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Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2020 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it! 

Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2020 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

Loved it!

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2017 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

Absolutely loved this story from the first word to the last period.  Thank you for sharing. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 34

Omg my heart was beating so hard reading this last chapter.  I wanted to throttle Edward. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2017 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 34

Omg my heart was beating so hard reading this last chapter.  I wanted to throttle Edward. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2017 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Birthday wishes

That was so perfect and then the carriage ride. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Honour thy father

Ok I thought I cried a lot while reading the last chapter.  But that memorial for Charlie really had me going. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2017 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Summer Time

I cried like a baby. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2017 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

I had a feeling that she was going to have a miscarriage. Poor thing. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2017 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 8

I had a feeling that she was going to have a miscarriage. Poor thing. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2017 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 6

I am so loving your story. My heart breaks for Miss Belle. 

Reviewer: cina24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2017 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 6

I am so loving your story. My heart breaks for Miss Belle. 

Reviewer: Elliottsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2017 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

You named the park Dorset Common. But halfway through your story you started switching between Dorset and Dawson's Common. Other than that, this was a great story.

Reviewer: ToAshes Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2016 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

No matters how many times I read this story, I still love it even years later! 

Reviewer: barbarablade007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates

Even though this review comes a few years late, I wanted to say I've smiled and cried and I'm only 10 chapters in. I'm truly enjoying this story, it's as heartbreaking as it is beautiful, so thank you.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

AWESOME!!! story thanks for sharing it on here with us ;D

Reviewer: alaskangirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

i am a huge fan of people like us and look forward to a family like ours complete.  i found this little gem last night and oh you hooked me again damn it...seriously please keep writing...

 

the only thing that bugged me was i wanted to find out what happened to that little prick tyler lol

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

Great story

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Date: 01 Sep 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Mistletoe and Bar fights

Great chapter

Reviewer: Payton79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2014 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

Thanks for this wonderful story. It has been on my TBR list for a while and I'm glad I finally got to read it.
At times, it was hard to get through the angst, but I'm glad life turned out this way for Edward and Bella.

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

I love this story. I have been reading it for only four days now and am already this far even being sick for two of those days. I was looking for that story by myyedward, where Bells steps in to take Tanya's place but it isn't avaliable. It seems like it was deleted. Any ideas? It sounds like it would be a good story to read. Well after I read yours of course.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

I loved this story. You are an awesome writer. You did a great job writing it.  You have also done an amazing job writing a Family Like Ours.  Hope you update it soon. Love that story too. Thanks for sharing your amazing stories with us.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!

They still have problems with communication.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Making babies is supposed to be fun!

Enjoyed reading this chapter.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 37 - a new kind of normal

Lol!!!!!!! Poor Bella.  

Glad things worked out for Bree.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 36 - “Going to the chapel and we’re…” (Or are we?)

Love love love this chapter! !!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Finding the way back

Love that Edward and Bella got away and it was just them. Like that Bella told Edward to go home and she would handle his family. Glad they also talked to the preacher when they got back in town.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2014 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 34

OMGosh! !!! This was a heart breaking chapter.  Poor Bella.  The Cullen women are going to be so upset with the Cullen men. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Making Plans

Great story.  Edward and Bella need a "lesson" or homework on communication.  Lol. Thanks for adding Brady ' s reaction to them getting married.  I have been wondering what he thought of it.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2014 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Absence makes the heart grow fonder?

Love love love this chapter! !!!!!!!!!

I have read the story you recommended.  It is a good story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Birthday wishes

PERFECT! !!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Moving on - Enough is enough!!

It is about time Edward gets his head out of his ass.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Time flies and then it's Christmas again

I love how everyone is scared of Esme! !!! Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Here comes trouble....

I hope nothing happens to Roscoe for biting Mark. He was just defending his master.  Poor Bella.  Hope she talks to Jasper or someone and gets everything off her chest about what happened. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 27

I think the horn professor is fixing to meet his match. I think some men are going to go meet the professor.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Mama said there'll be days like this...

I am wondering,  has Bella ever told Edward that her Professor is living in the boarding house.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Moving on

What nightmares??????? I am so off to the next chapter

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Honour thy father

I loved this chapter.  I am so glad that they kept Charlie ' s stuff. Loved how they welcomed Bella and the Cullens. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Summer Time

Love love love it!!!!!!!!!!

You have done an awesome job writing this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Easter Eggs and New Faces

I am sooooooo happy that she finally went to church. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

Love love love love this chapter.  Perfect! !!!!!! Love what Bella did when she got drunk. I kind of did the same thing once.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

Love love love this chapter! !!!!!!! Awesome job. Perfect

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2014 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

So glad that things are moving forward with Edward and Bella.  Love that Edward showed up at the college.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

I hope Edward and Bella have finally got things straighten out. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 17 - First dates and Ice skates

OMGosh! !!! I would be so mortified.  Poor Bella.  Lol. So glad she has Rose and Alice to talk to. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Mistletoe and Bar fights

OMGosh! !!! I can not believe that Bella was drugged like that. I am glad that boys got in some good licks on the boy.  Edward and Bella are confusing.  One minute they are kissing and then the next they are talking about just being friends. What? Friends with benefits? ????? Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 15 - One step forward...

Love Esme and Carlisle giving Edward heck about Bella.  Lol. My mouth dropped open when Edward mouthed at his daddy. You go Carlisle,  remind your boy that you can still whoop his ass. Lol. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 14 - 'On the first day of Christmas...'

OMGosh! !!!!! He did not just say the it was not going to work. He said the wrong words. Love how Roscoe reacted to Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Time waits for no man (or woman)

Love the letters that Bella wrote. Especially the 1st ones. Lol. I am glad that Bella is doing so good in college.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes

I can not believe that he left that way.  Without saying g something to her first.  He has been telling her to trust him but he did not trust her with why he needed to leave. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

Love how the Cullens are there for Bella.  I am sooooooo glad that I do not have to wait for an update.  I am off to the next chapter! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates

I don't think Edward has realized that he is using the term "love" when he is talking to Bella.  Love love love this story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 9

I have never had a miscarriage but my daughter has. It is a sad sad thing. I am glad that Bella turned to Edward.  Also glad that she is letting Rose and Alice help her. I just hope she does not flip out when she realizes that the dog is in the house. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 8

OMGosh! !!!!!! Poor Bella.  I hope she can unlock the door for Edward.  I am sooooooo glad that I can go to the next chapter and don't have to wait for the next update.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 7

I hope Edward can help Bella over come her fear of animals.  I do not blame the family for being pissed at Jasper.  He was so out of line. I like that Edward was there for Bella.  Love little Brady. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love little Brady! !!!!!!! It did not surprise me that Edward went off on Bella but I am glad he did. Maybe it help open her eyes some. Loved that he also let loose with the cuss words. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 5

I was wondering how Bella was going to handle being around other people.  Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

Can't wait to find out more about Edward's past and what happened.  Glad that Edward found Bella but called his mother. I thought in the last chapter that Bella had left her bags with Billy in the booth. Glad she had them with her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2014 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Are we there yet?

Poor Bella. You know that shower and that nice bed meant the world to her. My heart broke for her when she ran out of the diner. She left without her stuff. I hope Billy catches her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S

Loved meeting all the Cullens.  Can't wait to find out more of what happened to Edward. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

I can't wait to read more.  

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

Ahhh, this was such a lovely story. I loved every bit of it, I loved that it was really long and took its time, I loved bells some of her scenes the way you wrote just broke your heart for how she was feeling. A gorgeous beautiful well written story. Thank you x x x loved the pics too, especially edward/bells ones. Much love x x x x x x

Reviewer: lmc123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2013 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Time flies and then it's Christmas again

This story is so lovely. Liking much better than people like us, bells is so adorable and at times makes you cry, charlies ceremony was a killer!

Reviewer: Susan2e Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

Loved it!  Thanks, Michelle for another winner.

Susan

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

You left off at a perfect time in their lives, everyone is still with them and all are happy and healthy, only Roscoe is gone, it's just right. I will think of them now and again and wonder if Quill grows up to marry Anna Beth and if the second boy will have big brown eyes or beautiful green ones! Fabulous story, it had lots of laughs and tears and plenty of love in it. What could be better?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 39 - And baby makes three!

Bella's fears nearly got the better of her once again, and once again the family came riding to the rescue! What a support system to be able to call on any time! It was so scary when all hell broke loose for a while, the baby coming and Edward and Carlisle in that frightening accident! Thank heaven that turned out okay, for Bella and Esme. Darling that Roscoe is the living baby monitor, his inner monologues throughout this story were such fun to read!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 38 - Making babies is supposed to be fun!

The family dynamic in this story is a never-ending delight! This baby will truly be a blessed event if the Cullens have anything to say about it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 37 - a new kind of normal

That last scene at the Purple Cow was a riot! Poor Bella, I didn't know whether to laugh or cry for her! She is about to have another meltdown, it looks like, thinking Edward won't want a baby now! Bree's little  contretemps was kind of a surprise, so there's lots of drama going on! Life in Hope Springs is never dull and boring, that's for sure!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 36 - “Going to the chapel and we’re…” (Or are we?)

The wedding was wonderful, but the honeymoon was out of this world! You absolutely outdid yourself and I loved every bit of it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Finding the way back

I'm with you on that feeling about anonimous flaming, it's just cowardly! The Cullen men are who they are and you kind of have to love them for it, even if it drives you a bit crazy! I really liked that Edward and Bella went to Craig and Betty and talked things out. That was the smart thing to do, as was the torrid night they had in Burlington!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 34

What a huge mess! You nearly gave me a heart attack with the whole Erin thing!! I hope to hell Bella loves Edward enough to forgive him for all the agony this drug sting has caused! Eri is an evil little bitch and almost got what she wanted!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Making Plans

The whole process is fascinating to see unfold, and I can't wait to read more! Bella still has some insecurities but is getting better all the time. It kind of shocked her to learn how well off the Cullens really are and what they wanted to contribute to the wedding, but I'm glad that was straightened out. It sounds like it will all work out pretty well! Boy, are they all going to be a busy bunch!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Absence makes the heart grow fonder?

I'm glad that Bella is ready to look through her father's stuff and see who she came from.  I'm kind of excited to see what's there myself!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Birthday wishes

What a fabulous way to propose! It was even great that the whole bunch showed up to share in the joyous occaision! It was so cute that Edward was so nervous, I loved it all!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Moving on - Enough is enough!!

Talk about making your life unnecessarily difficult! Edward is the master at that, for sure!  It turns out Carlisle had the answer  to fixing things, or letting them fix themselves. This family is is just flat amazing, the way they look out for each other.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Time flies and then it's Christmas again

The Cullens should have believed Bella that Esme would be okay when she heard the story of Mark Watson-Smythe. I must admit I was proud of the guys for beating the crap out of him! I'm glad Esme and Carlisle are ome again and Christmas was great, too! Kind of sad that Edward put greatgrandmother's ring away until a better time!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Here comes trouble....

Poor Bella, I swear she can't get a break sometimes! Do you know how thrilled I am that Roscoe chewed hell out of that pig professor? Thank God everyone got to her in time, and she defended herself to boot! I only wish she didn't feel like all this crap was her fault! It was heartbreaking for Edward to have to doctor his woman like that and care for her hurts!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 27

I think it's about time Bella decided to do something about Mark, and the timing couldn't be better for the Arizona cop to showup! Combined with Edward, Jasper and Emmet, plus her friends from school, the professor is really in for it! I absolutely cannot stand people like him, arrogant bastard that he is!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Mama said there'll be days like this...

If Dash has noticed Mark being an idiot, then maybe Bella's not wrong to be uneasy about him. I kind of wish she would tell Edward about how Mark makes her feel. The girl has enough on her plate with school and worries about Carlisle and Esme being away for three months. Besides, it would give Edward pleasure to break that guy's nose, just for pestering his woman!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Moving on

The trip to Montreal sounded great and made me wish I could have gone with them all! I'm worried why Bella has started having nightmares and hope it's something that Edward or Jasper can help her with! I did briefly wonder if Mark's persistence had any bearing on those bad dreams. I have an uneasy feeling he's going to be a problem sometime!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Honour thy father

I can kind of see why this chapter would have been tough to write, it was bit tough to read! The ceremony was nearly overwhelming, but the history the guys shared with Bella was just right! I loved when Bella straightened them all out about Edward, enjoyed that almost as much as he did! This whole time in Phoenix was amazing  as well as necessary.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Summer Time

I just knew Charlies old friends and colleagues would be wonderful guys! It sure scared Bella to think about going back to Arizona but I'll bet she's glad now she did! It sounds like she and Edward are having a great summer, by the way!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Easter Eggs and New Faces

I can see the improvements in their relationship all the time, slow and steady though they are! The wonderful thing is that her love for Edward gives Bella the courage to overcome so many things! I can see why this story was nominated for an award, it's just wonderful!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 21 - JUST WHAT THE DOCTOR ORDERED!

I have a hunch that now they know how good they are together, it will be much more difficult to be apart! The three days, and nights, were wonderful!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 20 - What's all the fuss about?

I hope everyone else felt like this chapter was well worth the wait, because I sure did! These two are so in love with each other that it just rolled off them and right onto Jasper and Alice, and Emmett and Rosalie! Everybody  benefits from the powerful feelings between Edward and his Bella!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Lessons and Lessons

I figured that English professor was trying to get closer to Bella, but Edward rather pointedly marked his territory! Can't wait for them to be together at Stowe! Bella needs to also realize just how amazing her academic career has been so far!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 18 - "All I want for Christmas is you..."

I have to ask even after all this time, did you ever get back your stolen car?

This was a really good chapter, since it not only was their first Christmas together, but a big step in their relationship! Maybe now Rose and Alice will quit sticking their noses in to Bella and Edward's business!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 17 - First dates and Ice skates

I get such a kick out of those two talking about everything!  Picturing the skating is good for a few chuckles too!

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Date: 09 Jun 2013 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Mistletoe and Bar fights

Well, thank the dear Lord Edward saw what was happening and went after Bella and Kyle! It's a wonder he didn't kill the little bastard for drugging Bella and especially what he planned to do to her! That would have been unspeakably cruel, considering her history! Lucky Edward is so attuned to her and was watching!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 15 - One step forward...

Ther's a tiny part of me that wants Edward's family to butt out! Where do they all get off telling him and Bella what to do and how to do it? At the same time, it's kind of cute that everyone cares enough to interfere! I guess they only want them to be happy.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 14 - 'On the first day of Christmas...'

This will only be a total diaster if Edward fails to explain his reasons and they both fail to talk frankly to each other.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Time waits for no man (or woman)

I'm so impressed that Edward and Bella are both doing the right thing for themselves and for each other. It takes a lot to deny yourself instant gratification and do what needs to be done , instead. Hopefully when they  get back together, they will be on the right path!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes

I can certainly sympathize with your tears while writing this chapter, hell, me too! They can't either one help their feelings, but the timing is terrible, so I guess they just have to hurt for a while, as shitty as that is!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

Okay, I'm dying of curiosity here! What did Emmett just lift out of that box that shocked Bella into saying a cuss-word in front of Esme?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates

What a wonderful opportunityand it looks like Bella will avail herself of it, too. That author's note didn't sound too encouraging, however. I really don't want Bella to suffer greatly, again, I think she's done quite enough of that already! Let the girl have some happiness in her short life, already!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 9

I hate that Bella had to go through that, but at least she had Edward to rely on and Dr. Kebi to help.  It must have been fate that Rosalie was there to empathize with her! It's almost like the baby wasn't meant to be, though Bella will mourn it anyway.It was great that she and Edward talked it all out, too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 8

Just when she was about to draw a peaceful breath, it looks like Bella is losing this baby! This is sure to change a few things, I hope not in a horrible way! Reading some of the stuff that happened in her short life, it's no wonder Bella feels a hundred years old sometimes!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 7

No wonder Carlisle was furious with Jasper, that was a really bad time to ask those questions of Bella. She's almost come clean about herself, all but the baby. She still believes it would be taken from her so she has to guard it fiercely!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 6

It must be pretty obvious if his family notices how taken with Bella, Edward seems to be! The poor girl is still about half afraid of everyone and everything. I'm really hoping the Cullens can help her learn to trust and find peace in her life!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 5

I know this could get a bit hairier, but just what Bella has let slip, what she's remembered so far is enough to make your heart hurt! This poor kid has never had a break in her life and she sure could use one. If she can just let the Cullens help her, I'm sure she would be happier!

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