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Reviewer: jomik1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 36

Great chapter, so much happening at once. Can't wait for the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 36

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 36

So Jacob got to marry Maggie and she's pregnant. Good for him. Now maybe he will fulfill his advisor position properly and leave the King alone.
What happened to Tia, Max and Emilia's mother? Those poor children are so out of their comfort zone but Queen Isabella seems to be reaching them with her directness and motherly compassion.
The news of Marcus being dead and Caius being captured has obviously not reached Meyer Castle yet.
How much longer does Aro have before he will be tracked down and Jane convicted of treason? And where is Alec?

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 36

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 35

Good chapter.....

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 35

Good chapter.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 35

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 35

I hope the Queen has a safe and swift journey home. She now has three more charges to care for.
Did Jasper and Garrett send letters back to their loves?
Maybe the queen conceived while visiting her king.

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 35

What can I say.  Another great chapter.  And I think I know what is going to happen maybe in the next couple of chapters.......

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 34

Why is Benjamin beside himself if it is Jacob who wants to marry Maggie?
Leah and Sam, awe.
Maybe the Queen will find herself pregnant now that the King is away at war?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 33

I hope Jasper is successful within the first day of his arrival.
I love how the country is pulling together to supply their army with everything necessary for a sound defeat of their enemy.

I am truly impressed by Tanya's loyalty to her Queen.

Time for the family healing to begin followed by the celebration of victory over their old foes.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 34

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 34

MORE PLEASE, HON!! :-D

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 34

Sad good byes.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 33

how awful.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 34

Good Chapter......

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 33

Good Chapter......

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 33

I want the uncles dead, and I actually would like to see Edward do it!!!

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 33

Sometimes knowing the awful details is very very painful, but is most certainly better than not knowing & allowing your imagination to come up with something that, most of the time, is so much worse than the reality.
In Edwards case I am just a little ashamed in his small selfishness, but @ lease there was someone there that was willing to set him straight.
Love this story & was very excited to see this update in my mailbox this evening. *MWAH*

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 33

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 30

I think I left you one on FFN too. Nice job!!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 32

well I was worried we would not get here all three of them!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 32

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 31

Leah was right to give her the blade.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 32

Good Chapter......

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 32

Another great action filled chapter.  Can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 32

Thank God!  Aro, Marcus, and Caius need to pay and the need to pay soon.  How about a hanging , but not to death, placed on the rack, cut their intrails out, draw and quarter them, burn their destroyed dead bodies in front of all citizens, and finally find a way to preserve their heads for all to see for all time.  A hot poker in the ass would be good, too. 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 32

Glad Carlisle was able to talk Jasper out of riding off on a crusade of his own making.
Jane and Alec are pure evil, having chopped off their mothers head.
Having a difficult time being patient waiting for the other countries to send reinforcements and supplies. They lost 20 men, is that correct?
The family bed will aid in a quicker recovery now that they have been reunited.
Vanessa's first word.....dada, awe.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 31

Will jerks come back to the queen?
How far away is Vanessa?
I could not tell by your description if all of the royal guard was killed or if Sam and Jared are still alive and winding their way back to the Royal Family.
I know the king and queen will survive but will they find their daughter and return the people of Dwyer in time?

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 31

looking forward to what happens next 

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 31

How evil to leave a cliffhanger! lol

Reviewer: Deblovestwilight72 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hi I love your stories - you have such a dynamic writing style.  This story is really great and I love that Edward is back in Bella's good gracies.  The plot is well set out and in order. 

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 31

You're breaking my heart. I hope you update sooner rather than later. As ever, excellent writing.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2012 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 30

GWTW is also my favored book & movie.

Great chapter....love the building suspense!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 30

Huge mistake sending the entire guard to ride south. That leaves the royal family exposed.
Vanessa is a liability strapped to her mothers chest. How will Bella use her new defensive skills while trying to protect her heir?
Hope Sam is stubborn enough to leave someone in close proximity to assist the king and queen when attacked.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 29

Treason is afoot! Jane has been the insider informant all along. I'm guessing the attack will take place on the Swan lands.
I'll bet no one will expect the Queen to be carrying a concealed weapon. Let's hope Leah has trained her well.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 29

I have a feeling of forboding...I am sure that I am correct in my gut.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 29

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

Never could trust those twins!

Old Aro & Jane??  Gross...just gross!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 28

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 28

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2012 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh no, not Alec. Jane is too close to the Queen. Will they both turn against her?

Isabella is smart to bring in Leah to train her.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 27

All is too quiet in the kingdom. I'm waiting for the surprise attack by the ousted barons. Edward is still haunted by his inability to protect his queen. I hope he does not need to sacrifice himself in battle to secure the lives of his daughter and wife.
Happy for Kate and Baron Garrett.

I really liked the flow of this chapter.

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 26

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 26

looking forward to more

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 26

Does she believe her husband will spar with her? It may ve looked upon by others as an act if aggression against the Queen. Bella needs to stick to the dummy until Jasper feels he can spar against her without causing the Queen any harm.

Author's Response:

If someone were to spar against the King as part of his training, that isn't seen as an act of aggression, it is them following orders by training with him.  There are a lot of times when an order from the King or Queen goes against what you should do, but it is worse to defy your monarch than to follow convention, because in the end the monarch is the law.  But I like that angle, your reviews are always very insightful!

 

Thank you for taking the time to review~

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

Don't know how I skipped thus chapter but glad I found it. Pulled the pieces together quite nicely.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 25

Jacob and Edward traveling together would make a great out-take. I can hear a lot of antagonizing banter. Haha.

I have to agree with the queen.......that was a very cute and diplomatic way to describe pregnancy.
I would like to think that the queen would want Tanya to share her life with a loving partner. Will she try to play match maker?

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 25

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2012 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 25

good chapter.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 24

Oath of Fealty ritual was very interesting. I enjoyed the way you tied together the use of the sward later on in their bedroom chamber.
So full if passion for each other.

You raise an interesting point on the heir to her throne, should they have a son. Something to ponder.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 24

wow their getting back on track update soon

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 23

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 23

Well their getting ready for war but when will it happen update soon

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 23

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 23

Things are happening so fast.  I wonder how soon the brothers will makes their move?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Apr 2012 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 22

It is an uphill climb, slowly traversed, yet the end results rendered will show a deeper devotion than was present prior.
Will Tanya be recommended as a wife to one of the new barons as a reward for her exceptional service to her queen?

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 22

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 22

Great update.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2012 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 22

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 22

"the plan" nearly did him in.  Edward is not stupid this is last hoorah if he messes up again.  Isabella loves him and I think he loves her. His family had too much hate that they passed down. Remember in the beginning how he acted with his maid?  He was not just a good old boy waiting on his one and only.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 22

A marvelous bridge and interlude between mistrust and faith again.  His chapter filled a spot that, if rushed over, could have made the story seem far too contrived.  This breathing space that Bella and Edward are working through is vital to their coming relationship.  Kudos to you for doing it so well and realizing the value!

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 22

I wonder where they are hiding, and I think that they have friends in the court still.  I am glad that Isabella and Edward are working to mend the trust that she lost in him by lying.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 22

Outstanding chapter!!! As ever, it was well written. Thank you.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 22

thye will get back to where they should be.wonder how long it will take them to find the barons?update soon

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved how you brought back the frightening incident of the 'animal' in the woods during their honeymoon. The question would be....was Edward's faithful servant from his ancestral home be involved in the plot against the Queen?

Maria was the soothing balm that Bella needed to get her through to the next step of mending the broken trust between her and her King.
It may be a slow process to rebuild the faith in their relationship.

Can't wait to read what you have in store for the barons.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 21

So happy that he is free!now bella knows everything update soon

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 21

I wonder what will happen now.  It seems to me that the Barons have swayed many court members to their plight....

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2012 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 21

This story is so exciting, treacherous, loving and beautiful. I do wish it updated more often. I am so grateful you are writing it.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2012 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 21

I do love the intrigue!  Kudos!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 21

finally. and the uncles and their plan did not succeed.

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 21

loved the chapter looking forward to mre

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 21

Good Chapter........

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it!  It's time for them o heal. Just glad the real criminals were found out. Now time to catch the barons!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2012 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

I have finally caught up to your fan base. YEA!
I must say that I am thoroughly enchanted by your period piece.

Maria must sense the turmoil Isabella is experiencing otherwise she would not have appeared before being summoned.
Jasper is right to divide and intimidated the Uncles. Of the three brothers, I think Marcus is the weakest link.
Jacob is still a pain in the butt.
How will the king ever regain the trust of his queen?
Keep it coming, loving every word of it.

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 20

Great update.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 20

Tangled web and all of that!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 20

Hmmmm!  Maria's there? Curiouser and curiouser.  Bravo, Edward!  If they are to survive his actions now will lay the groundwork.  Wonderful work.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 20

looking forward to the next hcapter

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 20

WTF?

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 20

Good Chapter......

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 20

oh shit!did maria see that she was needed or is she not to be trusted?update soon

 

well she knows now but will it really help edward

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 19

:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 19

I wonder if Jacob is part of this and not just the uncles and Victoria and James.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

Finally....Isabella knows the truth. Hope it comes out!

Reviewer: mariskaatje Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 19

i'm sorry burt why tomorrow and why doesn't she question emmet further about Jacob, is she so stupid that she doesn't she what jacob is doing. She should have given him a good tong lashing with what he said about the king cinsidering the name of the baby, the king is still higher in rank than Jacob she should stand more behind her man than she does now

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 19

You're breaking my heart. Please let this nightmare end soon. The plot is incredible. I wish to on to solving the mystery and clearing Edward. Thanks for writing such an interesting story.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

OMG!wonder how that meeting is going to go and how everyone is going to feel about her meeting edward???UPDATE SOON Jacob is a jerk...he should be drawn and courtered.....

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 19

looking forward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

I knew there was something fishy about James & Victoria. Just hope there's enough evidence to clear Edward & condemn those who are really guilty. 

Great job!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 18

COWARD, come on out and enjoy this.  Edward did not do this we all know. James, Victoria and his......uncles.. All very bad people.

Reviewer: tuckerjnp1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wow what a chapter.  Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: jamesofjungle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2012 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

This is how the brothers decided to handle getting rid of Bella and Edward?

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 18

looking forward to the enxt chapter 

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 18

His uncles!!!!!!bastards edward can't go down like this! he needs to say something about his uncles being behind it, but not impliment himself. really hope james doesn't say that edward was behind it. oh UPDATE SOON can't wait till wednesday lol

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