arrested.  Larry is just too cute!!!

 

about Esme being pregnant.  While I like the sweetness factor, I don't think it would fit well.  Yes, she is older, that means more dr visits would be required. If something happens there is no way for her to get to modern technology like she would need to.  If she were to die, then Papa Carlisle would be devastated and have to raise the baby with the help of the family...I don't want her kids to have to raise her new baby.

but if you were to make her have a healthy pregnancy then I still think that' just too much pregnancy at once for poor Carlisle.   She could be getting a hormonal imbalance or something or sympathy symptoms from Bella......because I really do hope she is pregnant!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - glad you enjoyed it. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. The support for an Esme pregnancy was overwhelming and I decided to go with the storyline. Risky I know, but I need to grow as a writer and taking a risk will help me do that. Chapter 38 will be posted next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Well I think they are both preggers!!! lol  That should be fun to read... hmmm  poor Edward and Carlisle.. haha



Author's Response:

Hi tlwatkins36

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - glad you enjoyed it. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. Chapter 38 will be posted next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

I love the thought of Esme being pregnant!

Author's Response:

Hi GSRgirlforever

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - glad you enjoyed it.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: susanreader Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

So, there are three options for Esme: pregnant, menopausal, or the shrimp salad went bad,because I think the virus option is just a red herring.  For Bella, its down to two options: shrimp salas or pregnant. However, since she and Edward were prohibited from having sex while she was recovering, she migh be fairly far along, because there were no times given for her recovery.  I can hardly wait to figure it out.



Author's Response:

Hi susanreader

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - glad you enjoyed it. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. Chapter 38 will be posted next weekend. Btw: your review was very perceptive - the food poisoning was a red herring. In regards to Bella's shooting - it took place around Thanksgiving and it's now New Years, so 5 or 6 weeks have passed.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Marlena68 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

I think they're both pregnant!   Wow!  Three babies on the way.  It's a population boom on Isabella Island.  LOL 

Mr Vulture huh?  Could that be Volturi?  :-)  Do I see Aro making an appearance in the future?  Can't wait to find out.

Thanks for updating.  As usual the story is fantastic.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Hi Marlena68

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - glad you enjoyed it. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. Chapter 38 will be posted next weekend. You might just be right about Mr Vulture. Have a look back through the earlier chapters, there was something mentioned.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

How funny, another two pregnancies?



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - sorry I took so long to respond, but I was busy writing chapter 37.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Vampchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

Yay bring on the babies!!!



Author's Response:

Hi Vampchick

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - glad you enjoyed it. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. Chapter 38 will be posted next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: TeamMcCarty Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Deck the Halls

I love this story! Always get excited when I see the email notification that its been updated! I kinda would like Esme to be preggo! It'd be funny to see how they handle it, and obv the boys reactions to it, as well as Carlisle's! Can see him being wary at first, but then being the doting older dad who just gets easily worn out by his kid running round all the time! If you do have her pregnant please make it a little girl!! :D



Author's Response:

Hi TeamMcCarty

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 36 - glad you enjoyed it. I hope you're happy with the outcomes in chapter 37. Chapter 38 will be posted next weekend. Your review was very perceptive. You were right on just about every point - congratulations. lol.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Celebrations of Love

Just getting around to this chapter, sorry for some reason I missed out... anyway, hope you are well and life is good...the photos are wonderful as was this wonderful chapter... You once again had me laughing and crying all at the same time..... sign of a true Writing Artist!!!!

Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 35 - I'm sorry my response is so late, I was busy writing chapters 36 and 37. I hope you've enjoyed them and are happy with the outcomes. Chapter 38 should be ready by next weekend. Thanks for the kudos, and compliment. I'd really like to be a published writer some day.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Celebrations of Love

Fav story,wait for each update.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reviewing chapter 35. I'm nearly finished with chapter 36 - it should be posted tonight or tomorrow night.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

Cool, can't wait to try it! Yes I voted!!! :).

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Celebrations of Love

Beautiful chapter!!!  LOL, Cheri



Author's Response:

Hi Cheri

Thanks for reviewing chapter 35 - glad you enjoyed it.

Christmas is next. Did you vote in the wedding ring poll on my blog?

Regards, Karen

 

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Celebrations of Love

such great presents! i've heard of Pavlova before, gotta see if they sell it anywhere in NJ....lol!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reviewing chapter 35.

Pavlova is easy to make if you can't buy it in NJ. If you can make a simple sponge cake, angel cake or meringue, then you can whip up a pavlova. I've included a link on my blog at jkazziefanfiction.wordpress.com for a pavlova recipe on an Aussie website called 'Taste' - it's a pretty simple recipe. The key to success is to do exactly what the recipe says and make sure you convert the oven temperature in the recipe from celsius to farenheit. Decorate the cooled pav with whipped cream and whatever fresh fruit you want - berries are always popular. If you want/need to use canned fruit then drain it really, really well first. Pav is best decorated just before serving otherwise the moisture in the cream and fruit will cause the sugar to weep from the pav. Let me know how you go with it.

Btw, did you vote in the ring poll on my blog?

Regards, Jkazzie

 

 

Reviewer: lil_nudger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Celebrations of Love

With each new chapter I am left a happy reader and ready for more.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

Hi lil_nudger

Thanks for reviewing chapter 35 - glad you enjoyed.

Chapter 36 covering Christmas will be posted shortly.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Celebrations of Love

Another great chapter!!  Thanks for letting us vote on the rings...I only picked one though - the gold bands.  I'm looking forward to Christmas, their wedding & the stuff in the chest!  I kinda want to know about Vivi, but not really...I like the fluffy, happy place they are at!  Thanks for sharing!

~allidel  :)



Author's Response:

Hi allidel

Thanks for reviewing chapter 35. I'm glad you voted in the ring poll - the gold rings are winning so far. Christmas will be covered in chapter 36 and the wedding will be up in a couple of chapters time. There is something extraordinary happening to Esme that I need to cover first.

Regards, Karen

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Celebrations of Love

Very sweet, I like the break that they have right now with the different celebrations and not a lot of stress.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reviewing chapter 35 - glad you enjoyed it. Christmas is next, and the wedding will be up in a couple of chapters time, as something extraordinary is happening to Esme.

Regards, Karen

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Celebrations of Love

Absolutely loved it as always :)



Author's Response:

Hi amcullen

Thanks for reviewing chapter 35 - glad you enjoyed. Christmas is next and the wedding will follow in a couple of chapters time, because I need to deal with something happening to Esme first.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 34 - The Date

what a wonderful chpater. he is so super sweet.....ready for more answers tho.



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal. The wedding/commitment ceremony will probably be chapter 36 or 37 because we've got to get through Christmas first and the Cullen's need to discuss all the things they've discovered recently and come up with some new theories. We'll also get some news about Vivi.

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen

These people are fucking insane! All of them!



Author's Response:

Hi goldseadragon

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I can't tell from your review if you liked it or not, but I reckon most of us would do some insane things when surviving in the wild.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 34 - The Date

She said YES!!!!!  Like anyone would say no to Edward, right!  Beautiful chapter, soft, loving and even a little bit of hot.  PERFECT!  Thank you and LOL, Cheri



Author's Response:

Hi Cheri

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal. Of course she said yes - was there ever any doubt? lol.

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 34 - The Date

What an awesome date and proposal:-) so they are engaged and committed but she won't marry him until they get back? What if they never get back?  What if she gets pregnate?  Which by the way how have they dodged that bullet?



Author's Response:

Hi bab1067

Thanks for your review on TWCS and Fanfic.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: crazygirl2929 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 34 - The Date

love it



Author's Response:

Hi crazygirl2929

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal.

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 34 - The Date

He did a wonderful job with his proposal!! Loved it!!!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal.

 

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 34 - The Date

Loved it can't wait for more:) 



Author's Response:

Hi amcullen

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal.

 

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 34 - The Date

That was so perfect, and what a WONDERFUL EXQUISTE RING!!!!  WELL DONE!  I loved how Larry even got in on helping with input on the meal with his scarifice of his Milo.. I really laughed that he made Edward repeat the instructions 3 times to ensure he had it down right....  How unselfish of him to share with them too! 

Edward was so endearing in this chapter, we all know what a sexy hunk he is, but sometimes we don't see this romantic tender side and given the circumstances of where they are, well it was a group effort and they certainly pulled it off....



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal and loved the ring. I think it's gorgeous as well and Bella will never want a different one. I had a lot of fun with this chapter.

 

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

Oh, sweet and endearing to leave me in stitches at the end, because I was laughing at Edward so hard... Hilarious Boy!  on to the date night now... TY again for posting and writing this wonderful story....  Hope your well!  Take care



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Glad you enjoyed chapter 33. Fancy forgetting to ask the girl you want to propose to out on a date! Only a man, huh?

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 8 "Pig or Pork"

good god they eat better than we do ...I know all  bout butchering a pig wish i could be there to help them



Author's Response:

Hi bookreader2

Thanks for reading and reviewing and I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond - I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

Yeah, I reckon they're eating pretty well also. I think when you have to rely on what's available or what you can grow or make yourself, then you adapt pretty quickly and you learn to use everything. They can't go to a supermarket and if they want to eat more than fish, yams and jungle salad, they need to go after what they want or make it themselves.

Talking about butchering a pig, they need to kill one for their upcoming Christmas celebration. If you feel like sharing the high-level method of butchering, dressing, hanging the carcass, cool storage (remember they've only go a fridge) etc, I'd appreciate your insights. You can email me at jkazzie25@gmail.com, but no pressure.

Regards, Jkazzie 

Reviewer: Allegra D Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Hunt

I have just started reading this fanfic and have never laughed so much as I did at this chapter.  Absolutely hilarious, just imaging three grown men running around trying to catch piglets.  Well done, looking forward to the rest.



Author's Response:

Hi Allegra D

Thanks for reading and reviewing - glad you're enjoying it. I really wanted to make readers laugh with this chapter and a few others after this, so I'm glad I was successful.

Sorry for the delay in responding to you, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again. Anyway, I hope you're enjoying the rest of Wrecked and I should have chapter 35 posted in about a week.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Working Together

i am in the medical profession and this is wonderful ...it feels right so you just keep at it



Author's Response:

Hi bookreader2

Thanks for reading and reviewing Wrecked. I'm glad you're enjoying it. I worry about the medical aspects of the story since I don't have any medical background, but thank goodness for Google! The research is huge, but I want to make it realistic, so it's got to be done. As long as I don't get it too badly wrong, I'm happy.

I hope you're enjoying the rest of the story. I should have chapter 35 posted in about a week. Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: bookreader2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 2 "Land"

this is very different and exciting ..I have enjoyed every word   please keep writing



Author's Response:

Hi bookreader2

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 2 - glad you're enjoying it.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 34 - The Date

awesome chapter... the date was absolutely perfect!



Author's Response:

Hi tlwatkins36

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal.

 

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

 

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 34 - The Date

I loved this chapter, it was so romantic.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal.

 

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

 

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2012 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 34 - The Date

Love it!



Author's Response:

Hi Igoteamedward

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 34 - glad you enjoyed the proposal.

 

Sorry for taking so long to respond, but I was on holidays for a week and I've been sick again.

I'm working on chapter 35 and hope to have it posted this coming week.

Regards, Jkazzie

 

Reviewer: Delvik Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2012 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Thanksgiving Games

Thanks for the wonderful story. Enjoy.    



Author's Response:

Hi Delvik

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 25. Glad you're enjoying Wrecked.

If you've finished reading to chapter 33, let me know, because you get a bonus treat.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

LOL...... poor Edward, but its not like they don't live in the same house.



Author's Response:

Hi bab1067

Thanks for reviewing chapter 33 on TWCS and fanfic.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

Hahahaha...what a nitwit...



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33.

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

Let me know what you think.

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

Oh No Lol!!! Loved it can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Hi amcullen

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33.

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

Let me know what you think.

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

Gorgeous

Author's Response:

Hi Jrxoxo

Glad you liked the ring.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

What!? he never told her??? he just assumed she was or he's never mentioned a word to her about it??

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Yep, he plum forgot.

 

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

Way to go Edward! Funny how sometimes the tiniest details get forgotten, ha ha! Better ask and then get Alice to the rescue.  Thank you for this wonderful story, I don't say it often enough how much it is appreciated.  LOL Cheri



Author's Response:

Hi there Cheri

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Glad you enjoyed.

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Karen

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

LOL...  He forgot to invite her on the date... No biggie!  It's not as if she's got a million other places to be.  Her leg is jacked & the rain has trapped them indoors.  She just gets treated to a "surprise date"...  :)



Author's Response:

Hi there twinmamma

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Glad you enjoyed it. Laughter at Edward's expense seems to be a common them amongst reviews. lol.

 

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

love it!



Author's Response:

Hi there IGOTEAMEDWARD

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Glad you liked it.

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

Ok now that's just cruel...and funny :)

Author's Response:

Hi there Jrxoxo

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Glad it made you laugh.

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

Oops.... I can't believe he forgot to invite her. Love it! Great job...thanks!!!

Author's Response:

Hi amwine

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Yeah, a bit of a boo boo on Edward's part but he was preoccupied and nervous.

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: Cevvin Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

What an idiot

Author's Response:

Hi Cevvin

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Poor Edward, but he tries hard. lol.

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

I love how it ended.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Glad you liked it.

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 33 - The Week that Was

omg  poor edward, all that planning and he forgot to invite bella, kind of funny....lol typical man planning you know   Thanks for your dedication to this story i love it !!!



Author's Response:

Hi FlSunshine

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 33. Poor Edward indeed. He was so focused on the dinner and the ring, he forgot the most important person. He woman he wants to marry! lol.

As a bonus for reviewing, you get a sneak peak of Bella's engagement ring. Go to my blog at jkazziefanfiction dot wordpress dot com

 

Select the latest post - Protected: Sneak Peak ... and enter this password: WwBChptr34

 

Let me know what you think.

 

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Stormy Seas

Love the update!



Author's Response:

Hi IGOTEAMEDWARD

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 32 - glad you liked it.

I just posted chapter 33. Enjoy.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Stormy Seas

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Hi amcullen

Thanks for reviewing chapter 32. Glad you liked it.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Marlena68 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Stormy Seas

Thanks for the update.  Really enjoying your writing.  Keep up the great work.

 



Author's Response:

Hi Marlena68

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 31. Glad you're enjoying Wrecked.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Stormy Seas

Yay! shorter is fine, just to have them back safe at camp with the others is good in my book....  Hope all is well with you and tnat your now settled into the new place .... have a great weekend and week ahead.... all the best  Kathy



Author's Response:

Hi Kathy

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 32.

The new flat is great except I need to do some hated housework. lol

Regards, Karen

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Stormy Seas

Wonderful chapter!  So glad all the boys are home and safe.  I hate thunder storms so I would have been in the bottom of the boat with Larry!  Thank you for the interm chapter, love to see all updates from you!  Signed, Cheri



Author's Response:

Hi Cheri

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 32 - glad you enjoyed it.

I only like thunderstorms when I'm laying in bed. I love the sound of the rain on the roof and how the lightning lights up the night sky. Don't like the damage they cause though.

Regards, Karen

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Stormy Seas

glad they are home safe!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 32.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Stormy Seas

I was excited to see another chapter up. It didn't disappoint. I can't wait for next chapter with hopefully some romance.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 32 - glad you enjoyed it.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: JaMarie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Stormy Seas

I don't know about explode but lightning can cause a rock slide, which is more of what I pictured in my head when I read this. Good chapter and can't wait for he next one.



Author's Response:

Hi JaMarie

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 32. Thanks for the tip on lightning and rock slides - I didn't find that when I researched. But that was kind of what I was going for. The lightning striking the rim, causing some of it to break away and slide down the mountain.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 31 - North

:)



Author's Response:

Hi NelumOnelius

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 31 - apologies for my tardiness in replying.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: MizCougar Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 31 - North

I am so glad you are doing ok. This is a wonderful story and I know life happens. Sending get well wishes your way!

Author's Response:

Hi MizCougar

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 31 - apologies for my tardiness in replying.

I'm feeling better, thanks. Appreciate your well wishes.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 31 - North

Can't tell you how wonderful to see your story again and I'm sorry for the health problems, I didn't realize.  Was so afraid you had decided to quit this wonderful story and that made me sad.  So thank you.  You have a wonderful way with words and transport me into this fantasy world so easily.  Wishing you all the best and hope to see another chapter when you are able.  Thank you - Cheri



Author's Response:

Hi Cheri

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 31 - apologies for my tardiness in replying.

Thank you for your compliments on my writing. I'm glad that my words can transport you into another world.

I won't be quiting this story, but sometimes real life does interfere with writing, thanks for your understanding while I got myself sorted out.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: allidel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 31 - North

Yay - you're back!  I'm glad that you are feeling better...sorry I didn't get a chance to respond to your e-mail.  I didn't want you to feel pressured, and I've had quite a bit going on as well.

I love the chapter!  I can see how it never got around to a proposal, but I think we learned a lot more this way.  It's very exciting what they found, and I can't wait to see what's in the smaller chest.  I'll be keeping my fingers crossed for a safe return to the other side for them.

Off to check out the pics on the blog now!  Thank you!

~allidel  :)



Author's Response:

Hi allidel

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 31 - apologies for my tardiness in replying.

I'm glad you liked the chapter. Now that they're home safely (chapter 32) we'll find out what's in the smaller chest. In chapter 33, the family will start making Christmas presents and Edward will find the perfect time to propose to Bella.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 31 - North

hope you are doing better, good thing they found all that stuff and that Victoria hasn't shown up

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 31 - apologies for my tardiness in replying.

I'm feeling better, thanks for your concern. Vivi hasn't turned up yet, but she will before the story ends. We'll find out where she is shortly.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 31 - North

Oh dear one - So saddened by the news of your health... Brightened somewhat knowing you are better and moved into a new location.... hope you are settled in and happy with your new place...... You were missed!!!  :-)    

 

Dear Edward, tries to be kind doesn't he, but at the same time he just gets beside himself with frustration over Larry and his innocene. He really can't help it Edward....thank heaven's they found all they did.... storms be damned, please make it back safely ....... till next time.... take care.... Kathy



Author's Response:

Hi Kathy

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 31 - apologies for my tardiness in replying.

I'm feeling much better. Thanks for your concern. New flat is great and much closer to the city only 3 kilometers (a few miles) so I can walk to and from work if I want to in about 35 minutes.

Yeah, Edward doesn't quite know what to make of Larry, but he'll get better at relating to him.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 31 - North

so happy to have an update....love all the new questions i have to ponder



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 31 - apologies for my tardiness in replying.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 31 - North

I hope you are well! Thanks for the update!!



Author's Response:

Hi IGOTEAMEDWARD

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 31 - apologies for my tardiness in replying.

Regards, Jkazzie

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