Date: 19 Mar 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 19 Mar 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 17
uh oh he baby is coming..what will it be????update soon
Date: 18 Mar 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
yes that was the way of it when babies were born in that time. So many mistakes in not surrounding a woman with her husband and perhaps anothe relative that she wishes.
Date: 18 Mar 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
Baloney! Edward needs to get into that room with Carlisle near by! Something is afoot and it's not good!
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 17
Shit, they are going to do something with the child, or they could do away with Isabella during the birth. Stealing the child and saying that it was dead. I think that if the Queen orders her husband to be present for the birth then no one would question her for her word is above all others.
I want to know what Aro and his crew were talking about with all the different nobles. Why is Edward not getting to the bottom of this? He is concerned, but he brushes it under the carpet. He needs to be vigilant not passive.
Date: 11 Mar 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am still nervous about Edward's "plan" and his uncles.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2012 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
I wonder what the brothers have in store for their nephew?
I really hope that nothing happens to Isabella before, during, and after her pregnancy.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
Concerned.....very concerned.
From the tease, it seems like you're moving along the timeline....good!
They need to talk soon....I fear for all of their lives.
Date: 10 Mar 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
his uncles are going to try and go after bella and the baby!update soon
Date: 10 Mar 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
i think they are up to no good ... looking forward to more
Date: 09 Mar 2012 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 15
Until we meet again... great story
Date: 09 Mar 2012 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
so if he can not talk he can not reveal Aro, Caius and Marcus's part in this.
Date: 09 Mar 2012 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
victoria? How can that be good?
Date: 09 Mar 2012 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
Many things about Edward seem good. I am still concerned with his "PLAN" and his uncles.
Date: 09 Mar 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
I still don't trust Edward.
Date: 09 Mar 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is busy Bedding the help.
Edward was right there to lead her out. Hm.. I am not sure I trust him at all.
Date: 09 Mar 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nobel? He sounds like a rake.
Date: 07 Mar 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 15
so now we have billy being in the wheel chair....wow poor bella so much guilt and billy had it right the volturi are trying to take her out and edward knows it...update soon
Date: 06 Mar 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
looking forward to more
Date: 05 Mar 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
Good Chapter....
Date: 05 Mar 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
I can feel the bumps a coming. Hang on tight, right?
Nice chapter
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
I wonder if it really was an accident?
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2012 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
Billy and Jacob....While their intentions are to expose Edward as a fraud and to probably scure Jacob's hand with Bella after Edward is gone, I do not want to see Edward hurt Bella, but at least someone is looking out for the welfare of the Queen even if it is for personal gain.
Damn, I can't believe the way I am thinking at this moment.
Author's Response:
They're acting dangerously, because the best way to protect her is staying in her good graces, something you can't do from the dog house...Edward is true to her even if he's ill advised. Here is this week's tease:
Various members of the Court were present as Emmett of Cullen knelt before the Queen as a man of no lands or title and rose as the Count of Eastbury. Once the ceremony is complete, Emmett entered the council meeting to lay out his plan. Peerages in the south held nothing more than small farms meant to sustain the family living there would be given the same aid they had been. Meanwhile, the manor houses would be aided in better running of the land they set to farming so that they could hope to feed their people better. Any excess of a particular type of crop would be sent on to the capital for the distribution throughout the country and any peerage that had a surplus, as the northern lands usually did, would be properly compensated.
With the better techniques outlined for distribution to those who ran larger farms and the plan for the parceling off of the food produced, the Count planned to depart for his new county the following morn so that he might set up house and begin to learn about the mines which were his peerage’s main contribution to the country’s economy.
Date: 25 Feb 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow there is a bunch of sneaky people out to get someone.
Author's Response:
They are very sneaky, and it will not end well for anyone. Here's the teaser:
Various members of the Court were present as Emmett of Cullen knelt before the Queen as a man of no lands or title and rose as the Count of Eastbury. Once the ceremony is complete, Emmett entered the council meeting to lay out his plan. Peerages in the south held nothing more than small farms meant to sustain the family living there would be given the same aid they had been. Meanwhile, the manor houses would be aided in better running of the land they set to farming so that they could hope to feed their people better. Any excess of a particular type of crop would be sent on to the capital for the distribution throughout the country and any peerage that had a surplus, as the northern lands usually did, would be properly compensated.
With the better techniques outlined for distribution to those who ran larger farms and the plan for the parceling off of the food produced, the Count planned to depart for his new county the following morn so that he might set up house and begin to learn about the mines which were his peerage’s main contribution to the country’s economy.
Date: 25 Feb 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 14
I'm scared!! The Blacks have Bella's back but to harm the "weed", whom I'm assuming is Edward is not right. Same goes for the others.
Hope Edward comes clean to Isabella. Knowledge is power and if they have any hope of surviving...in all ways...they must be 100% honest & open with each other. Lack of trust is the first brek in the crumbling of a marriage & a monarchy.
Author's Response:
You're very right, but that is a lesson he will unfortunately learn the hard way...until tomorrow, here's your tease:
Various members of the Court were present as Emmett of Cullen knelt before the Queen as a man of no lands or title and rose as the Count of Eastbury. Once the ceremony is complete, Emmett entered the council meeting to lay out his plan. Peerages in the south held nothing more than small farms meant to sustain the family living there would be given the same aid they had been. Meanwhile, the manor houses would be aided in better running of the land they set to farming so that they could hope to feed their people better. Any excess of a particular type of crop would be sent on to the capital for the distribution throughout the country and any peerage that had a surplus, as the northern lands usually did, would be properly compensated.
With the better techniques outlined for distribution to those who ran larger farms and the plan for the parceling off of the food produced, the Count planned to depart for his new county the following morn so that he might set up house and begin to learn about the mines which were his peerage’s main contribution to the country’s economy.
Date: 25 Feb 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
lets just hope edward doesn't get caught in the cross fire between billy and the volturi.update soon
Author's Response:
Edward is unfortunately stuck in the crosshairs, and will stay there for a while...here's the tease:
Various members of the Court were present as Emmett of Cullen knelt before the Queen as a man of no lands or title and rose as the Count of Eastbury. Once the ceremony is complete, Emmett entered the council meeting to lay out his plan. Peerages in the south held nothing more than small farms meant to sustain the family living there would be given the same aid they had been. Meanwhile, the manor houses would be aided in better running of the land they set to farming so that they could hope to feed their people better. Any excess of a particular type of crop would be sent on to the capital for the distribution throughout the country and any peerage that had a surplus, as the northern lands usually did, would be properly compensated.
With the better techniques outlined for distribution to those who ran larger farms and the plan for the parceling off of the food produced, the Count planned to depart for his new county the following morn so that he might set up house and begin to learn about the mines which were his peerage’s main contribution to the country’s economy.
Date: 25 Feb 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
Good Chapter......
Author's Response:
Various members of the Court were present as Emmett of Cullen knelt before the Queen as a man of no lands or title and rose as the Count of Eastbury. Once the ceremony is complete, Emmett entered the council meeting to lay out his plan. Peerages in the south held nothing more than small farms meant to sustain the family living there would be given the same aid they had been. Meanwhile, the manor houses would be aided in better running of the land they set to farming so that they could hope to feed their people better. Any excess of a particular type of crop would be sent on to the capital for the distribution throughout the country and any peerage that had a surplus, as the northern lands usually did, would be properly compensated.
With the better techniques outlined for distribution to those who ran larger farms and the plan for the parceling off of the food produced, the Count planned to depart for his new county the following morn so that he might set up house and begin to learn about the mines which were his peerage’s main contribution to the country’s economy.
Date: 25 Feb 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 14
looking forward to mroe
Author's Response:
Various members of the Court were present as Emmett of Cullen knelt before the Queen as a man of no lands or title and rose as the Count of Eastbury. Once the ceremony is complete, Emmett entered the council meeting to lay out his plan. Peerages in the south held nothing more than small farms meant to sustain the family living there would be given the same aid they had been. Meanwhile, the manor houses would be aided in better running of the land they set to farming so that they could hope to feed their people better. Any excess of a particular type of crop would be sent on to the capital for the distribution throughout the country and any peerage that had a surplus, as the northern lands usually did, would be properly compensated.
With the better techniques outlined for distribution to those who ran larger farms and the plan for the parceling off of the food produced, the Count planned to depart for his new county the following morn so that he might set up house and begin to learn about the mines which were his peerage’s main contribution to the country’s economy.
Date: 24 Feb 2012 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 13
Edward must know that it is his uncle that set it up how will her react??? They want to make sure that Stephen cant tell who told him to do it.
Author's Response:
He knows his uncles shut up Stefan, but actually Stefan was just a big mouth, the Baron's didn't want him talking at any point...he almost ruined everything for them. Here's the tease:
As the final touches were put on the holiday decorations adorning every surface in the castle, the keening wails of the former Count of Eastbury could be heard in every inch of the Tower and the dungeons below. His fate was quickly sealed by the evidence against him and his silence when asked any type of questions by the Duke of Blacklake, who was asked to preside over the matter by the Queen.
His execution was stayed until the New Year, giving Edward a chance to get his answers on one evening while his wife was in council. Slipping into the Tower, he entered Stefan’s cell, looming over the man’s sleeping form. Putting a hand over his mouth, Edward shook him awake, seeing at once the terror in his eyes.
Date: 20 Feb 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 13
:)
Author's Response:
As the final touches were put on the holiday decorations adorning every surface in the castle, the keening wails of the former Count of Eastbury could be heard in every inch of the Tower and the dungeons below. His fate was quickly sealed by the evidence against him and his silence when asked any type of questions by the Duke of Blacklake, who was asked to preside over the matter by the Queen
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His execution was stayed until the New Year, giving Edward a chance to get his answers on one evening while his wife was in council. Slipping into the Tower, he entered Stefan’s cell, looming over the man’s sleeping form. Putting a hand over his mouth, Edward shook him awake, seeing at once the terror in his eyes.
Date: 20 Feb 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
As the final touches were put on the holiday decorations adorning every surface in the castle, the keening wails of the former Count of Eastbury could be heard in every inch of the Tower and the dungeons below. His fate was quickly sealed by the evidence against him and his silence when asked any type of questions by the Duke of Blacklake, who was asked to preside over the matter by the Queen.
His execution was stayed until the New Year, giving Edward a chance to get his answers on one evening while his wife was in council. Slipping into the Tower, he entered Stefan’s cell, looming over the man’s sleeping form. Putting a hand over his mouth, Edward shook him awake, seeing at once the terror in his eyes.
Date: 20 Feb 2012 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
okay didn't see this coming up in this chapter. Can't wait for the next one.....
Author's Response:
Yeah, needed a curveball to throw off not only the readers, but the characters!
As the final touches were put on the holiday decorations adorning every surface in the castle, the keening wails of the former Count of Eastbury could be heard in every inch of the Tower and the dungeons below. His fate was quickly sealed by the evidence against him and his silence when asked any type of questions by the Duke of Blacklake, who was asked to preside over the matter by the Queen.
His execution was stayed until the New Year, giving Edward a chance to get his answers on one evening while his wife was in council. Slipping into the Tower, he entered Stefan’s cell, looming over the man’s sleeping form. Putting a hand over his mouth, Edward shook him awake, seeing at once the terror in his eyes.
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
I knew that James was a plant by Aro!!! I called it chapters ago.
As to whom they found in the cabin, I am not sure, yet.
Author's Response:
Yes you did...most people didn't suspect him until his wife was revealed. Though the man in the cabin is the likely suspect...as the tease shows.
As the final touches were put on the holiday decorations adorning every surface in the castle, the keening wails of the former Count of Eastbury could be heard in every inch of the Tower and the dungeons below. His fate was quickly sealed by the evidence against him and his silence when asked any type of questions by the Duke of Blacklake, who was asked to preside over the matter by the Queen.
His execution was stayed until the New Year, giving Edward a chance to get his answers on one evening while his wife was in council. Slipping into the Tower, he entered Stefan’s cell, looming over the man’s sleeping form. Putting a hand over his mouth, Edward shook him awake, seeing at once the terror in his eyes.
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2012 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
I fear for Edward. He will be unfairly implicated. He needs to come clean to his queen & hope she believes him and will sand by him.
Author's Response:
If he went to her he could save them all a ton of heartache, but alas he's too young and headstrong to believe he can't protect her. Here's the teaser:
As the final touches were put on the holiday decorations adorning every surface in the castle, the keening wails of the former Count of Eastbury could be heard in every inch of the Tower and the dungeons below. His fate was quickly sealed by the evidence against him and his silence when asked any type of questions by the Duke of Blacklake, who was asked to preside over the matter by the Queen.
His execution was stayed until the New Year, giving Edward a chance to get his answers on one evening while his wife was in council. Slipping into the Tower, he entered Stefan’s cell, looming over the man’s sleeping form. Putting a hand over his mouth, Edward shook him awake, seeing at once the terror in his eyes.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
As the final touches were put on the holiday decorations adorning every surface in the castle, the keening wails of the former Count of Eastbury could be heard in every inch of the Tower and the dungeons below. His fate was quickly sealed by the evidence against him and his silence when asked any type of questions by the Duke of Blacklake, who was asked to preside over the matter by the Queen.
His execution was stayed until the New Year, giving Edward a chance to get his answers on one evening while his wife was in council. Slipping into the Tower, he entered Stefan’s cell, looming over the man’s sleeping form. Putting a hand over his mouth, Edward shook him awake, seeing at once the terror in his eyes.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
I feel like Stefan was a decoy, a way of warning to edward maybe?knew you couldn't trust james...update soon
Author's Response:
You're getting better and better with your guesses, but he wasn't a decoy, just a drunk man. Here's the teaser:
As the final touches were put on the holiday decorations adorning every surface in the castle, the keening wails of the former Count of Eastbury could be heard in every inch of the Tower and the dungeons below. His fate was quickly sealed by the evidence against him and his silence when asked any type of questions by the Duke of Blacklake, who was asked to preside over the matter by the Queen.
His execution was stayed until the New Year, giving Edward a chance to get his answers on one evening while his wife was in council. Slipping into the Tower, he entered Stefan’s cell, looming over the man’s sleeping form. Putting a hand over his mouth, Edward shook him awake, seeing at once the terror in his eyes.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 12
Lots of things going on I just want Aro to die
Author's Response:
Everyone wants Aro to die, especially my beta...she wants me to write the last few chapters now so she can read the demise...
Here's the tease:
The spirit of the festival flowed nicely into the Christmas preparations, which had Lady Alice running around trying to get everything underway. Isabella had informed her that the Christmas Eve feast would be when they revealed her pregnancy to the nobility and that gave Alice another reason to make it spectacular.
Going out into the city, Alice had children making dried berry garlands to be wrapped around fresh greens, the butchers and anglers were being pushed to provide the best they could for the feast. Every detail was being discussed with the King and Queen, who were happy to see that she was being creative in not only how she was involving those who lived in the capital, but also her use of the funds she had.
As December slowly started to fade, the choices of the nobles about where they would spend the holidays were starting to become known. Younger nobles like Michael of Newton and Tyler of Crowley would be staying at Court because the women they were hoping to marry in the New Year were still in the service of the Queen.
Meanwhile, the Barons were some of the first to make the trip home, but not before taking the leave of their Monarchs.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
Aro is Evil Evil I tell you! lol
Date: 12 Feb 2012 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
The spirit of the festival flowed nicely into the Christmas preparations, which had Lady Alice running around trying to get everything underway. Isabella had informed her that the Christmas Eve feast would be when they revealed her pregnancy to the nobility and that gave Alice another reason to make it spectacular.
Going out into the city, Alice had children making dried berry garlands to be wrapped around fresh greens, the butchers and anglers were being pushed to provide the best they could for the feast. Every detail was being discussed with the King and Queen, who were happy to see that she was being creative in not only how she was involving those who lived in the capital, but also her use of the funds she had.
As December slowly started to fade, the choices of the nobles about where they would spend the holidays were starting to become known. Younger nobles like Michael of Newton and Tyler of Crowley would be staying at Court because the women they were hoping to marry in the New Year were still in the service of the Queen.
Meanwhile, the Barons were some of the first to make the trip home, but not before taking the leave of their Monarchs.
Date: 12 Feb 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
loved it looking forward to the next chatper
Author's Response:
The spirit of the festival flowed nicely into the Christmas preparations, which had Lady Alice running around trying to get everything underway. Isabella had informed her that the Christmas Eve feast would be when they revealed her pregnancy to the nobility and that gave Alice another reason to make it spectacular.
Going out into the city, Alice had children making dried berry garlands to be wrapped around fresh greens, the butchers and anglers were being pushed to provide the best they could for the feast. Every detail was being discussed with the King and Queen, who were happy to see that she was being creative in not only how she was involving those who lived in the capital, but also her use of the funds she had.
As December slowly started to fade, the choices of the nobles about where they would spend the holidays were starting to become known. Younger nobles like Michael of Newton and Tyler of Crowley would be staying at Court because the women they were hoping to marry in the New Year were still in the service of the Queen.
Meanwhile, the Barons were some of the first to make the trip home, but not before taking the leave of their Monarchs.
Date: 12 Feb 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
The spirit of the festival flowed nicely into the Christmas preparations, which had Lady Alice running around trying to get everything underway. Isabella had informed her that the Christmas Eve feast would be when they revealed her pregnancy to the nobility and that gave Alice another reason to make it spectacular.
Going out into the city, Alice had children making dried berry garlands to be wrapped around fresh greens, the butchers and anglers were being pushed to provide the best they could for the feast. Every detail was being discussed with the King and Queen, who were happy to see that she was being creative in not only how she was involving those who lived in the capital, but also her use of the funds she had.
As December slowly started to fade, the choices of the nobles about where they would spend the holidays were starting to become known. Younger nobles like Michael of Newton and Tyler of Crowley would be staying at Court because the women they were hoping to marry in the New Year were still in the service of the Queen.
Meanwhile, the Barons were some of the first to make the trip home, but not before taking the leave of their Monarchs.
Date: 11 Feb 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
:)
Author's Response:
The spirit of the festival flowed nicely into the Christmas preparations, which had Lady Alice running around trying to get everything underway. Isabella had informed her that the Christmas Eve feast would be when they revealed her pregnancy to the nobility and that gave Alice another reason to make it spectacular.
Going out into the city, Alice had children making dried berry garlands to be wrapped around fresh greens, the butchers and anglers were being pushed to provide the best they could for the feast. Every detail was being discussed with the King and Queen, who were happy to see that she was being creative in not only how she was involving those who lived in the capital, but also her use of the funds she had.
As December slowly started to fade, the choices of the nobles about where they would spend the holidays were starting to become known. Younger nobles like Michael of Newton and Tyler of Crowley would be staying at Court because the women they were hoping to marry in the New Year were still in the service of the Queen.
Meanwhile, the Barons were some of the first to make the trip home, but not before taking the leave of their Monarchs.
Date: 11 Feb 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
I don't trust laurant or victoria or james.....update soon
Author's Response:
You have the three of them pegged, huh...a lot of people are trying to figure out who's good and who's bad. Hope you enjoy the tease:
The spirit of the festival flowed nicely into the Christmas preparations, which had Lady Alice running around trying to get everything underway. Isabella had informed her that the Christmas Eve feast would be when they revealed her pregnancy to the nobility and that gave Alice another reason to make it spectacular.
Going out into the city, Alice had children making dried berry garlands to be wrapped around fresh greens, the butchers and anglers were being pushed to provide the best they could for the feast. Every detail was being discussed with the King and Queen, who were happy to see that she was being creative in not only how she was involving those who lived in the capital, but also her use of the funds she had.
As December slowly started to fade, the choices of the nobles about where they would spend the holidays were starting to become known. Younger nobles like Michael of Newton and Tyler of Crowley would be staying at Court because the women they were hoping to marry in the New Year were still in the service of the Queen.
Meanwhile, the Barons were some of the first to make the trip home, but not before taking the leave of their Monarchs.
Date: 11 Feb 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
The calm before the storm, eh?
Good bridge!
Author's Response:
Definitely, but the winds are already starting to pick up. Sorry this is so late, but here is the tease.
The spirit of the festival flowed nicely into the Christmas preparations, which had Lady Alice running around trying to get everything underway. Isabella had informed her that the Christmas Eve feast would be when they revealed her pregnancy to the nobility and that gave Alice another reason to make it spectacular.
Going out into the city, Alice had children making dried berry garlands to be wrapped around fresh greens, the butchers and anglers were being pushed to provide the best they could for the feast. Every detail was being discussed with the King and Queen, who were happy to see that she was being creative in not only how she was involving those who lived in the capital, but also her use of the funds she had.
As December slowly started to fade, the choices of the nobles about where they would spend the holidays were starting to become known. Younger nobles like Michael of Newton and Tyler of Crowley would be staying at Court because the women they were hoping to marry in the New Year were still in the service of the Queen.
Meanwhile, the Barons were some of the first to make the trip home, but not before taking the leave of their Monarchs.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
Uh oh....James is trouble. Listen to your gut, King Edward! I wouldn't be surprised to learn that Aro is using James as insurance in case Edward fails to follow through. Admirable that Edward wants what is best but I'm thinking he'd be better off telling Bella the truth about his uncles so that they can better prepare.
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Of course he's be better off, but what a story that would be...thank you for the review, and i hope you like the tease:
“I know, love. I do too. Alice is the only one who believes in me completely. Even her father eyes me cautiously from time to time before he thinks better of it.” Edward’s eyes fell to the bedding before Isabella could tilt his head up.
“I believe in you too, husband. They just don’t know you like we do.”
A loud commotion outside the door broke their private moment as Edward reached for his sword. The rumbling continued until the door opened to reveal Alice and Carlisle, with General Whitlock standing by the remainder of the guard.
“Alice?” Edward and Isabella shouted as the sword dropped from his hand.
Alice flew to Isabella’s side, hugging her tightly as Carlisle moved to Edward. The General entered the room, staying back as the doors closed to allow the private moment.
“Lady Alice, I should throw you in the Tower for worrying me so,” Isabella threatened through her tears.
“Is something wrong with the Queen?” Carlisle asked as the women chattered away.
“She was heartsick for her friend; we both were, if truth be told. Alice is a dear friend to me as well with how she has always treated me fairly,” Edward admitted, letting his eyes glance in the direction of Jasper.
“Well then it seems I discovered the balm for her soul just in time. "
Date: 29 Jan 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
I really like it so far!!! Hope that James and Vitoria won't be the villains... And I'm really curious what Edward will do about his uncles - will he have to fess up to Bella?
Author's Response:
Edward's reveal will come with some of the answers to your other questions there are a lot of people that are assumed to be bad that aren't, and others that are overlooked that are very bad! It's fun to watch the guesses...here's your tease:
“I know, love. I do too. Alice is the only one who believes in me completely. Even her father eyes me cautiously from time to time before he thinks better of it.” Edward’s eyes fell to the bedding before Isabella could tilt his head up.
“I believe in you too, husband. They just don’t know you like we do.”
A loud commotion outside the door broke their private moment as Edward reached for his sword. The rumbling continued until the door opened to reveal Alice and Carlisle, with General Whitlock standing by the remainder of the guard.
“Alice?” Edward and Isabella shouted as the sword dropped from his hand.
Alice flew to Isabella’s side, hugging her tightly as Carlisle moved to Edward. The General entered the room, staying back as the doors closed to allow the private moment.
“Lady Alice, I should throw you in the Tower for worrying me so,” Isabella threatened through her tears.
“Is something wrong with the Queen?” Carlisle asked as the women chattered away.
“She was heartsick for her friend; we both were, if truth be told. Alice is a dear friend to me as well with how she has always treated me fairly,” Edward admitted, letting his eyes glance in the direction of Jasper.
“Well then it seems I discovered the balm for her soul just in time. "
Date: 28 Jan 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
:)
Author's Response:
Teaser:
“I know, love. I do too. Alice is the only one who believes in me completely. Even her father eyes me cautiously from time to time before he thinks better of it.” Edward’s eyes fell to the bedding before Isabella could tilt his head up.
“I believe in you too, husband. They just don’t know you like we do.”
A loud commotion outside the door broke their private moment as Edward reached for his sword. The rumbling continued until the door opened to reveal Alice and Carlisle, with General Whitlock standing by the remainder of the guard.
“Alice?” Edward and Isabella shouted as the sword dropped from his hand.
Alice flew to Isabella’s side, hugging her tightly as Carlisle moved to Edward. The General entered the room, staying back as the doors closed to allow the private moment.
“Lady Alice, I should throw you in the Tower for worrying me so,” Isabella threatened through her tears.
“Is something wrong with the Queen?” Carlisle asked as the women chattered away.
“She was heartsick for her friend; we both were, if truth be told. Alice is a dear friend to me as well with how she has always treated me fairly,” Edward admitted, letting his eyes glance in the direction of Jasper.
“Well then it seems I discovered the balm for her soul just in time. "
Date: 28 Jan 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Here's the teaser:
“I know, love. I do too. Alice is the only one who believes in me completely. Even her father eyes me cautiously from time to time before he thinks better of it.” Edward’s eyes fell to the bedding before Isabella could tilt his head up.
“I believe in you too, husband. They just don’t know you like we do.”
A loud commotion outside the door broke their private moment as Edward reached for his sword. The rumbling continued until the door opened to reveal Alice and Carlisle, with General Whitlock standing by the remainder of the guard.
“Alice?” Edward and Isabella shouted as the sword dropped from his hand.
Alice flew to Isabella’s side, hugging her tightly as Carlisle moved to Edward. The General entered the room, staying back as the doors closed to allow the private moment.
“Lady Alice, I should throw you in the Tower for worrying me so,” Isabella threatened through her tears.
“Is something wrong with the Queen?” Carlisle asked as the women chattered away.
“She was heartsick for her friend; we both were, if truth be told. Alice is a dear friend to me as well with how she has always treated me fairly,” Edward admitted, letting his eyes glance in the direction of Jasper.
“Well then it seems I discovered the balm for her soul just in time. "
Date: 28 Jan 2012 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
He needs to kill his uncles before they try to kill his wife and I hope that James is a lolay to Edward as he thinks.
Author's Response:
I don't see him acting that rashly, but the question of the chapter is whether or not James is a good boy. Time will tell...the teaser is below.
“I know, love. I do too. Alice is the only one who believes in me completely. Even her father eyes me cautiously from time to time before he thinks better of it.” Edward’s eyes fell to the bedding before Isabella could tilt his head up.
“I believe in you too, husband. They just don’t know you like we do.”
A loud commotion outside the door broke their private moment as Edward reached for his sword. The rumbling continued until the door opened to reveal Alice and Carlisle, with General Whitlock standing by the remainder of the guard.
“Alice?” Edward and Isabella shouted as the sword dropped from his hand.
Alice flew to Isabella’s side, hugging her tightly as Carlisle moved to Edward. The General entered the room, staying back as the doors closed to allow the private moment.
“Lady Alice, I should throw you in the Tower for worrying me so,” Isabella threatened through her tears.
“Is something wrong with the Queen?” Carlisle asked as the women chattered away.
“She was heartsick for her friend; we both were, if truth be told. Alice is a dear friend to me as well with how she has always treated me fairly,” Edward admitted, letting his eyes glance in the direction of Jasper.
“Well then it seems I discovered the balm for her soul just in time. "
Date: 28 Jan 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
don't trust him!don't be a fool he is working for his uncles!update soon
Author's Response:
Thanks for jumping on the "hate James" bandwagon that this chapter created. Love the reviews as always. Here's the teaser:
“I know, love. I do too. Alice is the only one who believes in me completely. Even her father eyes me cautiously from time to time before he thinks better of it.” Edward’s eyes fell to the bedding before Isabella could tilt his head up.
“I believe in you too, husband. They just don’t know you like we do.”
A loud commotion outside the door broke their private moment as Edward reached for his sword. The rumbling continued until the door opened to reveal Alice and Carlisle, with General Whitlock standing by the remainder of the guard.
“Alice?” Edward and Isabella shouted as the sword dropped from his hand.
Alice flew to Isabella’s side, hugging her tightly as Carlisle moved to Edward. The General entered the room, staying back as the doors closed to allow the private moment.
“Lady Alice, I should throw you in the Tower for worrying me so,” Isabella threatened through her tears.
“Is something wrong with the Queen?” Carlisle asked as the women chattered away.
“She was heartsick for her friend; we both were, if truth be told. Alice is a dear friend to me as well with how she has always treated me fairly,” Edward admitted, letting his eyes glance in the direction of Jasper.
“Well then it seems I discovered the balm for her soul just in time. "
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am trying to figure out how an heir would make the Queen expendable. I am waiting for Aro to play his cards and see how Edward will handle the situation. I am also now suspicious of James. I think that James was a plant by Aro to keep tabs on his nephew. The introduction of Victoria is very suspicous to me.
Author's Response:
If the Queen is out of the way, they feel that they could get Edward to see their way, with a blood royal in their pocket. As to your other questions, time will tell...and below is your teaser:
“I know, love. I do too. Alice is the only one who believes in me completely. Even her father eyes me cautiously from time to time before he thinks better of it.” Edward’s eyes fell to the bedding before Isabella could tilt his head up.
“I believe in you too, husband. They just don’t know you like we do.”
A loud commotion outside the door broke their private moment as Edward reached for his sword. The rumbling continued until the door opened to reveal Alice and Carlisle, with General Whitlock standing by the remainder of the guard.
“Alice?” Edward and Isabella shouted as the sword dropped from his hand.
Alice flew to Isabella’s side, hugging her tightly as Carlisle moved to Edward. The General entered the room, staying back as the doors closed to allow the private moment.
“Lady Alice, I should throw you in the Tower for worrying me so,” Isabella threatened through her tears.
“Is something wrong with the Queen?” Carlisle asked as the women chattered away.
“She was heartsick for her friend; we both were, if truth be told. Alice is a dear friend to me as well with how she has always treated me fairly,” Edward admitted, letting his eyes glance in the direction of Jasper.
“Well then it seems I discovered the balm for her soul just in time. "
Date: 28 Jan 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Teaser:
“I know, love. I do too. Alice is the only one who believes in me completely. Even her father eyes me cautiously from time to time before he thinks better of it.” Edward’s eyes fell to the bedding before Isabella could tilt his head up.
“I believe in you too, husband. They just don’t know you like we do.”
A loud commotion outside the door broke their private moment as Edward reached for his sword. The rumbling continued until the door opened to reveal Alice and Carlisle, with General Whitlock standing by the remainder of the guard.
“Alice?” Edward and Isabella shouted as the sword dropped from his hand.
Alice flew to Isabella’s side, hugging her tightly as Carlisle moved to Edward. The General entered the room, staying back as the doors closed to allow the private moment.
“Lady Alice, I should throw you in the Tower for worrying me so,” Isabella threatened through her tears.
“Is something wrong with the Queen?” Carlisle asked as the women chattered away.
“She was heartsick for her friend; we both were, if truth be told. Alice is a dear friend to me as well with how she has always treated me fairly,” Edward admitted, letting his eyes glance in the direction of Jasper.
“Well then it seems I discovered the balm for her soul just in time. "
Date: 23 Jan 2012 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
looking frowrd to the next chatper
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
Good Chapter.....
Date: 22 Jan 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
His uncles are evil . Shit will hit the fan when she finds out that Edward had different plans about them in the begining but I am sure his feelings have changed.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jan 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edwards uncle's are happy now, but they will continue to ask Edward to convince Isabella to give them more titles, property, and money.
Is Edward still with his uncles, or is he on the Queen's side?
Date: 22 Jan 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
yeah but edward shouldn't let his guard down concerning his uncles. They will strike when they do not get their way and then they will all be in danger update soon
Date: 17 Jan 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
To bad they have to go back to reality. Did he tell her the truth about the mountian lion???
Author's Response:
i know, i loved the honeymoon, but real life is calling. And there are a few people who don't believe it was a mountain lion...doubting thomas'
Date: 15 Jan 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 14 Jan 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
awww that was such a nice honeymoon minus the attack update soon
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the fluffy moment, it was fun to write.
Date: 14 Jan 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
Good Chapter......
Date: 10 Jan 2012 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 10 Jan 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love it. Great update.
Date: 10 Jan 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
His uncles will not stay silent forever...as soon as bella does something they do not like they will put the pressure on him. Well glad that they are getting along even after the main problem.update soon
Author's Response:
you're right about his uncles, but edward will have to deal with that when it comes. And for now they are all working well together, but we'll see how long they can keep it going.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
well bella and edward are proving to be a great working couple.
i am glad bella is well versed in what she needs to do
edward is supportive and loves her
they will do well
love it
Author's Response:
i'm glad you see how well they work together and present a united front. they need to have the solidartiy with everything happening around them.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
I dont like Edward's uncles and what is there plan and is Edward really have the same plan.????
Author's Response:
Edward is being his own person without letting his uncles know that he has turned on them. he's walking a dangerous line, but its the only option he sees.
Date: 09 Jan 2012 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good Chapter.....
Date: 02 Jan 2012 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
looking forward to the next hcapter
Date: 02 Jan 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
well now they are married! but he has realized about his promise to his uncles now....update soon please
Author's Response:
it was never something that left his mind, he was just foolish enough to think he could handle it.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good Chapter....
Date: 02 Jan 2012 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh so cute!!!!"It does not matter, for I have you to keep me warm" I loved it!! and see how Edward was sweet with Bella. and I loved when Jacob say his words lol
I loved everything!!!
xoxo
Author's Response:
that seems to be a favorite line. and i'm glad you liked everyone playing nice for once. thanks for the review.
Date: 01 Jan 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
This will be interesting to see what Aro trys to pull and how is Edward going to react and what is Bella going to do when she finds out???
Author's Response:
The reaction will be bad, that i can promise, but Aro will keep pushing him for influence.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
I forgot that back then witnesses had to be present during the first physical act of intimacy. That had to suck so badly!
How is Edward going to protect Bella from his uncles, or will he betray her even though he loves her?
Author's Response:
I love your reaction to the witnessing of their first time. I can't answer your question, because even if he protects her, he's betraying her by not telling her the truth.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
well she is seeming to be a good ruler
glad bella learned alot from her father
Author's Response:
she was taught from an early age because he knew that with his health issues he would have to prepare her for the time when she was ruling. thanks for the reviews
Date: 30 Dec 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
he' s back??? Poor Bella!!! I want so much to read more!!!!
xoxo
Author's Response:
he's back and safe and ready to move on with bella.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMGGGGGGGG!! i want...i need the next chapter xDDDDDD
Author's Response:
I know, that was an evil cliffie. thanks for the review
Date: 30 Dec 2011 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
He has returned to her????
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2011 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
Evil for sure. LOL
Author's Response:
sorry, every once in a while i need to be evil. it just works better as a cliffhanger thanks for the review
Date: 29 Dec 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh evil cliffy, lol. Love the story.
Author's Response:
thank you for the love and for hanging on through the cliffy
Date: 29 Dec 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 29 Dec 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
Good Chapter....
Date: 29 Dec 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
holy shit either it is edward or it is that swine jacob!UPDATE SOON
Author's Response:
no, Jacob didn't show up in her room...it's EDWARD! thanks for the review hon, i really appreciate them.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
That ghost better be Edward coming to Bella.
Author's Response:
Veiled threats...i love em! This was one of the most reviewed chapters for mainly that reason.
Date: 28 Dec 2011 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
wow I love it!!! I just found it yesterday and I loved the story and see how Edward was a bad guy, now I don't know what he are!!! I loved all of it and I'm crazy to see more!!!! hope you can understand my english and can post soon!!!
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, he is a bad boy, but not a bad guy, if that makes any sense. I'm glad you're enjoying it.