Date: 30 Oct 2012 3:33 AM Title: My Turn
Wonderful, I not only liked your character development but the story as a whole was was wonderful. And damn, but possessive Carlisle is sexy as hell. Very well written story, and on a side note I don't supose that you are planning to take your talent into the Aro/Bella world do you? I would love to see more story's with that pairing, and I just have a feeling that you would do a great job, that's not to say I am not a huge Carlisle/Bella fan, because I am, but I do have an obsession with Aro as well as Carlisle lol.
Date: 08 Aug 2012 3:41 AM Title: Presents
I enjoyed that game so much! A great variation on "twenty questions"! I've never seen it done so well, or with such good questions- they really revealed a lot about your Cullens.
Also, my Father in Law was a Dr. He once told us he could write an entire book called "Things I have Pulled out of People's Asses" - and he's always been a doctor in Small Town America!
Date: 21 Jun 2012 8:15 AM Title: From Pain to Pleasure
SIMPLY WONDERFUL!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 1:29 AM Title: Friends
more please. don't make us wait to long.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:16 PM Title: Blood
Hmm. I am def curious! Looking forward to seeing where this story goes!
Date: 31 May 2012 12:08 PM Title: All I Really Want
An interesting turn of events.
Date: 30 May 2012 2:34 PM Title: All I Really Want
Finally, they get Edward out of their lives. LOL
Date: 06 May 2012 3:14 AM Title: Meeting
Some powerful shut at the end.
Date: 05 May 2012 3:13 PM Title: Meeting
This chapter left me speechless! WOW I can't say I've ever read anything like it. Please update soon!!!!
Date: 05 May 2012 1:49 PM Title: Meeting
About time that Carlisle did something punish Edward. Thank you for the update. I am enjoying your story.
Date: 01 Mar 2012 1:21 PM Title: Restraint
You did an amazing job keeping with everyone's personallity in this chapter.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 1:39 PM Title: Restraint
Wow! That was different, emotional ... Need to digest.
Edward by the way is toast.
Date: 29 Feb 2012 7:22 AM Title: Restraint
Edward struggles in two ways. One he wants to control things. Two he wants Bella. He will use the means at hand to get the job done. That is the hole school discussion, his ideas about her life. He has to understand that in a family you have to abide by each person's own wishes for their lives as adults.
Date: 23 Feb 2012 4:41 AM Title: Blood
Well, this is a good beginning to the story! I can't wait to see what happens next! I already want to smack Edward around a bit :)
Date: 21 Feb 2012 2:22 AM Title: Water
That damn Vicky is getting on my nerves now. LOL
Date: 16 Feb 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward wants what he ruined. He also wants what Carlisle has.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
He is dangerous to Bella no matter how you look at it. At least for now anyway.
Date: 16 Feb 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
could we just hand Rose a torch right about now?
Date: 02 Feb 2012 4:19 AM Title: Void
Every one of her parents killed. How awfull. And to have Edward, better know as Chester the Molester to comfort her.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 1:34 AM Title: Void
Damn that was to short! LOL
Author's Response:
Ha! I actually added about 3000 words when I rewrote it. I guess I should have added another couple thousand. Seriously, I understand, I think the same thing when I'm reading someone else's story. When I'm writing my own, I feel like it's really long when it's only a few thousand words.
Date: 21 Jan 2012 11:16 PM Title: Confessions
Edward needs to be whipped with a wet noddle for acting like the baby that he is. I know much can't hurt him, but you get my sentiment!
Date: 14 Jan 2012 1:25 AM Title: Dark
O.M.G., what have Edward done. Carlise is going to rip his dead heart out.
Date: 13 Jan 2012 9:26 PM Title: Dark
Excellent chapter ... I have a strange suspicion that Carlisle is going to go ballistic when Edward confesses.
Hope you are feeling better.
Date: 12 Jan 2012 10:49 AM Title: Dark
Oh Edward-what did you do?
Date: 28 Dec 2011 6:30 PM Title: Pain
THAT WAS DIFFERENT. I LOVE ME SOME EM. lol
Date: 28 Dec 2011 5:20 PM Title: Presents
One of the best chapters and gift exchange I've ever read or heard of!!!!!
Date: 28 Dec 2011 3:41 PM Title: Pain
Excellent ... And a unique gift ...refreshing.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 7:06 AM Title: Presents
What a fantastic round of Q&A. The Qs were well planned and theAs wonderful. I especially loved Carlisle's protection of Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I added the protection at the last minute. It seemed fitting. Glad you liked it.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 1:20 AM Title: Presents
I did like this chapter.... I really did. You did well. Now I am glad you are moving Carlisle and Bella toward each other. Lets get this show on the road!
Edward is 17 in his emotional state and was raised with the silver spoon up his ass.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your continued support of my story. Bella and Carlisle have some more obstacles to overcome, but be patient. I do plan on getting them there.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 1:02 AM Title: Presents
Really unique chapter. I have never heard of this tradition, but it helped to understand the characters so much!
Author's Response:
I actually just made this tradition up. I had some things that the characters needed to say to one another and this seemed like a good way to get all the stuff said. I also had fun coming up with Emmett's questions. Bella's so innocent, but Emmett has hardly any inhibitions. I liked his questions and answers.
Date: 22 Dec 2011 12:45 PM Title: Revelations
good riddence Edward and don't come back until you are off you maniacal jaunt!
Date: 22 Dec 2011 12:43 PM Title: Shattered
I never, ever, EVER that I would ever say THIS about EDWARD CULLEN - but WHAT A PRICK!!!!
(enjoying the story)
Date: 22 Dec 2011 12:39 PM Title: Blood
I really enjoyed this chapter
Date: 22 Dec 2011 3:35 AM Title: Watching
Okay moving right along her. Carlisle and Bella. Edward wants to control Bella. He is attracted to her. He is so full of himself, he can not admit to anything truthfully.
Date: 22 Dec 2011 3:15 AM Title: Revelations
my 2 CENTS... I think that while the ass hole is gone. Bella needs to be changed. Why I don't care what you come up with an accident, illness etc. She and Carlisle fall in love and that alone willl burn Ed up! Bella will be beautiful and no available and that will cork him. HA
Date: 22 Dec 2011 2:57 AM Title: Truth
He probably just dazzled her before he raped her.
Date: 22 Dec 2011 12:27 AM Title: Watching
Really enjoying the story so far!
Date: 17 Dec 2011 8:14 PM Title: Blood
it seems so innocent but i don't think it will be very soon.
Date: 17 Dec 2011 1:56 AM Title: Truth
O.M.G., I hoped he didn't, but I guess he did!
Date: 17 Dec 2011 1:31 AM Title: Liar
Hum, Edward seems to be a big jerk with his family as well.
Date: 17 Dec 2011 12:59 AM Title: Shattered
You are right Edward is a bastard with a capital B. I hope he does redeem himself later in this story.
Author's Response:
Don't want to give anything away, but I'm of the opinion that all people (vampires) are capable of change and redemption. I'm not saying that he won't have a hard time, but don't lose hope for him.
Date: 17 Dec 2011 12:50 AM Title: Blood
This is interesting so far. I do like E&B, but I am starting to like B&C as well.
Date: 16 Dec 2011 8:01 AM Title: Truth
Just finding your story. It's different and I'm intrigued. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it,
Date: 15 Dec 2011 10:43 PM Title: Liar
really nic story so far-corker of a break up letter
Author's Response:
Thank you, and yes, the break-up letter was horrible. I needed it to be much more horrible than original Edward's break-up in New Moon for where I'm going with this story.
Date: 15 Dec 2011 3:13 AM Title: Blood
I think it sounds like a great story! Bella and Carlisle are an interesting pairing! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I like to play around with the characters, but it's purely for my own enjoyment. I posted it in case others might like it as well. I'm glad that you do.