Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Please update soon xoxo
Date: 29 Jul 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love this story, but I see it's been 7 months since you've updated, are you planning to continue at some point. It is rather good and I would like to see what happens.
Date: 26 Feb 2012 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm bummed to be caught up & there's been no update for a ~1/4 of a year:-(
I thought when I started this it was a completed fic.
I hope you'll come back to updating & complete it;-)
You've really got me vested in this story & I've become attached to the characters.
Thanks for writing.
Date: 26 Feb 2012 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
So she stays in lost agony...poor thing
Date: 26 Feb 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awe very sad.
Date: 22 Dec 2011 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
I really thought Emmett knew. In the car... on the way to the hospital... weren't things very clear? Hmmm...
Date: 16 Dec 2011 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
I thought sure a whole day alone would tempt her to make a run for it. Even if she knew she wouldn't get anywhere, I thought sure she'd try. I guess she has a firmer grip on reality than I thought she did. Or just faith, perhaps.
Date: 16 Dec 2011 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
I love this story so far. Can't wait for another update.
Date: 14 Dec 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
She seems to be breaking down. She needs a beacon of hope... a bronze haired beacon of glorious hope. Where there's a will there's a way... and something tells me as soon as he's able to put his legs in motion he'll find it. And her.
Date: 13 Dec 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
Emmett may act all tough, but he is a softee and will support Edward.
Date: 11 Dec 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thanks for the most awesome espionage thriller/love story I've read in a long time. Very inventful and eventful. I don't know whether I wanted to laugh or cry, yell out or take a cold shower even. Very well written. Had me sitting on the edge of my seat anxious to read about what happens next.
I'm hooked and now you can't write fast enough to satisfy me since I am all caught up reading. Hurry and write faster...and post faster too.
Found it funny about how Esme was talking to Edward about "the birds and the bees" and producing grandchildren. Lets put 2 and 2 together with Bella throwing up...even if it is a little early. I think I'm a little psychic like Alice and just might know these things.(chuckle...just forming my own synopsis). I guess time will tell. Not sure why Tori is upset unless she has overheard things from Bella when she was asleep when they spent those few days together. Plus the fact that tori still thinks Bella is a minor and has an inkling to the kind of feelings Edward has for Bella. Not sure exactly why she freaked out like she did though?
Thanks again for the story. TTFN(ta-ta-for-now).
StarryEyedGlimmer
Date: 09 Dec 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hanging in. At leastwe know she's alive.
Date: 09 Dec 2011 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well, since you know how evil you are... and it is for Edward...
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
There is so much going on. I have a feeling about the "grandchildren" conversation though.
Puzzled by Victoria's reaction.
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
God you feel for her...beautifully written picture of her dispair.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 23 Nov 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love getting a peek into Edward. Wasn't expecting that. I had faith in you that you weren't going to take him from us. As for Bella... WHERE THE HELL IS SHE?
Date: 22 Nov 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
You evil, evil woman...
Date: 20 Nov 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
I just found your story yesterday and could not stop reading. Great drama and great writing. I'm totally hooked!! I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter :)
Date: 16 Nov 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
Alice has to figure out how to get these 2 back together.
Date: 16 Nov 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
No. I don't accept it. I can't. You wouldn't. You just wouldn't...
Date: 16 Nov 2011 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the glimpse of Bella. She'shurting but I'm happy to know she's okay.
Date: 16 Nov 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
omg! How hot was that?! lol
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
OMG, I am so tense reading this. But it is so good!
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
Outstanding story! I can't put this down. Update sooonnnn!!!!
Date: 13 Nov 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm pretty sure Edward earned a gold medal of his own.
Date: 09 Nov 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
I don't trust this Kate. Bella needs to stay with Edward and Emmett. She knows in her heart this is where she wants to be. Bella needs to tell them no. Stand up for herself.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
omg..What a cliffy you left. update soon.
Date: 08 Nov 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
That was very intense,I hope Edward will be safe.And Bella will escape the nightmare she`s living.I like the way you know how to make the reader feel the suspense.
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
DID YOU JUST END IT THERE???? omg you are evil!!!! brilliant story teller, but evil none the less.
Date: 08 Nov 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
ARE YOU KIDDING?? BRILLIANT CHAPTER!!!
Date: 08 Nov 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
great chapter
Date: 08 Nov 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
must be a guy thing...
Date: 08 Nov 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
omg - i'm just glad that I can mosy on over to the next chapter!
Date: 08 Nov 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
I trust you...
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am loving this plot
Date: 08 Nov 2011 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
great first chapter
Date: 08 Nov 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 10
this fic has me completely hooked. i'm gaping at the monitor right now. please tell me that you'll be updating soon...
Date: 23 Oct 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
Something is different. I don't know what it is, but something has changed. Is it that I'm sensing some horrible dread that hasn't revealed itself yet? I suppose I'm asking myself that, but something is just different. It's a strange, unsettling feeling. I wish I understood it. Well...
Sorry for the thinking-out-loud ramble...
I'm so glad Edward is determined to stand by Bella's side through this. I pray that doesn't change. For both of their sakes. I hope tomorrow brings something other than tears.
Date: 15 Oct 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
i love this story wish you would continue it!!!! €€:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME????????????????????????????????????????
*tries to compose self* I think you are. I think you have. I know you have...
Dorky math teacher? GOD, NO! Or, if he is, then LONG LIVE DORKS! And MATH! Now, you don't know me, but let me tell you something... I DESPISE math. Hate it with a fucking passion. Like I hate Jacob Black. That kind of hate. EPIC HATE. So... do you see what you've done here? Yep.
"That's all I needed to hear." ... That. That right there... REQUIRES A CALL TO 911. I'm honestly praying that they can resuscitate me, because if I can't read the rest of this story...
Yes, I am aware of my obvious current seemingly alive state... but don't be fooled... I'M DEAD-TYPING.
And YOU are BRILLIANT. I am now dead-bowing at your feet. RIP me.
Date: 04 Oct 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
UGH, just when they were......
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2011 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good? Better than good. Much, much better than good. I loved the interaction between Edward and Bella. Every baby-stepping minute of it. This story is a gem.
And I wanted tomention-I clearly don't understand the 'ratings' system. As many cups that are possible is what I would give you.
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
I don't quite know what to say... I adored it. Every part of it. Every word of it. Brilliance. Perfection. And the ending... my heart is pounding in my chest.
Date: 09 Sep 2011 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
This story is so good. You and Jasper better figure out how Bella and Edward can stay together. They also need Esme and Carlisle for the long term.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
I loved the developing tension between Anna Bella and Mr. Cullen. Looking forward to the time when their attempts to reign it in fail them both. Wonderfully intriguing story.
Date: 05 Sep 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm really enjoying your unique set-up to the plot and characters. I'm curious if there's "more" to Edward. He went in the Navy to be like the father he essentially never knew. He moved back to Forks to be near his family. He obviously could care less about his job as a teacher. What are his hopes, dreams, aspirations. As much as being near his family was his goal, is there more he wanted and how did he plan to find it in Forks? He doesn't seem like a big fan of Forks either.
Olympic shooters often have long careers. I feel bad for Bella that she only had that one Olympics.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
You are truly an evil person! How dare you leave us hanging. LOL
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Baby steps are always good. I wish she could tell him just a little!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
WOW, that was intense!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
ok, I'm hooked now!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am loving this story so far!
Date: 04 Sep 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
good chapter gald Edwad knows the truth.
Date: 04 Sep 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
I am really liking this story, just wish she could tell Edward her true age.
Date: 02 Sep 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh. Em. Gee!!! You did NOT leave it there! AHHHHHHHHH!
Author's Response:
LOL... I wasn't sure anyone was reading! I'll update another chappie, okay?
Thank you for the review! -Ginni
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
wow so things are moving along. now it seems things have mellowed out and she will be on her own for awhile. bella needs to shoot something soon before she goes crazy. looking froward to more
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2011 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
like the premise and looking forward to where you go with the story
Date: 01 Sep 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
Okay....I am confused as to who sent her that message??? I am thinking it is Jasper...
Great chapter, can't wait for more!!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm very intrigued. This is the first story I've been tempted to read here. Well, that I opened right away. I'm looking forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2011 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
OOOH!! This is going to be good! I am so entrigued and can't wait for more!!