Date: 01 Oct 2013 4:07 PM Title: Reality bites
That was an exciting chapter. Damn. I can't wait to see what he does next. He obviously isn't going to let it go. Thanks for the update!
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Date: 01 Oct 2013 4:04 PM Title: Reality bites
Great chapter.
Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:24 PM Title: Reality bites
She is so getting to him! God!! I can't wait for your next update.
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:11 PM Title: Reality bites
Oh shit - don't make us wait for very long please!!!
Date: 01 Oct 2013 2:36 PM Title: Reality bites
please update soon
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2013 2:09 PM Title: Reality bites
Thanks for the update!!!
Great chapter I'm so looking for the next one!
Hugs
Astrid
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Date: 01 Oct 2013 1:38 PM Title: Reality bites
So so good. Thanks for the update. You just made my day!
Author's Response:
I'm glad I did :0)
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2013 1:31 PM Title: Reality bites
Poor Bella, what an asshole!!!!
Author's Response:
You've got that right :0)
Date: 01 Oct 2013 12:20 PM Title: Reality bites
I love this story and eagerly await each chapter but I understand it is a long process to the translation.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your comprehension and your patience :0)
Date: 16 Sep 2013 12:46 AM Title: Alcoholic showdown
I almost felt bad for Edward, Almost!!! I hope Bella acts like she didn't see that card afterwards, She needs to get a backbone with him and stick with it. He needs a taste of his own medicine. He's been nothing but horrible to Bella. Who knows how many sluts he's had unprotected sex with and Bella has witnessed him with other's and still wants to kiss him and have sex with him without a condom. She is really dumb! She should be getting checked out for STDs. He treats her worse than anyone he comes accross. He's made fun of her every chance he gets and in front of others and the women who treat her like crap as well. You don't do that to someone you like. He ignores her at Emmit's party while greeting others. He makes out with other sluts like it's nothing, yet he doesn't kiss Bella, he treats her like she's nothing but a whore. He treats the actual whores better and yes Bella even has let him treat her like one too. He seems embarressed of Bella as well. He tries to seduce her when they are alone, but when people are around, he treats her like sh*t and makes fun of her. When the heck does this girl start to see this? I'm more annoyed and mad at her than Edward, because she allows him to do this to her all the time, and then whines about it. She needs to quit giving him the time of day and try moving on and dating other guys who actually can treat her better like Emmitt, Jasper, and Jake does. She should watch how these men treat their women with respect. Let him work for it and prove his wants to really be with her.
Please tell me that the other chapters have Bella remaining strong, and not back to her letting him treat her like a whore?
Author's Response:
Something is wrong with the site. I've been trying to answer twice and everything disappeared each time... I think Bella has got enough of Edward. She asks him to leave her alone at the end of the chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2013 4:37 AM Title: Alcoholic showdown
Update soon! I can't wait to see what is going to happen between the two of them.
Author's Response:
Chapter 21 is in the hands of my beta ^^
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2013 2:48 PM Title: Alcoholic showdown
wow!!
Author's Response:
I take that you didn't expect what happened at the end...
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 7:43 PM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
wow the first day wasen't nice at all.
Author's Response:
Nope...
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 6:12 PM Title: New impact
thanks for the update.....I wonder didi Edward just show up or has been thinking of Bella like she has been thinking of him...I'm sure Mike has a propostion for her.
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:50 PM Title: Collisions
New reader to your story........Oh my , why did Mr. Newtown have to walk in the mens room at that point....Bella has lost her job...so not fair....lets hope Mr. Cullen has wonder what has happen to his waitress...........can't wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response:
Hi there, I hope you'll enjoy it :0)
Date: 27 Aug 2013 4:05 AM Title: Difficult awakening
Stupid girl is probably going to get pregnant or find out that she got a STD from the beautiful bastard... cuz they used no condoms!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, one or the other would happen in RL ^^
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2013 2:03 AM Title: Alcoholic showdown
Writing, translating, beta'g, etc of fan fics, mostly feel like a thankless job.
Some of the readers who can totally be "BITCHES" with the 'tudes, I'm sure, can and will knock the wind out of you. But there are people like me, who usually lurks and reads in shadows--and feeling mightly guilty for not reviewing enough, and I'm sure we are the majority of the fandoms throughout-- we appreciate all that you do.
So, thank you.
Author's Response:
Jeez, thank you so very much, you have no idea how your review is heart warming right now, at a moment in my life when I'm questioning my purpose, seeing as so few people leave a review whereas there are thousands of them reading what I publish (the read count is there to prove it...) I'm not talking about this particular story though, as I have more than a thousand reviews if I combine FF and TWCS together. But you see, I'm translating a long story called People like us in French, and I posted an update 48 hours ago. How many people are following me on it? More than 2000 according to the read count. How many reviews in 48 hours? 3. I mean yeah, sometimes I feel like my work is somewhat not acknowledged... So comments like yours are immensely appreciated :0)
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2013 12:13 AM Title: Difficult awakening
All of the above!
Date: 21 Aug 2013 9:08 PM Title: Alcoholic showdown
Loved it can't wait for more :)
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[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2013 4:40 PM Title: Alcoholic showdown
Ah you are killing me :-)
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[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2013 3:39 PM Title: Alcoholic showdown
Holy shit does she get under his skin in a big big way!
Date: 21 Aug 2013 3:10 PM Title: Alcoholic showdown
She's finally getting somewhere with him.
Author's Response:
It seems so...
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2013 2:21 PM Title: Alcoholic showdown
Thanks good chapter
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Date: 21 Aug 2013 2:00 PM Title: Trapped
This is so well written,thanks. Love the very active writing. Looking forward to the next chapter:)
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Thanks :0)
Date: 21 Aug 2013 1:40 PM Title: Alcoholic showdown
great as always
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Date: 21 Aug 2013 1:36 PM Title: Alcoholic showdown
Ugh that MAN! Great chapter..
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Date: 21 Aug 2013 12:46 PM Title: Alcoholic showdown
i am glad she let him have it! it was about time. she is soo right about him!!
Author's Response:
Yes she is :0)
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2013 11:51 AM Title: Alcoholic showdown
:) loved this
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Date: 26 Jul 2013 6:55 AM Title: On the wire
new update soon??
I love this story!
Author's Response:
Hi there, I finished translating chapter 20 over a month ago, but my beta was very busy and it took her 3 weeks to edit it and send it back to me, and when she did I had to send it to Drinou, the author, for her approval, and Drinou is currently on vacations so I don't know when she will read it and tell me it's good for posting.
I'm really sorry for the delay, but right now I can't even start the next chapter because I just moved to a new city and I'm still unpaking my stuff and repainting all the rooms in my new house...
Date: 20 Jun 2013 4:29 AM Title: On the wire
Waiting for the next chapter
Date: 13 Jun 2013 4:00 AM Title: On the wire
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2013 10:41 AM Title: On the wire
hurry for the next chapter
Author's Response:
I'm starting translating it today ^^
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2013 8:44 AM Title: Provocations
good for her
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2013 8:26 AM Title: Murderous thoughts
i feek bad for her
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2013 7:00 AM Title: Contact
finally she found her brain
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2013 6:15 AM Title: Second chance
oh man i hope she survive
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2013 5:45 AM Title: New impact
omg stupid Edward Cullen
Date: 08 Jun 2013 2:03 AM Title: On the wire
You're killin' me here!
:)
Author's Response:
You'll survive :0)
Date: 07 Jun 2013 8:24 AM Title: On the wire
he is what he is..
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 7:24 AM Title: On the wire
I loved this chapter. It's always fun to see what in the hell will happen between these two. I was happy that their evening out together was such that Bella could more or less tell her inner voice to 'shut it'. I definately know that if the location and circumstances of the evening has been different, well then things would have gotten out of control as usual. I just want to slap Bella all the time. Of course I also want to throw Edward off a tall building. These two are giving me a headache. I hope that something changes soon, or I fear I will lose my mind! :P I'm looking forward to your next chapter. xoxo Kelly
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[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 6:45 AM Title: Trapped
I love this story so much! I was thrilled that Jake punched Edward, but at the same time it could get him into trouble. But leave it to the great manipulator Edward, to use the situation to his advantage. I hate him so much, even though I'm sure he has quite the back story to explain the incorrigible way he acts. I'm dying to hear it. I wish Bella could hold her lust at bay long enough to really teach Edward a lesson. I can't wait to see how dinner with him goes. Great chapter! xoxo Kelly
Hi there! How have you been? I hope things are going good for you. *Hugs* Kelly
Author's Response:
I'm doing good, but I'm very busy with my moving to Atlanta at the end of July ^^
Date: 07 Jun 2013 3:03 AM Title: On the wire
Can't imagine what would have her return to him on her own? but who knows :-)
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:34 AM Title: On the wire
Thanks good chapter
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Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:40 PM Title: On the wire
Hmmm well its hard to say what is going to happen next. But I think his shell should have been cracking a long time ago.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2013 9:45 PM Title: Trapped
O waited till you had another posted till I read. Still with you
Date: 06 Jun 2013 9:39 PM Title: On the wire
Well with how wrong edward did bella with his words and actions i dont think she will go back to him on her own....hes gonna have to grovel and let her in if he wants her.....other than that they wont be together if he doesnt do that please update soon
Date: 06 Jun 2013 9:25 PM Title: Trapped
Thank you Jake.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2013 7:16 PM Title: On the wire
This story is driving me nuts!!! In a good way! What and the hell happened to that man to turn him into this unfeeling, uncaring ass?
I sure hope they end up together because I am a HEA girl all the way!!!
Author's Response:
^^
Date: 06 Jun 2013 6:33 PM Title: Difficult awakening
I hope Alice slaps the shit out of him.
Date: 06 Jun 2013 5:48 PM Title: Provocations
Oh no looks like they are both playing games now.
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Date: 06 Jun 2013 5:39 PM Title: On the wire
Ah! He maybe tried a little. At least Bella stood her ground. He needs to work for it. I hope they end up together. He just needs to shed that hard exterior shell. Thanks for the update! I look forward to seeing alerts for this story!
Date: 06 Jun 2013 5:15 PM Title: Infernal rise
Oh wow, he is a slut. lol
Date: 06 Jun 2013 3:01 PM Title: On the wire
Biggest smile on my face when I saw the update notice. Thanks for making my day. Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Oh I'm so glad I made your day :0)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2013 2:37 PM Title: On the wire
:)
Author's Response:
Lol, you also reviewed on FF didn't you?
Date: 06 Jun 2013 12:27 PM Title: On the wire
What a confusing man! Can't wait for more!
Date: 01 Jun 2013 12:20 AM Title: Collisions
Thank you for doing such a beautiful job translating this great story! I am so excited to read new chapters - I know you put a lot of work into translating it from the original French version! I'm curious about something, do you plan on completing the story beyond the 24 chapters the French version had? A friend of mine read the french version and the story just hung there by chapter 24. I think you would do a MARVELOUS job wrapping up the story between these two characters by bringing final closure. That would be fantastic!!
Author's Response:
First, I want to apologize for the delay with the publication of chapter 19. It's been ready to be posted for 3 weeks now but I'm still waiting for the author's approval. Second, I want to let you know that the author Drinou is having issues in real life that keep her away from her writing and she doesn't know if she will ever finish her stories. However, the last chapter she published, the chapter 24, is almost a closure in itself, as we can see a future together for the two characters, but it's also possible that Drinou will find the motivation to write the actual epilogue to her story. That's what I wish for the sake of all her readers (and believe me she has a lot of readers). I wish I could tell you that I will wrap up this story, but I'm just the translator and I have no say on the matter...
Thank you fir your kind words :0)
Date: 31 May 2013 1:29 PM Title: Trapped
Edward deserves more than one punch.....i hope bella has dinner and thats it making edward feel as little and unimportant as he made bella feel....cant wait 4 nxt update
Date: 31 May 2013 1:16 PM Title: Thunderstorm
Tell him to shove his games bella u aint a dollhe can take out when hes bored
Date: 31 May 2013 12:19 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Edward is a dog and doesnt deserve bella...im thinking edward was confused abt their lovemaking and his feelings and thats why hes a jerk though it doesnt excuse him
Date: 31 May 2013 11:25 AM Title: Strange
A new girl each time...fuck edward get u tested for stds lol
Date: 31 May 2013 10:22 AM Title: Infernal rise
Does edward not want bella more than just another girl to fuck
Date: 31 May 2013 8:44 AM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
Damn edwards mean and yet i have a feeling he requested her from n.y.e
Date: 27 Apr 2013 6:13 PM Title: Trapped
please translate the next chapter. This story is great and I am so sad that the original is in French. But thank you for taking on this story and translating in to english so that even more people can enjoy it. Can't wait to read what happens next :)
Author's Response:
I translated chapter 19 but I need to type it and then send it to my beta. I should be able to post it in about 2 weeks.
Date: 19 Apr 2013 2:48 PM Title: Trapped
I LOVE this story and cannot wait for the rest of it! If he just uses and discards - why is he determined to pop up in her life even though she doesn't work for him anymore!? He's infuriating and not making sense with his behavior. I'm glad Bella developed a backbone, I hated how in articulate and ridiculous she was before. She really acted like a hormonal teenager instead of a confident and intelligent woman. Please keep Bella assertive and strong enough not to give in to him. I would love to see him have to work for her attention for once. Let him chase her while she pushes him away!
Date: 17 Apr 2013 3:51 AM Title: Trapped
Jake needs a Medal. Edward needs to have three or four more on him.
Date: 17 Apr 2013 3:25 AM Title: Difficult awakening
Yes I am happy. If you do not demand to be treated with respect you will not get it from people like him. She opened up for this and he gave it to her.
Date: 17 Apr 2013 3:00 AM Title: Infernal rise
Yep you made Bella into a sniffling embicile. She has no back bone. She does not have to work there. LEAVE.
Date: 17 Apr 2013 1:30 AM Title: VIP party
Please she is not a dumb dumb. Please.
Date: 17 Apr 2013 1:24 AM Title: Contact
I am sure what I write down here really means nothing you are way out there on chapters. I am still goint to say. I hate the way you protray Bella. She is clumbsey, slow and her panties desend for Edward Cullen who belittles her constantly.
Author's Response:
I don't portray Bella. I'm just the translator. Drinou is the author of this story. The only thing my readers could complain about would be the poor quality of my translation if it was an issue. As for the rest, if you don't like this Bella or the story in general, just don't read it. It's the only advice I can give you.
Date: 17 Apr 2013 1:00 AM Title: Surviving the fisrt day
I told you don't take the job. HE is not worth it. Let him smother in Tanya's and Rose's.
Date: 17 Apr 2013 12:54 AM Title: Second chance
I think when it said Cullen corp. I would have left.
Date: 17 Apr 2013 12:43 AM Title: Collisions
What can you say she was at work and she should not have done that no matter who he was. DUMB Bella
BY THE WAY.. he was rather hateful to her.
[Report This]Date: 16 Apr 2013 6:08 PM Title: Trapped
Finally another chapter to read at last hurray!! I am really enjoying following this truely beautifully well written story. Please update a little more frequently!! I would love it if u could. Thanks 4 all ur hard work.
Author's Response:
It's really not my fault if I can't update more often. The chapter was ready to be posted more than 2 weeks ago but I had to wait for the okay from the author.
Date: 16 Apr 2013 4:14 PM Title: Trapped
Amazing! cant wait for more :)
Date: 16 Apr 2013 6:13 AM Title: Trapped
WHO WANTS TO THANK JAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARE YOU FOR REAL!!!! SHE'S A GROWN WOMAN JAKE IS'NT HER FATHER! ARE YOU TRYING TO PORTRAY BELLA AS WEAK? BECAUSE THAT'S HOW YOUR MAKING HER OUT TO BE. WOW!!! I HOPE SHE FINALLY FINDS HER BALLS TO DEFEND HERSELF IN THE NEXT CHAPTER. TIL NEXT TIME.
Date: 15 Apr 2013 10:46 PM Title: Trapped
I do I do! go edward deserved it
Date: 15 Apr 2013 10:02 PM Title: Trapped
Please update soon
Date: 15 Apr 2013 9:42 PM Title: Trapped
WoooHooo!!! Good jab... job Jacob!!
Cocky bastard deserved it from the verrrryy beginning of this story.
Please update soon~!! Love it!! :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2013 4:26 PM Title: Trapped
I want to kill Edward yes. But I'm starting to want to kill Bella. Really it is getting a bit too much now. I want this man stuff. I can't control myself around him stuff. I mean if his "crimes" had been subtle or minor,OK, but he has said demeaning things about her to others in front of hers, he treats her like a whore, and constantly kisses, humps' and pretty much **ck's other women in front of her often even right after he screws her. Bella's mealy mouthed inner whining about how she can't resist him is wearing on me. She needs to grow up and have a tiny bit of self respect. Good writing..... Gets me all riled up.
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Date: 15 Apr 2013 2:41 PM Title: Trapped
yeah you actually have me cheering for Jake and that is a hard thing to do!!! can't wait to see what is going to happen. Ed is an ass for sure!!!
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Date: 15 Apr 2013 2:25 PM Title: Trapped
Again... Loved it! Can't wait for the next!!
Date: 15 Apr 2013 2:14 PM Title: Trapped
perfect!! can't wait for next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2013 1:40 PM Title: Thunderstorm
I dont get what he is playing at. I say dump his ass to the curve, get a job, finish your studies and focus on your life. Let him play is pathetic game with someone else. He seems like a spoilt rich kid that is board.
Bella is so much better than that. Slap him one and move on.
Not sure if Edward deserves Bella, not matter what. Once a cheat always a cheat, and you can't tell me any different, I have had to many friends keep cheating boyfriends, or husbands and in the end they get caught out again.
Date: 10 Mar 2013 4:55 AM Title: Thunderstorm
OMG I love this chapter. This story is great please update soon
Date: 09 Mar 2013 8:36 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Love it
Date: 09 Mar 2013 7:20 AM Title: Thunderstorm
I love this story. Hope u update soon.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 4:01 PM Title: Thunderstorm
I'm extremely proud of Bella for standing her ground with Edward. He needed to be shot down a few pegs. I think he needs to be knocked down off of his pedestal too. Just who does he think he is just showing up to her place? Was he expecting a booty call or what? Also, what in hell does he mean by asking Bella, "Who told you the game was over, Isabella?" I'm dying to know why he is the way he is. It's so weird how he'll act like a complete and total asshole, and then he'll seem kind of sad, vulnerable, and maybe even lost on some level. Even though he's an insufferable asshole, I know that a part of him wants to let Bella in. It's just that he keeps going back and forth, it's like he's fighting with himself over what to do. Now I know that I could be completely off base, but he has shown a desire to possibly show Bella a better side of himself. But then maybe it's all a ruse to get in her panties again so he can just throw her away again, and go on to the next conquest. I'm not sure he knows any other way to be. Monogamy is definately not a word he knows the meaning of. Oh I don't know what to think of Edward anymore, he's just so unstable. It could go either way with him. :)I can't wait for the next chapter! xoxo Kelly :)
Hope you are doing well! *Hugs!*
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Yes, I'm doing okay :0)
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:16 PM Title: Swinging cocktail
Bless Alice's heart, she's such a good friend to Bella. Although I would have killed her if she had set me up like that at Zanzibar. :O I just knew that the asshole would be there; I'm glad that Bella didn't pay him that much attention. I don't even want to guess who's at her door. It scares me. :) One more chapter and I'll be caught up! xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 2:19 PM Title: Difficult awakening
Argh! I want to throw that bastard off of a really tall building. I just knew when she confronted him, that he was going to say, "well what did you expect?" I was blown away that she went storming into his office, and was then disgusted that he had his tongue stuck down the redheads throat. Even though it seemed that he was being all vulnerable and whatever the previous night, I still wasn't convinced that anything would be different. I had thought last chapter that maybe he was realizing that he was an asshole, and that maybe he realized that he was being a giant asshole to Bella. Now I really don't know what to think. I can't wait to read the next chapter! xoxo Kelly
Hi! How are you doing? The last time I 'talked' to you, you were having a rough time of it because of your loss. Are you feeling any better? I hope so. Well, you take care; I'm sure that I'll 'talk' to you again. :) Kelly
Author's Response:
Hi, yes I'm doing slightly better, instead of crying every day now it's every other day... Anyhow life must go on. My husband got a job in Atlanta and we are moving in July, so I have enough to stress about...
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2013 3:13 AM Title: Thunderstorm
Thanks good chapter