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Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 39

OH SNAP!  What is that?!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 38

Oh snap...once?!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 37

I need pleasure now, Master!! Touch me now!

Sorry for the lack of reviews, I got behind and had to rush through 20 to 37 to catch up. Please don't punish me.  =)  Kelly

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 37

waiting for pleasure ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 37

Oh wow...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 36

let her moan

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 36

Oh wow...YAY for pleasure ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2011 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 35

about time for pleasure she is such a good girl.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2011 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 35

wOW, I have to say I'mglad I was not on the receiving end of that punishment, but nonetheless this is HOT!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 35

OH yeah :D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 34

she is one tough girl

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 34

Oh wow...

Reviewer: BE1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2011 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 33

How long does he leave her suspended like that.  Won't that start to really hurt the joints after awhile??  That seems a bit much of a punishment for the slightest of noises...oh well..

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2011 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 33

get it over and move to pleasure

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2011 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 33

Wow, that was amazing!  Please let this girl become Master's sweet pet again :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 32

rubber flogger dont sound like no fun at all

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 31

That shit sounds painful

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 32

Oh wow...

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 31

Gah, that was great!  Is Master going to smack this girl's pussy too?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 30

What could be the punishment???

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 29

One little moan and now she gets punished wow

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 30

OH SNAP!  Cannot wait to see the punishment ;)

Reviewer: kittylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bella's busted now.  Somehow I think that's what they were both striving for....haha

Hope you update with a couple more chapters before bedtime tonight.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 29

Oh wow...

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 28

What is Master going to do?  She is already tied up and suspended.  I think that thigh restraints are overkill.  My personal opinion.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 28

Slow building goodness.......

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 28

she is very needy

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 28

Gah Master, so amazing :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 27

he has all control

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 27

Oh wow...GREEN Master, oh so green ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 26

Oh wow...please Master ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 26

no stretch bummer

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 25

she better hurry up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 24

She is going to be all tied up

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 23

Slow very slow it better be good lol

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 25

Oh snap ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 24

Wow, that was amazing :)

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 23

HOT!!!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 23

Gah, that was amazing :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 22

its all good

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 22

And I want more...  22 chapters of teasing and you have me hooked!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 22

Oh gah, so teasing...more Master, please?!

Reviewer: kittylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 21

I love this story and it's perfect!  What do readers think BDSM is?  I get so frustrated with righteous people who want to complain about the kinky stories but it doesn't seem to stop them from reading.  If you don't like this kind of story - then don't read it folks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 10

Exciting. What is he going to do with the belt!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

I would NOT be into breath play. Scary

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 8

I would love to be eye level with his cock.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

I would love to under dress Master Edward. lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

She even has to ask to look at his body. I can understand not looking him in the eyes but to no be able to look at his body. Wow!!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

What's so great about this story is, it doesn't give away so much, it makes you use your imagination!!!   HOT!!!

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 21

**swoon** he can tie me up any day. Love how you're workin' it so far

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 5

I am enjoying reading the little snips of this story. But I will have to say that it is a little had to leave a in depth review. lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 4

OK, so she can talk as long as she says Master may I. Thus from the title.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

WOW!!!! A pre-measured board to make sure her knees are so far apart. Is he OCD much. lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

A little bit at a time.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Short and sweet

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

Gah, so amazing :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 21

Sounds like master knows what he is doing and she loves it.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 20

You're killing me here, Master...

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 19

;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh yes Master, tie me up!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 17

Oooo, I can't wait to see what tool or toy Master will use next.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh hell yeah...  :P

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 15

Master may I moan, please...

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 14

Your Master is a little more strict than some I've run across, not that that's bad in any way.  ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 13

Anything you say, Master...

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

Ready, Master...

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 11

Ouch, and not in a good way. I think I'd learn my lesson too.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

*wipes drool from chin*  That is sexy...    ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 9

;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 8

This is so fun! I love the slow, sensual undressing of Master.  =)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 7

How hard it would be to not look into her Master's eyes, especially when she can look anywhere else. I wonder if she's allowed to look at his lips.  =)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 6

I want to look at her Master too!  ;)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 5

=)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

=)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 20

She love to be tied up??

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 20

Oh wow...loved it :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 20

I'm enjoying your drabble... I look forward to more.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

at least she has limits

Reviewer: kittylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh please a few more today.  I am dying waiting to see what Master does with the ropes.  You have me absolutely hooked on this story.  This is the first one I check each day for updates. 

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 19

I love this fic, it leaves you "sitting on the edge of you seat" wanting more. I just have one thing Im wondering, are they just dom and sub or do they have a relationship outside D/s???

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh wow...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 18

yes tie me up ;)

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 17

yummmm.....

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 18

Gah, that was amazing :)  Loved it!  

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 17

OH gah, can I be Master's sweet pet?!  Please?!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 16

Gah Master...so hot!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 15

Gah Master ;)  So amazing :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 17

more fun to cum

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 16

she makes him very happy

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 15

Being a good pet.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

Spanking the pussy a new pass time lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

he says no alot :( lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 13

at least she likes it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 12

I hope she is ready

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

Here we go!  =)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

What else does her master desire? Can't wait to find out.  =)   Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love drabbles, and this will be my first BDSM drabble. I can't wait to see what makes your characters tick.  =)   Kelly

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 14

Oh my gosh...I don't know if I could handle no moving, cumming or sounds...maybe a punishment is already at hand ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 13

Gah!  Cannot wait to read the next one ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh yeah!  I am ready ;)

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