Date: 20 Aug 2019 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 28 The sequel
Sequel anywhere besides FFn? I don't read there. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2019 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 27 The talk
So glad they are learning to communicate. I'd say get counselling but with the whole vampy aspect kinda negates that one. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 26 Analysis
Those two both love to take all the blame. They def do need to talk.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 25 Unleashed desire
Glad Alice got there to talk to her. Angela is the bestest.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 24 Making out
Bella always was quite observant. Glad she got to talk to Jasper. LOL for getting caught.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 23 The kiss
Well she took the conversation better than I thought she would. Glad they talked.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 22 Ravishing
A and B need to work on Mr Victorian and his attitudes about "reprehensible behavior". He needs to realize she initiated it so by calling his behavior that, he is calling her that as well. So not going to go in his favor.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 21 Irresistable
oooh so Bella is initiating some flirty times. Good for her
Date: 19 Aug 2019 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 20 Indecency
Yes the indignity of flying coach. LOL. Glad they are getting a bit closer.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 19 Cuddling in the rain
Well at least they got her to leave town. Surprised that Alice didn't go with her. Charlie would have gone for that, but of course that would ruin the plan to get Charlie gone too.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 18 Interrogation
ROFl for the whole chapter, esp Mrs Cope. Glad that E&A are back to ok.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 17 Mudbath
OMG a mud fight?!?! That is too funny.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 16 The list
She is really confused but determined to feel nothing. Poor thing
Date: 19 Aug 2019 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 15 Awareness
B's always was the observatant one.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 14 Cover up
Aww for B helping him out. ROFL for sheet in the tree.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 13 Trouble with unmentionables
Wowsers. Bella has a looonnggg way to go. Guessing Em is at the end?
Date: 19 Aug 2019 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 12 The hard truth
Glad Alice got him to open up a bit
Date: 19 Aug 2019 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 11 Aftermath
hmm if she only broke her hand, why is she in hospital? ah well what do I know about medical. Alice is too good.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 10 Argument
oh boy another injury. Hmmm She could ask to make tape recordings in class since she's got an injury. But why do I have the feeling 'The Other Cullen" will take notes for her.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 9 Embarrassment
OMG He'd be beet red if he could blush.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 Perception
While I agree with some of her thinking, much of it is unhealthy and I'm surprised Charlie hasn't called her on it.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 7 A ride to remember
OMG too funny. Surprised B took him ridin .
Date: 19 Aug 2019 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 6 Surprise
Lol for the Bella drawer
Date: 19 Aug 2019 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 5 The confrontation
Wow Jake was actually reasonabl . But the imprint thing makes it unfair if you didn't already know who his imprint is.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 4 Consequences
Go Angela. She was always a great friend. I always wanted her to be an imprint so she could stay in B's life
Date: 19 Aug 2019 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 3 Pain
Glad Alice knocked some sense into her.
Date: 19 Aug 2019 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 2 Observations
Glad she is staying firm..... For now
Date: 19 Aug 2019 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 Reunion
I totally think this is more reasonable than how he just got to slice right back in like he never left.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2015 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 27 The talk
AWESOME!!! story looking forward to reading the sequel ;D
Date: 28 Sep 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 A ride to remember
He camejust from bella touching him?
Date: 09 Sep 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 28 The sequel
glad i finally caught up.
Author's Response:
Hi!! So glad you finished the first story:) Thank you very much for reviewing. Hope you enjoy the next Romand, love and desire.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 24 Making out
walls are a crumbling.
Author's Response:
Yes they are:) Thank you for your lovely review:) Hope to hear from you again:)
Date: 20 Jul 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 24 Making out
Wow........my husband and I never got a chance to have any experiences like those while we were dating........so sad. We went to two different high schools an hour away from each other ;-)
Author's Response:
Hi Thank you for your lovely review:) Hope you are reading my new story "Absolute Perfection". Hope to hear from you:)
Date: 20 Jul 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 27 The talk
Great chapter. It had been awhile so I forgot a lot of it, will have to go back and review. Looking forward to the next chapter in their story.
Author's Response:
Hi so sorry for the delay in completing this story. I've now started the sequel Romance, love and desire. I've already uploaded the first two chapters. Hope you like it. Thanks for reviewing:)
Date: 20 Jul 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 27 The talk
Good idea of starting a sequel. I'll see you there.
Author's Response:
Hi the sequel is now up. I think you've already read the first chapter of it. The second one is already uploaded. Hope you like it:) Thanks for the review:).
Date: 20 Nov 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 26 Analysis
omg...these two really need to talk and then smack each other on the back of each others heads a la Rose. LOL I wish I were a writer so I could rec this and get it out to more readers, Its so good and should have lots more reviews than it does!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review vickic!! You made my day!! I'm so glad you like the story so much. I'm still trying to get a banner done for the sequel. I dont' have photoshop and I have no idea how to get a good one done. The one I did for this story was really horrid. As soon as I get the banner done I'll upload. Thank you once again for your lovely review.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 26 Analysis
Great chapter. Thanx for updating. I can't wait for the sequel the tension between those two is driving me crazy. Is good to see straight laced Edward let go a little.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing:) I'm still trying to get a banner done for the sequel. The one I did for this story is really ugly:( I dont' have photoshop so have no way of doing a proper one. As soon as I get one done I'll up load the story:)
Date: 19 Nov 2011 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 26 Analysis
I'm more than happy to fill in for Bella. ;)
Author's Response:
LOL:) Me too! Me too!! Once again thank you so much for reviewing!!
Date: 18 Nov 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 25 Unleashed desire
Oh my......what has our little Bella gotten herself into with Edward ;-)
Author's Response:
She's unleashed a passion monster!!:) Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 17 Nov 2011 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 25 Unleashed desire
If Bella is worried about his size then I'll take him on...and Jasper too! :D
Author's Response:
LOL!! Oh god! I really couldn't stop laughing for a long time after reading your review. Thank you so much for reviewing. I always love to hear what you have to say.
Date: 17 Nov 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 25 Unleashed desire
So very good, is she finally going to open up to him about her "list". I assume that she will still have trust issues and she has been a little obessive about it, so that isn't going to just go away. This is so very good, I like that this is a more mature version than others. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Thanks!! Loved hearding from you. I always wonder what people think when they read the story. I try to be in charactor but I love a bit of humour too. Thank you very much for reviewing. I hope you review my future chapters too. Would love to know what you think.
Date: 17 Nov 2011 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 25 Unleashed desire
oh wow its almost if as they switched thought processes lol. I personally would love for EC to give me a drive-by kiss. Sigh and don't complain about size Bella my dear, some woman aren't so lucky snort!!!!
Author's Response:
I know!! I would love a drive-by kiss too!!! Thanks for reviewing:)
Date: 17 Nov 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 24 Making out
ooohhh that icy exterior is cracking...you keep it up Bella my dear. Annnndddd Hello Jasper mmmmm. LOL
Author's Response:
Yes. Bella sure is opening up! Poor Jasper gets dragged into all this. Now Edward has to figure out on his own how to win his girl:)
Date: 17 Nov 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 24 Making out
Finally Edward is getting a clue!
Author's Response:
He sure does. And now he has to learn how to win her over.
Date: 15 Nov 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 23 The kiss
Bella does love him, she's just confused. I can understand that.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing:) Hey have you watched the new movie?? How was it? I heard it's shown early at some shows.
Date: 15 Nov 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 23 The kiss
Ha! That boy is just going to have to step it up to get her to admit she still loves him. She is staying strong and holding on to her convictions, good for her. They will get it right...one day
Author's Response:
Yes. He mustn't give up hope:) Thanks for the review Vickic:)
Date: 14 Nov 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 22 Ravishing
annnndddd he slides back into that victorian mentality. Damnit Edward!!! lol you have me frustrated with a fictional character good job
Author's Response:
Oh the Victorian when will he ever learn??:) At least he's trying to flirt like a modern man:) Well he just didn't know how to handle the response he got for flirting:)
Date: 13 Nov 2011 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 22 Ravishing
Bella and Edward......oh my ;-)
Author's Response:
Oh my my!! What next:) Lol!! Thanks for reviewing:)
Date: 12 Nov 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 22 Ravishing
I'm going to smack Edward for thinking like an idiot.
Author's Response:
Truly! He should be walking on cloud nine now:) Thanks for reviewing:)
Date: 12 Nov 2011 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 21 Irresistable
Edward, just do something already!
Author's Response:
We need action Edward:) let's see:)
Date: 12 Nov 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 21 Irresistable
yeah now they both know that they are attracted to each other and now they are going to flirt like hell with each other. Looking forward to it.
Author's Response:
Yep that's a done deal!! Thanks for reviewing vickic:)
Date: 11 Nov 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 21 Irresistable
Cheeky, cheeky Bella...... ;-)
Author's Response:
Aha:) She is cheeky isn't she? At least she's not a zombie anymore:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 20 Indecency
Loved the story so far. I'm glad she is giving him a hard time. I always thought she forgave him way too quickly in New Moon. Thanx
Author's Response:
I'm so happy to hear that you liked the story:) I look forward to hear what you think of the rest of the chapters!!:) Thank you very much for reviewing!!:)
Date: 09 Nov 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 20 Indecency
Edward, get out of the Victorian era. I know it's hard, but just shut it!
Author's Response:
Yes:) It's time he adopted the modern way of doing things;) Well let's see what happens now:) It's so good to hear from you!! Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 09 Nov 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 20 Indecency
stick outta ass Edward its 2011 not 1907. Get with the times. lol
Author's Response:
He sure is behind times!! Thanks a lot for reviewing Vickic:)
Date: 08 Nov 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 19 Cuddling in the rain
Hi, Just caught your story recently! Loved the mud fight between Edward & Alice. Classic. Now, it feels like your story is heating up...can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing!!. I hope you like the new chapter too. Please do leave a review and let me know what you think:)
Date: 08 Nov 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 19 Cuddling in the rain
Now I am up to Poor Edward.
Author's Response:
I know!! Thank you so much for reviewing!!:)
Date: 08 Nov 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 19 Cuddling in the rain
he is so trying to be a good friend and he is just helping his cause when he is half naked around her all the time isn't he. We females cannot resist these sweet boys and their unknowing sexiness. lol
Author's Response:
Defintely!! Edward in a towel.. sigh... Thanks for reviewing vickic
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 18 Interrogation
LMAO
Author's Response:
Me too!:) Had loads of fun writing that one:) Hope you like the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing:)
Author's Response:
Me too!:) Had loads of fun writing that one:) Hope you like the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing:)
Date: 08 Nov 2011 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 19 Cuddling in the rain
Edward should have packed clothes just in case. I wonder how they will get out of this....
Author's Response:
So Bella let Edward hold her through the night:) Thank you so much for reviewing! As soon as I load a chapter I wait egerly to hear what everyone thought of it. So it was really nice hearing from you.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 18 Interrogation
It doesn't surprise me that Carlisle would be cool that way. He is a doctor. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Yes it's really nice to have a father figure like Carlisle isn't it?
Date: 07 Nov 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 18 Interrogation
so glad that he can laugh at himself...its good to see he is taking that stick outta his arse. And I don't care how long they have been a family, I still don't think I couldve talked to Esme and Carlisle so openly lol. Can't wait to see how Edward and Bella are going to act around each other now.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing Vikic!!:) It was difficult writing Carlisle's point of view. It was so good to hear from you.
Date: 07 Nov 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 17 Mudbath
I would have loved to have been in the parking lot to see that. Unfortunate that Alices dress was ruined, but I think those two are going to be closer than ever when all is said and done.
Author's Response:
It's great to have siblings who care about you isn't it? It truly means a lot. Thank you vickic for reviewing. As always I love to hear from you!:)
Date: 06 Nov 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 17 Mudbath
Ohhhh man.......too funny!!! Edward and Alice fighting in the mud ;-) Can't wait till Bella finds out what happend between them.
Author's Response:
So the physic and the mind reader got distracted:) Thanks for the review!! So happy to hear from you.
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 16 The list
Fantastic story. It always really annoyed me that Bella took Edward back so quickly at the end of new moon.It made her appear weak and pathetic. Your story is more realistic as Edward had lied and broken her trust.
Only thing I am not sure about is the whole nappy thing. It really stops me thinking sexy thoughts about Edward.
Author's Response:
Hey it's not nappies:) Just new underwear that's all:) Thank you for your feedback. I'll make sure he doesn't have to wear anymore of the new underwear... after all there is that sexy spring collection Alice wanted to buy him:) I really appreciate your review... please do keep reviewing.
Date: 04 Nov 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 16 The list
I know how Bella feels. There's nothing wrong with shielding yourself from love & being hurt.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. I read one of your stories 'Bella's revenge'. Loved it:) Yes I know the feeling I also agree with you that there is nothing wrong with shielding yourself from love and getting hurt.
Date: 04 Nov 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 16 The list
Edward ... naked... in my closet. Excuse me Charlie, gotta go to my room!!!Ok she is seeing that there is an issue now she can start letting it go ...not with Jake tho lol let him find someone else
Author's Response:
Yeah! A naked Edward in the closet... well that sure got Bella's attention:) Thank you so much vickic for your review:)
Date: 03 Nov 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 15 Awareness
Bella's lying to herself. She still loves Edward; she just won't admit it...or forgot.
Hopefully he can make her remember.
Author's Response:
Lady Shakespeare thank you for your review:) Mmmm... do you think she loves her still?:)
Date: 03 Nov 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 15 Awareness
Oh you still love him sweet girl, as well as lust for him! Still very sweet of you to try to help him hide the "evidence" of his passion. LOL love love love this
Author's Response:
Thank you Vickic for your review:) She is sweet isn't she to be helping him in this way?
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 11 Aftermath
I'm surprised Charlie didn't try to punch Edward, honestly :)
Author's Response:
May be he was thinking of shooting him instead?Lol! Thanks for reviewing AngelBones76!! I really loved getting your reviews. Hope to continue to hear from you.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2011 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 10 Argument
I love that Bella's backbone got way more solid than it was the first time around! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing:) Yes I also didnt' like that fact that she didn't stand up for herself before.
Date: 02 Nov 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 14 Cover up
This was so so amusing, but poor Edward needs to tell her exactly how he feels at some point, maybe they are both ready?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!!:) Glad you found it amusing. I'm writing the next chapter from Bella's point of view. Let's see what she makes of all this:) Would love to hear from you again.
Date: 02 Nov 2011 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 14 Cover up
omg you love to humiliate that boy don't you lololol. Bella noticed tho and that chipped away some of her reserve. Poor Charlie, if he had caught Edward there in a sheet. He prob would have had a heart attack.
Author's Response:
So happy to read your review!! Thanks Vickic!! I was waiting to hear from you. Hope it was not too embarrasing for Edward:) Had to have Bella notice him:) If Charlie caught him in a bedsheet!! (Shudder!) I'm sure he would shoot Edward. Hey may be I should write an outtake or something on an alternate chapter Lol with him getting caught! Well may be later. Once again thank you!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 Reunion
This is such a good story line, I always felt that the original was way way too simplistic with Bella just accepting him back like she did when she was so emotionally upset for all those months before. A little drama and Edward having to work at it and change in his outlook is a good thing!! Thanks for writing this version.
Author's Response:
Hi!! Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like this version. Hope you like the rest of the chapters too. Please do review and let me know what you think of them as the story progresses. It will help me to make it more realistic.
Date: 01 Nov 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 13 Trouble with unmentionables
Alice and Edward are real siblings, no matter if its by blood relation or not. Those two are the real deal and they are hilarious together. Pick on each other like crazy yet bond together to hide things from Emmett who would make the problem so much more difficult with his teasing lol. Bella and Jake I hope they don't run off Edward, I hope he doesn't start thinking he doesn't have a chance. AAgghh so much happening in this story lol
Author's Response:
So good to hear from you!!:) I can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter. I was laughing by myself at the end of it. I'll post hopefully tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 01 Nov 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 13 Trouble with unmentionables
TO me this is dragging. Same deal. She is not ready, he is. She can't forget he is sorry. jake is her SUN. Let me say this right now about Jake. Yes he is a great friend, BUT if his imprint walked into HIS life he would abandoned Bella in almost every way. yes he would still be her friend, but all this helping would END. She is not his imprint.
I understand she is hurt and warry of Edward. Like I said if you forgive him then you have to move forward.
Author's Response:
Don't worry something interesting happens in the next chapter:) Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 01 Nov 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 12 The hard truth
I really liked this chapter with Edward and Alice being so open and honest with each other.
Author's Response:
I've always wondered how the bond between Alice and Edward worked. So I liked exploring it. Glad you liked it. Thank you for the review.
Date: 31 Oct 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 12 The hard truth
So funny, actually!
Bella and Edward have to move forward or forget it. Makes no sense to keep this bs up.
Author's Response:
Glad you found it funny:) thanks for the review.
Date: 31 Oct 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 12 The hard truth
this story is fast becoming one that makes me squeal when it updates. It is so much fun seeing Edwards puberty hit! Alice helping him cope with constant woodies, and Bella being a little clueless. LOL love it Can't wait to see more Charlie!
Author's Response:
Hey that's great!! I'm so glad!! I love these two and of course I love having a bit of fun with them. I know the first few chapters were a bit angsty but I couldn't help it. I'm usually a very happy go lucky person loving a bit of humour and of course a lot of lemons. Thanks for reviewing!! Like I said I wait to read what you think every time I load a chapter vickic:)
Date: 31 Oct 2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 12 The hard truth
this Edward is hillarious. a real stick in the mud. smh
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review:) Yep! He's got it really bad
Date: 31 Oct 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 11 Aftermath
give him hell Charlie! it still kills me how closed off Bella is tho, I am all for her being stronger, just hate that she has to be emotionless. I know something is going to break through to her soon tho. Alice you are the shiznit, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Yeah!! Way to go Charlie!!! I'll try to explore Charlie's and Edwards relationship a little bit more some time later. I really like Charlie. Our girl Bella will have some great fun in the coming chapters...I promise you that. And Alice too... Thank you so much for reviewing vickic!! As soon as I load a chapter I eagerly wait to hear from you. I know you have loads of stuff to say:)
Date: 30 Oct 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 11 Aftermath
Lovely chapter......please keep them coming.
Author's Response:
Will do!!! And please do keep sending me these lovely reviews!!! This is what makes me going. Thank you so much for reviewing.
Date: 30 Oct 2011 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 7 A ride to remember
THis was SO DAMN funny. Thank you.
Author's Response:
It's so good to hear from you again!!! Yeah I had a great time writing it too!! Thank you so much for reviewing!!
Date: 29 Oct 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 10 Argument
I like this Bella with Edward.......Bet he didn't see that coming ;-)
Author's Response:
He clearly didn't:) Thanks for reviewing and i'm glad you like this Bella.
Date: 29 Oct 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 10 Argument
Hah...now I see, she is going to blossom in her new strength but Edward is going to have to go through a transformation if he wants to be with her. As it should have been.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Vickic.:) It is going to be fun:) But I won't tell you exactly what happens....:)
Date: 28 Oct 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 9 Embarrassment
snort...oh the humiliation this boy is enduring. I wish Bella could see how he is faring, maybe she would feel better!
Author's Response:
Yes. Poor Edward. Thank you Vickic for the review.:)
Date: 28 Oct 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 9 Embarrassment
That was pretty embarrassing. But funny!
Author's Response:
I love to have some fun:) Glad you found it funny. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 8 Perception
Interesting...Bella's reactions make more sense now :)
Author's Response:
Thanks:) Hope you liked it. Once again thank you for reviewing. It means a lot to me.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 3 Pain
Well, he's finally got the shovel. Let's see how many more clues he can dig :)
Author's Response:
Yeah.. He really needs to understand what he did to her. I'm so happy to read your reviews. Thank you so much for taking the time to review.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 2 Observations
I don't know if this is headed towards a HEA or not, but I am very curious and can't wait to see which direction you DO take...I like it more and more :)
Author's Response:
I"m glad you like it. Hey I don't know what HEA stands for? Thank you so much for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 Reunion
Well, I am intrigued. I like how you've done the different POVs, because it sheds a ton of light on very clueless Edward still is...
Onto the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review:) I try to do both POV's at different times throughout the story whenever it makes sense so that it would be more interesting.
Date: 28 Oct 2011 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 9 Embarrassment
That was too funny.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing:) so glad u had fun reading it. Would love to hear from you again.
Date: 26 Oct 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 8 Perception
awww poor Bella, she won't be able to live so cold for long. It does seem like Edward is going to have to work extra hard to break that shell. It might have worked to tell her the "stain" truth maybe if she starts laughing she will crack a little. I loved last chapter! and this one too.
Author's Response:
Vickic Thank you so much for your review!!:) So glad you liked both chapters!! I wait eagerly to hear what you think of this new chapter. Hope it makes you laugh too:)
Date: 26 Oct 2011 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 8 Perception
I think Edward has his work cut out for him in getting Bella to come around again. He's going to really have to work for it this time around even though he is a vampire.
Author's Response:
Yes. And he really has to understand that Bella properly and treat her right. Thank you so much for the review. :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2011 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 7 A ride to remember
Too funny, I enjoyed this chapter so much! Good getting away from drama for awhile.
Author's Response:
Yes!! Me too!! Loved writing it. I usually love a bit of fun, I know the drama was necessary for the story line but in the end I believe in having a bit of fun. Thank you so much for reviewing. It's so good to hear from you.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 7 A ride to remember
LMAO...ok Edward that is also a good way to get her attention. Just the vision of this 107 yr old vamp finally having wet dreams (or motorcycle rides)has me rolling on the floor. Poor Edward what his conservitive self must be going through. Ed Jr. on the other hand (snort) must finally be having the time of his life.
Author's Response:
I simply loved writing this chapter! I'm so glad you enjoyed it as well. I was actually laughing alone while proof reading. Thank you so much for reviewing!! You make me so happy. I love hearing from you.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 6 Surprise
Oh God Edward ... really! That boy has got it baaad and he can't figure out what to do to get in her good graces. Man up Edward....grab her and give her a big kiss (ala Jake) you might get slapped but at least it would wake her up some! Looking forward to next chptr
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for the review:) Hope you like the next chapter. I've just uploaded it right after I got your review. Would love to hear what you think of this new chapter (Chapter 7) if you thought he'd got it bad from what you read in chapter 6:)
Date: 24 Oct 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 5 The confrontation
wow that was kind of a mature conversation for Jake, with just a little of that manipulativeness that he is in the books. Still think Edward is clueless about how easy its going to be to get back in her good graces. Stay strong Bella make that boy work for it.
Author's Response:
I'll explore how our girl Bella is going to be coping with Edward trying to'dazel' her. Well going to have a bit of fun with Edward in the next chapter. Would love to hear what you think of it. :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 6 Surprise
He is truly pitiful! Please let him salvage his relationship. I have a headache listening to him. OMW!
Author's Response:
He really is pitiful isn't he? But he's going to have some fun the next chapter. Hope you like it. Please do review and let me know.
Date: 23 Oct 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 Surprise
Poor Edward......he seems so desperate to spend any time with 'his Bella'. Sure hope she gets better. I know her heart hurt when they left. Now that they are back hopefully she will get better.
Author's Response:
Yes poor Edward and also poor Bella they both hurt so much. Thank you so much for reviewing. This next chapter is going to be a little crazy. I really don't know what you will think of it. Hope to hear from you again.