[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 16 The Good, The Bad, The End
Wow! That scene was intense!! I swear, you could make a killing writing movie scenes!!! I've never seen nor dreamed of anything close to what you wrote!!
Awesome job! Please write more!!! :)
Thx for sharing your talent!!
Author's Response:
gatorgrl91
Sorry it's taken a long time to reply but I've been off line and dealing with real life. Anyway glad you liked the story. I've started writing the next story involving Allegra so look out in the future for it. I'll let you in to a little secret its working title is 'kamakaze'.
BW
Deb
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2014 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 15 Darkest Depths of Wiltshire
Hmmm...a sequel. ??? I don't know. I LoVeD the intrigue and mystery of the previous chapters because I truly didn't know what was going to happen next.
With the CRIB, I'm not sure if there is the same intensity. BUT, add in a romance and a betrayal of one of the team members and you'll have a winner in my book !!! :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 13 Confessions of a Godfather
Ok. So the black transit can was Dominic's team?? I think I read that correctly. But if so, why did they kidnap Dominic in ch 1?
I sorta figured he was a spy but never thought of what he was doing with Allegra.
I hope you have written more stories on TWCS, or that you will because you are a great writer!!!
Thx for this awesome ride!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 12 I Don't Like To Lose
Who is the black transit van? Good guy or bad guy??? I'm thinking bad guy, but then the Italian guy was there when Dominic showed up with the dart gun. ???
I'm so confused!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 11 Visitor
Well she would if she'd have stuck to Dominic's instructions!!! Lol!
She does seem to attract danger! And what's this coincidence bit!!! For being so resourceful and smart, she sure is stupid with this one!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 10 Brimstone and Fire
Wow! Just wow!! Speechless! How do u come up with these scenarios??? Awesome!!!
:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 9 The Pits!
Holy cow that was intense!!! :o
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 8 Pilgrim Industrial Estate
Omg!!! I don't know HOW you came up with that scenario, but oh wow!!! That would be a horrible state to be in!!! Yikes!!!
1 saying came to mind re:Allegra...She b stupid!! 8-)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 7 Landing Lights
I was confused at first of the timeframe for this chapter, but if I figured it correctly, there was only a little time between the dart gun incident & waking up, giving her ample time to then make it to flow carus.
However, if Dominic is responsible for the dart gun incident, is he working with black transit van dude? I thought they were the bad guys???
Very good!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 6 Inferno
She no longer has a boring life!!! Lol!
Still Sooooo good!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 5 Crossfire
This is a really good spy story--of sorts! I wonder if there will be any romance?? 8-)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 4 Resources
Drama...mystery...suspense... I'm VERY intrigued!! :)
Thx!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 3 Cryptic Clues
Ok. That was intense and very good! I loved the "de-coding" part! Very spy-like!! :)
Sooooo good! :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 2 Allegra Daring
Still lost...but in a good way! I wonder if the thief had any relevance on this mystery? Or if the person leaning against the door with the headphone wires is relevant???
Or maybe I'm just reading far too much into things trying to figure this out!!! Lol! ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Package
Wow!! I intrigue and mystery! I'm lost as I don't know what to expect or what's going on, but I'm excited to read more!!! *I have to admit, I first thought maybe Dominic was schizophrenic, but now I don't think so. :) As u can tell, I'm lost...but that's good! Now I'm on to read more!! Thx!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2011 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 6 Inferno
Oh Gurl! I was praying she wouldn't make a sound! So glad she con her way out!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 5 Crossfire
Good chapter!
Author's Response:
aborealis7 Hoping you're enjoy Allegra's antics, unfortunately things are about to get a little interesting. The story is already written and I should be posting regularly, but I'm glad you seem to be enjoying.
Deb
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 4 Resources
Goodness! All these hijinks, I hope she can stay safe!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 3 Cryptic Clues
Omg! Scary and exciting!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Package
Great start!