Date: 22 Mar 2012 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 59
Back here on TWCS because FF is so fail with everything right now...
So, yeah, a little disappointed that we didn't get to hear Bella tell Edward about the baby...it might make a nice outtake for charity or something?
I don't understand why Alice is such a bitch?! Is she really that jealous of Bella that she feels she needs to antagonize them so much? Did she set the family on them because she doesn't want Jasper to have to run the company?
Oh, and thought that Emmett was actually the oldest son? Why isn't he the "Cullen Heir" or was Carlisle referring to Bella's unborn child?
I can't believe the audacity of the Cullen's to actually show up unannounced in California! What are they hoping to accomplish? I'm assuming that it's only Carlisle, Esme and Alice because Emmett and Rosalie have left the family and Jasper was call Edward from the office, right?
I can't wait to hear what happens next! I LOVE that Edward punched his asshole father out! I wish he would punch Alice too!
Good for Edward for not even letting them near Bella...I wish they could work out the situation, but I'm guessing that won't be happening since all they care about is their damn corporation and mergers and heirs....
Looking forward to more!
Date: 21 Mar 2012 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 59
I am so pround of Edward for protecting his family like he is. Carlisle is not there because he is happy he is going to be a grandpa. They are only there for show. I am glad Edward was there to meet them. I hope they go home now. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 21 Mar 2012 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 59
Proud of Edward, disappointed in Esme and mad as hell at Alice (usally my favorite). Carlisle just got what he deserved. Have loved this story from the very first word, very first chapter and will miss it, so if you have a few more ideas in the wonderfully brilliant mind of yours I say go for it. It will make all of us out here very happy! Thank you - Cheri
Date: 21 Mar 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 59
Ah! They're coming out of the woodwork! By the way, bravo Jasper for the heads-up! Something tells me Carlisle won't quit THIS easily. Nice work! The reveal is really unnecessary - the feeling and passion Edward feels about his child and Bella are there and that's what Wally matters!
Date: 19 Mar 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 58
I don't really have a word but my nephew hates the often abusded use of 'literally' so we torture him by using it as often as we can, haha.
Great chapter, I'm not sure I understand her distaste for marriage though.
Date: 18 Mar 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 58
Not sure why some women feel it makes them stronger to not get married... I think it makes them weaker for not taking a chance to bind themselves with someone they profess to love. It is always more difficult to not put yourself first but to have to think of another and learn to compromise.
Date: 18 Mar 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 58
Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
For me it is not a word, but my co-worker has a habit of repeating himslef at least 3 -4 times about the same subject in the same conversation......It gets on my nevers so bad I want to rip my ears off so I don't have to listen to him anymore..............
Date: 17 Mar 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 58
Yay! another chapter! I understand about your RL issues and time constraints so I "can be" patient! Now do I want to be patient, No never... but you make it soooo worth the wait. Loved the chapter and will be happy for the next, as we can see what's coming.... Yippee! Our boy is going to be over the moon happy! Laters Doll Kathy
Date: 17 Mar 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 58
"Awesome"-I hate the overuse of the word. Occasionally there really is a reason to use it, but not that often. But each generation has an over used word. "cool; groovy; like; and now "amazing" is been over used. Do they not teach adjectives & adverbs anymore??
Now having ranted, I love the update. Ooo are we preggers?
Date: 17 Mar 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 58
There will always be catch phrases or 'buzz words' in every field of work and or study. It's best too think out side those walls and create your own line of thinking. It's also a delight to make fun of the over use of said words!
Bella's pregnant.......why refuse Edward's proposal?
Date: 14 Mar 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
So far this is a really good story. I don't think it's fair for Bella to be tretaed that way and Edward should put his foot down. I don't like Tanya, she knew of the companionshipe the Cullen's had with Bella.
Date: 13 Mar 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 49
i must confess i didn't see that one coming either. although, i suppose i shouldn't be shocked. why would i expect tanya to be so wholesome as to remain faithful to edward? i'm so glad that's not his baby, but it just makes me hate tanya more for putting everyone through that and having edward finance this whole fiasco.
Date: 13 Mar 2012 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 47
so bella has a decision to make? i don't want her to leave (for the sake of love), but i'd be packing about now because it'd be too hard to watch all the changes going on in edward's life, which also impact bella, while being powerless to stop any of it.
Date: 13 Mar 2012 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 40
i feel very worried. to me, tanya's pregnancy is a huge threat to bella and edward's relationship. or at least to the permanence of their relationship. i wouldn't want to be with edward if there'd always be another woman (or their offspring) in the picture. i don't think edward's love would be enough to candycoat that.
Date: 12 Mar 2012 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 31
love the princess bride! this chapter was pure fluff. i'm beginning to realize how unique an individual a companion must be. she reserves the right to say "no" but would only do so if the arrangement felt harmful to her. bella's so generous...
Date: 12 Mar 2012 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 21
they're all ballsy....interesting. who said it first? i'm guessing bella, but for her sake i hope it wasn't her. i don't like that she's contracted to be here for this. i know you said she can leave whenever, but it would be extremely painful for her to leave edward (and thus the cullens) at this point.