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Reviewer: Miss G Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2019 9:36 AM Title: Tying up Loose Ends

I have t say that this is the most interesting twist to canon that I have ever read and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I’ve been reading fic in this era this summer and this is in my top 3. Keep writing. Enjoy the rest of your summer. ;-)

Reviewer: Mata479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2017 10:43 PM Title: Tying up Loose Ends

I love this story, a bit short but great reading

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 7:03 PM Title: Tying up Loose Ends

awesome story!! ;) i loved your take on the *powers* thanks for completing and posting this on here for us ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Wedding

how come she had to say obey? thats going to bite her on her a**? :)

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 2:55 PM Title: Tying up Loose Ends

Fun and entertaining story. Woulld have like to know more of Marcus and Caius reasons for the assault.

Reviewer: RoseE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 8:10 PM Title: Prologue

Brilliant! Thank you for sharing such a great story!

The plot and storyline were very compelling and the pacing is absolutely excellent. It moved very quickly from beginning to end without getting bogged down or caught up in fluff or filler. 

I really enjoy when writers do interesting things with their characterisations and you managed to make yours a good balance of bravery, strength with the added bonus of the mysterious intrigue of the noblesse.

The fight scenes were VERY well done with the skill of the swordplay and tactical maneuvers easy to picture -- as were your love scenes (of course) *winkwink*. 

The juxtaposition of modern mannerisms and speech alongside the customs, regalia and splendor of old world nobility was very entertaining! But my favorite part (other than their beautiful clothing, vestments and armour), was how you managed to keep the canon characters human while accessing and retaining their supernatural powers. It was completely brilliant how you managed to make it a battle of good vs evil based on a prophecy! 

Thanks again and I hope we will see more of your period pieces and (love) stories <3

~RoseE. x

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 3:30 AM Title: Tying up Loose Ends

sweet ending

TY for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 24

Glad the fight went well.  Would have liked to see why Caius was doing it, or was it just for the power?  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Off to War

Great job.  Glad they are all working together well and guarding each other's backs.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 21 - United under the High King

I was worried Aro was in on it but I guess not.  Glad too.   Hope they will all be ok

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat

hmmm guess the kids are Jane and Alec.   The white haired guy either Caius or Stephan or Vladamir.   Guess we'll see soon.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby

They like those long names huh?   Yey for baby coming.  Happy dance

dance

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed

Cool chapter.  Ah the additional evil to come.   Poor kid.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue

Woo Hoo  Riley et al are Dead!!!!.   Ah Rings of power I'm guessing?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Siege

Great job.   Glad Mikey is in prison.  Should have thrown Diego in there too.   Cant wait for Riley to die!!!   wanker

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Haven Keep

Poor kids being apart. Great plans.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Pregnant

Sad to see it happen but glad they are working together. Sad to see her go though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Conversations over coffee

Smart women. Glad e is growing up.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 12 - In Their Own Rooms

Glad they are doing ok. Hope e proves himself so she doesn't leave.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Honeymoon

Glad they are getting along.  The island house sounds wonderful. hmmmm a ancient poem and hidden treasures.  Dun Dun Dun!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Consummation

Glad he is being good about it.   Mikey wont like that happening huh?  hee hee.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Wedding

Cant blame B for not letting him off the hook so easily.   Skankya needs to be tortured for info.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Willful Misunderstanding

Well at least Paul is dead.  Hope Mike follows soon.  Go B.  Keep on fighting

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Becoming Better Acquainted

Ah so its Mikey at the end of the last chapter and this one.   Glad they are getting along at least.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Beginning of an Understanding

Glad she is putting her foot down.  Paul is going to continue being an issue.   Skankya too.     Hmmm Guessing paul there at the end?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Betrothal

Love Rose in this one.   Ah Jasper is smitten I believe.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Traveling

Sounds like Paul needs to be taken out.  Go Bad Ass B and R!!!.   Glad Carlisle had a talk with him.  Wonder if he'll listen?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Princess

Hope B is ok.  Sounds like she's going to have her work cut out for her.  Hmmm now what is hidden in Haven Keep I wonder that everyone wants it?

Poor B.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Prince

Hope that B makes him behave, esp since she bested him once already.   Stupid Men.   

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 9:31 PM Title: Treaty

oooh Can't wait till B finds out what Daddy did.   Sparks will fly.   Ah E is a manwhore huh?  Lovely.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2013 9:28 PM Title: Prologue

oooh Great start  Go  Bad Ass B

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:26 PM Title: Tying up Loose Ends

Thanks for such a wonderful story. :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:24 PM Title: Tying up Loose Ends

Cool, nice ending!  Glad all worked out for them!

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 1:00 AM Title: Tying up Loose Ends

hey

great chapter

it's sad that the story is over..

but I really liked your story!

good to have a happy ending!

bye

Lil

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great battle!  Can't believe we are done!  Liked it a lot!

Reviewer: elke Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Off to War

Thanks for updating.  I'm enjoying your story.  'Hope you feel better soon!

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Off to War

Great chapter. :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Off to War

Hope you are feeling better!  Thanks for the update

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Off to War

well it won't take them long to have children lol update soon

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Wedding

consequences for actions..

 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Beginning of an Understanding

Better send Tanya to the barnyard if you want this marriage to happen.

Reviewer: elke Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 21 - United under the High King

Good Story!  'Hope you'll have time for a new chapter soon.   Thanks.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 21 - United under the High King

loving the story, i dont want it to end!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2012 11:04 PM Title: Prologue

really like this so far, please know your appreciated for writing

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 21 - United under the High King

wow pretty glamorous!! can't wai to see what is going to happen

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat

okay... intersting  who is the white haired man?  i hope it isn't aro...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby

yeah a baby!! :)  ed was so cute

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed

cool how you integrated their powers into the story very orginal!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue

ed you stud!!!  gee charlie you are the man!!  what's up with the rings?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Siege

yeah they are back together!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Haven Keep

okay so everyone knows of the plan.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Pregnant

okay but she was going to leave him before... i am confused.   she told him she was going to leave him for what he did with tanya.. now it is a plan to get riley?  again this is confusing

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Conversations over coffee

what are the plans?  i am confused about the whole thing.  they have feelings for each other why would she leave him?  can't wait to find out

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2012 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 21 - United under the High King

That was quit the cerimony. 

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 21 - United under the High King

Bella and Edward have accepted a very dangerous and difficult task. Along with Jasper and Alice they have quite the task ahead.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 12 - In Their Own Rooms

oh boy heartbreak to come i feel it...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Honeymoon

Bolt castle is way cool been there many times since i am from new york state.  Cool love that you used it.  so ed is to be the king of all.. can't wait to see that!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Consummation

that would suck ass to have someone listen in the first time.. yuk.. it's not easy being royal.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Wedding

the deed is done.. what will happen.. i can't wait!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Willful Misunderstanding

oh ed you get what you deserve.. bella you are tough as nails!  I love it!!! :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Becoming Better Acquainted

HOT.. i would like to have a friend like rose... ha!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Beginning of an Understanding

oh paul will conspire to get between them..why do i have a feeling ed is gong to be set up into a bad situation and she is going to go off on him.... hummm can't wait to read more

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Betrothal

oh boy let it begin!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Traveling

oh boy bella you are tough tough tough!!  love it... can't wait till you had ed his ass!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Princess

oh there will be fireworks i can't wait.. ed is going to be dressed down by his wife!! :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Prince

oh boy i pity ed she will beat the crap out of him.. can't wait!! :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 6:29 PM Title: Treaty

oh boy wild bella can't wait!!! and a-hole ed!! yeah!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2012 6:25 PM Title: Prologue

love it go kick ass bella!!! happy 100th review!:)

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat

hey

WOW great chapter!

now we know what we r faced with!

that's great!

but it kind of scares me!

bye

Lil

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat

That is eerily too cool.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat

Certain things are becoming clearer while others remain obscure. It is however, a good omen, to have things cleared out a bit.

They all have been sumoned and no one has a good feeling about it. Still they must go... we'll see how things go...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat

So at least they know a little more about what they have to go against.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat

Now, Im curious, does Aro want to get them all together to use these 3 people to destroy Edward, Bella and group or use them to defeat the 3. Hmmm. Im very proud Edward and Bellas relationship is going well and strong, and Edward hasnt screwed up, I did have a little bit of doubt with his history.  Great update!!!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat

good Chapter.....

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby

ahh they have a son

edward so loves his queen

he has proven to be a good man/husband/king

love it

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby

The baby is here, both him and Bella fine. Things have been good for them, but it can't last too long. When this threat arrives they will be ready, they have been working hard for it. 

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby

hey

great!

the Baby is there... sweet!

and it's a boy!

soooo great!

hopefully nothing will happen to Carlisle Charles!

bye

Lil

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby

How wonderful a baby boy cant wait for more

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby

beautiful chapter!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed

hey

great chap!

they all get their rings... great!

I hope they win against the cloud!

bye

Lil

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed

Love the rings the power how cool and by the way after hot sex ya the other rings go to Jasper and Alice lol.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed

i love that they have come together

wow who would have thought edward would be in love and expecting his first child. he has come along way. bella is defintly happyy for him

love it

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed

Another great chapter!  I am so glad things are working out for our royal couple

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed

It seems they all won't be enjoying a long period of peace. They need to help those in need, even if they are far. 

The cloud seems to take people and life away from a place, does it move? If so, where is it going now and of course, who is behind it?

 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue

Did I miss something? When did they get the rings?

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2011 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue

Wow, you have added so much since I read last! 

Loving it.  I hope this not the end! 

Fiorella

Reviewer: sandrabr Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2011 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue

wasn't Paul already dead ?

 

(...)

Our priority was to protect the Princess so with only ten men with me, I was forced to let them go. Oh, and Lord Paul was there. I killed him.

 

Seth said this, after ?Bella was rescued, after the episode with Tanya

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue

Loved this chapter!  can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue

Good Chapter....

Reviewer: lilysmily Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue

hey

great chpter!

I really liked it!

Edward and BElla really love each other...

but the bodyguard is kind of creepy...

bye

Lil

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue

It was an impressive battle. And the journey to it as well. Bella is a just and fair queen. She offered the enemy a chance to leave, some took it, others didn't. She was sure of herself and the man next to her oly strenghten her. I'm guessing it was asurprise to everyone when Edward's presence was revealed.
Now it's time for more revelations...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue

Love the man in the mask ;)   Thank god Riley is gone.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue

love the story

i love that edward was bella's bodyguard. he truly loves his wife. i am glad he was able to settle his ways and know he has a good women. she will truly rule with him and they will be sucessful. she is good and people are loyal to her. she deserves her people.

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue

Soo glad to see an update today!!  Finished reading Chapter 17 earlier this morning and was thrilled to see 18.  Thank you!!

Reviewer: nananaiis Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Siege

i love medieval stories so thanks it's beautiful!

Reviewer: mldewolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 12 - In Their Own Rooms

Just so you know, I gave you a 9 rating on the last chapter by accident.  I meant to hit 10.  Love this story!!!  Merry Christmas!!

Reviewer: LanaLee1248 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Siege

If I had away to keep this book after it was done, I would. It is wonderful, well written and has an incredooble plot. Thanks for writing and updating daily.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2011 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Siege

I'm so anxious right now. My stomach is flip-flopping.

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