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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cute start, but she is right if she is working directly for him.

Reviewer: suz12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMG, I had to LOL when Rosalie walked by and gave Bella and 'Incredulous' look as she heard her talking to Mr. Lamont. That was hilarious!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2012 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 30

My pleasure!:-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 29

What a great read;-D)

Baby Phil, I think that's a first for a Bella + Edward baby name.

That was pretty intense with the robbery @ gunpoint, aghh. I liked the ex-cop Angel to the rescue, very believable.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 28

More greatness from your writing, thank you for your hard work:-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 25

Haha, great fun

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 27

I love how they pulled off that wedding so spontaneously.;-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2012 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 26

I love me some baddass Bella. I think I love your Bella's the best, although I was feeling a bit disappointed in the behavior she was displaying with Mario. Yuk, although I have to admit, I was a Momma of 3 @ my niece's batchlorette party &  put on quite the show, all platonic, but still cringe worthy the next day thru sober, hindsight eyes. Oh well, live & learn.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 24

Huge crocodile tears, that was so sweet;-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 23

I don't like those 10 words from you..."We're actually coming to an end soon in this story.". Yuk. I want them all to go on forever. No, I actually love stories with endings and then sequels;-)) js

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 21

Charlie's a tough guy, what a Dad:-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 22

I loved your meadow scene, haha so glad Edward stayed true to character and your Twilight references were very humorous;-)

Thanks for the recs:-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

I love how you do that flip, hate Carlisle & now I luv him & want to hug him, haha. What a sweet heart.

Love reading your writing;-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

That was such a great chapter & yeah for Carlisle becoming a better person & father.

That was so funny I had tears from laughing.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 16

Grat chapter. How I have sympathy for Dr C, I don't know, but I blame you, haha.

I want Esme to be able to have a baby but it's not very realistic at her age but we are in fantasyland, right?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 15

;-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great addiction analogy;-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wow, Carlisle just continues to disappoint in this story. Definitely not the stereotypical perfect father. Even when his new relationship is found out he can't be around his son? Kinda mean and never saying I love you to Edward? Definitely a meany.

 Love this story.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 12

I guess I never thought of having kids before I did but I know it never occurred to me to choose to never have kids. I just can't imagine living a life without them. Interesting.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

Yeah, I'm so happy when their happy & sexin it up in the stairwells and all, haha.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh man, this is a cruel cliffy, thank you for having this story already completed!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 9

She's being meany & I don't care for it. Where's that I don't do tons of angst? Haha

;-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thank you so much for Tanya/Addison signing the papers 

It seemed like Adson was in the picture way to much for my liking & any more would be torture for me.  I love that you don't do days & days of angst;-)))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

She left that guy with his PNA...

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loving that I have a new story of yours to read. 

Happy days!

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 30

Great story I loved it ... any thoughts of a sequel?

Reviewer: EdwardCullen-izor Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2011 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 1

Cute!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 30

It is good that they are all adjusting to life with Phil and that they are getting along fine.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 29

Yea!!! The baby is here!! It is terrible that Bella got mugged but they got their son out of the deal.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow Bella is sure violent when she is pregnant... Maybe that means that this kid is going to be an only child...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 27

So I guess that Jake and Carmen's loss is Edward and Bella's gain there.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 26

Well It is good that Bella got to find out what Mike said and she got to spit in his face.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 25

Oh wow!!! I didn't see them going to jail. I thought that there might be problems with Mike being there but I didn't see them all going to jail.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2011 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

Awww... Edward and Bella are going to have a baby!! That is awesome!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 23

It is good that Bella didn't leave him over the whole Jessica thing...

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 22

Well I guess that Edward was right with the whole Seth thing...... How funny is it that she is afraid of bugs.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2011 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 21

Well I guess that Edward had to have a conversation with Charlie....

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 20

Awwww..... The baby is finally here!!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 19

Well at least she has stopped taking the pain medication that made her all wacked out.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 18

So Bella and Edward are going to get married!! That is wonderful!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 17

Well that chapter was just funny... And sweet it is good to see that Carlisle and Edward do care for each other if they don't let it be public knowlege that often.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

Awww... It is sad that Esme lost the baby and then tried to end her life... How sweet is Edward by getting both of her parents out to NYC to see Bella.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 15

Well it seems that they have ended their new years resolutions....

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 14

That is kinna sad that poor Jacob is alone... Hopefully he will find someone for himself soon.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

Well, well I guess the Chief has moved on enough to start having sex again it is such a shame that he didn't even feel like spending the holidays with Edward.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

I wonder when Alice is going to tell Jasper about the baby.  Bella and Edward seem to be getting along well in spite of the little spats that they have.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

Ok the whole underwear thing is so funny!!! I think that I am with edward in that it is really funny....

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 10

Well I wonder what she is going to choose because it seems that she can't forget or really move on from Edward either.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 9

Well these two just seem to be a joy to work around now....

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

Well I guess that Edward now has to grovel to Bella... I wonder if she is going to forgive him and listen to what he has to say or if she is just going to walk away.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

Ok so it is kinna funny that there is a large group of Carlisle's staff that now have VD.... I just wonder if Emmett is really the person that gave it to basically everyone.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 6

It seems that they are getting along fine and that Bella finally isn't worrying about what might happen if she is caught dating Edward she is just being happy to be with him.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

It is sad that she is so faraway from home and her mom is sick. And I am cracking up at Carlisle getting Edward rilled up! He knew what he was doing he just wanted him to admit it.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 3

Well I think that the whole pimp Bella out thing might just work....

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 2

HaHa... I guess it is just Jasper's coffee that Bella doesn't want.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well it seems that Bella is sleeping or has slept with the boss..  Well lets read on to see how this plays out... I haven't seen Grey's.. or at least not all of them I started watching them on netflix and then had to get rid of it.

Reviewer: nora yar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good, captivating story. Perfect writing. Real joy to read. Love you Lexi.
Nora Yar

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