Date: 12 Mar 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
NO! you're making edward marry tanya!?! that is wrong on so many levels! of course, it's not like there's a whole lot in the story that's "right", but.....maybe i'm being rash. after all, it's not like edward has feelings for bella--other than lust, that is. maybe, even being married, he would keep her as a companion. carlisle's doing it.
Date: 03 Mar 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 57
I thought Alice liked Bella. Why would Edward have to get another companion? Will Edward's family not accept Bella as his wife? I am proud that Edward throw Alice out. Glad that he realizes what is important to him, Bella.
Date: 03 Mar 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 57
I guess I can see Edward going back to run the company if and only if Bella is allowed by his side and Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle share the responsibilities. Alice is still pouting because Bella cut her out of companion time.
Wonder what you have in store for them as a family.
Date: 02 Mar 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 57
I am glad Edward threw Alice out! She deserved it! If she wanted her brother back should could have talk to him differently, but she doesn't care about him, she just wants her husband back. I am glad Edward finally found his home. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 56
Just wanted to say that I love your story! Started reading it yesterday and I'm already finished... couldn't stop!
I also wanted to ask you whether you planned to work any more on Taken? That's another one I really enjoy!
Thanks for your amazing stories!
Date: 01 Mar 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 56
Yay, their going to have a family. Now this makes sense for him. Something that I think will bring him true joy, besides sexin' times with Bella.
Yes, I've read Transcendence but I can't quite finish it, I'm a little too emotional to finish it right yet-- great story:-)
Date: 29 Feb 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 56
that was wonderful......a part of him must have been slightly disappointed to find out the baby he thought was his wasn't...no I know he didn't care about the schrew/wench of a business merger wife, but the baby....so I was happy to see him ask her if a family is something she would want....
Happy for Rose and Emmett too!!!
Transendence - OMHeck weren't those last 3 chapters something?! first heartwrenching and then Innnttteeerresting....Veeery Interesting....
Till next time take care. Kathy
Date: 29 Feb 2012 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 56
I am glad they are conecting with Rose and Emmett and talking about a family. Of course you are right I have read transecendence loved it and so sad it is over it was amazing there is another story I am reading I am loving and it is called The Cullen Companion lol.
Date: 24 Feb 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 32
Wow, good for Bella & Jasper back in the beginning encouraging her to say no to the spoiled pixie. But to cut off all her hair & try to trick her into it is evil.:(
Things are getting a little abusive round there.
Date: 24 Feb 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 48
Edward threw it all away by not telling her his plans. By not including her in creating the future they both want.
Will Carlisle seek her out and bring her back for his son? It's the least he could do after the hell he put him through for a grandchild.
Date: 24 Feb 2012 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 40
Interesting how Edward sees this pregnancy as his way out of the marriage and Bella sees it as the demise of her companionship With Edward.
As the author, you've got this figured out. But, as the reader we are in full blown panic mode.
Date: 24 Feb 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 34
Bella is still providing services to the family even though she is no longer under contract to do so. Is that to keep the peace within the family or is she attempting to balance out their unmet needs to keep them off of Edwards case?
Date: 24 Feb 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 28
Of course it would be Jane and Alec who are sent to take care of any mistakes made by the companions.
Where is the patriarch, Carlisle, does he have nothing to say in this matter since he is the one who brought Isabella into his home?
Date: 24 Feb 2012 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
Let the games begin. Tanya needs to be put in her rightful place as an incubator. She can have kids, right? Did the Denali's bargain a defective daughter in the area of reproduction?
Carlisle needs to have a specialist examine Tanya to find out if she can even conceive.
Date: 24 Feb 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'll bet if they went back in their history they would find more than one child out of wedlock that helped keep up the family name.
I'm still voting for the turkey basting method. It will save Edward the headache and heartache.
Feel for Edward more and more since his siblings were able to pursue their hearts desires.
Date: 24 Feb 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
When is her contract up?
Edward will not repeat those words again. How sad for both of them.
If he needs an air so badly, why not use artificial insemination. Bella could even help get him off enough times to bank plenty of his seed.
Date: 24 Feb 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 21
What a messed up life they have become a part of.
Edward dismissed Tanya quite handily.
When does the baby come? Could Tanya be holding out on him by taking birth control or some other method to prevent a pregnancy? It would keep her around a lot longer.
Date: 24 Feb 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
Yes, he is a bastard. Do I blame him. Not really. I almost feel sorry for Tanya being played the fool, for believing all the lies she was fed by her family. Just another pawn in the ways of the wealthy, soulless, money hungry people like her father.
Edward better treat Bella like a precious commodity that can at anytime be taken away.