[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:59 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:58 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:58 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward
Date: 08 Oct 2019 2:58 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Love the story. Hope you still plan on finishing. Love your Edward
Date: 08 Jul 2019 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just read this again!! I have read it several times. Please don't leave us in suspense!!
Date: 05 Jan 2019 7:19 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
I so wish there was more to this as i want to know why Alice and Jasper are there, would they ever see Edwatd's family again? Other than the cliff-hanger this story was left on, its a wonderful story! Loved Reading it!
Date: 05 Jan 2019 7:18 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
I so wish there was more to this as i want to know why Alice and Jasper are there, would they ever see Edwatd's family again? Other than the cliff-hanger this story was left on, its a wonderful story! Loved Reading it!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2018 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well you have me hooked. Tangled webs and all. Got the story from the Top 10 Poll for this month, and am glad I gave it a chance.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2018 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well you have me hooked. Tangled webs and all. Got the story from the Top 10 Poll for this month, and am glad I gave it a chance.
Date: 09 Oct 2018 6:52 PM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
I hope they have news from Edward's family.
Date: 08 Oct 2018 3:30 AM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Loved it can’t wait for more
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2018 8:27 PM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Great chapter, keep writing
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2018 8:27 PM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
Great chapter, keep writing
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2018 3:24 PM Title: Epilogue: Part 2
AWESOME!!! chapter ;) looking forward to part 3 ;) hoping for good news ;D
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2018 1:15 PM Title: Epilogue
thank you so much for coming back to this ;) i reread the whole thing again and really enjoyed it ;) looking forward to part 2 ;D
Date: 18 Sep 2018 6:27 PM Title: Epilogue
I loved this story. I wish they have a couple of little boys who look just like little Edwards. I also hope that everything works out so Edward can meet his family as Mason. They bad guys have to be gone at some point. What even happened at the trial? What happened to Jasper? So many unanswered questions.
Date: 07 Sep 2018 5:36 PM Title: Epilogue
Love this story but are they ever going to reunite with the Cullens? How did the trial go? Are there still crazy monsters potentially after them? Any chance you can get that bit answered/ wrapped up next chapter?
is Bella’s alias Leia because Edward loves Star Wars?
great job so far and love the character development.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks so much. All good questions, and all coming up in future takes.
Thanks again!!
Date: 06 Sep 2018 4:41 PM Title: Epilogue
I forgot i read this so very long ago. Good story
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!!!
Date: 06 Sep 2018 4:40 PM Title: Epilogue
I forgot i read this so very long ago. Good story
Date: 05 Sep 2018 9:59 PM Title: Epilogue
I love this story. Thank you for updating it. Yes it took a while, but that's ok. That's why I never take stories out of my favorites . My wish for the finsl chapter would be some way that Edward could see his family again and Esme and Carlise could meet their grandchildren . But they have to be safe of course. Thanks, Maria
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!!! I will see what I can do! ;-)
Date: 05 Sep 2018 9:59 PM Title: Epilogue
I love this story. Thank you for updating it. Yes it took a while, but that's ok. That's why I never take stories out of my favorites . My wish for the finsl chapter would be some way that Edward could see his family again and Esme and Carlise could meet their grandchildren . But they have to be safe of course. Thanks, Maria
Date: 12 Mar 2017 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
Fantastic, your characters are so real. I love this Edward, I want to just reach in my tablet and pull him out, he is so cute. You are the real thing!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you kindly!!! Appreciate it so much. I'd love to have him at home too, believe me. ;-)
Date: 01 Feb 2017 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
That's so sad that they finally get to be together and can't stay with each other!
Date: 26 Jan 2017 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Been reading this on FanFiction.net, but this chapter was removed from that site. Glad I found it here.
Author's Response:
Thanks for being so understanding. Chapters are all back up on FFn for now. Some edited a little. Full lemons are still only found here.
All My Best,
Ginnie
Date: 10 Jan 2017 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that was intense!
Date: 06 Oct 2016 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for sharing this lovely story to us readers.
Date: 22 May 2016 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved the Story!!! Although I wish I knew what happened at the trial and how they dealt with it as a new family. But thank you so much for sharing! :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2016 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting storyline
Date: 28 Aug 2015 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 23
Once the Cullens showed up I started crying. This was a fun plot. Thanks for sharing your talent.
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2015 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
great but would have liked an epi or a sequel to see justice served
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2015 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
great start
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2015 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
This has been a great read!!! I loved every bit of it. You can't just leave it there though! I hope you are serious about that epilogue. Did they make it to the trial for The Swans murders against the Volteri? Did they have a boy or girl? What name did Bella use as her alias? Come on!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2015 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
this s crap she should be able to tell him her real age right but im loving whatim reading but wish he knew the truth so far
Date: 17 Oct 2014 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you. I loved the story and I cried hard in the end.
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2014 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
AWESOME!!!!! story ;) i hope you come back and post the epilogue asap;D
Date: 29 Aug 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
Can't wait for the epi cuzz tissues were def needed for this one!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2014 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
Good lord what a killer ending. So glad they got to do it though and say goodbye. This was such a great story, really well written, full of love, but not soppy, just a great piece of story telling. Cried a lot this last chapter. Thank you, and an epilogue that shows life is good, and maybe the bad guys are gone and they get to go home..... just saying....
Date: 12 Aug 2014 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
Did I mention I love this story... I can't stop reading...-
Date: 12 Aug 2014 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
God this story is so GOOD!
Date: 11 Aug 2014 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wonderful story! Loved it from start to finish! Would love to have an epilogue!
Date: 01 Aug 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
This has to be one of the saddest stories I have ever read.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ils sont ensemble vont rester j'espère?
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
Elle va devoir fuir
Poor Edward
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
It is very like that!
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
I liked this merger between Bella and Edward!
There is nothing bad in that.
Thank you
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 2
Très intéressant!
Merci
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
J'aime ce premier chapitre.
Merci
Date: 22 Jul 2014 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
So steamy! Finally he knows her age.
Date: 22 Jul 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
Step two.... Let's kiss. Haha!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was so good that jasper took her out. She was in such need of that!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella! All this pressure is going to make her crack!
Date: 22 Jul 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
This has started out soooo good! Edward actually seemed a little flirty. Does he know she is a little older? Him coming back to forks from the navy is a good question. Why did he do that? Could he be an under cover US Marshall that she doesn't know about?
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awesome story!! They don't get much better :-)
Date: 15 Jul 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
GOOD STORIES ARM I LOVE IT
Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 23
That was really an interesting ending. Most of these writers would be pulling HEA to the max. I like real life touches.
Thank you
Date: 13 Jul 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
lol Mr & Mrs Black. lol
Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
If she had said sorry one more time I was going to combust myself. Way to much repitition in her language in that chapter. I get nervous but that was almost redic.. LOL
Date: 13 Jul 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
just put them together save everyone the stress. Alice can handle them. Best Alice in a long time. I usually don't like the character. I love this Alice. Really this Bella is much better than some of the young ones.
Date: 13 Jul 2014 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
oh my pregnant and seperated and.. in Witness Protection Program. etc etc.
Date: 13 Jul 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
That hole chapter confused me.
Date: 13 Jul 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am almost scared to look at the next chapter.
Date: 13 Jul 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yes she is older and gone.
Date: 13 Jul 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
who is the message from? I mean she can not be doing that.
Date: 11 Jul 2014 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 23
I am thrilled that they got to say goodbyr to his family! It was so touching that they accepted what had to be and wished them well. Tori's little surprise was a nice touch, too, and explained her odd reaction to that mention of grandchildren. I'll hold out a hope that someday Edward and Bella will be able to see the Cullens again and share all the happiness with them!
Date: 11 Jul 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
This isn't an easy life they are about to embark uopn, but I feel the love the have for each other will carry them through the hard parts!
Date: 11 Jul 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
Nothing traditional or ordinary about this couple, for sure! I'm so happy this is turning out so well for them! It will be difficult to leave behind his family, but Edward will do it gladly and freely for his Bella!
Date: 11 Jul 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm not the least bit surprised that Edward took the news so well. He just loves Bella so much that having her and them being together is what truly matters!
Date: 11 Jul 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Bella, she is so sick and so close to Edward, and they can't touch each other! I hope they can be together soon!
Date: 11 Jul 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
Thank God there are a few payphones left in this old world!
Date: 11 Jul 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
Thought she told him she was on the pill, so no problem, right? All I can say is, famous last words!
Date: 11 Jul 2014 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
I don't think Emmett will have a problem with who his brother loves, except for the witness protection thing. At least I hope he doesn't. Something is bothering Tori, though, and I'm not real sure what!
Date: 11 Jul 2014 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
At least a thread of hope to hang onto! It's more than what she has had for a while.I just hope it gets better, and soon!
Date: 11 Jul 2014 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
It's always way more awful to know nothing, than to know something! I hope this doesn't break Bella's spirit for good. It;s going to be bad for Edward as well, but maybe worse for her!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good that Edward is coming back , but bad that he and Bella don't know where the other is right now! I'm guessing that Garrett is taking Bella where Alice told him to, so she will be safe.
Date: 10 Jul 2014 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
No fair, laying a guilt trip on your readers like that! Of course we can't leave Edward in his time of need, but Bella is in trouble too!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm so glad that Edward made up his subconcious mind to live for Bella. It's probably what saved himfrom dying. Of course, he's not going to be happy she has been spirited away from him while he fought to live! Loved reading his memories!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
That was a tough one, Edward damn near bled out in Bella's arms! Now Garrett wants to yank her out of there before anything else can go wrong! Thank heaven Emmett's a cop or they wouldn't have even got there in time!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
It wasn't enough to see her parents murdered before her eyes, now she hears some asshole shooting Edward! This is a horrible ending to the special night they just shared! I'm trusting you to not kill off the love of Bella's life!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
They are well and truly each other's now, for sure! Mind blowing, earth shattering, soul mating, call it what you will, they are one, now! And you wrote it so beautifully, too!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
Amazing lovemaking, like they have always been together and know just what to do for each other!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Edward, it was almost cruel to tempt him like that, but they will both be glad they gave in to their feelings! I've always been a believer in "tis better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all"!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm laughing right now, because that was a slightly evil thing to do, leave us hanging like that! I knew when Bella heard the words three position, that her cover was blown. Now we just have to wait and see if it's bad enough to move her , which Edward is going to hate!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
Agony, agony, and she wants to be honest with him and feels she can't! It's sure a hell of a situation to be in!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
I almost wasn't surprised that Edward found them in the bar. Remember I said Fate has a sense of humor? I didn't say it's a very wicked sense of humor! So, now Bella has to be very cautious and not let Edward know his arms feel like home!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good to know the inappropriate feelings may not be one-sided! The stress of her situation would drive me crazy, so she's doing a fair job dealing with it!
Date: 10 Jul 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
It figures, doesn't it? Since she's supposed to be seventeen and a foster child, she would meet a man who would be perfect for her if she was her true age! Nice to know Fate has a sense of humor!
Date: 09 Jul 2014 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved your story. Thank you!
Date: 09 Jul 2014 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
GREAT GREAT STORY!!!
I was hoping for a miracle, so esme has time with her grandbaby but I guess it didnt happen...
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2014 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh I love love love this story! love that your updating here, too!