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Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 11

Gah, so amazing :)

Reviewer: kittylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 14

Always love a controlling Edward.  Mmmmm...I  love your little drabble story and I look forward to your updates.  Yes, please punish me Edward.

Reviewer: kmk Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 14

Green

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

You are soooo naughty to tease us like this! Love it.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oooo, I hope so.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

Oh please be good ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 10

look mom no hands lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 9

breath play that is freaky

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 8

at least he helps her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

to never look in his eyes

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh snap :)  I already imagine myself as Bella when reading a story, but even more so now :)

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 9

Wow, how you do that???

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 8

Awe, I hope so.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh wow :)

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

oooo things are heating up

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh wow...loved it!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 7

So many treats for her.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow, that was amazing :)

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

Damn, he still has his clothes on ... that was a wasted look!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 6

I like that she can ask questions!  I wiah I could look at his body too!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loving it!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

Very nice!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 3

That was an intense inspection ... never heard of the board unless it was to be used as a paddle!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 2

I thought she would ask something else :) !

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

My favorite Edward is always a "Master"!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 6

very interesting, and definitely a tease.

Reviewer: edwardbabymomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 3

great chapter

Reviewer: edwardbabymomma Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 6

Amazing :)  Maybe after you finish the one scene/drabble, you can make it longer :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

I say drabble away I am loving it of course I want more but isnt that the idea???

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 5

quiet time as good as long as he makes her see stars

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

never been into the nipple twisting oh pain lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

He is a tough master

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 5

great chapter

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

good job

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very good first chapter!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 5

Gah!  So amazing!  So, do you have an age set for Master and pet?



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for loving this. I don't have a set age for them as of now because their ages aren't relevant at this moment. The current plan I have for this is to only go through one entire scene, but I may go further depending on how well it's received. I already have 27 chapters done for it and am working on more right now.

Reviewer: kittylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

Hot damn.  Love BDSM fics. Thank you!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 4

She is having fun

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh my gosh!  So amazing :)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

Gah! Less than 100 words and I want more :D

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow...

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

Gah, this sounds great so far :)

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

I know this is a drabble, but even at that it's short.

And, I love most of your writing.



Author's Response:

It seems short, but a true drabble, which I am writing, is 100 word chapters. There are a lot of stories being posted calling themselves drabbles, but they are not. If the story has 1,000+ word chapters, it's not a drabble but a full length story that the author is just trying to call a drabble.

Here is the definition of a drabble.

A drabble is an extremely short work of fiction of exactly one hundred words in length, although the term is often erroneously used to indicate a short story of fewer than 1000 words.The purpose of the drabble is brevity, testing the author's ability to express interesting and meaningful ideas in an extremely confined space.

 

There will be 1-2 updates a day if that makes it easier, but if you think it's too short to read as it's going on I understand. Drabbles are not for everyone.

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh my. 

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

Still the anticipation. lol

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh the anticipation. 

Reviewer: vamp_luvor Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

OFF TO A GREAT START !

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 2

He demands perfection??

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds fun

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