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Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 93

I absolutely love all of this!! Great story! ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1

This should be fun!! ;)

Reviewer: Rima2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 93

GREAT STORY.....EROTIC, AROUSING AND SATISFYING!

iF YOU DON'T GET TURNED ON BY THIS STORY...YOU'RE NOT ALIVE AND BREATHING!

Reviewer: Rima2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 46

You need to correct this sentence, you have a url after the first 2 words.

When Master fihttps://login.fanfiction.net/docs/edit.php?docid=25559749nally pulls his slowly softening cock from my mouth, his breathing has slowed back down and he's petting my head, smoothing my hair back.

This is the first drabble I have read that conforms to 100 word chapters...it is very good and definitely arousing. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters you have written so far.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved it

Reviewer: bmary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 1

enjoyed this alot one of the best ive read others ive read were just plain awful but yours is well thought out and well written you have talent hope you keep using it

Reviewer: bmary Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 93

i enjoyed the story but id wish someone would write one where bella doesnt agree or like everything it would be a bit more realistic

Reviewer: Dil9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2012 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 93

Lovely story

Reviewer: gumibear26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 93

Oh wow, that was fantastic!  I'm really glad I got to read it after it was completed.  I would not make it as a patient submissive; I'm more of an instant gratification kind of girl.  What a surprise to find out that this was the beginning of their honeymoon!

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 93

awesome little drabble thanks :)

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 92

love it

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 91

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 90

awesome love it

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 89

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 88

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 87

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 86

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 85

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 84

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 83

hot

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 82

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 81

love it

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 80

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 79

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 78

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 77

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 76

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 75

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 74

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 73

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 72

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 71

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 70

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 69

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 68

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 67

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 66

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 65

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 64

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 63

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 62

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 61

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 60

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 59

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 58

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 57

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 56

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 55

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 54

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 53

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 52

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 51

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 50

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 49

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 48

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 47

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 46

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 45

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 44

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 43

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 42

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 41

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 40

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 39

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 38

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 37

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 36

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 35

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 34

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 33

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 32

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 31

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 30

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 29

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 28

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 26

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 3

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