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Reviewer: Obsessive-lamb Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2017 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 64

Awesome, lovely story, thank you.

Reviewer: lndadew21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2017 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 64

Finally got to the end. I loved it. The style takes a bit to get used to, but it still gets to you. You know?

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2016 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 64

Great story with a great idea.

Reviewer: nep51 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2016 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 64

This was a very good read.

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2015 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 64

awesome story ;) i wasn't too sure at first but gave it a try and i'm so glad i did ;) thanks for sharing it on here for us (please complete apc) ;D

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 64

Thanks for sharing this awesome drabble style fic. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 63

Sweet.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 62

You can feel the contentment they have in their lives.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 61

They deserve to be happy.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 60

They're perfect for each other. The Cullen's have some gall to think they are entitled to anything concerning Edward and Bella. 

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 59

Good for Edward.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 58

Excited for Bella.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 57

I can't believe how ungrateful Alice acted.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 56

At least he reconnected with part of his family.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 55

He's found his place.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 54

That's just what they need, some place just for them.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 53

They're finally together.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 52

Let him in, Bella.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 51

Gotta give him his due, he's trying.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 50

Poor Bella.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 49

I'm releived the baby wasn't Edward's, and glad he's going after Bella.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 48

Bella is saving herself.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 47

Heartbreaking.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 46

Poor Rose.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 45

Edward needs to explode more often.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 44

Go Bella!!

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 43

At least Edward is trying to cover his bases. 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 42

Tanya doesn't know when to give up, does she?

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 41

Their bubble is gonna get busted.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 40

Is the baby even Edward's?

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 39

I'm nervous about that pregnancy test result.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 38

I love Esme.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 37

This isn't going to end well.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 36

I don't like the sound of that. Tanya will demand she leave.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 35

Sad situation.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 34

I like Rose.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 33

Tanya is unbelievable.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 32

They're all gonna be jealous of her soon, aren't they?

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 31

One day.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 30

Powerful.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 29

Charges files against Tanya, what does that mean for Edward?

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 28

I'm anxious to read on.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 27

The Volturi can't take her away.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 26

Tanya is a real bitch. Glad Edward walked away from her to Bella.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 25

These two have so much passion for each other.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 24

Or could they?

Edward got the end of the stick.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 23

Oh he is yours.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 22

She needs to let him know the feelings she has for him.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 21

I loved it.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 20

Get her boy. Is it wrong I want Tanya to see him with her?

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 19

Fucked up, indeed.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

I was sure the wedding would be called off.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 17

Good for Esme.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

Something has got to happen within those four days to call off the wedding.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 15

I dislike Tanya.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 14

Poor Bella.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 13

I kinda feel bad for the situation Edward is in.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 12

Holy hell...

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

I like Jasper's advice.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 10

He can't touch her, but can she not touch him?

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 9

Bella certainly knows how to work them all.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 8

I'm looking forward to Edward and Bella coming together.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 7

I can only imagine how unfulling Bella's life is at the moment.

Sherry

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Date: 03 Aug 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 6

I don't like the sound of his impending merger/wedding to Tanya.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

I'm intrigued.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh Edward...

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 3

Damn...a bit kinky.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

That has to be Alice.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start.

Sherry

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 64

So glad  they are happy. I am a little sad that they have never gotten married. But to each his own. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 63

Glad everything is ok with the baby 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 62

Glad she let him spoil her

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 60

Glad Edward is honest with Bella 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 58

Why wont  she marry him? Glad they are loving each other. 

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2015 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 64

Thank you...just found this and read it straight through...great story!

now off to find any other works of yours! T

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 64

Wow I totally loved this story! Read it in one day! Couldn't put my iPad down! Great story!! Thank you. 

Hope you will update Apple dumpling soon! Love that one toooo! 

Reviewer: ocdcullen01 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 64

ty for sharing. loved it

Reviewer: kaylade22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 29

 

NO MORE ANGST....BECAUSE OF THAT BITCH TANYA !!!!!

DAMN ....I ALMOST HAD A HEART ATTACK !!!!!

 

On with the story.............

 

Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)

Reviewer: kaylade22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 20

 

NO ... he's not a bastard ... clever mother fucker ...YES !!!!

I LOVE THE WAY THE CONTRACT WAS FIXED AGAINST TANYA ....she's getting exactly what she deserves.

E/B are getting ... partially what they deserve. They should end up with a HEA ... minus Tanya.

Truly enjoying your story... thanks muches for sharing it with me

 

Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)

Reviewer: Bklyngrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2014 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 58

'Paradigm shift.' If I never hear that phrase again I will be a happy camper!

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 64

Very original. Great story.

Reviewer: Blondie_xox Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2013 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 64

Love this story! Especially the epilogue, I got tears streaming down my face!

I'm so happy for them, im a sucker for HEAs!

Reviewer: icefrog Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 64

Amazing story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you

Reviewer: jmthorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 64

It would have been nice if they would have gotten married but great story

Reviewer: movieandbookgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 64

great fic!

Reviewer: Mrsakey Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 64

Wonderful amazing brilliant story

Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 64

I really enjoyed this story. Love how they are together. 

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 64

enjoyed reading

Reviewer: cnybella Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 64

I have read my share of Twilight fanfiction. I truly enjoy yours. Not too sappy but in a very fictional way as close to real life as fanfiction can get! Thanks for taking the time to write about the characters we all love so much.

Reviewer: cantstopreadingff Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 64

Wonderful story...I really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: rgh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 30

Wow!!  That brought me to tears...beautiful story...thank you.

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 64

you MUST have a way with words. "old people" making love generally grosses me out, but somehow i'm not appalled at these two. their children sound very interesting, but i guess they had to be since their parents always lived/loved together and never married. this was a good ending. it just took me a while to come back to the story and finish it.

Reviewer: thirstforknowledge Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 63

loved this chapter. it brought back so many memories. my husband still loves to tell everyone how much pain he was in during my labor.  :)

Reviewer: yoli Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 64

So I just read this in one night. At first, I was going to bail. Not my cup of tea. But you held my interest and I found myself halfway through. :) good story.

Reviewer: lila_mrv Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 64

really loved your story - loved how you managed to add such dept to the characters and details to the scenes in short sweet chapters

 

thank you

Reviewer: Annie17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 64

This was really really good. It is one of the few stories that kept me up all night reading them because I just couldn't not find out what was to happen, thus me writing this at 4:58 in the morning. Well done though, this is some great work!

Reviewer: Love2read01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 64

Great story!!

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 44

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Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 43

;-)

Reviewer: CullenHunter Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 42

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