Date: 31 May 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 64
Brilliant ending! Our followed your chosen form and yet wrapped decades into it. We know each child and in the beginning of this chapter, it could have been just after Mia's birth. Sneakily brilliant! Thank you!
Date: 31 May 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 64
"the grey at your temples started when they started chasing her back." that was my favorite line in the chapter. I can't believe it already finished. :)
* does this mean you'll be updating the "Apple Dumpling Club" next??
Date: 23 May 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 63
You are in my city now. I hope you have a great time in Georgia. I am so proud of how Edward and Bella are making it on their own. I'm glad that Edward let Esme be there for the birth. Bella liked her and Edward needs to come to terms with his family. He doesn't need them running his life. He needs to be in control of his life and his families wellbeing. Standing up to Carlisle shows them that he is a man and not a pawn for the company. That being said, they are still his family and he needs to separate the company from private feelings. Carlisle should have did that all along. Edward is still Carlisle's son. It is Edward's choice if he wants to work for the family company from California. He is incharge of his life. I think this will get Edward the respect he deserves from Carlisle. He is is own man. Carlisle needed to be humbled a bit.
Date: 23 May 2012 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 63
I am so happy they have a baby girl. Edward and his girls...he has got the best life has to offer. I can't wait for the epi. I hope they have a little boy too. Just a thought. Great job...thanks so much! I hope you are having a great time on your vacation!!!
Date: 23 May 2012 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 63
Twelve hours... And Edward can't even remember they passed, that's how happy he is. He is haing a tough time grasping it all. His joy is so much he lets Esme stay, ut keeps it from Bella, at least for a while. That was a good idea.
Date: 15 May 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 62
I don't know I think by not getting married and not having the cullen last name is giving Carlisle more control.. They are letting him win sort of speak.. Carlisle cannot take control without Edward and Bella giving it..
Date: 20 Apr 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 61
Happy 30th Birthday! Now you are 18 year old with 12 years of experience! :)
Thank you very much for your totally exquisite story! It's like a gulp of so much needed fresh air in the world of fanfiction!
Now for this chapter - Bella's seen real examples of unhappy marriages' experiences. It's not like she's afraid her mariage with Edward would be like that. I think this very concept is not valid anymore to Bella. And with expecting the baby and having emotionally detached from his family they are married in so many ways :))
Date: 13 Apr 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 61
Happy Early Birthday wishes... Enjoy the day! Carpe Diem as Fifty Shades would say, right! LOL!!! Not sure if your a E L James and MOTU fan or not, but I love her writing. Anyway.... Sweetie remember age is JUST a number.... accomplish what you want in life sweetie and live each day fully! Your story rocks....
Now for Edward - and some love for him - Well Yes, our Boy is so happy now, and you could just hear through the words his delight in his ability to makes his Bella giggle. What a joy it must be for him to be loved just for himself without expectation... Like Emmett and Rose found with one another. Do I think E and B should get married before little wee one arrives. Well YES, but no at the same time. Because like you so aptly stated they LOVE one another fully, they are fully committed to each other without reservation... IF they don't need it and you don't want them married, hey... who am I to judge, marriage does not mean anything without the Love, Devotion and Committment of Trust, Loyality they already have each and every day.... so that's my thoughts and by Gosh I'm sticking to it!!!
Have the happiest DAY next week and take care of you Sweetie! Laters BB Kathy
Date: 13 Apr 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 61
I totally get it. My sister and her boyfriend have been dating for 17 years, and every year on their anniversary her proposes knowing she'll say no but he still does. They love each other and enough for her. But their 5 kids don't get it, oh well maybe some day they will. Anyways I totally get it. No questions or confusion on my side. Just purely enjoying the story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 13 Apr 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 61
Happy Birthday!! I have loved this story since you first stated posting it! Love that they are finally together and that they don't feel the need to get married. Not listening to Carlisle is the best thing that they can do for their family. Which is what they are a family! Love, love this story! :)
Date: 13 Apr 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 61
Happy Birthday!!!! You have to do something fun that day!!!
Emmett is more conflicted than Edward when it comes to their family. A part of Emmett would love to be able to have some kind of relaitonship with them. As for Edward, he doesn't care, in fact he would rather not be part of them any longer. However he is since because of them, Bella is now his life.
Date: 13 Apr 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 61
If they get married at some point it will be on their terms. They love each other and are together and that is all that matters. I am glad they are close with Rose and Emmett. Great job...thanks!!! Happy Birthday a little early!