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Reviewer: twilove1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2018 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

Awesome story cant wait till u finish it 

Reviewer: twilove1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2018 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

Awesome story cant wait till u finish it 

Reviewer: mumofthree Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

Please keep writing .... I really want to know if they get off the Island or do they stay and live happily ever after ??? 

Reviewer: mumofthree Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

Please keep writing .... I really want to know if they get off the Island or do they stay and live happily ever after ??? 

Reviewer: Felc13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2018 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

I love this story, I found it when it was still being updated and now continue to reread every few months. I hope you have plans to finish. 

Reviewer: megawill Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

I really like this story and hope all is well with you. I hope the holidays are well and that we will be seeing this story again. Thank you for your work.

Reviewer: lovetwifics Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2015 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

I am really enjoying this story, please say you are going to continue?? I cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: DeeBee7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2014 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Cullen

Okay, to be honest, I was really enjoying this story...until this chapter.

The fact that you used Alice's childish behavior as evidence to justify Jasper abusing her is disturbing in more ways than I can possibly say, and the fact that he continued to beat her as she cried out in pain is disgusting. I feel bad for Alice! I wouldn't want to be stuck on an island with a husband who physically abuses me and his family, who not only endorses it, but actively encourages it!

 

Based on Alice's behavior directly following her abuse (just wanting to cuddle with Jasper), it makes me wonder exactly how long he's been beating her?

 

So this is me bowing out. I simply can't read anything from a writer who could make up excuses for why violence against women is okay.

Reviewer: DeeDee2468 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

I have written to the ladies that run the lemonade stand blog. I have nomininated your story to their segment resurrect these Fic hopefully they will feature your story because it deserves recognition. It's well written and so descriptive that I felt like i was there with the Cullen's on the island. I'm anitisapating an update id love to know if they ever make it off the island. If Carlisle and esme's baby is really a girl. Please please please when you get a chance update

Reviewer: DeeDee2468 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

Omg this story is great i hope u update it since it's been a while. I can't wait for the next chapter. Amazing 👍👍👍👍👍 very well written

Reviewer: kday Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

I would love to know what happened to this story.  It truly was really good but it needs an ending... Hope to see it soon.

Reviewer: MiaClassic Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Question and Answer

I'm prety sure I watched that same episode of B&B lol......I'm Jamaican & we LIVE on Milo too..its sooooo good!

Reviewer: Felc13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

I love this story and I haven't gotten any alerts in awhile, hoping you still plan to finish?

Reviewer: zanath Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

OH NO!!!  After reading for tow days streight I have finally caught up...now what do I do????  Waiting...waiting...waiting...  Well this is a pickle!  I usually don't read all human stories but this on is great.  Glad for all the info in the authors notes and glad you had a nice visit to our ountry (US).  My sister-in-law visited your country a fwe years back and loved it.  Thanks for all of your hare work writing - Xanath

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

I THINK THIS IS THE PERFECT COME BACK AFTER SO LONG WAITING FOR AN UP DATE I REALLY LOVE THIS CHAPTER

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

Great chapter! I have been really missing this story!  

I'm glad u are in good healtha dn hope that it continues for you.

 

love how far Larry has come along too!

 

i absolutely adore PEOPLE LIKE US! And the sequel! Just Ginger is a great writer!

Reviewer: lovetwifics Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Hunt

I know that those boys going after those piggy's is very dangerous but I laughed so hard when I was reading it, just thinking about them all covered in everything and anything running and momma piggy grunting and running after them is hilarious. 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

Missed your updates, glad to see you back was wondering how thwy were getting on. Its a great story.

Reviewer: crush-on-lush Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

Love the story, can't wait for more.

im also an Aussie too!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

So thrilled to see you back.  Gotta admit I have been worried about you. If you can't post for a while, please at least post a hello so we all know you are ok. Have loved this story from day 1 and thrilled where you have taken us on this wonderful journey.  This chapter is no exception.  XOXO, Cheri

PS People Like Us is my #1 all time fav fanfic. Love that you honored JustGinger!

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!  I hope you are feeling better soon.  Was so happy to see the  update, even though it took me a day to get to read it.

 

Looking forward to more!!

 

Swiss Family Robinson is one of my favorite Disney movies :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

good ideas for future defense. so glad they are talking everything out now

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

Loved it can't wait for more:)

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

This is an excellent chapter. It is nice to see the family working out their differences. It is about time that make plans to take action against the enemy. Swiss family Robinson was one of my favorite movies as a child. I wish you better health in the new year to come.

Reviewer: karmagal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

OMG - Are my eyes deciving me. Its a fucking christmas miracle- I say all that jokinly so please don't take offence. But THANK THANK THANK you for updating. I've been having a very shitty day and u totally just turn my frown upside down ... lol Im such a nut. Anyways Im going to read your new chapter now. I cant freaking wait !! Again THANK YOU

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 44 - United We Stand

Welcome back, I've missed the story. I can't wait for the last few chapters.

 

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

Your story is really well written. It is a good plot. It's exciting and I know  You have the rest of it inside waiting to be told. Please don't give up. There are babies to be born and criminals to catch. How can I forget being rescued off of the island. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2013 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

I hope you are able to write more soon!

Reviewer: littlebella13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2013 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Will you be updating this soon?? I really miss this story!!!

Reviewer: DrPepperChk21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Absolutely love this story!! I really hope the next chapter comes soon. I want to find out what is going on with Felix and meet E and B's baby and Es and Carlisle's baby. For some strange reason I want to know if Alec will turn traitor and rat out his father for leaving him on the island.

Reviewer: DrPepperChk21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 37 - Is She or Isn't She?

I love this story! Cant wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2013 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Happy to see you again. ^-^

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Glad that you had fun here in the USA.  

 

Loved the story, I am wondering if Felx will let them kidnap and harm the Cullens? 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: ladysoulwicked Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Welcome back! Nice to hear you enjoyed your time in the States. I so missed this story thanks for the update, you rock!

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Yay - you're back!!!  It sounds like you had a great trip to the US.  I'm in Northern California, so I've been to LA a few times in life.  Parts of it are great & fun, and other parts (especially the traffic) make me want to avoid it for life!  I've never been to NY, but I think I'd rather visit Australia before I go to NY.  Though I do want to see Washington DC, and some other East Coast sites.  Anywho - I'm glad you're back and had a lot of fun!  You definitely deserve it.

As for the story - yay...one baby is here!!  I'm glad that Edward & Carlisle came clean with everyone.  I can see why Bella & Esme are upset with them though.  I'm also glad that now that it's in the open, they can all start to work together to come up with some plans.  They truly do work better as a team.  I'm looking forward to a couple more babies being born!  Then hopefully they can get rid of Aro and get off the island.  While I love the island, I think they deserve to return to civilization.  They can always go back & visit!

Thanks for the update!  As always, I loved it and am looking forward to the next.

~allidel  :)

Reviewer: Marlena68 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Thanks for the update.  It was well worth the wait.

Your vacation sounds like it was great.  I love New York as well.  Spent some time there last November and I agree Central Park is beautiful.  One of these days I'll have to spend a little more time in NYC and explore some more.  

Santa Monica is a lovely area.  My husbands aunt lived there for many years. We went out to visit and do all the Hollywood tourist stuff.  I know what you mean about it being out there.  

Well, take care.  

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Soaring is an amazing ride. We went on the one in Disney World and you are right it is well worth the wait in line.  We took my then 5 yr old son on the Tower of Terror and that was an experience in itself. He says it is NOT worth the wait in line :) 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Sounds like u had a great trip. Yes, I've been wondering about updates. Thank you so much for this chapter.....glad for a healthy baby and momma!

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Yup still with ya enjoyed this chapter too!

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Wow! What an amazing chapter It was well worth the wait.

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

I'm so glad for this chapter and that they are moved along in the pregnancies. Please don't be so long for the next chapter.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

LOVE THAT YOU WERE ABLE TO PUT UP A CHAPTER IT'S BEEN FOREVER SO HAPPY TO BE READING THE UP DATE I LOVE THAT ONE OF OUR LADY'S HAVE HAD THERE BABY NOW I'M GUESSING ESME IS NEXT I'M SO HOPING SHE AND THE BABY MAKE IT OK I KNOW WE ARE ALL WORRIED THAT WE WILL LOSE ONE OR BOTH OR THEM THE COOKED LEG OF GOAT LOOKS REALLY GOOD. I HOPE TO BE READING ANOTHER UP DATE SOON.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

So thrilled you enjoyed your time in my country!  Too bad you couldn't make it up to my area (the Pacific NW) I am a little biased, but I think it is the most beautiful area in the country...maybe next time. 

Won't say I didn't miss this story cause I did, but I was sure you were having a great time here.  Larry is wonderful, you're doing a wonderful job with him.  Glad we have 1 healthy delivery down and love the name you chose. Worried about Esme, but trust you. Bella seemed a little different in this chapter, but I can't put my finger on why. Anyway loved it!  XOXO, Cheri

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

1 baby down, 2 to go :) love the name Mia Carlene! i'm sure Esme and Bella won't be forgetting about their husbands withheld info due to Mia being born, i guess a delayed tirade will be coming soon. So glad you have a nice vacation!!! :)

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

You did a great job on the delivery. I've had three, and never had a labor last more than 8 hours. I can totally understand the cussing...lol.

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

wow amazing story just have to tell you that first!!!!!!!! how many chapters will this story be at approximation???? how long until aro is out of the picture forever and caught for good???? who is ahead of aro in all that is happening????? will they catch jane along with aro???? how long until bella and esme's babies are born????? god can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!!! update sooon!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2013 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 43 - Mama Mia

Yay!   You're back,  so glad you had a wonderful time.  I was just going to send you a message today to let you know I was thinking of you and to see how things were going.   So, yeah thanks for the update.   Little baby Mia is here!    I'm happy they came clean with the family!    Love Larry!   till next time take care of Yourself! 

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

I really hope you update this story soon! There's a lot of cliffhangers! Lol

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 28 - One down, two to go

I have to say I thoroughly enjoyed Jimmys demise frankly bastard may have go tten off too easily

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Moving House

I just started reading your story and so far I am engrossed I have a vivid imagination so I can see a lot of what your describing. I'm medical and by no means whatsoever nautical but so far to me your doing great.

Reviewer: littlebella13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

I can't wait for the next chapter...it has been a while...Please, please, please update soon!!!

Author's Response:

Hi littlebella13

Thanks for your review to Wrecked. I'm glad you're enjoying thhe story and I'm sorry it's been a while since I last updated, but life has been really, really busy. I'm off to the USA this morning for 3 weeks vacation, so there probably won't be an update until I get home, but I'll use the long flight to get some writing done.

Thanks for your continued interest in Wrecked.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

That job sounds interesting.  Your country's work system sounds great...very family oriented.

 

Love the story and I will patiently wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Marlena68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2013 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

Really love the story.  Hope you are planning to update again soon. :-)

 



Author's Response:

Hi Marlena68

Thanks for your review.

I am definitely going to finish Wrecked, but unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

Please update soon :)



Author's Response:

Hi broadwayrocks

Thanks for your review.

I am definitely going to finish Wrecked, but unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 1 "Pirates"

Update soon I just hanging here waiting to find out what else is going to happen!!!



Author's Response:

Hi roseblossome

Thanks for your review.

I am definitely going to finish Wrecked, but unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Isabellamae Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Where r u? Holding out for u to finish story. Hope u do its a great one. 



Author's Response:

Hi Isabellamae

Thanks for your review.

I am definitely going to finish Wrecked, but unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Awesome......sounds like fun.....what kind of company do u work for???  

 

Loved the double agent chapter. Update while on vacay.....please!!



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding and updating with another chapter.

To answer your question about what work I do, I am a compliance manager in a share registry and I specialise in Anti-money laundering. I am also learning about FATCA, which you might have heard of in the business press because it is US legislation impacting financial institutions around the world with US customers. The vacay is in about 5 weeks, but unfortunately Hawaii is off the itinerary because the friend I'm travelling with has been quite ill and the medical expenses have eaten into her holiday savings. We'll still be in the US for about 2 and half weeks visiting NYC for 8 days with day trips to Washington DC and the Hamptons. After that, we'll head to California and spend 4 days at Disneyland, 3 days in LA and 2 days in Santa Monica before heading home. I'm having a total of 8 weeks off work - at full pay. We're pretty lucky here in Australia - our employee benefits are excellent compared to the US. Every fulltime employee irrespective of age, length of service or the type of job the work in gets 4 weeks paid annual leave each year. We also get between 8 and 12 days paid sick leave each year and after 10 years continuous service we also get 8 weeks paid long service leave. All new mom's and dads also get up to 6 months paid maternity leave or paternity leave depending on the contract or government salary award they're covered by. All employees on wages (not salaries - that's me) also get overtime at between 1.5, 2 or 3 times the hourly rate (depending on when the OT takes place) and we get paid for state and federal public holidays.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Wow, loved Felix's POV......gave a lot of info. Really Aro wants Edward and Jane together?  Hopefully Edward and Bella's marriage is binding and there are no loop hoes since Jasper had already looked into that.  Like the jumpers in time:-)



Author's Response:

Hi Billie

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Felix's POV - I think it adds to the story to know what is going on off the island.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2013 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Nice to see what is going on and that they have prople on their side.



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Hi amcullen

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Have a fantastic trip in caseI forget to say it nearer the time...another fab chapter. Thank you, T



Author's Response:

Hi Thirlestane

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Really good chapter. I'm glad to know that people know that the Cullens are alive and there is a rescue possible.

Have fun on your vacation!

 



Author's Response:

Hi Foreverpeetaslove

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

i liked reading about what is happening away from the island :)

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Wow, loved this. Never expected Felix.  Loving that you get to visit all of us in the USA and hope you have a great, great time.  Boy 8 weeks after 10 years? I get two weeks after 10 years, not fair! Need to talk to my boss about that one.  Looking forward to whenever we get to see your story.  Promise not to panick any more if its not when I think it will be, ha ha.  Yes I have been a little panicked the last few weeks watching for your story. Lolve the idea of a sequel too!!!  lots of love, Cheri



Author's Response:

Hi Cherie

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross and Felix's double-agent role in the story. My visit to the USA is only about 5 weeks away, but unfortunately, Hawaii is off the itinerary. The friend I'm travelling with has been quite ill and the medical expenses have eaten into her holiday money. We'll still visit NYC with day trips to DC and the Hamptons, as well as spend 8 days in LA visiting Disneyland, exploring the city and enjoying Santa Monica.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Making a Deal with the Devil

Wish I could say wonderful chapter, so much happened and yet the ending was not what I expected and thru me for a loop.  You love to keep us on our toes!  Can't imagine what he wants Carylisle for... So glad you mentioned the missed update posting.  I HAD missed it and had missed your great story, so thank you.  AND NOW I GET TO HIT NEXT!!!!!! lot of love, Cheri



Author's Response:

Hi Cherie

Thanks for your review to chapter 41 - sorry for my tardiness in replying. 

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Great chapter. I like hearing from the real world. I can't wait to hear more of what is going on with the Cullens.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: allidel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

I love it!  Even though there was no E&B or even any Cullens (except a little Edward), it was still a great chapter!  I love seeing a little bit about what is going on off of the island, and it's nice to know that someone knows they are there in case the need arises to get them off.  I also really like Felix...I would definitely read more about him.  I'm a little torn, kinda wishing I could watch his storyline along with E&B's.  Now I want to go read the last chapter and pay attention to Felix more.  I'm also looking forward to seeing if Felix & Edward might be working together in the future to bring Aro down.  That would be pretty frickin' good, I bet! 

Thank you for the awesome chapter!  I'm glad your leave isn't for a bit - just because I would miss this story too much.  It sounds like you will have a great time...just look out for pirates!  Wouldn't want you getting shipwrecked!  ;)

~allidel  :)



Author's Response:

Hi allidel

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross. My holiday is about 5 weeks away, so I'm really looking forward to it - I'll be gone about 3 weeks. Unfortunately Hawaii is off the itinerary now because the friend I'm travelling with has been ill recently, but we're still visiting NYC and LA.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

Omg this Rocks!   So good!  Thank You! 



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding. I'm glad you liked Double-cross.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 42 - Double Cross

I don't like where all this is heading!!!



Author's Response:

Hi tlwatkins36

Thanks for your review to chapter 42 and please accept my apologies for being so tardy in responding.

Unfortunately RL has interfered with my writing for the past 6 or 7 weeks. My mum decided to move from Melbourne to Sydney and I've spent much of my free time either arranging her move, helping her move, painting her flat and having her as a guest for much of the past month, and then putting together endless packages of Ikea furniture, that I didn't have time for anything else, since I also had to work fulltime. My tiny flat was so crowded, I couldn't even reach my computer let alone see it due to all of the crap on top of it. Mum is now happily ensconced in her new flat and I am slowly putting my own home back to rights. I hope to have a new chapter posted over Easter, or perhaps earlier if all goes smoothly.

Thanks for waiting so patiently.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Making a Deal with the Devil

This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 5th which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 40 not 41!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!!



Author's Response:

Hi smileya987

Thanks for letting me know about the 'update' date problem. I'll try to have it fixed.

Glad you think Wrecked is awesome!

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Making a Deal with the Devil

Such a fantastic story! Really love it. You've done such a nice job with the character development, the historical context and plot. You've clearly worked really hard in this, and it shows. We are very fortunate readers. Looking forward to next chapter.

Thanks!

Amy

PS. The blog and pics are amazing too --adds so much, and must have been a ton of work. Really amazing!!



Author's Response:

Hi Amy

Thanks for your great review. I'm glad that you enjoy my writing, and the blog.

The research and the blog are hard work, but I enjoy it and I've learned so much.

Chapter 42 is about a week away.

Thanks again.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Making a Deal with the Devil

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Hi amcullen

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 41 - glad you enjoyed it.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: karmagal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Making a Deal with the Devil

Thank you for another great chapter. I am really enjoying this story. It's very original. It reminds me of swiss family robisson, box car children etc .... Can't wait for an update.



Author's Response:

Hi karmagal

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoy it.

Chapter 42 should be ready in about 2 weeks.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: DesertTwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 41 - Making a Deal with the Devil

Really loved this story until now.  It's chapter 41 with no resolution in sight.  I love a great dramatic story but now I feel like you're stringing me along with a year-long captive hell and a sequel which suggests that even when they get off the island there is still drama.  I feel likethis great read turned into a cross between Gilligan's Island and a soap opera.  :((



Author's Response:

Hi DesertTwilight

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 41, and glad that until now, you've been enjoying it. I understand your trepidation with how the plot is progressing, but there is a happy ending in sight.

Edward will stay on the island with his family and Larry. He didn't have any choice other than to agree to Aro's blackmail, but he has no intentions of becoming Aro's 'lieutenant' when they return to Hawaii. We won't 'see' Aro again in Wrecked, though he will be a topic of conversation.

There is only about 10 chapters left in Wrecked. Each chapter will span about 4 - 6 weeks and then they will be rescued, but not by Aro. The sequel will pick up about 3 years after they return to Hawaii. Aro will be bested early on in the sequel.

I hope you keep reading, but will understand if you don't want to.

Regards, Jkazzie


Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Making a Deal with the Devil

you simply never ever disappoint where this story is concerned... the details you add are amazing....driving me crazy trying to figure it all out but all the same its Outstanding!!!!!!!!   



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 41 - glad you enjoyed it.

To give you a heads up, Wrecked will come to an end in about 10 chapters and perhaps an epilogue. The Cullen's and Larry will be rescued and returned to Hawaii. The sequel will pick up about 3 years after they return. Aro's reign will fall early on in the sequel, and Edward will not be the pushover he is hoping for.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Making a Deal with the Devil

he had no choice to make a deal with the devil....hope Aro takes all of his cronies with him.....

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 41.

I agree, Edward had no choice but to agree to the blackmail, but that doesn't mean he's gonna lay down and rollover.

To give you a heads up, Wrecked will come to an end in about 10 chapters and perhaps an epilogue. The Cullen's and Larry will be rescued and returned to Hawaii. The sequel will pick up about 3 years after they return. Aro's reign will fall early on in the sequel, and Edward will not be the pushover he is hoping for.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 41 - Making a Deal with the Devil

Not a fan of this chapter!  Don't like the idea that Edward has to work for ARo to save Bella and his unborn child... he is being blackmailed and I don't like it... please keep all of them safe from Aro and his minions... a HEA for all of the cullens please..



Author's Response:

Hi tlwatkins

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 41.

Edward will stay on the island with his family and Larry. He didn't have any choice other than to agree to Aro's blackmail, but he has no intentions of becoming Aro's 'lieutenant' when they return to Hawaii. We won't 'see' Aro again in Wrecked, though he will be a topic of conversation. There is a HEA in sight for all of the Cullen's and Larry.

There is only about 10 chapters left in Wrecked. Each chapter will span about 4 - 6 weeks and then they will be rescued, but not by Aro. The sequel will pick up about 3 years after they return to Hawaii. Aro will be bested early on in the sequel.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Vulture has Landed

I have a feeling they will pay for allow this....the bastards I mean!!!



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 40.

The bastards will pay, but some might pay sooner than others.

I'm writing chapter 41 now, so it should be posted sometime this weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Vulture has Landed

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Hi there amcullen

Thanks for reviewing chapter 40 - glad you loved it.

I'm writing chapter 41 now and it should be posted sometime over the weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Vulture has Landed

I think this is worse then I thought it would be. I can only image what Aro is going to do next. I can't wait for more. Great job...thanks so much!!!

Author's Response:

Hi amwine

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 40.

Yes, they're in a much worse pickle this time than they ever were when it was just Jimmy and Vivi they had to worry about. The Volturi are bad news, but all is not lost.

I'm writing chapter 41 now, so it should be posted by the weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

I love the wedding and everything else. I can't believe Edward ended up with a broken nose. I am so worried about Aro being there. This is not going to be good. Great job...thanks!!'

Author's Response:

Hi amwine

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 39 - glad you enjoyed the wedding.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: jillapet Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Vulture has Landed

Oh shit. This will be all out war!



Author's Response:

Hi jillapet

Thanks for reviewing chapter 40.

Oh, shit, indeed! The Cullen's will find a way out of their current predicament, but it will come at a cost. No Cullen or Larry deaths, though.

I'm writing chapter 41, so it should be posted by next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Vulture has Landed

did he burn Bella??? after he gets what he wants, he's going to kill them anyway...right?

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 40. Demitri would have burned Bella, but Emmett saved the day and then ended it with his big mouth. There will be NO Cullen or Larry deaths, but getting out of the current situation relatively unscathed will come at a cost - to one of them in particular.

I'm working on chapter 41, so it should be posted by next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Vulture has Landed

Ahhh - evil cliffie...like a truly evil cliffie!!!  Please, please update soon.  My stomach is in knots just dying to see what happens next!  Thank you!!!

~allidel  :)



Author's Response:

Hi allidel

I know, sorry about the cliffie - not really *laughs* it builds suspense.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

I'm working on chapter 41 now, so it should be posted by next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Vulture has Landed

Ah, you are a wild woman!  How in the world are they going to get out of this one?  Can't wait to find out!!!  Love this story!  lol, Cheri



Author's Response:

Hi Cheri

I know I'm bad for leaving you all in suspense, but it was a perfect place to leave the chapter. The Cullen's and Larry will survive this current situation and all will be explained in chapter 41, which I'm writing now, so it should be posted by next weekend.

Regards, Karen

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 40 - The Vulture has Landed

OMG  they need to get their weapons!!! some how.  Poor Larry...you just have to love him.  He knows the Cullen's all care for him.  So he did what he could to protect them.  Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi roseblossome

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 40.

OMG, indeed! The Cullen's and Larry will survive this current situation, but it will come at a cost. Larry is a real hero - he loves Esme (she's his mother figure) and he idolises Edward.

I'm working on chapter 41 now, so it should be posted by next weekend.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 40 - The Vulture has Landed

Great chapter! I love having Aro there.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 40.

Aro will stick around for at least one more chapter, perhaps 2 - not sure yet, it depends on how long chapter 41 gets.

I'm working on chapter 41 now, so it should be posted by next weekend.

Regards Jkazzie

Reviewer: Marlena68 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

Awesome as usual!.  Poor Edward, fracturing his nose.  I guess that's what he gets for snooping.  Love the pictures on your blog.  They add so much to the story and really bring it to life.  I didn't realize all the things you could make with bamboo and palm fronds. :-)  Well now that Aro has arrived, I can only imagine what's in store.  How will they get out of this one?  And what will Vivi do when she learns about Jimmy's fate?  Oh boy! Glad Edward was smart enough to grab the glock.  

Thanks again for another great chapter and all the hard work.  

 



Author's Response:

Hi Marlena68

Happy New Year! Thanks for reviewing chapter 40.

It is amazing what can be made with bamboo and other natural resources. People in the Pacific tropics, Asia and Tropical South America have been using these resources for hundreds if not thousands of years to build their homes, furniture and clothing. Some bamboo buildings in Asia which are still standing and in use are a thousand years old. If figure if our need was great, we'd learn how to use natural resources to our advantage as well! *chuckles*

Chapter 40 is with my beta for editing, so I should have it posted in a day or two.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

Wow - 19K words of epic storytelling!!  It was long, but totally worth it...except for the evil cliffie!!  But, then again, I can only imagine how long this would have been if you hadn't stopped there. 

Absolutely beautiful wedding!  I still can't believe the audacity of Alice, and it was funny as hell that Edward broke his nose spying.  The pictures are awesome, as always!  I hope you have a nice trip and a Happy New Year!  Thanks for the fabulous Christmas present!

~allidel  :)



Author's Response:

Hi allidel

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39. Glad you loved it and enjoyed the blog.

I'm writing chapter 40 and it should be posted sometime this week.

Happy New Year. It's already the 1st of January here in Oz.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: crazygirl2929 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

o no love it



Author's Response:

Hi crazygirl2929

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39 - glad you enjoyed it.

Chapter 40 should be posted the first week of January.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

great job on the wedding.....poor Edward, what luck on his honeymoon...lol. oh no, they're are too many Volturi to overpower....what are they gonna do??? Merry Christmas!!

Author's Response:

Hi mountainlion718

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39 - glad you enjoyed the wedding.

The Volturi will make life a little difficult for the Cullen's.

I hope you had a great Christmas. Enjoy your New Year.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

So sad....crying....bless it all.

p

merry chistmas 



Author's Response:

Hi the real teacher

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39.

I'm writing chapter 40 now and it should be posted in the first week of January.

I hope you had a great Christmas. Enjoy your New Year.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: GSRgirlforever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

At least they had a little rest before the shit hit the fan!

Author's Response:

GSRgirlforever

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39.

The shit will stick around for a little while. Unfortunately there will be no hope of rescue off the island.

I hope you had a great Christmas. Enjoy your New Year.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

:)



Author's Response:

Hi broadwayrocks

Thanks for the smiley emoticon for chapter 39.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

Played that well didn't ya, wonder if he will get his employee, what ya think!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi artri

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39.

Aro won't get his employee, not that he really cares. He was more interested in how his employee could enrich him.

I'm writing chapter 40 now, so it should be posted in the first week of January.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

Thanks for the extra long chapter, as I was reading I couldn't believe that I wasn't coming to the end after the wedding ceremony. Great job and the story was very sweet along with moving the plot along nicely. Hope you have a very Merry Christmas as well.

Author's Response:

Hi roxy34145

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39 - glad you enjoyed the extra long chapter.

I'm writing chapter 40 now, so it should be posted in the first week of January.

Enjoy your New Year celebrations.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

Absolutely loved it can't wait for more:)



Author's Response:

Hi amcullen

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39 - glad you loved it.

I'm writing chapter 40 now, so it should be posted in the first week of January.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Lizzyliz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

Great chapter. I loved the wedding and loved the ending. I can't wait for the next chapter. Have a great holiday.



Author's Response:

Hi Lizzyliz

Thanks for reviewing chapter 39 - glad you enjoyed the wedding.

I'm writing chapter 40 now, so it should be posted the first week of January.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2012 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Hawaiian Wedding Song

a very Merry Christmas to you as well ... Wow, what a wonderfully written chapter..... as usual you out did yourself on the blog... loved the pictures of everything....Larry always cracks me up and how endearing he has become, he is such a real part of the Cullen family and I sure hope he gets to remains with them in the end.....Hilarious Edward breaking his nose like that.... just priceless, and so perfect in this wonderful story....  holy hell now we have the big bad guys arriving....  can't wait for the new year and more of thiz wonderful adventure........  Be safe.... Happy Holiday's



Author's Response:

Hi Twifan1228

Thanks for reading and reviewing chapter 39 - glad you enjoyed it, and the blog as well.

I enjoy Larry, as well. He will stay with the Cullen's.

I'm writing chapter 40 now, so it should be posted in the first week of January.

Enjoy your New Year celebrations and happy 2013.

Regards, Jkazzie

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