Date: 30 Dec 2011 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 69
Gah, so green! I think I am almost ruined!
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 69
Bella sure bounced back quickly. It proves that she is a very seasoned sub. I wonder what Master is going to do next?
Date: 30 Dec 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 69
How much more can she take???
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 68
oh my my I think I need a cold shower !
Date: 29 Dec 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 68
I'm feeling a little limp myself! Wow!
Date: 29 Dec 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 68
Phew I'm exhausted after that! good though!
Date: 29 Dec 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 68
wow she has no fluid let in her wow
Date: 29 Dec 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 67
no ? who she belongs to and who belongs to her
Date: 29 Dec 2011 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 66
again and again what a good day lol
Date: 29 Dec 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 65
Master is very good makes her very happy
Date: 29 Dec 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 68
Oh gah, Master, YES!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 68
That kind of play is freaking fantastic. I hope that Master has of air her too out. I am sure he needs some release himself. I know that he already had oral release, but now he needs an in the body release (I did not want to go graphic on the description).
Date: 29 Dec 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 64
again and again ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 66
I wonder what is keeping them out of the playroom? Children perhaps?
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
woo hoo belt !
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 63
I can feel the orgasm coming on...
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 62
HOT, as always. Not happy to know that this story is coming to an end....but with 30 chapters to look forward to, its ok!!! I hope a lot of questions are answered, that I can hardly wait for!!!
Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 61
Never understood breath play...but to each his/her own.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 61
I am afraid of air play. I trust my Master, but with my being a science major, I just know too much about the human body. Especially, the hyoid bone in the throat.
Author's Response:
I was afraid of breath pla too, once upon a time, but I had one boyfriend who actually got me to enjoy it. I would never let him use anything too harsh, mainly shirts, towels, or the such, or his hand, and I always had control of the situation and when he needed to let go. Plus, I would only let him near my collar bone area. I know it's not for everyone. I will tell you Master is meticulous when it comes to taking care of his sweet pet and won't let anything befall her.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 60
Arrgggrrggghhh!!! This story is Awesome!! I am loving it but the chapters need to be longer cause i'm a BDSM Cullen whore and I could read Master May I for days at a time! Just reading about Edward being dominant drives me crazy! sooooo Master May we have more??
Date: 26 Dec 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 60
Oh what a relief it is lol
Date: 26 Dec 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 59
I too am disappointed that Christmas is over...also watched "A Christmas Story" on and off all day long.
Date: 26 Dec 2011 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 59
let this girl cum before she explodes lol
Date: 26 Dec 2011 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 57
A groan just slipped from my lips too!
Date: 26 Dec 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 58
Merry Christmas thank you for the present each post is a present.
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
THUD!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
unfffffffffff Gawd damn this is cruel!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
Okay I admit this shit is gettin me hot!! unfffff!
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
dear god seeing stars......
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh GAWD! THIS IS GOING TO KILL ME!
Author's Response:
YOU CAVED!!!!!!!!!!! OMG!!! You are going to LOVE IT! And I post a minimum of 2 chapters a day so you'll get a little Master all the time!
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
snickers...sorry Bella from what I hear its like seventy four chapters later....but I hope I am wrong....gigglesnorts....I effin love this you are the worlds biggest TEASE EVER!
lol
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Damn that was short.....lol...okay gotcha Drabble.....huh....interesting...
Date: 26 Dec 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 58
Yes Master! I watched at least 3-4 hours of A Christmas Story...LOVE IT :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 57
Hmmmm....I think I want a Master Edward for Xmas!!!
Date: 25 Dec 2011 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 57
about time she gets to make some noise
Date: 25 Dec 2011 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 56
he is such a tease
Date: 25 Dec 2011 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 57
Oh yeah! Finally!
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2011 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 57
Master Edward is so deliciously cruel and tauntingly sexy.
Merry Christmas to you, too!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Dec 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 56
My kinda story...YUM!
Date: 24 Dec 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 56
Oh wow...drip...drip...drip!
Date: 24 Dec 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 55
Oh gah, Master ;)
Date: 24 Dec 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 55
Thanks for the update. You should be enjoying your holiday, not writing more for all of us 'greedy' reading sluts.
But, thanks for writing, and happy holidays. Have to go cook now.
Date: 24 Dec 2011 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 55
rabbit fur is nice
Date: 24 Dec 2011 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 55
Thank you, Master, may I have another?
Date: 24 Dec 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 54
How much can she take before losing her mind??
Date: 24 Dec 2011 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 53
She likes to be tied up
Date: 24 Dec 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 52
She knows what he likes :)
Date: 24 Dec 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 54
OH GAH Master...
Date: 24 Dec 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 54
yea ok, i am wet
Date: 24 Dec 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 53
This is a great story and an amazing way to test and perfect your skills as a writer. I am most impressed with all you are able to convey in such a small amount of words. I'm sorry haven't reviewed as I've gone, but its so easy to click 'next' and keep going.
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 53
As always.....anxiously awaiting next update!!!! This story is sooooooo good!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Dec 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 53
Oh wow, that was amazing :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 53
I wonder, I wonder how Master will work Sweet pet over. ;)
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 52
So encouraging.
Date: 23 Dec 2011 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 48
he makes her happy
Date: 23 Dec 2011 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 52
Gah, so amazing :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 51
This is getting hot!
Date: 23 Dec 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 51
Oh gah, Master ;)
Date: 23 Dec 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 50
Gah, Master, so amazing :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 50
Sounds fun Master Edward! This is so real life like. Bravo! ;)
Date: 22 Dec 2011 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 49
yes more please !!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2011 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 49
She is a true sub. She only wants to please her Master!
Date: 22 Dec 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 48
OH gah, that was amazing! Green!
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 48
Well Master definitely likes to work his sweet pet. Especially, if he has to carry her to her room for proper aftercare. I wonder if she falls asleep, too?
Date: 22 Dec 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 47
Ahhh, there is nothing better than a massage after being suspended.
Date: 22 Dec 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 47
OH YES MASTER...MORE!
Date: 21 Dec 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 46
she gets to thank him now ;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 47
Wow!!! Very, very HOT!!!
Date: 21 Dec 2011 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 45
ok she swallowed already lol
Date: 21 Dec 2011 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 44
she likes to swallow what a good girl for her master.
Date: 20 Dec 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 43
More pleasure I like it ;)
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 42
Uh oh...she only got to cum once..and now he's gonna fuck her...I hope she can deal!!!!
Date: 19 Dec 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 42
Oh wow...please...more! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 42
Getting hotter and hotter.
Date: 19 Dec 2011 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 41
Thank goodness for that, I thought she might explode!
Date: 19 Dec 2011 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 41
Yes she gets to cum ok so he is not so evil lol
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2011 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 40
Bella has to be a 24/7 sub because I remember her saying in chapter seven, "I allow my eyes to rake over Master's body, but never look upon his eyes. I know they are a vivid green from our initial interview process, but Master does not allow me to look him directly in the eye, not even in public."
It is such a shame really. Master is so very good looking with the most spectacular green eyes. I really feel for Bella. I would be in trouble all the time because I could not handle looking him in the eye. I have no problem when in the playroom or at the club, but to never look into my Master's eyes, would kill me. I am so very lucky to be with a man that never wants or wanted a 24/7 agreement.
Author's Response:
With your reply, I am discerning that you are in a D/s relationship. If so, am I doing well in relaying this story? I'm not, nor have I ever been, in a D/s relationship but it is always something that has fascinated me. I know in the fandom there seems to be a flood of olderdomward stories where he ends up very lenient on Bella because she's training or because he loves her so much where he's never felt that for a sub before. Those bother me because, from my knowledge and research, a real true dom wouldn't take it easy on their sub just because of love. Training, yes, to a degree, but if they really want to be a dom then they are that way whether or not they love the person.
And as for your theory, I want to tell you whether you are right or wrong, but I can't! You will find out for sure at the end of this story!
Date: 19 Dec 2011 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 40
he is not nice shutting that off she was so close
Date: 19 Dec 2011 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 38
shit she is ready to cum right now
Date: 19 Dec 2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 40
Oh wow...amazing :)