[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?
cant blame her for being skittish. vinnie and felix were so sweet. Gotta love billy. gonna guess that she falls or something after she gets outside.....or maybe runs into Jake.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?
What a nice surpris of an update. I hope Billy goes after her. He seems to be the only one who she is semi comfortable with. I could see her being comfortable with esme but not as much til the boys are gone. I am not sure how far she will get if she doesn't have her bags with her. update soon again.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?
oh boy, great 1st impression..... i hope Billy catches up to her, cause where is she gonna run to? And taking off is gonna trigger Jasper'a cop mode cause it looks like she's guilty of something by running
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?
Hey hun, this update was a pleasant surprise and I loved it. Your Bella is just so heartbreaking. The meeting wasn't the best but I would think Billy or Jasper goes after her, Edward has issues.
I hope you had a good Christmas and will have a happy New Year. xx
Date: 27 Dec 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?
totally looking forward to seeing what happens next ! loving it already!
Date: 26 Dec 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S
Hmmm... intresting Edward you got here. I can't wait to see how Bella responds to him!
Date: 25 Dec 2011 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
Very interesting beginning :0) i'm glad I will catch up quickly on this one!
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S
I loved the Cullen's. It looks like Edward is a bit of a lost soul too. I wonder how Bella is going to cope with the family esp., as Emmett and Edward are already set against her. Wonderful job as usual hun.
I wish you and yours a very happy Christmas and a healthy and happy New Year. XX
Date: 21 Dec 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S
Wow - I liked that chapter even more. I can't wait until they meet! Happy Holidays! :)
Date: 21 Dec 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
I think this might be my first review on TWCS...if not, it is definitely one of the few. But I had to tell you that I really liked this chapter. I'm very excited to see where this story goes and what develops. Off to read the next chapter and wait for more! Thank you for sharing your story! :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S
Who's going to influence who?
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
I'm so excited about this story...
Date: 20 Dec 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S
Your characters alway intrigue me, you seem to bring them to life so easily. I can't wait to see where this goes. Hope to see it soon!
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S
how did Jenna die???? piercings?!...interesting :)
Date: 20 Dec 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S
I really love this story so far... i hope they don't give bella to hard of a time.. =0)
Date: 20 Dec 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S
Oh dear, hes a bit of a rebel with a very protective streak...about to meet a pretty little thing with a serious chip on her shoulder and a bun in her oven. Emmett is gonna fold immediatly, Jasper not long after, but Edward he is going to make life difficult is he not? LOL loved this chapter, see ya next one
Date: 20 Dec 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S
Cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S
hmm the boy is a bit broken. lots of backstory to come I see. can'twaitfornext.
Date: 19 Dec 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S
I love the stars hollow vibe and the use of Loralei's house as Edwards. This is looking like a captivating story and hopefully i will it enjoy it as much as people like us which is in my top 5 fanfics i have read over nearly 3 years. Thanks for writing.xx
Author's Response:
I love that you recognised her house!!! I searched for a good picture and when I saw it, I knew that he should live there. I hope that you enjoy it too. Thanks so much for reading.
Michele
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
thanks seems like a good story
Date: 18 Dec 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
Very Good!
sapho99
Date: 18 Dec 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
I like it! Keep the chapters comming :)
Its fresh and different. I like where I think you are headed with this.
TTFN & Merry Christmas!
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
Firstly, its great to have you back. I am loving this story. You had me tear up over the rotten hand that Bella has been dealt. I am so looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response:
Hey Roon1! Ihave missed you! I'm glad that you are enjoying this one, I will have the next chapter up soon! Love, Michele
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
great beginning! Bella's a little bad ass isn't she. :) hopefully going with Billy to Hope Springs will help in changing her attitude and she can take better care of herself and the baby to be
Author's Response:
Hey Honey! It's good to hear from you. Thanks so much for reading. Yeah, our new girl is a little prickly (to say the least!). Next chapter is up soon. xoxo
Date: 18 Dec 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
I am so excited to see a new story from you! I was missing PLU today, and low and behold here is a new story to follow.
I like what I see so far, thanks!
Author's Response:
thank you so much for coming back for more! I miss PLU as well, but these characters are getting their own voices. Next chapter up soon. xoxox
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
Michele~ You amaze me completely. Loving this so much already. SIGH! Thanks for the story love you have given LK&IV in your reviews. Much love to you my dear one. BIG HUGS, Kasi~ xoxo
Author's Response:
Hey Kasi, Thanks so much for reading my new story and I love your story, so leaving love is easy! Next chapter up soon xoxo
Date: 17 Dec 2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
I story like Gilmore Girls. Yay. That was my all time favorite show too! I was sad when they ended it after the 8th season. They totally could have done more...
I like so far, and I am interested how you fit all the characters into the town and how they all affect Bella's life. The next chapter will be a wonderful x-mas gift!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I bought all of the seasons of Gilmore Girls and I love them. There will be lots of funny, quirky characters and of course The Culllens. Next chapter up soon (before Christmas!)
Date: 17 Dec 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
like the start. poor b. unfortunately sadbuttrue beginnings. woohoo for billy. ugh for scummy james and laurent. 28 for eddie huh?
Author's Response:
Hey Darling, yeah, I thought that I would change things up a little with the characters. I don't think that I can write another Charlie, you know? James will always be scummy in my book! and yeah, there's just something about an older Edward... and a younger Bella, although this Bella is no pushover. Next chapter up soon!
Date: 17 Dec 2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
Love it so far!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much xoxo
Date: 17 Dec 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
So good to see you back and I'm very much looking forward to this ride!!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much LL, I am enjoying writing this.
Date: 17 Dec 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
Hang on a sec.........sorry had to do a happy dance. A new story from you is cause for a celebration!!! Although, I have been loving People Like Us for so long it almost feels strange to read new characters lol. Love it so far and looking forward to next chapter
Author's Response:
Aaaw, Vickic, you are too sweet! Thanks so much for the happy dance and I know that it's strange - It's been wierd for me not to put PLU in to this story, but this Bella and Edward are finding their own voices, so it's getting easier. Next chapter up soon.
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2011 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
I am so loving this already! Thank You! ;o)
Author's Response:
thank you sweetie!
Date: 17 Dec 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'
Great start. Can't wait to see how Bella adjust to nice.
I am sure the good doc Cullen will help ease all her woo's.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review - you know that the doctor is going to try - but this is a slower burn than plu.