Date: 22 May 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
liked it!! thanks :)
Date: 22 May 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 22
okay interesting ending... that was quick....
Date: 22 May 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh ed did you save her?
Date: 22 May 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
oh boy... what is going to happen?
Date: 22 May 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
what a sick ass!!! i hope he gets whats coming to him
Date: 22 May 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh you are making me want to cry,....:(
Date: 22 May 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
how sad.. i am sure they will get back together though...
Date: 22 May 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh boy thank god caffine doesn't do that to the average person... poor ed he is going to be worn out!
Date: 22 May 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh yeah can't wait to meet renee!
Date: 22 May 2012 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
quick turn around in thoughts.... hummm
Date: 22 May 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
interesting foreplay!!!
Date: 22 May 2012 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
interesting dream... a foreshadowing?
Date: 22 May 2012 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
interesting.. poor bella..
Date: 22 May 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
oh i feel the love between the two...
Date: 22 May 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
wow lots of hatred running here... ed man you got outsmarted by a girl and your dick! dumb ass!!!
Date: 22 May 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
i thought he was awake.. why do i think he is? poor tortured bella.. it's really james you should be after.
Date: 22 May 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
what a way to go... sex and a knock out....for an FBI agend Ed you sure are dense!!
Date: 22 May 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh boy... does ed have clue? or is he playing dumb? hummmm
Date: 22 May 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh boy.. be careful he is smarter than you think dear bella
Date: 22 May 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh boy ed is already on to her... humm interesting.
Date: 22 May 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
woah... this is good really good can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 22 May 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh you are a bad ass bella!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
Such a great story!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
looks like miss bella found more than just the contentment she was looking for and actually found happiness and joy. so glad she found her happily ever after!
thank you for sharing your story!
suzie :)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 22
well she has come back from the brink of death and has found eddie waiting for her.
Date: 07 Nov 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 21
it was all in her head? wow mind over matter, pretty cool shit. so eddie showed up and shot james? right?
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 20
well hot damn miss bella could definately make a living off of dancing, if she could stop killing the guys in the audience! heehee! will eddie follow her and help her take down james?
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
sick fucker!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 18
how is she the big bad story and all fbi agents know about her but eddie didn't? is the story just about bella and not about where she came from and who she is?
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 17
oh bella! can you see this time he is trying to help you by pushing you away? it is just like when your mom asked you to choose....
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
oh eddie you are breaking down her walls so fast her head is starting to spin!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
well hell! that is one hell of a side effect to coffee! eddie better hang on tight it is gonna be a long night! is he man enough to keep up?
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 14
goodness honey you never tell the parents the whole story! unless your one of my kids then i expect full disclosure! heehee not that i get it.
Date: 07 Nov 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
breakthrough! yay now all they have to do is un-jumble her feelings, kill james, and talk to daddy c.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
bella wants a challenge and to not be seen as a weak girl. eddie is not gonna give her the challenge she wants but a whole new kind...
Date: 06 Nov 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
well now that was one hell of a dream! all of the kids are named after family members? jake, emmett, esme, you never mentioned the name of baby bump #4.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
i wonder what eddie thinks of what aro and his dad did to bella and the others?
Date: 06 Nov 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
how can eddie be so dumb? were there no warning lights flashing in his head at her killing someone? how did he not put this all together? time to go get aro.
*continuity issue* did you mean to have tyler c. mentioned here as the pilot? you used him in chapter 2 already ' "We've only lost one of our members, Tyler Crowley, to a mishap in Korea. At least he took a dozen foreign spies down with him."', not sure if you realized it or not.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
well eddie did that answer any questions for you? or just bring up a whole lot more? time to go home and deal with james.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh bella-boo it's ok eddie will love you and make it all better. pretty sure he won't want you to kill his daddy though so you guys will have to come up with something there....
Date: 06 Nov 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
oh bella! what did you do? and eddie seriously, overconfident much? you didn't even read bella's file? stu-pid!
Date: 06 Nov 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
heehee have some fun before getting to work? sounds like a good night in the making! now does eddie know who she is? is he playing along with her or is he just thinking she is a beautiful woman that he wants to get to know better?
Date: 06 Nov 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
well now! will bella be making it to see aro at all? or will she be completely side tracked by eddie?
Date: 06 Nov 2010 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
2 birds one knife. and some new intel on what's been going on while bella has been away.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
the path to happiness can be full of pain. pain it seems for everyone in bella's way.
Date: 06 Nov 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
well at least she didn't have to have sex with grandpa!
Date: 01 Aug 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 23
wow, i read your whole story today wow, it was really good a little bit of mistake and i wish you choice different for children but i am happy for bella , it was very nice . thank you for writting this story .
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love it! Made me cry. Thanks for writing it!
Date: 24 May 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
that was a good story i liked it and cant wait to see what eles you have written
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 15 May 2010 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
i loved reading this story great job
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
i really enjoyed this..great story
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
liked your story thank you for sharing it
Author's Response:
No problem.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
I enjoyed reading your story . You did a great job!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 23
One thing that you always forget: FBI is working in USA not abroad, it's cIA who works abroad.... they're spying othere countries not FBI....
Your Beta didn't tell you that? Jesus Christ....
I loved the end,exept that 'FbI thing' wich is pissing me off....
Author's Response:
Didn't have a beta, wrote this a longggg time ago.
Sorry, not from U.S.
Date: 18 Apr 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm really surprised Edward restrained himself from kicking James' ass. I know why he couldn't but I sure it took every ounce of strength not to do it. All I can say is poor Bella to have suffered through that.
Another good chapter. Thanx for the quick updates.
Author's Response:
Frig, me too. That was fairly intense.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm feeling sorry for her,no hope for a normal life... and no Edward ... damn this chapter was sad. Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
It was a pretty angsty chapter.
Date: 01 Apr 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
Enjoying the story so far
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
I liked your "cheesy" chapter a lot ! Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
Good chapter! = )
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
hmmmm, i am very intrigued by your story :) xx
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ugh! I hate cliff hangers! That was awesome! Please,please keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
You need to re-post it 'cause there's no chapter... TWCS has some problems with a new server.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I just got the email. I'll repost.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
ok you need to update this like ASAP
Author's Response:
Hahaha. Thank you!