Date: 01 Feb 2020 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hate Jake! He's a prick!
Date: 01 Feb 2020 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bella and Paul!
Date: 01 Feb 2020 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 4
I really don't like Jake!
Date: 01 Feb 2020 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella is awesome
Date: 27 Dec 2019 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 34
Can't wait for more!!
Date: 13 Oct 2019 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 34
Awesome update can't wait for more.
Date: 15 Sep 2019 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 34
Wow! This chapter was a great adventure. Tawny started out being all suspicious, but she calmed down. I'm glad the crew got to be together a while and Jacob/Tawny got married how they wanted in Vegas. It's really not important what anyone else expects or wants when it comes to your wedding.
Bella was so kind answering Jacob's sweet, smart kid's questions.
Great chapter with lots of yummy Paul/Bella goodness as well. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 22 Jul 2019 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 33
Awe.... Bella and Jacob both were really sweet to each other. And it appears they were really honest too. Jacob's children will benefit from their father being more happy as well. Great chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 22 Jul 2019 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 33
Loved it and thanks for the awesome update.
Date: 16 Jul 2019 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 32
Ahhh... I need more!! This story is beyond good. I love everything.about it.
Date: 16 Jul 2019 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
Aww...Daddy Jake!!
Date: 16 Jul 2019 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 19
Aww...poor Will and Sarah! Angela is a piece of work!
Date: 16 Jul 2019 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am so loving this story. I keep reading...going to the next chapter instead of reviewing. I love how you're growing these characters. I hate Angela...and that's never happened in any story. I think she is sleeping with that Fuller dude, why else would she act the way she does. Hmm...on to more!
Date: 27 Feb 2019 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 32
You are an amazing writer. I love your stories. So can't wait for you to update again !
Date: 24 Feb 2019 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 32
That was nice cor Jacob and Tawny. I'm really pleased about Bella putting her foot down and demanding her and Paul get away. They needed that.
Date: 24 Feb 2019 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loved it thanks for the update.
Date: 23 Feb 2019 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 32
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Date: 13 Feb 2019 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 31
I laughed so much at Charlie's over reaction's in this. I'm pleased that Bella got some clarity about what she wants to do with her life. Great chapter. :)
Date: 05 Feb 2019 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 30
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSILY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!!??!!??
Date: 04 Feb 2019 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 30
Hopefully Sue will be ok. Paul and Bella sure having a rough go of it as well. I am happy that Paul has some happy memories of his mom now.
Date: 03 Feb 2019 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thank you for the update it was awesome. will you be updateing your other stories as well or mainly sticking with this one?
Date: 03 Feb 2019 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 30
Just wanted to say that I love all your stories.
Date: 30 Jun 2018 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 29
I'm so glad you have posted a new capter to your story.
I almost gave up hope on you. I truly have enjoyed following
all your stories, and getting to know each chgas your write them.
Date: 15 Jun 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 29
I absolutely adore the twins. wish there was more scenes of those two...
You have the best Charlie - Renée scenes I have ever read. Love his side;)
OK so here goes the begging... more, more, more, more, more PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAASSSSZZZZZZZZZEEEEEEEEEEEEE
THANKS
Date: 22 Mar 2018 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it and thank you for the update.
Date: 19 Mar 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 29
Please update soon . Love this story so far .
Date: 18 Mar 2018 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 13
Love charlie making paul flinch
Date: 18 Mar 2018 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
Omg funny as can be when she kick jacob . Love bellas reaction when she sees jacob and angela! Exelent job so far
Date: 14 Mar 2018 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 29
Well at least Paul got some of the parentals to go away. LOL Charlie getting Paul to let his feelings go was really sweet. This is the ONLY wolf story that I have or will read. You are awesome and so is this story. :)
Date: 14 Mar 2018 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 29
Yay! More Intensity! I love this story :)
Date: 07 Nov 2017 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 28
please update soon
Date: 18 Aug 2017 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 28
Please update soon
Date: 31 May 2017 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 28
This is a great story so far. I hope you update soon
Date: 15 May 2017 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 28
You can't leave us hanging there!!! Seriously though, I love this story. I think I've read through it 5 or 6 times. You have an amazing talent. Thanks for sharing with us!!
Date: 15 Apr 2017 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
Please write more 😀! I. Am so loving this story. Pm me when there is an update please!!!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2017 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 28
You truly just hurt my feelings........ Very impatiently waiting for your next update
Date: 16 Jan 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
Hi I just happen to see your story and I love it! I can't wait to find out what going to happen and to look your other stories you have written please try to do regular updates on your story. You are a great writer thank you.
Date: 10 Jan 2017 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow. I would never guess in a million years where you were taking this chapter. What a story. I'm on the edge of my seat for the next chapter. Thanks I so love this story.
Date: 09 Jan 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 28
Well he'll I did not see that one coming. Loved it and can't wait for more please update ASAFP.
Date: 09 Jan 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 28
Well he'll I did not see that one coming. Loved it and can't wait for more please update ASAFP.
Date: 09 Jan 2017 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh my word! So glad for the update, and I cannot wait to find out what happens next!
Date: 09 Jan 2017 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 28
Horrible mean! Looking forward to next chapter
Date: 09 Jan 2017 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
A new chapter! Awesome. When will Bella learn that wolves heal better than she does.
I am hopeful for more chapters soon (on this story or your others; I recently treated myself to a day of nothingness and re-read "You'll Find What...Walmart"
Date: 09 Jan 2017 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
I am so glad to read some of your great writing, but did you have to leave us on such a mean cliffie?? Did you get coal in your stocking or something? LOL
Date: 27 Dec 2016 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
Please finish this story
Date: 21 Aug 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 27
plz write more
Date: 01 Jul 2016 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 27
Please update. 😇
Date: 05 Apr 2016 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
when is the next up date i love this story oxoxox
Date: 05 Apr 2016 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 27
PLEASE UPDATE ON THIS STORY SOON PLEASE
Date: 25 Feb 2016 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
Please write more for this story. I love it and want to know what happens with them.
Date: 01 Jan 2016 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 27
well thanks for a chapter.
Date: 20 Dec 2015 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 27
Glad to see Paul and Bella getting back on track..... glad to read some more of your greart writing as well..... merry christmas! :)
Date: 20 Dec 2015 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loving it! Can't wait for more.
XoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin aka Alia
Date: 20 Dec 2015 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 27
I love it and can't wait for more please update ASAFP.
Date: 01 Mar 2015 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 26
Love this story and can't wait to read more
Date: 06 Feb 2015 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 26
I hope Angela ends up being vamp food.
Date: 05 Feb 2015 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 26
I am so happy you are writing again. I can only say whatever just write. :-) Missed you
Date: 05 Feb 2015 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
I have always loved your stories. I have to go back and reread some to get in the swing of the story again.
Date: 05 Feb 2015 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it x infinity!
Date: 04 Feb 2015 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 26
Yes, tony and angela are still disgusting... gag! I would also feel like Jake. :) Paul defenitely needs to spend less time worrying about everyone else and concentrate more on bella and their relationship issues. Someone needs to eplain to bella what part-time work is. LOL
Date: 06 Jan 2015 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well you asked lol. I think everyone deserves honesty and while I may give it brutaly and not hold back I would rather someone give me 100% honesty then try to soften it up to where they can slip a few lies in if you ask my honest opinion you will get my honest opinion.
Author's Response:
...and I agree with you a 100%--Tony and Angela are the scum of the earth. Love hearing from you! XOXO mama4dukes
P.S. Sorry about the cliffy...no, I'm not. ;)
Date: 06 Jan 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
gross new info, but expected! lol
Author's Response:
Yeah, Tony and Angela are pretty gross. Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 06 Jan 2015 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 25
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
More coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 06 Jan 2015 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 25
I think you should stop with the dang cliffies they're killing me.I think Tony should have his dick nail to a piece of plyboard then cut off with a dull butter knife and Angela should be stomped into a blood puddle then walked dry. But that is my opinion please update ASAFP.
Author's Response:
Wow, Katie! You don't hold your opinions back at all, do you? Um...I was threatened by the evil Tony to within an inch of my life to leave all of you hanging on a cliff. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing Intensity.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 03 Oct 2014 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 24
Update soon please.
Author's Response:
I'll do my best, 01katie. Thanks for taking the time to read Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 01 Oct 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
Dam! All of these people/parents need to start handling some of their own issues for a change. Paul and Bella shouldn't have to flee their own home just to get some privacy and alone time. Dam!
Author's Response:
You might be correct there, trbuie--but Paul and Bella created their busy lives themselves. And as Alpha--Paul has to have an open door for his pack at all times. As for their little getaway, I think they need it. Dang it--I need one, too. Thanks for chiming in and for taking the time to read Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 24 Aug 2014 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awesome story
Author's Response:
Thank you, Micci, for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you liked the chapter. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 07 Jul 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
Welcome to daddy's and little girls. Good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Hello Mary Mary,
I really wanted Jacob to bond with Sarah, and realize what a gift his daughter really is. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 06 Jul 2014 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 23
Woohoo that was a fast keep them coming. I think that Charlie is completely right Billy needs to forget some of that pride. I think that Angela needs to have a beat down the bitch has her head shoved so far up her ass she thinks the sun rises in the right cheek and set in the left. Jake is doing a great job with his daughter. Love it please update ASAFP.
Author's Response:
You're right on all counts. Billy really needed a swift kick in the pants so that he could once again become a great chief.
As for Angela...well...just wait and see.
Jake is learning how to become a good father--finally.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, 01katie.
XOXOmama4dukes
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
Aww how cute looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review Intensity, lanigirl96003. I truly appreciate it.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 06 Jul 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
Both Billy and Jacob learned a few things chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Hi trbuie,
They both learned lessons that were a long time coming! More Intensity on the way!
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 05 Jul 2014 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 22
wow! It's so good to see your writing again. I hope you are doing well. I really loved the idea of Eric helping out with discovering Fuller's crap. hehehe
As a former high school teacher I witnessed the after effects and reported several cases of suspected child abuse. Most of the time the kids actually told me about the problems at home or hinted at things. Sadly...I was never wrong. I dispise abusers.
I re-read your peter/bella story just last week. It is still awesome and I can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's great to get the opinion of a high school teacher. I despise child abuse of any kind and I think it's important that it's brought to the forefront. So much of it goes unreported.
Thank you for taking the time to chime in with your opinion. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 05 Jul 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 22
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you! More on the way! XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 05 Jul 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love the chapter. It shows everyone pulling together. I hope that Eric finds something big on Fuller that dickweed needs to be stomped into a blood puddle then walked dry.
Author's Response:
Ooh! I really like your prolific description of Fuller's demise. Bravo! Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 14 Jan 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 21
I love it as always and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. More coming soon. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 13 Jan 2014 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you! There will be an update soon! XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 13 Jan 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 21
I laughed hard at Charlie's whimpering and whining about dieing and having to work forever now. lol I DO wish everyone would quit pressuring Bella and Paul to have kids. Some people just don't want babies of their own. Look how much they do for everyone else's kids.
p.s. Hope you had a great holiday!! Tracey
Author's Response:
Hi Tracey,
Poor Charlie, he'll never be able to retire now. And you're right, everyone needs to stop pressuring Bella and Paul to have kids. They'll have kids when they're good and ready!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 20 Dec 2013 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am glad you are back. I missed YOU and your stories, since I read them all. Life can be exhausting..
Author's Response:
Aw...MaryMary, you're making me blush. I'm just putting the final touches on the next chapter of Intensity so hang on. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 17 Dec 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh I love this story I couldn't breath I was laughing so hard.
Author's Response:
Glad I was able to make you laugh. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 16 Dec 2013 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved loved the chapter
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you enjoyed it. It was a fun chapter to write. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 16 Dec 2013 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
I cringed in embarrassment for those 2 boys. But I love the total support that all the kids are getting. Bella should cut back her hours. She can still do what she loves, but safely and have time for Paul too. Plus, I can't wait for your other stories to be complete so you can start posting them. I re-read them all often. :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Let's hope Sammy survives the smothering mother that is Emily. Bella and Paul will need to work their hours out, but Paul can't push her. Thank you for the kind compliments regarding my other stories.
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 29 Sep 2013 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love this story! I would like to punch Angela in the face. I have a feeling she is sleeping with Tony Fuller...stupid ho-bag...
Author's Response:
Angela is just...just...well...she's a bad mom. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 24 Sep 2013 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think that I shall rejoyce that you are updating.. I have missed you.
I think that the credit card situation should be handled this way. Call the company and take her off. Get a list of all she had charged. Then make sure you take that with you to court. She was not buying for her children. I knew of one couple that the judge made her pay for all her excessive charges when the divorce went down
Author's Response:
Dear Mary Mary,
Don't worry, the credit card situation will be handled by the judge. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 22 Sep 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
PLEASE UPDATED THE REST OF YOU STORIES PLEASE OR ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATED ONE AT A TIME?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
The rest of the stories will be updated as soon as they are completed. Walmart will be first. Intensity will be updated sporadically in between.
Date: 22 Sep 2013 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
More to come soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 22 Sep 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm so glad that Jake is finally getting a clue about Angela, but I'm sorry that it took such extreme actions for him to 'wake up'. sigh..... Love all the support that Jake has, he is going to need it. Love this story and your others....can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response:
Dear trbuie,
Jake is finally waking up, but he has the others behind him. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 22 Sep 2013 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
I don't want to hit her. I want to beat her to a blood puddle then walk it dry. Love it please update soon.
Author's Response:
Dear 01katie,
Angela is not a fan favorite in this story for sure. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 18
That was an awesome story loved it very much
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you liked the chapter. More coming soon. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 18 Jul 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter. Welcome back and hope to see more soon!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 16 Jul 2013 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
I have missed your writing so so much. It's great to have u back. The Fuller's are just creepers in general. I'm happy to hear that they are going to be supportive of their daughter and help her press charges. The Leah scene was funny in a Paul and Charlie having another thing in common kind of thing, even though they were both dorks. hehehe The sexy scene was hot! lol And I understand Paul not being comfortable with Jacob hanging on Bella. Can't wait for you to update your Peter/Bella story too. I reread it the other day. :)
Author's Response:
Yes, the Fullers are creepy--they are the complete opposite of the Camerons who are extremely supportive of each of their children. Paul and Charlie are both snarky males who, at times, lack sensitivity but are generally great guys. And Paul being jealous of Jake--yeah, it's understandable, but Jake is now comfy having Bella as his friend. More Peter/Bella after I get over the brick wall I've hit with that story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes
Date: 16 Jul 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 18
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
More coming!
Date: 16 Jul 2013 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love this story I read it from the beginning (again) Is Angela cheating on Jake cause I'm just getting that vibe? Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Glad you're still enjoying it. More answers on Angela later. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO mama4dukes