Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
Keeping it coming (no pun intended).
Date: 10 Mar 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bella. She's gone.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
Not feeling quite so cocky now is he? :)
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward is a Big Jerk. Someone nedds to bring him down a few notches.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward is a Big Jerk. Someone nedds to bring him down a few notches.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love it, and looking forward to more
Date: 09 Mar 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 12
AW poor Edward can't get a girl off.
Date: 09 Mar 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
aww poor eddie isnt as satisfied..... not
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
I followed you here from FF and I'm glad you are going to keep the story going. When will you update?
Date: 01 Mar 2010 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
mm wonder if thats the last we have seen of Emmett & co.
Glad he has destroyed the whip!
Can't wait to see what happens when she is healed, will fiesty Bella make another appearance
Loved that chap, looking forward to the next!!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
What a story. I hope things get better for Bella. Edward is a little nuts and very mixed up in the head. I hope the Cullen's do decide to pay Edward a visit.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
This story is dark and very, very good.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter evoking his "grumpy and finally caring" Hope it lasts!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm surprised that Rosalie didn't come with Emmett to kick Edward's ass!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
I still hope Bella will fall in love with Edward but I don´t think she can aften what he has done to her. Maybe if he turns her and she forgets her human memorys??!!! Still a great (and mean) story
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 11
As always love the chapter and looking forward for more.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
It seems like Bella is bouts toc go all catatonic on his ass. Which serves him right, I hope he gets scared and has no choice but to take her to Daddy C
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
love emmett. poor bella
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh no...what kind of taking care of is he gonna do??
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
oohh so Alice & co have come to visit? Yay! Can't wait to see how that goes...
Fab chapter :)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
Good cliffhanger! Update soon.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 10
yes edward is mean but i still love him, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
It's Alice, she had a vision. And Edward still is a arrogant SOB.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
Is that Carlisle at the door ?
Your fiction is very good. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
You must be behind on posting to this website because I read these chapters on FF already.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter...I love how Edward slowly starting to show some compassion towards Bella, and like always looking forward to the next update.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really can't tell you why but this chapter makes me feel sorry for both of them. Edward is so wonderfully self-invovled that his dark acts of cruelty seem within his monstrous character- but he is warring and regreting his actions enough to make him pitiable. How will Bella ever survive this nightmare she finds herself in? Thanks for the update.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm guessing Alice or Daddy C
Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
So glad to see this story on this site. Was following it on FF. How long til you'll be updating with new chapters instead of just the ones already on FF?
Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
Awww Eddie is SOOOOOOO caring for the poor human..his remarks are so funny. As for who it is I guess it's either Carlisle or Alice
Date: 25 Feb 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is an ass. I was her I wouldn't wait for him to kill me nor would I request it. I would wait for him to leave that room and I would find a way to kill myself. That would be the best way to hurt him since he wants her so much. I would take away what he wanted.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow that was really harsh. Permanent scaring physical and mental. He's really never going to be able to redeem himself now
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
awwwww Poor Bella
But I love the conflict between good vs evil talk.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
But if i remember well, there were more chapter on FF net...
Why didn't U put them all here?
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
Schizo Edward can't wait until he tells to beat himself up. :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
oh no whats Edward gonna do? I am scared for bella.
Edward was funny having a conversation with his self.
Can't wait for an update.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
I found your story on fanfiction.net - or the summary - and read it om this site.
It´s very good - and cruel
I think it´s kind of rough. Edward is really the devil - poor Bella. My heart breaks for her.... But why am I liking this evil Edward???? I most be crazy.....
He is hilarious when he talks to himself...
can´t wati for an update!!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
Glad to have found you. I lost you for a while. I'm way past these chapters. Can't wait to see where you left off. I am a big fan of your writing and finding out where you are going with the story line.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
What a sadistic sob Edward is. I am addicated to this story. Can't wait to see where you take it.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
mm, wonder what punishment he has in store!! I love how feisty she is though, even if it does get her in trouble, lol!
Fab chapter!
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
Holy crap! Poor Bella, but I am so proud of her!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
So glad you're continuing this story....I found you here after following this on ff.net {although I found this story and only had one up-date before we came here}...will be glad when it's all here and we can continue....this is the darkest Edward I've read, but even though he is the worst of men there's something in the way he talks to himself that suggests redemption {and that I find hysterically funny 'cause I'm just twisted I guess!!!}.....Stillkeep upthe good work and <3 as always.......
Date: 21 Feb 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
Human Caretaker.....LOL love that line. Poor Bella
Date: 20 Feb 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 7
He's too crazy! Great chapter!
Date: 20 Feb 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ut oh! He's becoming a human huh!? Cool!
Date: 20 Feb 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well mymy Edward is an ahole....kinda like it, damn Im sick!
Great chapter!
Date: 20 Feb 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
That was harsh....and hot (Im sick)
Date: 19 Feb 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward to the next update
Date: 19 Feb 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
great chapter, now off to next one
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2010 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is a big old meany isn't he, lol! I started your fic yesterday and I am really enjoying it. Even though he is all dark & nasty, you can't help but like him! He is Edward afterall. lol!
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
love it!! hope u update soon(:
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
Go Bella!! Give him hell, keep him on his toes!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I followed you here from FF ! I'm glad you are continuing this story! I love it!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well I've followed this over from ff.net because it's fabulous and I couldn't imagine not getting to read it anymore. I'm a bit of a lurker on ff.net, I have trouble writing reviews, but I thought you should know what an engaging and enthralling story you've written (so far anyway).
Date: 18 Feb 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Came over here from ff.net, just wanted to say that i enjoy reading this story so thank you for continuing it :)
Date: 18 Feb 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
She's starting to mess with his mind
Date: 18 Feb 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
Very interesting story.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hey! You may have seen my previous review on FanFiction. I was formerly *Forever_Truly* and i saw you had moved. I'm glad because if F.F. took this story off i wouldn't have an excuse to be on there so often! Anyway, thanks for keeping it alive, and my former review was an idea of Bella going insane and obeying everything Edward told her to do. In a sickly sweet way. But it seems it may have to wait while you post the rest of the chapter. No trouble, but i cant wait till its all up! If you ever need a hand, dont hesitate to ask.
-CuteLittleKittin
Date: 18 Feb 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
looking forwar d to the rest :)
Date: 18 Feb 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1
hey ...welcome over...It is great to have you here.. Love this story... ( I am going to reread and review tonight..hahaha...)
Happing posting.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi. Following you from fanfiction, can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
i have also followed you and other awesome writers to here :) can't wait to see the rest again :D
p.s hate the idiots that have caused all these problems they need to get lives haha
Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Also followed u over! I'll be waiting for you to catch up with posting all the chapters and to read the new one! Thanks for writing!
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
awesome! i came to this sight just for this story because stupid fanfiction caused you to delete it. I hope you continue it
Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aww...are you not going to update all the chapters that you already completed at once?
Date: 17 Feb 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! I follow your story from FFn . Currently I am in chapter 15 and I can't wait to see what happens next. Logicaly it will take you sometime to post the other chapters, so I'll see you soon. Thanks!
Please forgive my basic English...
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting. Can't wait for your post again.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
followed u over! since i already have an acct with my own dark story here, as well...