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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2013 8:41 PM Title: 24 Band Together

wow  Alice is being a real biatch.  wonder how much is mommy's influence on her?  Poor Whit.    Glad B is doing better. 

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Date: 02 Jul 2013 8:13 PM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

Ack I knew something was going to happen.  I know it had to  in order to get Carlisle and Alice there but still.  Owie.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2013 7:27 PM Title: 22 Came With Cape

Great birthday and wonderful talks.  Hope they can make things work.  Still wanna slap B's mom.  What a brat.  Like that you guys make him flawed, like the non perfect singing.  Too many stories make him so perfect that he's unreal.  Love the effort you've made for realisim.

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Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:49 PM Title: 21 Are We There Yet

sweet chapter.  Great talks and fun times.  Hope things continue to go well for out kiddies.

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Date: 02 Jul 2013 5:31 PM Title: 20 Sunken Shark & Parachute Jump

sweet chapter. Bella has really come a long way.   awww for E's shark dying.  That sucks.  Hope he can reconsile his feelings with her and the company soon.

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Date: 02 Jul 2013 4:53 PM Title: 19 Diving Deep

wow  powerful chapter.   Knew something was going to happen to freak her out.   Glad that she talked to whit and lee.  E was smart with his words.  loved their talk at the end.

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Date: 02 Jul 2013 4:30 PM Title: 18 Nudger Strikes Again

Great chapter.  Glad B went on the other boat with them  Good day and good talk with lee.

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Date: 01 Jul 2013 10:50 PM Title: 17 Course Correction

wow  I was going to say Bella's story wasn't as taumatic as I was expecting with what she told E but her flashback makes even more sense to her fears now.   Her mom is a piece of work too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 10:08 PM Title: 16 If You Only Knew

Loving this story so far.   Can't wait to go check out the blog when I get to a better internet connection.

He really doesn't know how to apologize properly.  LOL

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 9:35 PM Title: 15 Just A Feeling

Glad Whit talked him into talking with her.  

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Date: 01 Jul 2013 9:07 PM Title: 14 Egg McMuffin

B seems to bemaking strides with everyone except B.  I agree with her telling him off like that at the end.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 8:21 PM Title: 13 Can't Touch This

Glad Whit told her his story.   E is in denial to think he can be just friends.  Wonder how long that will last

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 7:59 PM Title: 12 Friggen Epic

Glad Bella helped him make a new one and that he let her.  Whit is too cool.   ROFL for revenge.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 7:40 PM Title: 11 Shattered

oh wow  Bella has a long way to go....and so does E.  They both have communication issues thats for sure.

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Date: 01 Jul 2013 7:05 PM Title: 10 Wanna Skiff With Me?

great chapter again.   Hope Lee is a little more friendly now.   Bella seems to be trying hard, thats for sure.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2013 6:54 PM Title: 27 Rhombus & Other Surprises

I heartily chuckle every time I read F'n Nudgers! Hehehe!
I like the way Gopher is stepping up as a stronger team member and how Edward is relaxing his reluctance regarding Gopher's abilities.
Esme and Carlisle.....so cute!
Alice is doing a better job of acting like an adult.
Smiling at the fact that Edward is weaving Bella's style of writing into his own. Keeping her connected to the project even though she is not with the team.
Will the weather cause them to have difficulties on this excursion?

Author's Response:

Hee hee! Good bc I chuckle every time we write it.

Gopher is going to be stepping up even more in coming chapters and we're excited to let him come out of the background.

The weather will cause Masen some difficulties ;)

Reviewer: Tigger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2013 11:53 PM Title: 27 Rhombus & Other Surprises

GREAT CHAPTER



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: LaSpia Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2013 5:39 PM Title: 27 Rhombus & Other Surprises

Love how he reassures her with fact and not placating to try and make her feel better. Such a great story. So interesting, and characters are really well developed.  He tries to be so guarded and all-business, but he slept on her bed. its those sweet details that make me love this story even more.

I know it's a lot of work, so thanks for sharing it with us : )

Looking forward to the homecoming!!



Author's Response:

He tries to be so guarded and all-business, but he slept on her bed.  --Masen in a nutshell. LOL

We are excited to share the homecoming. It turned it differently than we expected, but also better in a lot of ways. We hope to have it out tomororw.

Reviewer: allidel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2013 6:09 PM Title: 27 Rhombus & Other Surprises

Another wonderful chapter!  I love this story! It's definitely one of my favorites, and I always have the biggest smile on my face when I see the updates!  I love how all of the relationships are developing, and it's great to be vested in the other ones aside from E&B's...though theirs is still my favorite.  They have such great interactions and it's a lot of fun to read.  I'm glad the research is working out, but I'm definitely looking forward to when they return on Friday.  I'm also curious as to what will happen when Bella asks to see pygmy killer whales!  Lots of great stuff to come, and I can't wait to read it all.  Thank you for sharing!!

~allidel  :)



Author's Response:

We wish she was going to ask about the whales right away but it's going to be a few chapters. We promise to do our best to make it worth the wait!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2013 12:06 PM Title: 27 Rhombus & Other Surprises

:) loved this



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Thanks!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2013 10:25 AM Title: 26 Twinkle Twinkle

You're so awesome; I loved this chapter! It was great to 'hear' other POVs. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. xoxo Kelly



Author's Response:

We're glad to hear you loved it! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 5:31 PM Title: 25 For Love & Tacos

Fabulous chapter! I loved it so much. xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:48 PM Title: 24 Band Together

This was a great chapter; I loved it! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 1:22 PM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

I was freaking out when Bella got attacked by that damn stingray, and the minutes afterward. I love how Edward is taking care of his Kapu, not that it would be any other way of course. Yay! Edward finally knows that he's in love with Bella! I'm so happy! I can't wait for Carlisle and Alice's arrival! The house will be buzzing with feelings! You wrote this chapter so well, it was intense and a little scary. Of course the best part was the love. It was just awesome! xoxo Kelly



Author's Response:

Thanks, Kelly!  Scary is an excellent reader reaction with this chapter ;)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 6:45 PM Title: 9 Tempest In Me

hmmm what was he molding?  or did I miss that?

They all seem to be gelling into a good team.  Hope B does ok tomorrow.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 6:22 PM Title: 8 Do You See

Esme is too cool.    E really needs ot figure his head out.   Glad she and gopher got along so well.

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Date: 07 Jun 2013 5:44 PM Title: 7 To Be Or Not

Lee is getting really annoying.  Hope she behaves or Bella calls her out.    Wow  for Whit's story.    

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:29 PM Title: 22 Came With Cape

Awesome chapter; I love, love, loved it! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 12:05 PM Title: 21 Are We There Yet

Heeeeeeeeee! :D I loved this chapter. I love Mase's 'family'. I love Masen, and of course Bella too. I love your story so, so much! I'm really glad you are writing it! :) xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 1:53 AM Title: 6 Hot & Cold

Wow she def freaked but wow he really overreacted.   Glad Carlisle and Whit were there for her.  Glad he apologized at the end.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2013 12:03 AM Title: 5 Another Side

Great day they had.  He def has some mood swings though.

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Date: 04 Jun 2013 6:59 PM Title: 4 Confuse Me Mister

hmm E getting all teritorial already huh?   Lee needs to take a prozac and chill.   Guppy???  Rofl.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 6:34 PM Title: 3 Let Me Introduce Myself

ROFL for first meeting.   E has a bit of a stick up him bum.   Whit seems cool.  Hope they make up though.  Lee is annoying already

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 6:20 PM Title: 2 Change My World

Great chapter.  Loved learning a little more about our other family.

 

P.S.  You know you can acutally put links in and not the (dot) stuff?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 5:52 PM Title: 1 Intro

Great start.  Cant wait to see what happens next.  And to see why she is afraid.

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 2:24 PM Title: 20 Sunken Shark & Parachute Jump

Awww...I can't even tell you how much I loved this chapter. I even got a little teary eyed in a few places.

Don't hate me for the short review, but I've been up all night and need some sleep! I'm getting close to being caught up with all the chapters though. :) I can't wait to read the rest!

xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2013 12:43 PM Title: 19 Diving Deep

Awesome chapter!

I was so nervous, just like watching it all unfold on the t.v. screen as I was reading the part when the shark whipped it's tail around and knocked Mase down! The way you wrote that was so real. Bella's reaction seemed to be in slow motion to me as I read; the poor thing. It was like I could feel what she was feeling.

I absolutely love that Whit and Lee are helping Mase and Bella to get their stuff together. I'm just ridiculously giddy at how things have changed for the better for all of them! I love your story so much!

I love, love, loved Bella's reaction to Mase as he stood in her doorway. I was so proud of him for telling Bella how he feels about her. I know he struggled, but he did great! I'm so happy for them! I know there might be hurdles to overcome, but I have faith!

Thanks again for writing this awesome story!

xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 10:59 AM Title: 18 Nudger Strikes Again

I loved this chapter! I had no idea what the crew of the Colossus did exactly, but was pleasantly surprised! You must have based that on the show that aired last year where they caught, tagged, etc. I loved that show! I think I sent you a pm about it, but I can't remember. Even if you didn't see that little series, I'm glad that you wrote about that aspect of research, etc. I could just picture the MMR gang helping them out. I loved that Bella got to see a different prospective, and that she actually looked at the sharks when they were in the cradle. Awesome job! xoxo Kelly



Author's Response:

You did PM us and we had watched that show and planned to include it. We even picked Brett's name from one of the guy's on the show :)

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 9:44 AM Title: 17 Course Correction

What a great chapter. So many emotions. I rolled with them as the story unfolded, and what a ride it was! I'm so glad that Mase and Guppy told each other their stories; I cried like a baby though. You wrote it all so well, better than well but I don't know what word to use. Looking forward to the MMR team joining up with the Colossus crew, but I have a feeling it will not be what they expected. I'm also thrilled that Masen has finally seen the light as far as Bella is concerned. Let's just hope that light gets brighter. :) Thanks for writing. *Hugs* Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2013 6:55 AM Title: 16 If You Only Knew

I love your story so much! I love the interaction of the gang, and their dynamic as a team. It's great to see how Bella is being more and more a part of that team. *rolls eyes at Masen* I know he's doing what is best for Bella as far as her future is concerned and what's best for MMR, but he's not being fair to himself or Bella as far as their feelings go. It's a good thing she seems to be so patient. I don't think it's hurt that Whit has shared a few things with Bella either. Mase is still too stubborn to listen to his best friend, and oh my does that grate on my nerves. :) I love him anyway. :) I can't wait for dinner, and what other fun things they'll all do. Mostly though; I can't wait for Bella to tell her story. I have to say one more time how much I love Lizzy! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2013 1:51 PM Title: 15 Just A Feeling

Great chapter; I loved it! xoxo Kelly

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Date: 26 May 2013 12:15 PM Title: 14 Egg McMuffin

Awesome chapter! I love that Lee has warmed up to Bella, and has started to help her out. I'm so proud of Bella for the progress that she has made. I would like to strangle Masen, of course. I'm so glad that Bella is making her thoughts about Mase perfectly clear to him. He needs to get his head out of his ass, and she pretty much told him that. I got a big smile on my face when she let him have it! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 2:20 AM Title: 26 Twinkle Twinkle

I'm beginning to think this is my favorite chapter so far! I have appreciated the glimps into each characters concerns and their impressions as to making this amalgamated group of misfits into a blossoming family.

This description of cannon Bella's flaw of not liking surprises is perfect: "My dad always said it was because my curiosity is stronger than my patience."

Edward is expanding his heart and mind at the expense of his comfort zone. While his friends-family look on with delight at his struggle and good fortune. This is encouraging to read.
Chuckled at Gopher's description of the affect the Cullen girls are having on the group.
Not just the girls........Esme seems rather smitten herself. Laughed so hard that tears streamed down my face while reading Esme's text to Whit. He's an awesome nudger and a true romantic! Paris stroll in my dreams, sigh.

How long before Edward gains the ability to speak the words of his heart? He seems tortured by his inability to stop being so analytical. Lee's reference to 'Masen speak' was comical especially knowing Bella's figured it out rather quickly.

Esme assessed Alice's actions quickly. Summing up the similarities between Edward's approach to figuring out life's ups and downs through cobtrol and Alice's need for safety. Very smooth approach, getting Alice to see the need to view the groups efforts to aid Bella in overcoming her fears.

There is a line from a song called SISTERS from the classic movie White Christmas that popped into my head while reading the last few chapters: ........Lord help the mister who comes between me and my sister; and Lord help the sister who comes between me and my man!

Author's Response:

That's a great line, Moltz!  And will hold very true for Bella and Alice!

It was a lot of fun and a learning experience to mix in some different POVs. And we certainly had a lot of changes and suprises going on in this chapter. We're excited to bring even more!!

Reviewer: 1918 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 8:07 AM Title: 13 Can't Touch This

Hey there! I've missed your story so much! Even though it's been a while; I haven't lost my love for Mase, Guppy, and the gang. This was a great chapter! xoxo Kelly

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2013 3:58 AM Title: 26 Twinkle Twinkle

I love his story but Edward and Bella started off so hot and heavy then understandably the story line had them take a huge step back but now they have worked their way to even saying I love you yet we barely see them kiss till their out of breath. Kinda wish the heat would turn up a little with these two now. :)



Author's Response:

The heat will come back soon. As passionate as Edward can be, he's also a time and place kind of guy and we really haven't given him much of that recently. So when we finally do, he'll have some time to make up for ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 6:01 PM Title: 26 Twinkle Twinkle

:)

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 9:24 AM Title: 26 Twinkle Twinkle

I really admire your depth as a writer and the detail and complexity in this story.



Author's Response:

We appreciate hearing that!  It's a lot of hard work but also a complete labor of love <3

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 5:48 AM Title: 26 Twinkle Twinkle

Loving this story thanks for another great chapter. Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!! We'll have a new chapter up later tonight!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2013 6:18 AM Title: 25 For Love & Tacos

Thank you - I love this story and look forward to your updates!  Each one is better and better and this one left such a big smile on my face, I feel kinda like Gopher!  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Woo hoo for Gopher feelings!! LOL

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2013 4:51 PM Title: 25 For Love & Tacos

Edward's approach to confronting Alice was a bit more calculated than I imagined. I thought he might let his emotions run the show.
The team did a great job supporting him as well as keeping their environment as natural as they always are. Esme can't fool Edward and Edward can't fool his mom/aunt. They are very cute when calling each other out on their feelings.
Carlisle and Esme.......perfect together in their first phase of flirting and getting to know each other. Jasper's empathy and steadfast ways are slowly working their way into Alice's fears of another family member being lost to sharks.
Loved Bella's saucy comeback to Edward's flirtation.

Author's Response:

Love the relationship with Edward and Esme so much! They are equal parts friends and mom-son.

We're bringing some more great flirting between Carlisle and Esme in the next couple of chapters.

Alice is so worried about Masen "brainwashing" her that she is completely missing all the ways in which Whit is making her question herself.

Bella is definitely Masen's match ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2013 12:55 PM Title: 25 For Love & Tacos

:)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2013 3:37 AM Title: 25 For Love & Tacos

is it going to be addressed that alices dream man is also a shark person? its a little of pot meet kettle to me.



Author's Response:

It will be addressed. The guys just know that if they address it right this second, it's just going to push Alice further away. And it'll take a few chapters, but Whit will also tell Alice about his encounter.

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2013 3:27 AM Title: 25 For Love & Tacos

You just can't go wrong with a "Come to the dark side" comment. Although I always raise my voice at the end to make it squeaky when I say "we have..."



Author's Response:

LOVE IT!!!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2013 3:22 PM Title: 24 Band Together

Kudos to tds88 for the Charmin Ultra line! It was hilarious and your use was well timed.
I was a bit taken aback by Alice's out burst towards Bella. Given the circumstances and her memories I guess its understandable but yet I feel she is mis-placing her anxieties on her big sisters shoulders. Where the blame has now been multiplied causing anguish in Bella's heart.
Whit has his work cut out for him.
Really enjoy the camaraderie as the crew rallies around Bella.
Gopher is more in-tune with Edward's thoughts and feelings than Edward could ever have ever guessed. Heart warming and funny at the same time.
Carlisle and Esme have their kids figured out. Haha. Now how about each other?

Author's Response:

Alice definitely needs to address her anxieties rather than pretend she has none and it's all for the good of her sister.  Whit and the entire team will end up lending a hand with that.  But yes, they definitely have their work cut our for them.

Gopher is great!! And he's really starting to be able to show that to Masen.

Carlisle and Esme are beginning a walk down an interesting path. We'll all have to see where it leads ;)

Reviewer: lahragal Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 9:34 PM Title: 24 Band Together

Loved it! So much revealed and so much presented. Each character revealed more of themselves. Now we just need to Bella and Edward to admit their love to one another.



Author's Response:

Love? Who said anything about love? LOL  Patience! It's nearly here.

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2013 7:43 AM Title: 24 Band Together

I'm so excited I finally got a chance to read this chapter.  I've been looking forward to it, and it was my reward for a long weekend of hard work.  I really hope that someone is able to get through to Alice, especially help her realize how much her comment hurt her sister.  I'm glad that Bella is sticking around though...where else could she go anyways, without Masen?  I am defnitely looking forward to the ILY's now.  They are adorable together!  Thanks for the update!

~allidel  :)



Author's Response:

Woo hoo! Glad you got your work done and enjoyed your reward!  We have big plans for Alice and they don't involve her staying upset forever. We promise.

Yeah, they kinda are a little adorable! Just don't tell Masen we agreed with that! LOL

Reviewer: LeslieWhitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2013 6:48 PM Title: 24 Band Together

Great chapter as always. I really wasn't expecting Alice to be this upset. Guess I can understand it, but it was a little shocking. Like the progress that Edward and Bella are making. So glad that this accident isn't causing a relapse in Bella's progress. Give us more Gopher. He's awesome. And he could really help bring Alice around with his personality.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

More Gopher is absolutely in the works!!  He and (surprise!) Masen will be very instrumental in helping Whit to change Alice's opinion of them all.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 10:17 AM Title: 24 Band Together

:)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2013 5:46 AM Title: 24 Band Together

Another great chapter! It was great getting to see all the different points of view. I have worked around people with animal phobias, including sharks, snakes and insects and I know its not something to be taken lightly. Hopefully Alice can get help to work on her phobia from our band of misfits, just as Bella has. As adults we don't have to agree with our friends and families choices but we do have to respect them. Everyone has to make choices for themselves. We can only help them along the way.



Author's Response:

Well said!!! And a lesson Alice has to learn - She's only 18 so still very much in that mindset of "it's the end of the world" when something goes really wrong. As much as she doesn't like Masen so far, he's the only one that sees what's really going on, that the root of all this behavior with Bella is a fear that just might be deeper than Bella's.

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Date: 06 Apr 2013 2:37 AM Title: 24 Band Together

Wonderful chapter, love seeing Alice and Carlisle join the crew! Edward is admitting his feeling at least to himself which I think is the biggest hurdle.  Love this story and all you do with it!  XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Cheri, you are so right!! We had to fight him to get him to admit he was interested in Bella. Then we had to fight him to get him to see what's right there in his heart. Now we just have to convince him it's information that needs to be shared. ;)

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Date: 10 Mar 2013 2:21 AM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

Such a great chapter. It's sad that it usually takes something "big" to get guys to reconize their true feelings. Looking forward to the crazy that is coming with Alice and Carlisle coming to the house. Also wondering if Bella heard any of the conversations that were happening around her.

thanks for creating. This wonderful story and sharing with the rest of us.



Author's Response:

It is sad but it's definitley one of those truths of life we can rarely avoid.  There will be plenty of crazy with Alice and Carlisle being added to the group. LOL  Nope, Bella was far too out of it to hear any of the conversations in this chapter. But she's going to hear one soon that will change some things ;)

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2013 6:18 AM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

You would think Bella and marine life is not compatible... She just can't catch a break (neither can Mason). Can't wait to see Carlise and Alice next chap, I've missed them.

E/k

Author's Response:

Bella's just a little rough patch with the marine world, but I have high hopes for her future ;)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2013 7:18 PM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

So the other two women in Masen's life have called him out on his deep feelings of love for Bella. And he finally whispers his true hearts sentiment, but where does that leave him when Bella wakes from her ordeal with the sting-ray? Will he continue to berate himself for the snorkeling disaster? Will Bella's fears of the water return ten-fold?

Can't wait for the next chapter.
Lee and Gopher will be the only pair not teased for their hormonal behavior.
Looking forward to Carlisle and Esme making a connection. Whit the nudge won't have enough time to be messing with Masen's head because Alice will be too busy keeping Jasper on his toes.

Author's Response:

Lee and Gopher will have their round of teasing - they're just harder to get since they've been a couple for years now.  But Whit and Masen will eventually come up with some way, I'm sure. LOL

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2013 9:23 AM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

Love this story and can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2013 8:39 AM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

:) love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2013 5:28 AM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

I love it...as always!  This really is one of my favorite stories, and I always have the biggest smiles when I see the updates in my in-box.  Every chapter is amazing.  While it sucks that Bella got stung, it's actually a really good thing - it's made Masen aware of his feelings (yay!) and it means that Carlisle & Alice are coming out (double yay!)  I can't wait to see those introductions & reactions!

I also wanted to thank you for sharing this story.  You have such a wonderful gift/talent with this story.  I can picture every chapter in my head, and I feel the emotions along with them.  I think that's one of the reasons it's a favorite...that and the characters, and the plot...so okay, fine, everything about it!  ;)

Thanks again, and I look forward to the next chapter!

~allidel  :)

PS - Please try not to put their ILY's in the same chapter as all of the intros...my heart might explode from all of the happiness & giddyness!  :)



Author's Response:

I make no promises, other than that your heart will not physically explode. That's about all I can promise ;)

LOL So glad you find so much to love about it! We are so excited to have so many readers loving this story and coming back for each new chapter.

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2013 5:09 AM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

What a wonderful chapter!!!  Love the morning teasing and dialog. Loved that she was strong enough to go in the water.  Hope Edward won't blame himself and back away. Loved that she was enjoying herself in the water and hope this won't set her back. But mostly LOVE that Carlisle and Alice are ON THEIR WAY!!!!!! Very excited for Whit to meet his dream girl!  I know I ask this all the time but...WRITE FAST!!!!!  XOXO, Cheri   PS Heading over to see the newest pics!



Author's Response:

Cheri, if we could write as fast as we talk, this thing would be almost over. But unfortunately, we are limited by typing speeds and real life. I'd love to say I spend all day writing but I'm not yet where that pays the bills. LOL

Carlisle and Alice are absolutely on their way and their arrival is going to be anything but quiet!

Reviewer: Jrxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2013 4:58 AM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

Mystery girl for Jasper is Alice of course but, I love this fic

Author's Response:

We really couldn't write it any other :)  It just wouldn't have felt true to put them with anyone else.

Reviewer: pfarrell Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2013 3:38 AM Title: 23 Knock Down Drag Out

I can't get over how good this story is!  You are an incredible story teller and writer!!  Each chapter just gets better and better! My day is always made when I've got a new chapter to read!  Thanks for sharing!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting us know we're making your day :)  We will keep working hard to continue that!

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2013 7:20 AM Title: 22 Came With Cape

Wonderful chapter and a great birthday Masen.  Can't wait for a visit from lil sis and Uncle Carl.  Think it would be great for Whit and Momma Esme....  Love this story, thank you for sharing.   XOXO, Cheri



Author's Response:

Thanks, Cheri! Just a couple more chapters until Carl and Alice arrive and shake things up even further ;)

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:40 PM Title: 22 Came With Cape

Bella's journal entry was very cathartic. I'm not sure I would have been able to write my inner most feelings. Especially when it came too her mother not being around for Alice.

Gopher's comment about the cape wearing kiss; very funny.
Whit the nudger is definitely getting assistance from Esme.

I liked the talk Bella had with Esme about Uncle Carl and how giving up his life for his brother's girls was explained by Esme's own experience with Edward.

The tidal pool scene was very cute.

Why is Edward sabotaging his mind with thoughts of his fears not defining his love for Bella?

Author's Response:

Bella has that unique ability to be completely honest with herself, no matter what she might find out. Love that about her.

Edward is just trying to get a handle on massive changes suddenly twisting his life. He'll figure it out soon.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 2:27 PM Title: 22 Came With Cape

:)

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:42 AM Title: 22 Came With Cape

Yeah it was nice to see Edward open up so much more.  I was hoping for a lemon but it doesn't sound like that is going to happen for awhile.  And why cant he see that he is in love with her??????  I want to wack him in the head.



Author's Response:

No lemon for a while is right. LOL  But it will eventually happen.

He can't see it because he doesn't know what it looks or feels like - He's never had it before.

Reviewer: BE1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2013 5:23 PM Title: 21 Are We There Yet

I'm going to try and send the banner here...

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2013 6:01 AM Title: 21 Are We There Yet

This sounds like it is going to be one heck of a birthday!  Cheri



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Edward has no idea what's in store for him! LOL

Reviewer: OH MIA MYA Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 11:45 PM Title: 21 Are We There Yet

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Waiting Patiently Impatiently

OH MIA MYA

 



Author's Response:

Patiently Impatiently! Love it!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 11:13 PM Title: 21 Are We There Yet

Did Esme never marry? How old was she when she assumed care of her nephew?
I really do love the way Edward feels the need to word vomit in front of Momma's Esme. I can't imagine the feelings of constantly mourning his mothers loss as he looks at Esme's familial smile.

The annual ramping up of the level of teasing seems epic this year due to Bella's presence.
I can't wait until its Whit's turn to stand in the line of fire when Alice enters the picture. Add Esme to. that thought as well.

Credit to Bella for zinging Gopher with the cake jibe.

Author's Response:

Esme got close once but it just didn't feel right in the end. She was 20 when she took over care for Edward. It's part of why she has such a good balance between mom and friend. LOL I agree Bella's prescense is making the teasing worse and I'm sure Edward will be watching for any little chance to get back at Whit and his mom. LOL

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 11:03 PM Title: 21 Are We There Yet

I hate when when that little scroll bar thingy over there ---> starts getting closer to the bottom of the page and there's not another chapter :( but that just shows that I love this ff ;)



Author's Response:

LOL  I understand. I've felt it many times with fics I've read and loved. We'll have a Next for you soon!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 10:34 AM Title: 21 Are We There Yet

:)

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Date: 01 Feb 2013 10:11 AM Title: 20 Sunken Shark & Parachute Jump

:)

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 7:18 AM Title: 21 Are We There Yet

Another awesome chapter, can't wait for more.



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Thanks!!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 4:24 AM Title: 20 Sunken Shark & Parachute Jump

The one word that sums up this chapter for me: revealing.
1. The emotional connection they each bring to their job.
2. The support and devotion to each other as colleges and so much more as friends.
3. Bella's ultimate fears, her strengths and desires. A new boldness when dealing with Edward.
4. To Edward: the possibility of being able to balance his passions for his company and work with loving and caring for the love of his life simultaneously.

So happy Esme was able to witness the growing affection between Bella and her son.

Author's Response:

:) All my favorite things about this chapter!

Reviewer: LuvRPatz4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 4:09 AM Title: 21 Are We There Yet

Well they seem like a really great family.  I wish I had one like theirs. lol.  Now I do believe there will be more teasing for Masen in the next chapter. lol.  Great way to spend his birthday.



Author's Response:

Oh definitely more teasing! He makes it far too easy ;)

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2013 3:53 AM Title: 21 Are We There Yet

He's got it bad.



Author's Response:

So bad! LOL

Reviewer: lahragal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2013 5:57 PM Title: 19 Diving Deep

Damn good story and this was one of the best chapters to date. Loved their emotional struggles to not only understand the other but their own as well. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you! We appreciate hearing you enjoyed so much.

Reviewer: Momoffour Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 12:31 AM Title: 19 Diving Deep

Wonderful story. Great details. Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks, momoffour!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2012 3:28 PM Title: 19 Diving Deep

Whit and Lee gave the best advice considering the circumstances. Glad Edward listened this time.
I thought Ben's observations were just right in describing the current status of E&B's relationship.
Bella's over thinking almost cost her the happiness she and Edward deserve.

Author's Response:

Whit and Lee are enjoying their ability to watch all of this unfold. LOL Bella's struggling but she's definitely holding her own as well. It's got to be such a struggle just to be there, to know she's there to deal with sharks. Then to be falling for a guy who likes them and wants to protect them ... Not an easy spot to be in for sure.

Reviewer: LeslieWhitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 9:36 PM Title: 19 Diving Deep

Always excited when you update. Great chapter.

Though I keep waiting for Bella to pull out a pic of Alice and Jasper to figure it all out.

Author's Response:

I know a lot of folks are waiting for that but that's not how Whit will figure it out. ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 6:11 PM Title: 19 Diving Deep

:) Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you too

Reviewer: allidel Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 7:15 AM Title: 19 Diving Deep

Yay!!  Thank you for the Christmas present...it's perfect!

Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!

~allidel :)

Reviewer: cjrich Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 6:19 AM Title: 19 Diving Deep

Merry Christmas and THANK YOU for sending out this wonderful chapter!  Love this story and looks like these two are really starting to move forward.  lol, Cheri

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 5:41 AM Title: 19 Diving Deep

Another awesome chapter, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 4:17 AM Title: 19 Diving Deep

Omg!  This was one of the best chapters to date!

i was sooo worried she was walking away!  This was such a turning point for both if them!  And a humongous turning point is it!!!  Love is in the air, water, and on the boat!

what they saw with Ben and Ang!  What Ben saw with Edward and Bella ;)

i freaking love lee and jazz, those fucking nudgers are amazing!  Telling her everything she needed to hear at that time. And then Jazz telling him what he needed to hear and know how to make her understand!

Oh my god!  My heart was racing!  I loved it!

Thank you for the wonderful Christmas gift!  I hope both if yours are amazing!!!

Xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

those fucking nudgers are amazing -- this had me snorting hard! Thanks!!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2012 1:47 AM Title: 19 Diving Deep

awww they are getting there!!!!!  please can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Ladyros Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2012 8:54 PM Title: 18 Nudger Strikes Again

Great chapter love this story



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2012 6:42 AM Title: 18 Nudger Strikes Again

Delightful chapter.
It shouldn't take long for Gopher to figure out what Whit and Lee already know. Guess that only leaves Esme. She'll be so ecstatic that Edward's b-day celebration will have something extra special planned for him and Bella to enjoy alone.
Sounds like both E&B are working through the idea of committing to work and forging a relationship together. So many examples, Angela and Ben (married/working together) Gopher & Lee (involved and working together), to glean information from while spending time together.
Are Carlisle and Alice going to coordinate a visit soon?

Author's Response:

Trust us, Gopher already knows. LOL  Everything Lee knows, he knows.  So yes, Esme is left and she will be very delighted!

Carlisle and Alice will definitely be joining the story. Just a few events need to happen first.

Reviewer: MPMassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:17 PM Title: 18 Nudger Strikes Again

Yay! It's about time he got his shit together LOL 



Author's Response:

LOL We agree!

Reviewer: LeslieWhitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 5:11 PM Title: 18 Nudger Strikes Again

I am always SO excited when I get my update email for this story. I usually drop everything to see what the crew has been up to.

So glad that Mase is actually ready to admit that he wants something with Guppy and that he is actually doing something about it.

Can't wait for the next update. Oh and more Whit please. I could eat him with a spoon!!!!

Author's Response:

Eat with a spoon! We love it!! And we will certainly keep Whit at the forefront ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 11:06 AM Title: 18 Nudger Strikes Again

:)

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 10:55 AM Title: 18 Nudger Strikes Again

Awesome chapter. Love this story and can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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