Date: 12 Aug 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good first chapter.
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!!!!
Date: 03 Jul 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
no hibernation for you that was a fantatic chapter :)
Date: 21 Jun 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
just followed over from fanfiction
look forward to your story
thanks
Date: 13 Jun 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
Edward was just Talking about himself!!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Excellent, he is still not getting it, or just in denial. Finally we are getting somewhere. Time will tell!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hard reading, he is such a horrible Edward. He is so messed up in the head. What happened to him to make him this way? The Cullens are referring to him as being a decent guy at one point. Still all in all a good story line.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start, love Darkward! Anxious to see what the devil will be up to!
Date: 06 Jun 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hi,
It's us the office girls We are so glad we found your story again. We are placing our bets on how Bella will react to the stuff Edward brings her. We missed you jukeboxbliss.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
great chapter
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 16
Happy to see an update on this very disturbing fic. I wonder what it will take Edward to learn how incredibly wrong he is. How has he not made the connection between Jane and Bella? What a dirtbag!
Good job.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
I first read this story on fanfiction and was totally impressed. I'm so happy to see you have resumed it. It's one of the very best stories in any genre that I've read and your development of Edward's character is wonderful. I love everything about this story and this story certainly prompts a lot of different emotions-it's intense, tragic, reflective, dark, sad, and the humor is unbelievably original.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
Just excellent ! That was a very good chapter, the discovery of Bella's world.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
no dont go to hibernation i loved it it was great plz update soon
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
Edward is such an ass, man you rally make me hate him. I really like this story and am dieing to see where you take things but it kills me that the updates are so random. Can't wait to see what happens next. I want her to try to kill herself again. Maybe a close call and I mean a real close call will make him change his ways somewhat. Some times you don't realize what something means to you until it's nearly taken from you
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 16
Even though this is sometimes a difficult story to read because of its subject matter, you have done an incredible job of making it a story that's even more difficult to STOP reading! You have quite a talent for story telling. Your story is very compelling. Please continue this!
I'm particularly impressed with the subtle, gradual changes in the Edward character. I am hoping that the Edward character will continue to soften towards Bella and allow the Cullens back in his life. It will be so interesting to see how you proceed from here.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 16
Boy, if you look in the dictionary under dillusional you will see a picture of this Edward. I really don't see how any thing will knock some sense into him and show him that he is breaking Bella. I would almost like to see him come back to find Bella in the midst of trying to kill herself. There must be somethin in that room that she can slash her wrists with or hang herself from (not that I reccomend such things, but she must realize that she has no hope of leaving there and who would want to live like that?).
Please don't go back into hibernation. I have missed this story so much. ;)
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
NEVER EVER GO INTO HIBERNATION EVER AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
Don't go back to hiberanation!!! I loved it!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh my god!!!you are back!! I´m so glad you are here again!!!! please not do hibernation!?!?!?
I miss that story so much, please update update update
please update update update
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
i love edward humor - god job
the only problom i have with this chapter is that there is to much of bella journal
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thank you for updating! I was afraid you had abandoned this story, so no, please do not go back into hibernation.
Edward is such a delusional prick, but his is changing. I cannot wait for more. =)
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 16
You just give and give … and they just take and take. LMAO!!!
OMG!! "Some guys have such high opinions of themselves".!!lmao im literally
craking up!!!!!!! plz update soon!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yes, I do have a way of leaving the ladies breathless … literally sometimes. i love this edward his HIlARious!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
No, you don't need to hibernate ;) It was great, he's slowly but surely coming around. I think the journal helped.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
Besides, my halo is probably so bright now that it has to be hurting her eyes. !!HILARIOuS!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love Darkward!! You should definately NOT go back into hibernation LOL I want more chapters this story is Awesome!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
amazing as always!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 16
Ok a question: If the Cullens decided it was time to interfere (Alice, Emmet), why Rosalie of all people who has been raped didn't come through the door kicking Masen's ass? And why aren't they kidnapping her already to save her?
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
Please do not go into hibernation. I really like this dark, twisted story...
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
It's springtime, so no more hiding! I want to know what is going to happen next, where you are going and what are you planning. All signs of a good story, by the way.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 16
Please don't go back into hibernation, I love this story and it's been FOREVER since you last updated! Is something in their situation going to change soon? He's had her for five months and the story seems like it needs something drastic to happen to move on. Especially if they are supposed to end up together. Are they supposed to end up together? If so, It'll be interesting to see how you get that to happen condidering how horribly he's abused her. PLz, plz, plz update soon.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
he really is a delirious idiot
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
this is the 5th time that i´ve rode this chap
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
At least Edward loves Edward. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 16
So glad to see this updated. I did a happy dance. Can't wait for more. No need to hibernate!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
I am trying to figure out who put all this shit in his head He is almost stupid or he has let his ability fill his head with crap Hope Bella has the strength to stomp all the crap out loved it update when you can thanks.....
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 16
i loved it! Glad you finally updated, please don't stop!
Date: 31 May 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 16
He's killing her slowly. Will her torture end?
Date: 31 May 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
I liked it. I missed it hearing about darkward, selfishward...I want to hear more and see how he will make Bella happy.
Date: 31 May 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 16
He is such a self centered ass!! I hope he learns to put her first soon!
Date: 31 May 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
Glad you are out of your hiberating funk. Please don't go back to hibernating. I love your Edward-he makes my day.
Thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next one.
Date: 31 May 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
Man he is really deluded not to see himself as abusive according to her writings.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
no i loved it i really can't wait to see how this story goes it's really good
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh, the irony. This must be an even greater of a hell for Bella having experience talking to someone who suffered through such abuse.
But I love the guilt-ridden Assward; I'm glad his inner superego is kicking his butt!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thank goodness you finally updated! I went on here everyday hoping you would and you did! I loved the chapter. Seems he's feeling a little guilty about the way he's treating her. Hopefully she doesn't try to kill herself, that would suck! Please update soon!
Date: 31 May 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
god. I thought you died. About time you updated. It wasnt bad, I am anxious to see Edward come to the light eventually and get over himself.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
Don't you dare go back into hibernation! This story is too good and has been VERY missed! I was very pumped to see you updated...I thought you'd left this story behind forever. Don't ever do that to me again! ;-) You have far too much talent to leave this story hanging :) I LOVED this chapter, so UPDATE SOON :) :)
Date: 16 May 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 15
I'm not used to this domineering Edward.....He's so cold. I hope he really starts developing real feelings for Bella soon. Sounds like she's going to loose it soon.
Date: 03 May 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 15
I can't wait to see how this turns out. Please hurry up and update! :)
Date: 03 May 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
This was the best chapter so far because it showed that 1. The Cullens still have faith in Edward and 2. Deep down Edward knows that he is wrong as hell for what he's doing.
I enjoyed reading the letter from the Cullens, and I couldn't help but find Edward's arrogance hilarious. I know it was wrong, but I died laughing when Edward said "Like I would want those fucking bitches anywhere near Bella."
You're a great writer!
Date: 03 May 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
I can't believe Edward's arrogance. I am glad that Bella didn't respond to him during their encounter. I hope that it gives him something to think about!
Date: 03 May 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
I loved the visit with Emmett! I am glad that he told Edward off for being such a monster!
Date: 03 May 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
I hope that it's Carlise or Alice at the door! Someone needs to tell Edward about himself for whipping Bella!! You've really made me care about these characters. :)
Date: 03 May 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad that your Bella has a backbone! I shudder to think what Edward has planned for her...and here I was thinking that he was getting better! :(
Date: 03 May 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like the way that you've shown that Edward has started to change but he doesn't realize it yet. Good job!
Date: 03 May 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW!!!! I like a dark Edward and I am glad I found your story! I will continue to read more.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
I originally started reading this story on the fanfiction site and absolutely loved it. I was so glad to find it again on this site. It remains an absolutely totally unique story with the most delicious sadistic humor I've ever read! You are simply an amazing talent.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
I found and read your story from beginning to end. Amazingly intense! It's excellent! Whatever you do, DON'T get rid of Edward's personal mental asides. They are the best. Some crack me up, others make me want to cry, but they are all perfct, each and every one of them.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope he makes some changes!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
Can we plz get something new....soon?!?!?!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 15
LOOOVED IT, but no new chapters? :(
please uppppdate sooon its beeeen forever!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
hes really a sicko thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
i just started reading this story today, and i love it already.
you think edward would realize how withdrawn bella is, and how much its effecting her. hes so cocky and arrogant, i wish he would listen to the cullens.
is there ever gonna be a bpov?
Date: 08 Apr 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 14
I wonder if Alice's plan will work. As stubborn as Edward is, he seems to be reverting back to his vegetarian lifestyle even without making a conscience effort to do so.
Date: 08 Apr 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for posting chapter 14 :) It really made everything connect and make sense. Can't wait for your next chapter!! Update soon :)
Date: 08 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
loooooooooooving this story so much, became a fan since ff.net.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow! This chapter is the hottest one! You write great - please continue. I am a new rider) The story is really exciting...Dark Edward - mmm...))
Date: 22 Mar 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
I love your story. i read it on fanfiction to.
I hope you will continue soon. please!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
When will you start updating new chapters?
Date: 16 Mar 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
i´m following you from FF.. and most say that i really like your job.. never stop doing it... your awesome, not matter what people say, your greate
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
Edward is screwed up in the head. He needs family intervention.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
what chapter were u up to on fanfic?
Author's Response:
Chapter 15 was the last chapter I posted on fanfiction before I pulled it. It was up for about a week before I pulled it. Chapter 16 will take longer to post because I've been so busy at work (income tax). Things should even off soon and I should have more time to write. Thanks for reading. I will continue to post the chapters from fanfiction to this site.
I apologize that I didn't respond sooner. For some reason the email notifications I was getting for my story was put in spam. I finally checked my spam box and saw them.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
I just jumped out of my chair when I saw you updated. I
You never, ever disappoint!!! Your Darkward is, well, dark. But, he's also got the best one-liners that I've read.
Love him.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
YEAH..... love this story... you rock
Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
Edwards a bad bad vamp
Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
hmm would serve him right if she drowned herself
Date: 13 Mar 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
He is on one powerful ego trip.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
I think it is hilarious that he thinks he is selfless!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
CANT WAIT TILL DA NEXT CCHAP!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
THAT WAS GOOD CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT THANKS.....
Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
He's broken her like a wild pony, but will he find her as interesting when her feisty ways are gone?
Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
Ahhh, so I imagine that his family are vegies?
Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
See, he's experiencing such character growth.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
You write some witty words laced with evil coming out of Darkwards mouth.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
You really do write dark Edward very well.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
Man i just love this story. Please keep updating! I cant wait till you get the rest from FanFiction onto here, I LOVE THE LAST CHAPTER FROM THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
Another great chappie.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
tough subject matter, but you wrote it well.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just found you here. Reading it again cuz it's been a long while.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love his inner monologue, lol!
Fab chapter!