[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:32 AM Title: Thunderstorm
Was there someone in Edward's past that hurt him deeply-that made him the cold hearted womanizer he is?
I would love for him to open up to Bella and change his whoring ways. Not all men can change, though-they get used to that lifestyle- never having to resist having sex with any willing woman. However, they do miss out on true love. I know a man like this-he never changed, never married.
But I also know a man who left those womanizing ways behind when presented with true love, and is completely faithful-hope Edward can change and be like him!
Date: 07 Mar 2013 12:50 AM Title: Thunderstorm
as much as i love this story im starting to pull my hair out. edward treats her horribly. we're 17 chapters into the story and all hes done is slept with her gotten jealous when other guys approach her and play games. he needs to grow a set of mcnuggets nd tell her the deal whether thts strictly sex or his fear of commitment. great job!
Date: 06 Mar 2013 10:39 PM Title: Thunderstorm
I love her not caving to him! That is the best part!
Date: 06 Mar 2013 10:16 PM Title: Thunderstorm
Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2013 8:44 PM Title: Thunderstorm
UGH! I'm so frustrated!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:37 PM Title: Provocations
I don't understand her fixation on E. He represents, disease, man-whore- arrogant, asshole, etc.
Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:27 PM Title: Thunderstorm
awesome as usual! thanks for the update :)
cant wait for the rest. whats edward gonna do?? she doesnt work for him anymore....ohhhh this is exciting!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2013 7:08 PM Title: Murderous thoughts
I hope she's gaining a backbone.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:45 PM Title: Contact
I have to admit, I really hate B's character flaws. She seems totally brainless. I'm hoping that in future chapters she grows a set of balls.
Date: 06 Mar 2013 5:18 PM Title: Thunderstorm
Thank you for the update. I was really excited to see this recommended on TLS. I've been following this story for awhile and was happy to see it start getting more attention. Looking forward to more!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that TLS put this story on the map :0)
Date: 06 Mar 2013 4:57 PM Title: Thunderstorm
Come on Bella be strong.. great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2013 10:11 AM Title: Swinging cocktail
Thanks good chapter
Date: 08 Feb 2013 9:26 PM Title: Swinging cocktail
Please update soon please
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 3:13 PM Title: Swinging cocktail
Bella played the take that Edward very well!!! LOL I'm sure its Edward at the door...mad from the act he seen the night before.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 10:07 AM Title: Swinging cocktail
IT WAS BOTH DISAPPOINTING AND PLEASURABLE AND TOO SHORT SORT OF........... ANYWAYS STILL LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
Date: 08 Feb 2013 2:17 AM Title: Swinging cocktail
Jealous Edward of course!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2013 12:15 AM Title: Swinging cocktail
Is it bad that I'm jealous of her girls night out? Wow that was Hot!! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I have to agree that it was a hot night out :0)
Date: 07 Feb 2013 11:02 PM Title: Swinging cocktail
thanks for updating!!
it has to be edward! i cant wait for the showdown :)
Date: 07 Feb 2013 5:22 PM Title: Swinging cocktail
Loved it~ Can't wait for more!
It has to be Edward if she "spat"
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2013 4:32 PM Title: Swinging cocktail
Hope we don't have to wait to long to find out. I hope its Edward but who the hell knows because he sure and hell hasn't gotten his head out of his ass after 3 weeks! Maybe Bella is better off without his selfish assholish self!
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:23 PM Title: Collisions
:) thank you. I have so many stories on my read list that have never been finished and sometimes I just want to scream in frustration. Lol
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:11 PM Title: Swinging cocktail
thanks for the update... i am sure it is edward
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:10 PM Title: Swinging cocktail
Thank you so much for the update. Love this story and hope it gets completed.
Author's Response:
Unless I disappear from the surface of the earth, this story will be completed. I always finish what I start :0)
Date: 07 Feb 2013 2:51 PM Title: Swinging cocktail
It's Edward of course!
Author's Response:
Hi, assuming that you got an alert for the updating of this story, I guess everyone will know it's been updated even though it was not added to the most recent posts...
Thanks for reading and reviewing :0)
Date: 28 Jan 2013 2:21 PM Title: Collisions
please update soon! i need to know what happens next!!
Date: 18 Jan 2013 12:35 AM Title: Difficult awakening
Great chapter thanks
Author's Response:
I'm translating chapter 16 right now and I think you're gonna love it!
Date: 10 Jan 2013 11:53 AM Title: Difficult awakening
LOVE THIS STORY!!!
please update soon! i need to know what happens next!
Date: 08 Jan 2013 12:48 AM Title: Difficult awakening
none of the above.Something surprising.
Date: 29 Dec 2012 2:39 AM Title: Difficult awakening
OMG LOVED IT, PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE, MAKE HIM GROVEL AND CRAWL. LOVE IT!!!!!
Author's Response:
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Date: 22 Dec 2012 2:39 AM Title: Delectable initiation
Please please update your story I love it..driving me nuts to know what happened..thank you
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2012 12:14 AM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2012 11:29 AM Title: Difficult awakening
It was nice and option 4 would be fun because i read all the other scenarios before and i'd like to read thatat one it wouldd be refreshing.
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2012 4:30 AM Title: Difficult awakening
I'm hoping for a combination of options 1 and 2. Although I'm sure Alice is having a wonderful WTF? moment!
Author's Response:
I bet she is :0)
Date: 15 Dec 2012 2:53 AM Title: Difficult awakening
I think it's going to be Alice...
Can't wait for the next!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 6:57 PM Title: Difficult awakening
That was such a great chapter. Can't wait for more.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 7:45 AM Title: Difficult awakening
Love it please update soon
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2012 5:49 AM Title: Difficult awakening
number 2 should happen!!!!!!! all the way let him FEEL it!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 8:38 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Well it wouldn't be a story if it ended right there between the two of them so I imagine that you are going to bring them back together again somehow. I am a sucker for lover reigning over everything so I want this Edward to realize he is an ass and change and of course Bella will love him in spite of it.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 8:06 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Loved it :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:06 PM Title: Difficult awakening
I think Alice will realize some of what has happened and tell Edward off jasper will hear it or hear about it tell Edward off...... And or Edward sees Bella with someone else does not like it, or simply with out her there to feed off her jealously with flouting the other women infont of he loses all motivation for wanting to do it all like he has been and realizes its her he really wants... But no matter what.... Bella should be strong and know she is better than begging for attention from him... If he wants her he gets her on HER terms not as a side piece!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 12:22 PM Title: Difficult awakening
First OMG I love this story, have been waiting for update. I think he will go after her, I hope!!!! Something in him is tender but sad, think something bad has happened in his life. Love it
Date: 12 Dec 2012 11:16 AM Title: Collisions
Edward is an idiot hes lost the best thing thats ever happened to him!! I think that he will realise that in time but by then will it be too late?
Bella should make him prove to her that he wants her & only her but I don't think that she should make it that easy on him she should make him really work for it!! If he does go after her she should turn around & tell him that she wants nothing to do with him until he can prove to her that shes the only one that he wants!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2012 9:17 AM Title: Difficult awakening
Thanks good chapter
Date: 12 Dec 2012 3:45 AM Title: Difficult awakening
5- Bella leaves and find a more suitable employment, probably with architect Jasper so jerkward can still see that she has moved on without him and is reminded constantly of what an asswipe he is so he can later on grovel at her feet but not without long suffering of seeing Bella seemingly happy with someone else. Hmp! That's the option I want.
Date: 12 Dec 2012 2:06 AM Title: Difficult awakening
#1!!!!!!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 1:18 AM Title: Difficult awakening
Great Chapter!
Thanks for sharing!
Date: 12 Dec 2012 12:50 AM Title: Difficult awakening
Oh My... So much could happen. i think this Edward is a true hoedog. He will have to have reality slaped in his face good and hard.
Maybe he went back to Victoria because he knows there is know connection. hmmm so many things it could be.
Can't wait to see where you are taking them.
Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays and Happy New Year.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 11:18 PM Title: Difficult awakening
I love this story please write lots more chapters very soon. Edward definitely needs to do the first one run after Bella they will be perfect together, Bella can stand up to him which he enjoys and won't be lonely at the same time. Write soon.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 10:17 PM Title: Difficult awakening
She should have slapped him... She quit anyway, she couldn't get into anymore trouble. DAMN YOU EDWARD!! YOU SUCK!!!
E/k
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:58 PM Title: Collisions
Please whatever you do don't do number 4 because that will just ruin the whole story. Don't make her just another tramp to Edward he has to show some kind of an emotion or give an indication that she is somewhat special. Nevertheless at this point if she was to go back to him after this then her character is just weak and just another easy lay with no real draw for us the readers. Her leaving and her last actions actually made this story quite more enjoyable. If her character continues in the same pattern it will make this story.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, Bella is done with the Cullen Corp. If Edward wants her back, he will have to go after her.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:57 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Oh my!!! Totally amazing and I can't wait for more! Hopefully Edward realizes he needs her and will eventually go after her.
Looking forward to more!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:53 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Wow, my pulse is racing, it is so exciting, really love this. Now is the time for some angsty seperation, that is my guess.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:24 PM Title: Difficult awakening
I would like to read a combination of no 2 and 3, and also see Edward groveling.Or,maybe see Bella with another man,because until now this Edward is one giant asshole.But, it`s your story, you decide.
Author's Response:
Well actually it's not my story as I'm just the translator...
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 9:10 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Omg! Not number 4. AbsOlutely anything but number 4!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:54 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Please let Bella have a backbone. I don't mind if they eventually end up together, but I can't stand stories where Edward is so hot a girl can't think around him and just has to have sex with him just because he's Edward. Make him work for it!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:22 PM Title: Difficult awakening
What an ass! Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 8:08 PM Title: Difficult awakening
I vote for this - he has to come crawling back to her on his hands and knees, begging her to take him back, because he has changed his evil ways.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 7:31 PM Title: Difficult awakening
none of that is going to happen. She is going to find out she is pregnant that is what is going to happen. I can't believe he was sooo cold to her. i wish she could have gotten a slap in!!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:55 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Option 1 though it may take a while.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:54 PM Title: Difficult awakening
well silly you know she is going to choose option #4.
Author's Response:
Nah, not this time. She's fed up.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:18 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Oh nooooo, you just killed me here, the last chapter of the year??!!! Can't wait for the next one, as usual great chapt!
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:16 PM Title: Difficult awakening
I think you should have given us the option that she kicks him in the balls & then sleeps with his best friend or at least he thinks she did!! Great chaapter & I can't wait for more!! :)
Kay
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:15 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Go after her!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:04 PM Title: Difficult awakening
I hope she slaps him! And I hope Alice jabs him in the head! What an ass...he deserves to suffer for a while. Grovel. Beg. Suffer some more.
Please update soon!!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:04 PM Title: Difficult awakening
soo dissapointed -i say she dumps him and moves on and elaves him desperate and opining for her
Date: 11 Dec 2012 5:16 PM Title: Difficult awakening
5) bella leaves pregnant only to come back later to show him what he could have had and make him cry for a change. that's what he DESERVES!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
If I were Bella I'd be worried about getting an STD from Edward...
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:29 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Hopefully Edward gets his head out of his ass and goes after her. Maybe Bella just cursed him and he won't be able to get it up for all of his whores! That would be classic!
Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:22 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Who knows what Edward is going to do. He's a complete dick! I'll be pissed if Bella goes back.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 4:16 PM Title: Difficult awakening
about time she gets a back bone!
Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:17 AM Title: Delectable initiation
They both wanted and needed it, but how will it afrect thi gs? How will Edward act ow?
Author's Response:
He will probably get back to his old ways...
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2012 11:24 AM Title: Delectable initiation
I'm melted. That was so hot! ;p I look forward to seeing how he acts, after laying her on his couch, and what he's going to say to her. I wonder if he'll tell her what's really been on his mind since he saw her at the club with that other guy. Or will he go back to being the same arrogant ass he's been? Part of me wants to believe that he's been acting like an ass, to keep her at a distance so he wouldn't acknowledge how he really felt about her. Like maybe he didn't want to admit his true feelings. I guess I'll see. I'll look forward to the next chapter. xoxo Kelly
P.S. Hi! I hope you've been doing well. Take care! :)
Author's Response:
Hello dear, I lost my friend Just4ALE to ovarian cancer 5 weeks ago and I'm still mourning her death. I'm sad all the time...
Thank you for taking the time to send me a review :0)
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2012 6:29 PM Title: Delectable initiation
HOT HOT HOT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
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Date: 09 Nov 2012 2:31 PM Title: Delectable initiation
thank fuck you updated, loved it!!!! xx
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2012 2:31 PM Title: Delectable initiation
Wow!! Awesome chapter. I was waiting for him to act his usual douchebag self with her and leave her frustrated but I'm so glad that he didn't xx
Date: 09 Nov 2012 9:14 AM Title: Delectable initiation
YOU ARE....... A M A Z I N G! PLEASE DON'T TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE.
Author's Response:
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Date: 09 Nov 2012 3:27 AM Title: Delectable initiation
Damn that was hot!! Loved it :)
Date: 08 Nov 2012 8:42 PM Title: Delectable initiation
LOVED the lemon! can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
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[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 8:32 PM Title: Delectable initiation
Soon soon soon please
Date: 08 Nov 2012 8:01 PM Title: Delectable initiation
oooohh that was good and very sexy!! more please
Date: 08 Nov 2012 5:05 PM Title: Delectable initiation
they are soo hot together.. darn i need a shower!
Author's Response:
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Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:50 PM Title: Delectable initiation
Finally after all the sexual tension between these two. wonder where it goes from here.
Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:33 PM Title: Delectable initiation
holy hotness batman!!! lol......... that was an awesome chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you :0)
Date: 08 Nov 2012 4:09 PM Title: Delectable initiation
Please update soon I love this story