Date: 12 Mar 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love your story, hope it updates soon:-)
Date: 11 Nov 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm enjoying this story so far. I guess they aren't to far apart in age........get a load of Jacob playing the 'big brother' part ;-) Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep 'em comin'.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2011 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hi there! =) I think Bella and Edward got along just great; it seems that they have much in common. I laughed when Edward asked Bella how old she was; I knew he was checking to see if she was legal. =)
I agree with you about Bella, it's going to take her a little time to get used to a man showing an interest in her. I guess we can't blame her though, between the lack of confidence and her innocence, it's bound to take some getting used to.
I can't wait to see how things go as they get to know each other. I wonder how many 'taco' nights there will be? Edward is a doctor who works crazy ass hours, and he doesn't cook much so I think that he and Bella should have a lot of meals together. But that's just my opinion. ;)
Thanks for writing, and I'll look forward to your next chapter. =) K
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2011 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
glad your not rushing E&B, hopefully it wont take too long on them getting some action, maybe a little kissy face,lol. looking forward to more.c.
Date: 10 Nov 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
Boy, These two aren't welcomed on either side. At least they both seem mature about it.
Date: 09 Nov 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
Whats up with the family?? Esme should read them the riot act!
Author's Response:
It was important to me that the family didn't just welcome her right into the family, Usually it just Rose thats the bitch so I decided to make them all bitches at least in that chapter plus it will add for some interesting story line later on. I think I might do an Esme outtake later on..? Keep your reviews coming and Thanks for reading!
Date: 09 Nov 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Awesome story, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
Date: 09 Nov 2011 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loving this so far. Of course I love the meeting of E&B, and how normal instinct is taken over by something else! Can't wait to see how things develop between them.
Also would like to see Esme POV on how rude her family was towards Bella and her confronting them! JMO!
Will be looking forward to the next update!
peach
Author's Response:
Its funny that you mention the Esme POV. I had considered it, but it didn't feel right yet. So maybe further in the story I will do and Esme outtake. That could be fun! Thanks for reading and especially reviewing I love it!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
Damn! What was up with Edward's family? At least Esme was nice. Poor Bella, and poor Edward; I would just die if my family acted that way. I wonder if it was because Bella was younger than Edward, age is only a number and besides, there is only ten years between them and that is so not a big deal. Maybe they were just in shock because he's never brought a girl home to meet the family. I don't think that's a good enough excuse though.
So, chinese food at Bella's place huh? That'll be good, they can get to know each other better. Edward is pretty confident about spending more time with Bella. I giggled when he told her that she could make him tacos some other night. *smirk* Bella isn't looking for a man to be in her life, but I think she's about to get one. I bet she'll come to crave that attention, and affection.
Loving your story; I'm so glad you're writing it. I'm having so much fun reading it! =) K
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading my story. I wanted Edwards family to be different than so many other FF stories I have read. There is no such thing as the perfect family and its nice to have some drama! I think the transition for Bella accepting the fact that Edward would want more from her than friendship with be hard for her but we shall see ;) Keep the reviews coming!
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2011 11:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
wow,so does esme rip them a new one,lol , i could see her going mama bear on them for how they acted. excellent ch. looking forward to more.c.
Author's Response:
Of course she rips them a new one, if those were my kids it would not end pretty. Thank you for your review!
Date: 09 Nov 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
Aaawwwww.......poor Bella. Well....at least she can still have dinner with Edward ;-)
Author's Response:
Yea, in the end dinner with Edward is all anyone needs lol
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Another good chapter!! Can't wait to find out how dinner goes......sneaky devil not telling Bella the "whole" fam will be there :-).
Thanks for the update and keep them coming!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you like this story. Edward isn't so smooth in my story lol. Keep your reviews coming I LOVE reviews!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
<3,<3,<3......................... OK, i am hooked on another of your stories,yey, hope you update soon, looking forward to whats next.c.
Author's Response:
Good I am glad you like this one too. I am hoping to keep a somewhat regular schedule for updating each story sometimes is will be once a week other times it will be more. Keep your reviews coming I LOVE them!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm looking forward to dinner at the Cullen's house. ;) I had a thought about Jess; I wonder if maybe she is the 'stalker' type, and might go ballistic if she finds out about Dr. Cullens dinner plans. Of course, it could be worse...I guess it depends on how obsessed she is with Edward.*****Sorry for the rant, sometimes I get an idea in my head and I keep talking about it.
Looking forward to your next chapter. Kelly =)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your reviews I truly appreciate them. Its funny how the Jessica character almost always get a bad wrap in the FF stories lol. I love ranting! Keep your reviews coming!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your reviews I truly appreciate them. Its funny how the Jessica character almost always get a bad wrap in the FF stories lol. I love ranting! Keep your reviews coming!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well, Jess sounds like all kinds of fun. Stalker much, Jess? *laughs* Edward's damn pager just had to go off didn't it? I have to wonder if he had reached the chief's room if he might have met Bella.
As far as pov's are concerned; I like to hear things from both pov's. I should say I like to hear E/B pov's. =) It's always nice to hear what they are thinking, feeling, etc. Of course it's ultimately up to you, as you are the author. =) Thanks for writing.
Kelly =)
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh poor Bella, how scary to see her dad hooked up to all those machines, wires, and tubes.(I know how hard that is; I was there with my own dad last year)
How sweet was Charlie to get her bedroom redecorated, add the bathroom, and make her a space to dance in. Awww, what a dad.
I'm looking forward to seeing how your story plays out. Of course it will be great when Dr.Cullen makes his appearance at the hospital. *giggles* =) Thanks again for writing.
Kelly =)
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi there!
I'm looking forward to reading your story. I really like what I've read so far. Thanks for writing.
Kelly =)
Date: 07 Nov 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
Very good chapter. They finally meet and he doesn't waste any time.LOL The POV'S were not confusing to me at all!
Author's Response:
Thank you! In another story I am having a hard time getting the meeting to happen lol but not in this one. I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 07 Nov 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
Darn, They still haven't met!
So far it has been good with both POV'S. As long as they don't get repetitive, If they do maybe keep them in the same chapter? I hope you keep going. The reviews will pick up.
Author's Response:
I was worried about the POVs getting repetitive, so if they do give me a heads up! I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Date: 07 Nov 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
That was a great chapter. I Love how your story has changed the situations but with the same basic ideas. This seems like an awesome Charlie. I also like how Jacob is already spoken for.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good story start!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Good start to the story. I hope you continue it!
Author's Response:
I do plan to continue it and thank you for reading!