Date: 15 Sep 2019 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 34
Wow! This chapter was a great adventure. Tawny started out being all suspicious, but she calmed down. I'm glad the crew got to be together a while and Jacob/Tawny got married how they wanted in Vegas. It's really not important what anyone else expects or wants when it comes to your wedding.
Bella was so kind answering Jacob's sweet, smart kid's questions.
Great chapter with lots of yummy Paul/Bella goodness as well. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 22 Jul 2019 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 33
Awe.... Bella and Jacob both were really sweet to each other. And it appears they were really honest too. Jacob's children will benefit from their father being more happy as well. Great chapter. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 16 Jul 2019 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
I am so loving this story. I keep reading...going to the next chapter instead of reviewing. I love how you're growing these characters. I hate Angela...and that's never happened in any story. I think she is sleeping with that Fuller dude, why else would she act the way she does. Hmm...on to more!
Date: 15 Jun 2018 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 29
I absolutely adore the twins. wish there was more scenes of those two...
You have the best Charlie - Renée scenes I have ever read. Love his side;)
OK so here goes the begging... more, more, more, more, more PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAASSSSZZZZZZZZZEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Date: 16 Jan 2017 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
Hi I just happen to see your story and I love it! I can't wait to find out what going to happen and to look your other stories you have written please try to do regular updates on your story. You are a great writer thank you.
Date: 09 Jan 2017 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
A new chapter! Awesome. When will Bella learn that wolves heal better than she does.
I am hopeful for more chapters soon (on this story or your others; I recently treated myself to a day of nothingness and re-read "You'll Find What...Walmart"
Date: 04 Feb 2015 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 26
Yes, tony and angela are still disgusting... gag! I would also feel like Jake. :) Paul defenitely needs to spend less time worrying about everyone else and concentrate more on bella and their relationship issues. Someone needs to eplain to bella what part-time work is. LOL
Date: 06 Jan 2015 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well you asked lol. I think everyone deserves honesty and while I may give it brutaly and not hold back I would rather someone give me 100% honesty then try to soften it up to where they can slip a few lies in if you ask my honest opinion you will get my honest opinion.
...and I agree with you a 100%--Tony and Angela are the scum of the earth. Love hearing from you! XOXO mama4dukes
P.S. Sorry about the cliffy...no, I'm not. ;)
Date: 06 Jan 2015 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 25
I think you should stop with the dang cliffies they're killing me.I think Tony should have his dick nail to a piece of plyboard then cut off with a dull butter knife and Angela should be stomped into a blood puddle then walked dry. But that is my opinion please update ASAFP.
Wow, Katie! You don't hold your opinions back at all, do you? Um...I was threatened by the evil Tony to within an inch of my life to leave all of you hanging on a cliff. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewing Intensity.
Date: 01 Oct 2014 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
Dam! All of these people/parents need to start handling some of their own issues for a change. Paul and Bella shouldn't have to flee their own home just to get some privacy and alone time. Dam!
You might be correct there, trbuie--but Paul and Bella created their busy lives themselves. And as Alpha--Paul has to have an open door for his pack at all times. As for their little getaway, I think they need it. Dang it--I need one, too. Thanks for chiming in and for taking the time to read Intensity. XOXO mama4dukes