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Reviewer: WeeKittyAndTAT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Easter Eggs and New Faces

This story is so amazing Michele and I love it, i was worried about you and where you were.  I am glad you are better, but i did miss you drastically!  lots of love and hugs sent your way...Kasi~ xoxo 

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Easter Eggs and New Faces

Love how much you pack into a chapter, hope you're recovering after your op and I'm looking forward to the next one...chapter not op!

Reviewer: kimee0479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Easter Eggs and New Faces

I loved this chapter! My favorite so far!!!

 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Easter Eggs and New Faces

Hope you feel better and don't apologize!  You come first!  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Easter Eggs and New Faces

Loved it. Glad Edward gave her the space & time to get where she needed to get to.

Hope all is right with you!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

Love it do far they are hot together!  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

I am looking forward to seeing more teasing about Edwards PA. 

 

Poor Bella she finally finds love then she has to spends weeks at a time away from it. Poor kid. 

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2012 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

Wow, ready for the next chapter!!

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

Time will fly for them... then they will have the summer to really be together and learn about each other. 

Snowmobiling is very fun, especially when there is a lot of snow.  The trails in Vermont and New Hampshire are terrific (when there is snow).  They can be like 6 lane highways in the backwoods.  Great fun!

Drunken Bella was really funny.   I'm sure Edward will never hear the end abpout his PA.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

drunk Bella is too funny ...lol. well, she wasn't upset the 2nd time he mentioned babies, so maybe that's a good sign???

Reviewer: WeeKittyAndTAT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

Michele~ thanks for pimping out HCV again and for being a loyal reader.  We love ya to death. Thsi story owns me and I love it so much.  I am excited to see where you take these two, love this story so much!  Kasi~ xoxo

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

whew that chapter was hot lol, Poor Edward. Bella is going to try all those things she never got to and he is going to be the one that corrals her when she gets outta hand lol. Oh but how they love each other. LOve this chap thanks
Vicki

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

loved it.........see you when you update again.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

wow! j'adore!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

yummy chapter.  Woo hoo for them moving thier relationship forward.  Drunk b is hilarious.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

My favorite story!!

Loved it!  So sad when Bella tells him she won't ever have children because of the lack of a mother figure. Little does she know that she already has them with Esme, Alice & Rose!  She just needs time.

Drunk Bella is funny!  So glad Edward loves her so much.  Outing his PA to his brothers & his sister in laws wanting to see it?  Hysterical. Damn....wish I could convince DH to get one. Yeah....no way in hell I was told!  Old dogs...no new tricks!

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

Sorry to take so long to review!!  RL was fascinating century. Nothing huge, but lots of small, twisted things.  This chapter was outrageously romantic, realistic, and a breath of fresh air.  Every story has low scenes where things go perfectly, but as we all know, that does NOT always happen!  Due to her past, Bella is overwhelmed and MY GOD why did no one think of this before!!!!  It's obvious, it's totally in character, and so perfect I cold scream.  (Feeling for Edward there though!). Seeing what the other couples have is one thing - even on a close basis.  But the realization of what this being truly means to you is nothing short of life altering.  You gave us that, and you gave us two characters that are willing to work through all the kinks and bends to shape a future together.  Simply  marvelous!  Thank you for all the hard and well thought out work!!!

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

I've caught up now....and I'm impatient so next chapter please, by the way LOVIN IT! Thanks

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

Exciting and I don't have to wait for next chapter! YEAH

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes

I'm glad I don't have to wait for the next few chapters, I would have lost sleep!!

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

you made me cry again...

 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

That piercing fascinates me.  Great job with these two.

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

Ah, that chapter made me shed a tear!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

WOW!

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

Another great chapter, cant wait to read more.....

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

Ahh... finally!  I hope they can continue to have some more good happy times.

My sister has been to the lodge several times and there is an relative still there but not 1st generation.  She says it's wonderful.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

I loved it. This was a fantastic chapter. Them getting themselves off first was great. I even enjoyed Bellas melt down, while it sucked it had to happen and they both handled it beautifully. 

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

Hot dang, what a fabulous chapter!! you done good and post some more. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

sssiiiggghhhh...ah sweet relief, the ust is resolved. LOL I loved this chapter so much. These men love their woman with everything they have got and its a beautiful thing. We all know that there is no such thing as a perfect relationship, but these couples are damn close. Poor Bella, the emotions really got to her didn't they. It can be so overwhelming for one so young and to have had the life she had to turn around and be the object of such affection. On top of that to feel the power of what a good man can do to his woman, the way he can make her feel. Just loved this! Thanks for the wonderful scene and as always your phots make it perfect.
Vicki

Reviewer: noway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

I just loved the way you wrote this chapter.  It was hot when it needed to be and very sweet and loving at the same time.  I love the way Edward shows his unconditional love for Bella.  And she still has her snarkyness. Love it and well done.

Can't wait for the next chapter.  It's like torcher to wait a whole week.

Maria

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

he's so good with her and to her, they need to talk like that about everything in the future :)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

loved it

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

loved the chapter looking forward to the next one 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

excellent chapter.  Woo Hoo for Loving times and for Bella's new toys.

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

Loving this story.

Reviewer: sherryjo Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

i love, love , love this story,, im begging my husband to get that done to him 

Reviewer: WeeKittyAndTAT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

Michele~  What a fantastic chapter this was and thank you so very much for sharing yet another well written chapter of yours with us.  I am using the joint account with Nikky, but this is from Kasi...but you know I love your story and since I happened to be logged in here when I read I reviewed here too.  Just ABSOLUTELY love this story and I am so looking forward to reading more soon of this wonderful love filled fic.  You're one of my favorite authors, thanks for ALWAYS making me smile.
Kasi~

Reviewer: Pcdogmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

Worth the wait! That was awesome!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

that was great

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

Ah yes.......I thought it was perfect. SoM is one of my favorites!!

Great job....tension released!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

I absolutely loved this chapter. There was a little smut, a very sexy possessive Edward, a little sweet time. It was great. 

 

I hope things start looking up in RL. 

Reviewer: bookonabeach Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

Fabulous chapter. Loved the tension, Bella's obliviousness, and BxE's abandon when together. I like Edward a little possesive. Anxiously awaiting the chapter.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

Wonderful chapter as always.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

great chapter M.  take care of you.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

love it

so proud of bella and how much she has accomplished

edward way to go. that teacher needs to know she is odd limits. he has seemed to listen to bella so i am glad you showed up and hope he gets the picture

oh the fun they are going to have.

love how far bella has come

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

i can't believe the nerve of that teacher asking Bella if she was slumming it...stereotype much teach???? he better back off now! can't wait for their time together!!!

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

Quel beau chapitre, j'adore!  Edward à l'université, il y aura commotion!

Reviewer: IGOTEAMEDWARD Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

Brilliant!!

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

Michele~

As always you rock my socks and I am so excited to read the vanilla loving between Edward adn Bella.  I meant what I said in my review reply for HCV, if you need me you know how to reach me.  I will alwyas help ya out my dear friend.  Lots of love, hugs and kisses. 

Kasi~
xoxo

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

Really love reading this story and cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

OMG!!!! I freaking loved this!!! Mark is a slimly little git, isn't he? I picture him as a Patrick Dempsy type with an accent. I loved Edward showing up to claim what is his.

And damn girl, how is it that you make a scene of Bella jacking him off so fucking hot??? I don't think you have anything to worry about with the vanilla sex. You will do just fine! ;)

Excellent chapter my friend!

XOXO

Nickey

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

Another winner!  Warm and wonderful, rich and involving.  I said it before, I'll say it again, this reads like a book.  Every chapter is joy to curl up with.

Something tells me Bella's professor is about to "lose" her Shakespeare paper.  This of course would cause all kinds of problems for her and her college career.  Just a feeling.  Thank you once again for an amazing read.

Reviewer: snoopyvet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

I have missed this story but I so understand RL intruding. GREAT CHAPTER 

<3

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

Wonderful chapter.   Hopefully Mr English will leave her alone.   Hate people in power positions taking advantage

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

Aww! Edward was jealous! I'm glad he put that professor in his place. He needed it! As for that lemon? Or i guess i should say lime ;) Yea baby! Lol! I can't wait for their "first time" it's going to be soo hot I can tell. I know RL gets in the way so please update when you can. I can't wait to read more. Thanks again. Bye for now. PS I also can't wait for a family like ours. Soo excited for that. :) 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

I certainly hope that Professor Watson-Smythe doesn't become too much of a problem.  I like to see that Bella isn't letting the interest he and the young men at school are showing her go to her head!  Great chapter!  More when you can please.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

Wonderful chapter as always. You just never disappoint lady! Can't wait for the next chapter tho!  Thanks - Cheri

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

Oh hun sorry rl being a pisser, hope all is well. I will take anything I can get from you and enjoy every second of it. Over the weekend went to see a movie and they advertised a movie called people like us and I just smiled to myself, hoping that viewers would look this up on the internet and instead find you and your wonderful stories lol.
Wonderful chapter, snotty british dude 0-Edward-Wins!!!! Oh and nice pic btw lol , tried to talk the hubs into one, not going to happen lolol.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

I can't wait for the next chapter.  I am sure that you will knock the "vanilla" sex right out of the park!  What is up with the creepy professor?

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

I've been waiting and waiting for the update and you didn't disappoint!
I loved how cute and innocent Bella was when she asked if they could go to bed and cracked up when she thought Edward named his penis Prince Albert!
The Brit Professor needs to get lost. No fraternizing with your students sir!
So....next chapter, huh?? Don't worry, I'm sure vanilla will be just fine...maybe add a little sprinkles if you're so inclined!
I LOVE this story!! Cannot wait for the next update!
**sigh**. Something about this Edward makes me wet...I mean weak ;) at the knees!

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

Whew, I was getting nervous and anxious for my fix!! Thank goodness you posted.  Slumming it, please, Love it and look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Pcdogmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

I love ths story. Your characters draw me in and keep me hooked. I can't wait for your updates. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2012 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

I never thought I would cry so much over a Christmas morning. It was a beautiful chapter. 

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

Oh sweetie! I am so sorry to hear that happened with your car and that RL has taken a bit of a nose dive. I hope by the time you are reading this review that things are back on the up swing!

I absolutely loved this chapter!!! Edward's gift for Bella was so sweet. And as twisted as their advice was, I think Alice and Rose were on the right path. Bella should not let Edward dictate the pace of 'their' relationship. I am sure that we are still going to have to wait longer for the good, hot sexin', but maybe he can loosen the reigns a touch and give both Bella and your readers some relief. I think we are suffering from blue-balls right along side him. ;)

XOXO

Nickey

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 17 - First dates and Ice skates

Skating of any kind and Bella do not seem like good bed fellows!

OMG! The whole masterbation thing had me rolling. Poor Bella. That girl needs some happy juice and a good rabbit. ;)

XOXO

Nickey

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Mistletoe and Bar fights

I was seriously enjoying the battle of the bands there till that little fuck stain had to screw it all up. But at least Bella finally got her first proper kiss.  You are going to kill us with this sexual tension though...you do realize that right? ;)

Great chapter!!!

XOXO

Nickey

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Date: 05 Apr 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 15 - One step forward...

Mmmm, I hope it is some kinky fuckery!!! Damn, I should go to bed, but I can't when you leave all THAT in the air. Guess I am ordering a coffee IV in the morning.

Excellent, fantastic chapter my friend!!!

XOXO

Nickey

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Date: 05 Apr 2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 14 - 'On the first day of Christmas...'

Damn, if I were here, he would be suffering from round two of sore balls! I think Edward better be careful with his words because he may break her completely this time. I know he is killing me!!!!

XOXO

Nickey

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Date: 05 Apr 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Time waits for no man (or woman)

I loved the letters!!! They showed such a huge progression in how Bella is growing and dealing with everything.

Is it bad that when Carlisle threatened to take Bella over his knee that I thought it was hot? Yeah, I know...I am a dirty little whore for Big Daddy C. ;)

Excellent chapter sweets!

XOXO

Nickey

PS. Loved the HP references. LOL!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

Great story so far, loving how you have taken these characters we have grown to love and weave them in a way that you can actually see in real life. great job, cant wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2012 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes

Ugh! I understand he had to go, but to leave in the middle of the night when she has been 'abandoned' her whole life???  That was really shitty on Edward's part. He broke his word to her and that to me, is the worst thing he could have done. It broke my heart when she told Roscoe that she knew Edward would come back for him. She obviously does not see her self worthy of his return. Damn! I understand why this had to happen, but it still SUCKS ASS!!!!!!

But the chapter didn't. Amazing writing!!!

XOXO

Nickey

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Date: 04 Apr 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

Holy hell, an almost kiss! That is worse than the little cliffy you just hit us h=with here! When did you get so sadistic??? Loved it my friend!!!

XOXO

Nickey

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Date: 03 Apr 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates

I love that he calls her love and she does not call him out on it. And the fact that she is warming up to Roscoe is so sweet. Another fantastic chapter my friend!!!

XOXO

Nickey

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 9

So sad. :( I was really hoping to see Edward step up as daddy to Bella's baby. I did love how the family surrounded her in love. It was very sweet and I am thinking about forgiving Jasper...thinking.

Great job portraiting a very sad and emotional event in any person's life.

XOXO

Nickey

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

wow!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 8

EVIL!!!!!  That is just not right to do that to your readers. Lucky for me I am such a slacker that I get to read the next chapter right away! Another excellent chapter, but I am worried about Bella and the baby. :(

 

XOXO

Nickey

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Date: 02 Apr 2012 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 7

I don't thin I have mentioned how much I love Brady. He has totally stolen my heart unlike his father who I would love to smack around a bit. I'm glad Bella stood up for herself instead of running.

Great chapter!!!

XOXO

Nickey

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

u poor thing! thx for the update

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

No need to apologize for being late... Christmas with the Cullens was astounding!  You packed everything in and then some, and made it such a pleasure!  Even the cliffhanger was wonderful.  Once more I must restate: Brady is a true treasure!  Also, it was marvelous reading the appreciation all the adults got experiencing and sharing in Bella's first true Christmas.  Carlisle is right here too : With little experience, Bella and Bree need he and Esme more than ever.   By the way, bravo Emmett!  Only SOS,done completely confident would lay himself bare in an effort to assist his brother and Bella.  From beginning to end this chapter was pure pleasure.  Thank you!  Oh!  and thanks for Roscoe and his little asides too.  I adore them!

 

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

I loved it!!! This story is so good it has me completely glued to my computer. When Edward said, "I will never lie to you." I swear my girlie parts twitched!!!

Fanstastic chapter my friend!!! I would love to read more tonight, but I have to work in the morning, so Ch 7 will have to wait. :(

XOXO

Nickey

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Date: 02 Apr 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 5

Ok, I am a fucking mess reading this!!! Everytime Bella has a turn of emotions I am bawling my eyes out! But that doesn't mean that I am going to stop reading!!! Loving this story so much!!!!!!!

XOXO

Nickey

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Date: 02 Apr 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

I figured this would be a long wait till the loving, just the way you set up Bella's character. And yes, a little Edward self-lovin' is always appreciated. Especially when you give him the fuck hot piercing!!!

So yes, you had me weeping like a little bitch baby at this one as well. Damn fine writing my friend!!!

XOXO

Nickey

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Date: 02 Apr 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?

Well it only took you three chapters to turn me into a sobbing mess. Bella is just such an emotion inducing character. I love how you write her.

Excellent chapter my friend!!! I am so glad I don't have to read more. ;)

XOXO

Nickey

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Date: 01 Apr 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S

Ahhhh, my heart breaks for the enigma that is Edward. I wonder if he really knows who he is? He seems to be one thing underneath while another to the outside world. I just want to reach in and hug him forever. I love the Cullen Clan you have developed here. There are a lot of new names to remember, but I am sure they will find a place in my heart just like the rest of the Cullens.

Excellent chapter my friend.

XOXO

Nickey

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Date: 01 Apr 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

Hello my friend! I feel I have waited long enough to start what I am sure will be your next masterpiece!  As always, you capture my heart with these characters right from the start. I love this Bella and my heart breaks for her. And Billy...I think I am in love. LOL. Billy often gets such a bad characterization, but this one has secured a place in my heart.

Fantastic start!!!! Now only 17 more to go to catch up (damn, I'm a slacker).

XOXO

Nickey

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Date: 01 Apr 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

rofl for the ice menace.    About time those wo talked and he listened to her and what she needs too.   Awww we need to find ned a nice girl

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

love it

tough lessons bella is learning

i am glad she talked with ned and edward. yes commincation is key but again that was something she hadn't learned. now she and ned are friends and her and edward will go from here since she has laid out what she wants and expects

great first christmas for bella

loved it

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

You cruel, cruel woman....leaving us hanging like that! **smile**

That just means the next chapter will be one huge lemon ball, right?

Thank goodness they talked!  Yes, there are no guarantees in life but communication is key!

Great job...I hate games!

 

Sorry about the car....hope it all works out!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

Wonderful chapter! Sorry about RL. Can't wait for next update tho.  Thanks - Cheri

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

Loving this story and cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: Carusangel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

Ugh - total blocker!  Hurry up and bring on the good stuff. :)

I am so glad you aren't dragging out the "I'll make him jealous with another guy" storyline. Some angst is awesome but the stuff that drags in purely to keep the story going really bugs me. Thank you for having these characters exhibit some normalcy by communicating their thoughts, wants and needs. 

I can't wait for the next one!  This story has totally captured my heart...

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

loved the chapter ! looking forward to more ! 

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

omg I was going to call you a cock-block-asaurus and then I read about your car. So no name calling for you this go around lol. Am sorry to hear about that tho thats has to suck!
Just as I was saying Rose and Alice were giving such good advice and then they blow it. They didn't take Neds feeling at all into consideration and that was not fair. Amazed at how mature Bella is handling things and how wonderful Carlisle and Esme give advice.
Glad The men had a sit down with Edward too. Even tho he is the "adult" (hmm hmm drive off w/out warning hmm hmm) he needs to hear how hard relationships can be and how much work they take to be good. Good for the boys. Wonderful chapter as always, and don't over extend yourself hun. Good luck finding a new car and see ya next chapter.
Vicki
p.s. forgot to say in my last review how much I love your pictures. They are always beautiful!

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

I'm glad she didn't lead on poor Ned. 

Another excellent chapter... I'm glad the Esme and Carlisle told Alice and Rose to stay out of it... they were not helping.

I look forward to see what happens next!

Sorry about your car... what a bummer!

Reviewer: Sparta Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

Love this chapter and can't wait for more to come!!! I also enjoy the fact that I am not correcting your grammar when I read. Outstanding!!

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 17 - First dates and Ice skates

ok are your ready for the crazy that is your fans (ok me just me) When this chapter updated last week I got it very late and was about to head to bed...could not go to sleep knowing this was in my inbox so I read it swearing to myself that I would reread and review in the A.M. of course being the dork that I am I forgot. Now the next chapter came in and I havent reviewed this chapter. OH MY GOSH the guilt I am feeling lol. I know the wonderful person you are you will absolve me but I still feel awful. So for penance I refuse to read the new chapter (talk about willpower) until I have reread and reviewed this chapter.
Whew I feel better getting that off my chest.
I did love this chapter very much, we often forget how very young and innocent this girl is. I know she has seen some pretty harsh shit growing up in the system, but she has also been so isolated from her peers that she really doesnt know simple things that we take for granite. Poor Edward, suprised he didn't pop off right then and there lol. I loved the discussion with Alice and Rose, its good that she has slighty older more experianced woman to give her good solid advice and not some teenage half baked advice lol. Its also great that she is mature enough to take the advice and not just brush it off like most teens would.
So is she going to take out half the town at the ice skating party...lets go see shall we. LOL
thats my hint that I going to go read the new chapter now (still guilty but not as bad.)
See ya soon

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

Great chapter and I would have loved to see Ned as more of a antagonist before he was neutered.  I do think Edward needs a lesson here because I think when it comes to commuicaiton he is still lacking.  Bella seems to be putting it out there time and again and he stays pretty quiet, yet he still seems to be making all the decisions.

Take care of you.  Your readers will wait for your next chapter.  V

Reviewer: WeeKittyAndTAT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

Michele~ I am forever in your debt, because you own my ass with this fuckhawt awesome ass story!  I love ya chicka.  Sorry to hear about your RL drama, I understand where miney has not been the same it has not been drama free either.  Looking forward to the next chapter it shoudl be all warm and toasty and full of lemony goodness or at least some limey yumminess!  Cna't wait for more, you rock as always.  Kasi~

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

good for Carlisle and Esme for setting everyone straight...but where did Edward go after they argued?? that Brady is a heartbreaker...too freaking cute !! i hope they found your car, i'm so sorry you had to go thru that!! ((hugs))

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