Date: 04 Apr 2012 4:00 PM Title: A déjà vu
Love that chapter end. Great update.
Date: 22 Mar 2012 6:28 PM Title: VIP party
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2012 10:12 AM Title: VIP party
Poor Bella, she just can't catch a break. Always running into the 'asshole of the universe'. I wish she could get him off her mind for even a little bit, he sure has his mind and other things on every woman he can get his hands on. What a manwhore! I'm sure he's attracted to Bella, but why does he have to be such an ass, and humiliate, and embarrass her so much? I love this story; I'm addicted to it! I'll look forward to your next chapter. I hope life isn't treating you too badly. xo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2012 9:49 AM Title: Contact
My god; I just want to beat the crap out of Mr. Cullen! He's such an insufferable ass! I love that Bella is finding a way to tell him off, just a tiny bit and not get herself fired. I really love this story! xo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2012 1:21 AM Title: VIP party
I am loving this story. Keep the awesome chapters coming! :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2012 7:52 AM Title: VIP party
oh my word - he is everywhere! i am loving this story!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like this story. My next update will be of The slave who wouldn't obey. Can't wait for an update of HS :0)
Date: 05 Mar 2012 7:40 AM Title: Contact
Oh my word - this poor girl
Date: 05 Mar 2012 12:33 AM Title: VIP party
Bella can't easily get Edward out of her mind and when she finally does, he shows up!!! How cold we call that type of luck? Shocking at least. What was supposed to be a pleasant and relaxing evening out is aout to turn crazy. Bella might want to r. From it but I can't wait to see what happens.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 4:01 PM Title: VIP party
Edward is really an idiot, but I think Bella will give you a lesson.
I hope life is lighter voce.Adoro with this story is so hot and Bella is really funny.
Tell Drinou grande.Obrigada as it is.
Date: 03 Mar 2012 3:45 PM Title: VIP party
Oh boy....Ed you are something else. Take care of you RL don't worry about us!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 2:25 PM Title: VIP party
She is just having all kinds of luck.
Date: 03 Mar 2012 5:35 AM Title: VIP party
Time to hunt on the Savannah, Bella! Glad she looks good tonight. Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 3:41 AM Title: VIP party
I would never think of being too harsh with you. Your updating is okay. The only thing that is killing me is all the SUSPENSE of when the chapter ends!! Update when you can sweetness, I'll be here waiting to send you a wonderful review!! xo
Author's Response:
This is really sweet of you. I DO feel guilty when I let more than a month passing by without updating, but I have so many other things going on right now, it's just really difficult for me to focus on my writing/translating.
Date: 02 Mar 2012 11:10 PM Title: VIP party
ughh i want more and soon please i'm so curious right now!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2012 10:53 PM Title: VIP party
Not being harsh to you BB; understand RL woes! Hang in there! Thanks for the Update and I still want to throttle Mr Cullen, honestly I hope she leaves the bottle alone or sends it back to him... He is so wicked with the taunting.... always teasing and her....I love this story but.....Till next update.....
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2012 10:20 PM Title: VIP party
Great chapter! Love the story! Update again soon please!
Date: 02 Mar 2012 10:15 PM Title: VIP party
looking forward to reading more when life slows down for ya take care
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2012 9:55 PM Title: VIP party
I love the hottness between Edward and Bella but are all French guys such jerks.
Author's Response:
Actually French guys are not like that at all. I had my first "French kiss" with a French guy and it's a very good memory :0)
Date: 02 Mar 2012 9:33 PM Title: VIP party
This is great I cannot wait to see what happens next..I cannot wait to find out if Edward and Bella get together Please update soon
Date: 02 Mar 2012 9:32 PM Title: VIP party
Omg!! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 13 Feb 2012 3:11 PM Title: Contact
I can't wait for the next chapter please update ASAFP.
Date: 03 Feb 2012 12:28 AM Title: Contact
I love it that she tells him off. He needs it.
Date: 03 Feb 2012 12:15 AM Title: Adaptation
I was half expecting Jake to kick Edwards ass. lol.
Author's Response:
It might happen later on...
Date: 03 Feb 2012 12:02 AM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
Wow he can be an asshole too. Not sure I like him right now.
Date: 02 Feb 2012 11:45 PM Title: Second chance
Ha I was right, at least I think I was. lol. I think Edward got her that job I mean how else would she have gotten it? Well this should be fun. lol
Date: 02 Feb 2012 11:24 PM Title: New impact
hhmmm Well please tell me there will be a HEA? I hate to read stories where Edward is some weirdo and ends up being the bad guy. Now it seems that maybe Edward pulled some strings and got her that job back. Well we will see.
Author's Response:
I'm pretty sure there will be a happy ending to this story, however it is not complete yet in French, and I'm just the translator, so if you want to know for sure, you should ask Drinou, she's the author and she's the most popular author over the French fandom on FF.
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 11:10 PM Title: Collisions
Long time no see girl. I missed you. I just found this story and I must say this is HOT. I love it. I will give you a 10.
Author's Response:
Long time no see indeed. I thought you had abandoned me... I don't understand though. I've not left the place, I'm always here, posting on a regular basis, every month or so every one of my stories. But let's face it, if people don't let me know they are still here foloowing me, it's hard for me to stay motivated and to update more often...
Date: 24 Jan 2012 10:44 PM Title: Contact
This is great I cannot wait to see what happens next. I cannot wait to see if Bella and Edward get together. Please update soon
Date: 24 Jan 2012 2:49 PM Title: Contact
I love the story. Please update soon. Love the sexual tension.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 5:36 AM Title: Contact
You tell him Bella!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2012 1:09 AM Title: Contact
Can I slap him?Can I, Can I?Huh?Because I really, really want to.:)Amazing writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks :0)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 11:44 PM Title: Contact
Great chapter! Love the story! Update again soon please!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 10:18 PM Title: Contact
Bella has a thing fof Edward whether she wan's to admit it or not. Seems like he's getting a kick out of it too.:
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 9:09 PM Title: Contact
Man she is stubborn.. and he is a asshole.. I but can see him giving the money back or getting out of the cab.. and throwing it at her. She can't move fast. and I think that is going to make the game is a little more interesting that she tries to fight back.. haha.
This is one fantastic story.. I have to admit I sad right now because I want to read more.. lol.. Get to wear somone gives.. haha.
you have done this story wonders..
hugs Leona
Author's Response:
I think that this compliment is intended for the author, but thanks all the same :0)
Date: 23 Jan 2012 9:07 PM Title: Contact
ughh i want Bella to be more bitchy with him cause he is such an asshole
Date: 23 Jan 2012 9:05 PM Title: Contact
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 9:04 PM Title: Adaptation
So she drank one to many. mmm.
See Alice is the same way around Jasper.. You think Bella would take the hint that she like the asshole boss Edward Cullen.. haha..
awesome chapter..
I like this jake.. heh..
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 9:03 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
God I just want to cry for her.. I know she duh? around him.. But does he have to be so mean.. mmm
But on the other hand you just want to laugh at her too.. Come on.. Yeah he is hot.. But don't have to drool.. haha.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 9:01 PM Title: Second chance
Excellent chapter.. I guess the brain did not win.. hahah. this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 9:00 PM Title: New impact
I knew he would get her hired back and working for him some how..
I actual was one pins and needles that first day she would see him.
Her body can't resisted him. But her stubborness is winning so far. haha
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 8:58 PM Title: Collisions
I have to admit I have read all 6 chapter so far.. And i just want to go hide in a corner for bella.. God she has it bad..
Your story is very uplifting.. funny and sad at the same time.. Poor bella. and Edward.. I think they both like each other. But they are stubborn..
but funny has hell..
This was a hell of a sexy start of a story.. wow...
<3 Leona :)
Author's Response:
If it's not been said already, this story is the most popular over the French fandom... but remember that I'm not the author, just the translator. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 23 Jan 2012 6:50 PM Title: Contact
argh, such an ass. and argh, the chapter's already over.. can't wait for the next one!!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 6:13 PM Title: Contact
Bella really hasn't caught a brake. And it seems Edward is thoroughly enjoying torturing her. Then there's that magnetic force Bella feels, I'm guessing something must have rubbed on Edward and that's why he hasn't found a way to keep a distance from Edward.
So... does Bella still have a job? I hope so.
And what about the party, will her luck and "boss" follow her there also?
Author's Response:
Yep, she will run into her boss at the party :0)
Date: 23 Jan 2012 5:25 PM Title: Contact
How she keeps herself from smacking him, I don't know. Loved what she did at the end. Thanks for the update. It's misery waiting a month for another. Ha!
Author's Response:
Don't worry too much for Bella. She has guts, she said it herself :0)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2012 5:23 PM Title: Contact
Oh dear Lord Please tell me that this is going to get less of a mess for our Isabella, he always has the upper hand it seems... Love the story
Date: 23 Jan 2012 4:58 PM Title: Contact
more more more.....please hurry!!!!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 4:53 PM Title: Adaptation
oh boy you just can't get away from him can you bella
Date: 23 Jan 2012 4:45 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
what an a-hole!!!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 4:38 PM Title: Second chance
oh boy did he get her the position or was it just a fluke? this is soo good!!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 4:32 PM Title: New impact
humm goodness i can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 4:23 PM Title: Collisions
oh man love it already!! can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 4:14 PM Title: Contact
Looking forward to more!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 3:41 PM Title: Contact
edward the ass i would have wanted to slap him to
Date: 22 Jan 2012 1:23 AM Title: Adaptation
this is great...I love this story please update soon
Author's Response:
I just need the green light from the author to post the next chapter. It is a matter of days...
[Report This]Date: 14 Jan 2012 1:10 AM Title: Adaptation
I just had to slap my forehead! Poor Bella, she just can't catch a break can she?
I wonder if Jake is right and her getting this job wasn't just a coincidence. Maybe Edward the arrogant asshole, wanted to have her around just so he could toy with her. This Edward is one of my favorites to hate right now. And I love it!
=) Kelly
Date: 27 Dec 2011 6:16 AM Title: Adaptation
Damn cliffie! Ha! As usual, I enjoyed this chapter. Have a Happy New Year!
Date: 26 Dec 2011 11:53 AM Title: Adaptation
Good chapter! Happy Holidays!
Date: 24 Dec 2011 5:20 PM Title: Adaptation
happy holidays have a wonderful weekend great chapter
Date: 23 Dec 2011 10:19 PM Title: Adaptation
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 23 Dec 2011 5:39 AM Title: Adaptation
Being Bella entitles having to have a crisis sooner rather than later. This time it was tripping on the street and the one to catcher, Mr. Cullen, who is back early from his trip. The calm from the past weeks has abruptly come to an end...
Happy Holidays!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2011 3:03 AM Title: Adaptation
Great chapter! Love the story! Update again soon please!
Date: 23 Dec 2011 2:42 AM Title: Adaptation
I really like it but is too short....
Author's Response:
There's not much I can do about the length of the chapters as I'm just the translator :0)
Date: 22 Dec 2011 8:10 PM Title: Adaptation
You are killing me here, can't wait for more! Please , please translate all the chapters at once so we can read Bella's kicking his ass ... or maybe not, because I like this arrogant Edward...
Wish you a Happy Holidays!
Paola
Author's Response:
I swear I'm doing my best to update in a timely fashion, but I'm also working on 6 other translations...
Happy Holidays to you too
Milk
Date: 22 Dec 2011 7:15 PM Title: Adaptation
That girl has no luck what so ever :) So far Edward has been a royal douche even if he may have given he that job...
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2011 5:54 PM Title: Adaptation
Merry Christmas and a Very Safe and Happy New Year to you too MILK!
TY for this chapter!~ Wow! You know, I'm feeling very compassionate for Ms. Bellla here.. Come on she "had sex" with someone in the bathroom of where she worked, lost her job.. you know she must feel like...ummm..skuzzie if you will... and then he comes to her other place of employement and makes her very uncomfortable... then she goes to work at his Company... okay so we know he is just trying to make her uncomfortable and is definitely intrigued by her; but come on, it's the Season for Good Will and Peace on Earth and such... thanks for catching her Edward, but do you think you could kinda show some sort of positive vibe for her in front of her?!!!! **tilts head and looks at Mr Cullen with a sarcastic grin**
Please know that I love this story and am not bashing, I'm wishing and hoping for a good outcome here... I know you know what your doing with your story and want to encourage you in your writing abilities.... Please know that some of what I said in the above paragraph was meant to be funny and sarcastic....
All the best in the new year~ Kathy
Author's Response:
I found all of what you said very funny, don't worry :o) However, when you say you want to encourage me in my writing abilities, I feel the need to remind you, and all my other readers as well, that I'm not the author of this enjoyable story, I'm only the humble translator, so what may or may not happen with the characters is not for me to decide, but I can reassure you on one point : Bella will stand up to Edward and he will show a little kindness later on in the story, but we'll have to endure his despicable demeanor for a little longer.
All the best for 2012.
Milk
Date: 15 Dec 2011 9:56 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
Love it
Date: 01 Dec 2011 12:02 AM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
That was a first day on the job I wouldn't want to have to go throught with. Poor Bella, things weren't fine right from the start and there was little room for improvement. Things didn't look up, just as her I would have run. Will she come back? Is it worth it? I can't be so sure, but does she have a choice?
Author's Response:
It's a good thing there is a gym in the building to let steam off :0)
Date: 30 Nov 2011 11:46 PM Title: Second chance
So, she got a job offering, something that at the moment, she couldn't be picky about. She took it, there wasn't much of a choice. But if Bella had known where she would be working before getting there, would she have chagned her mind? It's not easy to say since she desperately needed a better job.
Alice seems like a nice girl, but someone to be careful around of, if she is into gossip as much as she says. Good thing that on Bella and Edward's first encounter she wasn't there.
Date: 30 Nov 2011 9:55 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
bad edward bad
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2011 5:36 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
I think I hate Edward right now. I'm invested in this story so I will keep reading. I really hope he gets put in his place at some point. =) Kelly
Author's Response:
Well, surely you will want to know if Bella will stand up to Edward?
On another topic, one of the readers of The slave who wouldn't obey on FF sent me a review to tell me I killed her buzz in chapter 2 when Bella asked Jacob to do something with her. She blamed me for ruining her day, basically... Ha.
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2011 5:20 PM Title: Second chance
*giggles* This is great, but poor Bella. I wonder if she'll survive. I can't wait to see who his ice queen of an assistant is. Thanks for writing. =) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2011 4:42 PM Title: New impact
Great chapter. Nice to see the arrogant jerk again, but I don't think Bella was pleased at all. I can't believe how cruel he was to laugh at her like that though, what a prick! Maybe I don't like him being so mean, he can be cocky and sexy, but not mean. What in the world could Mr. Newton possibly want from Bella? Unless Edward requested her to be his personal server at an event or something. I can't wait to find out. =) Kelly
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2011 3:59 PM Title: Collisions
Hi there M! Love this so far. Sometimes I just love it when Edward is a cocky bastard, I guess it makes him that much more sexy. I love the last line of your story, and have to say: yes, let's all thank Edward Cullen for getting Isabella fired. So Edward what are you going to do about it? Or maybe I should ask what Bella is going to do to possibly get revenge on mister high and mighty. I can't wait to see what's in store for these two. Thanks for writing. =) Kelly
Date: 28 Nov 2011 4:47 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
Oh man... first day...no correction... first half of first day sucks!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2011 5:42 PM Title: Second chance
Hmm guess we know who requested Bella's presence. He obviously wants a rematch, after he has tormented her a bit. lol
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2011 5:18 PM Title: New impact
Hmmm interesting. I wonder what Edward and Newton want?
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2011 4:48 PM Title: Collisions
Oh my what a start to the story
Date: 27 Nov 2011 12:24 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
:)
Date: 27 Nov 2011 6:26 AM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
Interesting story, but please don't make Bella out to be nothing more than a klutzy dimwitted bimbo with over-active hormones and no self respect or control.
I'm hoping you'll have her turn the tables on Edward. Especially since he is being so disrespectful to her. Making jokes about her to other people, that's in very poor taste. Maybe have her quit and then Edward will have to track her down if he wants to torture her some more.
I'd also like to know why Mike Newton decided to send her to this job. He didn't sound like he wanted her anywhere near him or NYE ever again.
hugz
Author's Response:
Since I'm not the author of this story, I can only make assumptions. Mike Newton must have been asked to rehire Bella because the Cullen Corp. owns N.Y.E. and Edward Cullen might have pulled some strings in order to see Bella again. Now, I can not make things happen one way or the other because i'm only the translator, and if i'm telling you in advance what is going to happen, as there is 22 chapters of this story in French so far, I may spoil the plot for the other readers. But I can at least tell you that Bella will stand up to Edward :0)
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 9:29 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
He is in a word, a DICK. He takes pleasure in others misfortunes...yeah, and, surrounds himself with people of the same ilk.
Date: 26 Nov 2011 9:39 AM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
Well Edward wasnt to nice, I hope Bella gets him back!!!!
Date: 26 Nov 2011 7:04 AM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
Edward needs a swift kick to the family jewels. What an asshole! Having said that, I love this story! Thanks for the update.
Date: 26 Nov 2011 1:37 AM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
Wow Edwards an ass and I think Bella should hit him then quit
Date: 25 Nov 2011 11:23 PM Title: New impact
I have no clue why I'm so behind in this story. The good thing is I get to read more chapters one after the other.
Poor Bella, she lost her job and part of her sanity. Not that I can blame her, HE, can take a lot of space in a girl's mind, especially after what occured in that bathroom. Sadly the final outcome turned out to be more than bad for Bella. But she is trying, step by step, day by day. She had made it through a month until he showed up. How will he alter her life this time? And what's with the odd call?
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:54 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
What a jerk indeed! Poor Bella, I want to give her a hug ASAP. She needs one badly. I just hope she doesn't loose her cool, so far he is not worthy of her attention.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:16 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
awww poor Bella i feel bad for her it really sucks to be so umiliated:(
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2011 8:34 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
he really is a ass isn't he!?! But we are still pretty early on in the story to judge 200%... so reserving total opinion for now!!!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:22 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
Loved it. Looking forward to next update.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 4:32 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
Love this story-can't wait to see what happens next-Edward is an arrogant doofus right now
Date: 25 Nov 2011 4:25 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
Aww poor Bella
Date: 07 Nov 2011 6:30 PM Title: Second chance
oh boy he will be there all the time
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2011 8:00 PM Title: Collisions
oh my word Milk - this is awesome and I can only imagine how hard you worked to put this story up! Brilliant! Please thank the autor for allowing us English readers the chance to enjoy her story and keep up the great work!!
Michele
Author's Response:
Ha, I think she will come have a look on the reviews her story gets in English, so she will know you love her story :0)
Date: 03 Nov 2011 9:49 PM Title: Second chance
looking forward to seeing what happens next
Date: 03 Nov 2011 12:53 PM Title: Second chance
love it:)
so i guess he helped her for this job i'm sure
but i feel bad for her now cause he'll tease her too much and she is crazy about him*sighhhh*
can't wait for the next chapter:)