Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:28 AM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for writing another interesting story xo
Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:27 AM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for writing another interesting story xo
Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:27 AM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for writing another interesting story xo
Date: 16 Sep 2020 8:27 AM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for writing another interesting story xo
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2015 11:25 PM Title: Epilogue
sweet ending ;) 5 kids!!!! it's was a shame about alice ;( and roses diagnosis ;( but i thought she was pregnant at the same time as bella the 1st time? thanks for posting this on here for us ;D
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2014 6:41 AM Title: Epilogue
It was a good story😆
Date: 08 Feb 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
Looks like I missed this chapter, for some weird reason! It was such a relief that Edward and Sam made it back to their own guys, They were extremely lucky to be taken in by that couple who were friendly to Americans and not Taliban sympathizers!
Date: 08 Feb 2014 11:29 AM Title: Epilogue
Quite the wrap up for this story! Edward and Bella have a big family, five children! That's a bunch to take care of, but it sounds like they have love and support from friends and family. Funny about Jake being a good friend now, What a shocker about Renee, no wonder she acted weird! Good riddance! How sad that Alice died of cancer and left Jasper to raise their daughter alone, poor guy! Sounds like life is pretty good for everyone, all things considered!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I am actually going to be pulling it in the near future and giving it an overhaul. Keep it in your faves, because some things may change. Also, yes, when Edward is in the hospital I took a LOT of creative liberty there. I was actually blasted for that one...LOL. Thanks for reading.
Liz
Date: 08 Feb 2014 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
I figured as big as Bella was getting, there might be the possiblity of twins, and sure enough a boy and a girl! That's a really great addition! Thank heaven Edward made it in time to see them born! Oh yeah, what in the hell is wrong with Jake? Is he as nuts as Renee? I just have to shake my head in amazement!
Date: 08 Feb 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
The whole family is getting in on the baby craze! Bella and Edward will have the first grandchild, then Rose and Emmet's is due, and now Alice wants to get pregnant! Too bad Mike doesn't have something joyous to look forward to, it might help him recover in a better frame of mind. He's sure bitter.
Date: 08 Feb 2014 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 17
What a blessing, for Edward as well as the other patients, to have Carlisle on the job! It's pathetic that there aren't enough doctors and nurses for the troops. I'm really hoping you are writing that for purposes of this story, as I'd hate to think it was SOP !
Date: 08 Feb 2014 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh dear lord, they all have to be praying hard right about now! At least the baby seems to be okay for now.
Date: 08 Feb 2014 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 14
Some Thanksgiving this turned out to be! How horrifying for Bella and Edward's family, to hear of the bombing of the hotel in Kandahar, and having no idea whether he was there or not! It was something out of a nightmare when Renee showed up and went crazy all over Bella, too! I'm glad they slapped her in jail!
Date: 08 Feb 2014 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 13
Is there no end to the crass stupidity of Bella's mother and Jacob Black? What a pair those two are! I hope Bella doesn't waste any more emotional energy on either of them! I'm holding a good thought for Edward and his unit, though. He needs to come home to his Bella and his son!
Date: 08 Feb 2014 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
You write very evenly balanced chapters, some good, some bad! The baby on the way is really happy news, as is Rose and Emmett's wedding. Not good to hear that Edward's unit is heading into trouble, though! Hope they make it out okay!
Date: 08 Feb 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 11
That's just what comes with being married to a soldier,especially one who's deployed. I admire such people so much, for what they do and how strong they are, their sacrifice is truly priceless!
Date: 08 Feb 2014 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
So she cried for the loss of her daughter, and who's fault is that? Nobody forced Renee to be an ass, she did that all on her own! Talk about a whirlwind wedding, Edward and his helpers ought to get an award! It sounds beautiful and I bet they couldn't be happier, for the short time they have. About the reviewer that wrote you an ugly one, calling you heartless, have faith. I'm firmly convinced what you put out in this life comes back to you many times over. Besides, life's too short to worry about idiots like that!
Date: 08 Feb 2014 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
Just one of those things you never know the reason for it happening. Doesn't make it hurt any less, especially when they can't hold each other and mourn together. At least Bella had his mom and her friends for support. Who did Edward have?
Date: 08 Feb 2014 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was wonderful and terrible all at once! Ten days full of love and then heartbreak while he flies away! I will now cross my fingers and hope he's safe and she manages without him!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hope they get to have their time off together! Wonderful gift he sent for Christmas, now they can see each other once in a while! I can't bring myself to be angry at Bella kicking her mother out of the house. It was exactly what she deserved after those horrible things she said!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like the growing rapport between Edward and Bella, and Emmett's proposal to Rose was so sweet! I absolutely can't believe Renee! How dould she feel it was the right thing to do, to invite Jake to Christmas dinner? Made me want to smack her so hard! That's not maternal love to me, just clueless, smug certainty!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
I loved Halloween and Thanksgiving at Bella's house! If only Edward could have been with them all! It looks like his parents are thrilled to meet Bella, that should make everyone happy! Hope he stays safe over there!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yes indee, I'm really enjoying the letters! I knew if Bella had a new picture yaken, Edward would be wanting one! Emmett is a sweetie, bringing Bella the best of gifts, her brother!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
What do you mean he's never seen her face? I thought Emmett sent a picture of Bella to his brother? Anyway, I'm glad Jasper is okay and Edward found him. That makes for a strong bond between him and Bella! I look forward to their letters!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Fate works in funny ways. Just as Bella starts her class project correspondence, she breaks up with her long-time boyfriend. Now she's free to see or fall for anyone she pleases! It looks like may happen even sooner than she knows! I wonder if Emmett is going to tell Bella about Jasper's assignment. just in a general way? Who knows, it might be classified!
Date: 07 Feb 2014 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
There goes Emmett, matchmaking I guess. Bella's class project sounds great, and I have heard of similar things taking place. Makes it nice for the troops and good for the kids, too!
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2013 10:40 PM Title: Epilogue
The story is okay it just sucks that Alice dies
Date: 10 Jan 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
It's so nice that Bella has such a big support system.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow! Didn't see that coming. It was really sweet though.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
It has to be so hard for them to stay strong at times.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh! I hope Jake being there doesn't mess up Bella and Edward's Skype time. Stupid Renee.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
Awww! That is really sweet that Edward told his parents about Bella already.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Thank God! Even though she knew Jasper was alright it's never quite real until you can see it with your own eyes.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
It was really great to see a little interaction between Edward and Emmett. And I like that edward gave Bella the heads up about Emmett's possible alteriermotives. .
Date: 10 Jan 2013 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! This is really good. I wonder if Emmett will share what he found out about Jasper? I also wonder if Emmett gave Bella his brothers company.
Date: 10 Jan 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
I came across this story and had to give it a try. I'm really glad I did.
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2012 11:50 PM Title: Epilogue
Lol I'm from San Bernardino and matter in fact I don't live that far from San Bernardino High School too lol even though I didn't go to that school but another one in the area called Arroyo Valley High School. My little brother and 2 little cousins all in the same grade as freshman go to San Bernardino High School lol which makes it so cool and funny too in a good way lol
Can wait to read more of your work in the future
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2012 10:01 PM Title: Epilogue
enjoyed reading
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2012 8:14 PM Title: Epilogue
Wonderful story. I found this from one I was reading about letters. She recommended this! I am ex-service member and I truly enjoyed this.
Date: 21 Jan 2012 11:11 PM Title: Epilogue
Very sweet and wonderful concept. I just read this in a little over 2 hours on and off. I love how you brought it all together and in the end had Jake's character back in good graces. And the last paragraph of each chapter...absolute GENIUS!!!! Loved that. You have a great writing style and I thank you for sharing it with us. Keep up the great work!!
Hugs, Stephanie
*oh, I was using tissues way before the tissue warning and you didn't warn us in the epi before you left us sad with you know whos passing! Arrggghh! That was just sad!:(
Date: 10 Jan 2012 9:03 PM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for a really great story! I had to keep on reading, because I wanted to know their story. :-)
Date: 22 Dec 2011 4:12 PM Title: Epilogue
hey
WOW great story...
sometimes it was sooo dramatic..
but it was really good that Edward is home safe!
bye
Lil
Date: 25 Nov 2011 5:56 AM Title: Epilogue
This was such a neat little story. Lots of action to carry the plot. It is a fast read and well worth it. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 15 Nov 2011 7:43 PM Title: Epilogue
Great story - it was different and interesting and heartbreaking and WONDERFUL!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 7:04 PM Title: Epilogue
thanks for the beautiful story i enjoyed it you are awesome!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
i guessed it at the beginning... cool one happy family poor poor mike...
Date: 01 Nov 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
poor mike yeah ed!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
oh poor ed glad carlisle is there to help him.
Date: 01 Nov 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
yeah!!! okay he isn't even that bad! yeah!!! i can breath a little easier!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
okay i hope that means he is alive.. hurt but alive i can deal with that
Date: 01 Nov 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
please please please.....
Date: 01 Nov 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh i am so going to cry please please don't kill him.....
Date: 01 Nov 2011 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
knew it you are going to do something bad... please not too bad
Date: 01 Nov 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
again goodbyes suck ass!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
dress blues.. they are in my wedding photos!! he was dashing as i am sure ed and the boys were too....
Date: 01 Nov 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
how sad... next it's him isn't i am so waiting for the other shoe to drop.
Date: 01 Nov 2011 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh been there hate saying good bye it rips your heart out! please please dont' let anything happen to him too bad!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
they are soo sweet together. again i hope for the best. everyone is soo negative!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh boy what a bitch renee is... meddling mothers are no good! cool that she is going to see Ed!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
how sweet i hope nothing happens to him.. i really don't want to cry....
oh and enlisted men aren't called sir...just wanted to let you know. only officiers are called sir.
Date: 01 Nov 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
ed is sweet as always.. but black licorice YUK!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
okay i almost had to beg off the story... a packers fan you are kidding me.... steelers all the way baby!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh boy... the military is close to my heart so i had to read. can't wait for more
Date: 30 Oct 2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
What an amazing lovely story. I'm truly touched. I just read the first line of the authors note in the next chapter. And I thought I should say this. Please don't be hurt by that former review you got for your story said you have an amazing and loving heart to be able to write such a touching story.
Date: 30 Oct 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow what an amazing lovely story! Love your writing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 11:34 PM Title: Epilogue
mercy that was wonderful!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
well hells bells if that wasn't an exciting turn of events.... first off REALLY Jacob you need a padded room along side Renee for the insane... then poor Mike bless his heart.. hope that wife felt like a piece of crap.. TWINS OMG!!!!! how exciting
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
your cute.. not the lemon we wanted... RIGHT but it was still fine.. hope you write more stories in the future
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
wow!!! thank heavens for carlilse
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
i knew you wouldn't let anything happen to our 1SG Cullen or the baby for that matter love the story
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
oohhh nooooo!!!! love the story yep glad Bella pressed charges and Renee is insane!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
okay lets start a fandom for getting Renee out of the picture hateful woman what the heck is she thinking calling her own daughter a slut and its not like Renee didn't know about the wedding Charlie told her.... hateful hateful woman....
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
angst is coming i can feel it in my bones... yay baby Cullen on the way that man has super sperm lol
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
i love the way you end each chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
i'm just loving how this chapter played out... but Renee is awful....
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
well done.... very sensitive, and compassionately wriiten... thank you!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
tears tears great chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG renee is horrible... loved this chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
what the heck did someone take her mail or is it truly a lost letter... WTF Renee, one doesn't just invite someone's ex to a home that isn't even theirs OMG I can't believe that woman..... love the story thanks for this chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
what a wonderful chapter... loved it gosh I sondon't want anything to happen tp our 1SG on his night mission... Angst.... just really love this story
Date: 28 Oct 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Of course I loved Edward's letter it wasnwonderful no not oversharing there Bells good information to know... Yes lets get that care pack right out to 1SG he needs his real licorice.. LOL yay Jazz is home safe and sound...but I have a feeling he will be going out once more..
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh I love this...it's great... love that Jasper is Bella's Brother as well as the progression of the connection of all the key players, showing once more what a small world it can be... on to the next chapter...
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
yes I'm really gonna like this... thanks for writing... on to more chapters
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
this looks very good...
Date: 27 Oct 2011 4:11 AM Title: Epilogue
Loved it that was a great story thank you
Date: 27 Oct 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
twins that is what ya call a home coming suprise to bet all lol
Date: 26 Oct 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
He is almost ready to come home
Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
At least he has his dad now to help not only him but the rest of them to
Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thank god they are ok and going to be going home I hope in time for baby
Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank god the baby is ok to much stress on her.
Date: 26 Oct 2011 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 14
OMG NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Date: 26 Oct 2011 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
That is a scarry place over there I have a couple of friends and there husbands are over there and they both have new babys so tough not knowing.
Date: 26 Oct 2011 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
That would be so hard to do leave the one you just married. Bella was not affraid to committ to the rigth man.