Date: 08 Sep 2011 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
What do I think? Your story, I think it has an end but it does not look HEA. It looks bleak. She is going to die I am afraid. He want to possess her, he does not understand love and he thinks he is so much better than her. Of course that is true in Twilight. He has that arrogance.
I hope she is strong. I hope he makes a mistake and she starts changing. Once she changes, she can deal with him. Oh yes One on One deal.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
:=( she is drugged and probably in some type of shock. She has withdrawn in her mind.
You can not force this, he just will never learn. He has someone he wants feelings from other than hate. OOPS wrong path.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Let her see you tear that whip to pieces. Tell her no more whips. Remind her your temper is bad and you will start trying to do something about it but you need her help for that.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
You know I don't care how he has a conscious now, she is still in pain. This will stay with her.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
ahh hah.. he wants to be loved. LOL.. Stockholm has not arrived yet.. Too soon.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well he operates on fear. Well that works until she is tired of being afraid, and kills herself.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
ugh rape is rape. Edward or not.ugh
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow Edward's made quite the u-turn. He must be more attached to bella than he thought.
Bella dying. Didn't expect that. Well I did but I thought it would be Edward not a tumor.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
omg poor bella.fantastic chapter.hope edward makes her last few weeks/days comfortable.that was so emotional.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
fab chapter.poor bella hope she gets through her ordeal.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
ooo edward showing some feeling.wow shes really getting to him.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
wow that was hot!fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 4
wow that was intense.poor bella.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow that was hot!but poor bella she must be scared stiff.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
fab start glad edward was there to save her.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
uh oh!!!! Awesome story!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
hes gonna turn her
Date: 08 Sep 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 19
Let me guess... he's going to change her??? Gahh... he's so clueless! It takes her dying for him to realize he shouldn't have treated her that way?! Fucking men! Poor Bella!!! :(
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awww Scumward is gonna lose his toy
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
He is a crazy vamp. LOL
Date: 07 Sep 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
He changes her!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
He could change her. I would kind of like to see him deal with a newborn Bella with a taste for vengence. Has Edward had a prostate exam recently??? Sorry, but the bastard deserves a taste of his own medicine.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
I believe that Edward is going to be selfish and change Bella so he can keep his toy for eternity.
I do not understand why Bella is being so needy of Edward? One would think that she would push him away since he has done nothing but rape, sodomize, and beat her since he kiddnapped her.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh no! Please tell me you're not going to kill her character so that I can stop reading now. It's nothing personal, i just don't like reading stories where the characters die.
Date: 07 Sep 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
YEAH!!! For your update, not what's happening to Bella. This was definately a turn of events I didn't see coming. Even after all this time, you still have nice, strong, literary voice. Got to love Edward's conscience/soul being so verbal.
I assumed she would continue falling apart emotionally/mentally. I've never read a Darkward where Bella is driven into insanity because of his actions. Brain tumor is a new one, too. I wonder if you are going to have it be Edward's fault somehow? I like how you have Bella so afraid that she has to ask permission for everything.
I kind of remember you mentioning that you have debilitating migraines. I sometimes have them so bad that I could swear it's a brain tumor, too.
I will wait forever for you update, which I think is obvious by now. How many more chapters are you shooting for?
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
Date: 07 Sep 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
Finally some good news. This story was so excruciating that I remember very well what was happening even if you didn`t update for months. I can`t but not be happy for bad news for Edward. He is so mean that he does deserve not a little tiny bit of happieness. A little Freudeward is not enough for his person to his redemption.. because he is constanty and very actively fighting with him. I`ve told you what my happy ending would be. But ...it`s your story. Of course he would change her, ith9;s the only way he could prevent her dying. Maybe it would be interesting to see what will he do when they were equal. On her place I would NEVER forgive him . But it`s Bellla... the godd soul, and even better heart. I just hope that she will make him "sweat" a little...... or much more....
Keep writing, please. You`re good.
Date: 07 Sep 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well, knowing how selfish Edward is, I would say he's gonna change her. Right? Will be pretty funny to see newborn Bella kick his ass. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 19
Would changing her fix it?
Date: 07 Sep 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love it... Can't wait for more!
Date: 07 Sep 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yay soo excited for a new chapter! My guess is he's changing her..? Here's hoping!
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
I've just reread this story today and can't get enough!! Please, PLEASE update ASAP! This is an AMAZING story that DESERVES to be completed! You can't leave us there!! :) Just know you have some devoted fans who would love an update! Si'l vous plait?? Merci! :)
Date: 20 Jul 2011 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
please update soon! hopefully edward is a little nicer to bella, im starting to feel a little bad haha.
Date: 09 Jul 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
ho gosh I wich you update faster.. anyway thanks for this awesome fic..
I want edward to be a little good... poor bella
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 18
Vampire Syphilis? How in the fuck would Edward be able to redeem himself now? I think he has gone way too far for Bella's mental health... I look forward to where you go with this.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yep, it was short. I read this on here and your blog lol That cliff hanger was not a very nice thing!!!!!!!! :P Pleaseeeeeee update soon, I can't take it, I've been thinking about this story too much :D Oh and the freuward is very hilarious. Greating writing.
Date: 15 May 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter! I'm so happy you are updating again. You have no idea how much you were missed. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 13 May 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ooh, good chapter. Can't wait for the next!
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Lol love the 80's quotes!
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love your psychotic Edward!
He's got a mean sense of humor, and i find myself chuckling at his antics while I wonder perhaps there is something definitely wrong with me if I find it funny...
Thank you.
Date: 11 May 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 18
Help her Edward!!! I hope his conscience takes over... soon!
Great chapter!
Date: 11 May 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
It's short but an update but interesting, she has a headache? --I hope yours are gone;D
This is where she has to get turned & then kicks his ARSE.??!!
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
Good chapter! I can't wait to find out what is wrong with her. Will this be a HEA story? I just want to be prepared if it is not.
Date: 10 May 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
omg he did it im so happy that he caled carlisle and hope they can help bella
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
Yay! Fruedward's winning! *does happy dance*
But Bella's sick oh noes.
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
about damn time eddiekins. Her shield is probably failing or something
Date: 10 May 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
Please update soon. Can't wait til Carlisle there, maybe Alice too.
Date: 10 May 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 18
Glad to see a chapter. I will be interested to see how he reacts when the Cullens show up. I think they will be mortified.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Keep it coming!! I can never get enough!
Date: 09 May 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
i like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oiii sumida, você é malvada, esquece das fãs e não att. assim você tortura-nos, por favor poste mais rápido , por favor não demore a att.
Agora esse Edward, não sei...acho que concordo com você, ele deve ser mesmo esquizofrênico mesmo, agora ele vai pirar de vez se a família tirar ela dele...acho que vai sim . Abraços
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
thanks good chapter
Date: 09 May 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love that he argues with himself. Mwah! Thanks for the update Sweets!
Date: 09 May 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
Now you're killing ME! I don't know how long I can wait for an update.... please make it soon!
Date: 25 Apr 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
Please update soon! I have to know what happends next!
Date: 24 Apr 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
I loved this chapter and am so glad you're back. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for poor Bella.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well, he's got that invaded existence down to a fine art, ughh, he's really messed up. Where is this going? I almost want her to commit suicide so she can get away from him, which is a horrible thing to wish for someone but really it seems like a good option.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
He's impossible. So evilward, amazing job of getting capturing the evil. And, somehow you want him to get it and be good to her & for her to forgive him & have a hea, but with how he's been that seems an impossible.
Date: 13 Apr 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
I found and read your story ALL day yesterday. Finished this chapter this morning. Sorry I did not review every chapter but I HAD to go read the next chapter right then. SOOOO happy that I did not have to wait for updates. BUT now I am sad because I have to wait and this chapter ends in a cliffy. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon. Hope I can get some housework done today because I did NOT get ANY done yesterday. lol. Update SOOOOON, PLEASE!!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
Will Bella go dark?
Date: 02 Apr 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
This is still Darkward right?
Date: 31 Mar 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hi
I am so glad you updated. Hope everything has been well for you.
Can't wait for next update. A while back I was going to suggest something. I was going to suggest that bella tries to commit suicide or something and edward finds her and she is in alot of trouble and it wakes him up abit and realises what a jerk he has been. may be alice see thi and Carlisle has to treat her. edward ees the pain and uffering she has to go through during that time and change. this could be later on but it is hust a sugestion.
Take care.
Billi
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
I hope your headaches start feeling better! I have chronic headaches/migraine...and they can really run your life. I'll be keeping you in my prayers! Love the update...please update soon. :)
Date: 30 Mar 2011 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
sooo glad you're updating again! i've missed you and this story!
Date: 29 Mar 2011 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am wondering why Emmett didn't just take Bella from Edward? He could have brought Rosalie and they would have no problem with over powering him.
Date: 29 Mar 2011 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am enjoying your story. I read the next chapter in your blog and I am suprised that Edward really isn't treating her any better. I want to see him suffer for what he is doing, but it seems like the only way to make that happen is if Bella suffers. I hope it is time for a visit from Carlisle.
Date: 29 Mar 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
So glad you haven't given up on this story! I hope he changes his ways... soon. If not, I know he's going to really lose her.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
YEAH! I am so glad to see your posting your story here...your Edward is crazy, twisted, and utterly hilarious!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love it and you baby!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 17
I really love Freudward. I hope Bella will be OK.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
OK, I`ve red it , and it`s even worse. He IS an imbecille - literaly speaking ( the definition of person who don`t learn on their mistakes). But cant help it. For now I`m stuck with you. I just need to see the end, whatever like it will be. Whatever you choose, I will accept it, just please finish it ( I mean complete the story).
Strange , you turn all of us in Bella, and we will "just have to endure" (recognize the line?)
Date: 26 Mar 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
It was amusing in the begining. But she obviously dont enjoy, and tranforming in shell of a person with some big psychic damage . He, on the other hand is not changing, remaining some pretentious bighead unobserving imbecille, so now it`s just sick.
And way too realistic.
From this point my only happy ending is that she die and he live in regret for the rest of his egzistence.
I dont know. If something isn`t changing very soon, i will have to leave. We`ll see. I have yet two chapters.
But seriously you`ll have to have realy big imagination to make things right for her from here, cause I dont know what kind of normal person ( and without a Stockholme syndrome) could forgive what he did to her. And I´m not talking of sexual abuse ( hell sodomy can be very thrilling) , I`m talking of the lack of feeling.
Sorry girl, my complaint is simultaneously my bigest compliment and sign od respect - you way too realistic. You should write some serious shit, not FF.
I` ll just read those two remaining chapters....
Date: 26 Mar 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
This story is so different than what i read but it is good i really hate edward for what he is doing to bella but hopfully that will change I hope you are able to update soon i'll be waiting.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ugh, that was a hard chapter to stomach. I have forgotten how incredibly sick and evil this Edward is. But like a bloody car wreck, I can't help but look.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
I`m probably sick but I loved your story, I loved it to the core, I loved your evil, sarcastic, snarky Edward ( he amuses me so much) I loved his sardonic comments, his lasciviousness ( I broke my tongue, is this even a word?), his inner turmoil , I loved Freudeward... hell I swallow even the rape scene ( probably because in the end he DID satisfied her... did he?)....
I love it until it turn on in some BDSM shit. I dont have problem with floggers, riding crop, bondage and cuffs....( NOT on my skin of course). What piss me of in those BDSM scenes is forbidening of free talking your mind, for me this is the upmost level of slavery if someone can`t.... no MUST NOT say "Fuck you" is he/she is angry without some dammned punishment.
I just hope that the rest will not continue in the same tone...
Date: 26 Mar 2011 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
omg....finally!please update soon....cant wait for the next chapter.and get well soon!
xoxoxo
Date: 26 Mar 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 17
Poor B. Hmmm Can we find vamp cuffs and let someone violate him...
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
OMG! How you kept the same feel after all these months is beyond words. Thank you.
I like Freudward. But, Darkward is mesmerizing, too. I'm pretty black and white, so this works for me. I love your Bella and I am glad you chose to not give her a POV. Thank you for sparing us her pain and confusion. She's been kidnapped, raped, and sexually abused ... I think that's says it all.
Four or five chapters sounds perfect. Don't push it. Just make sure you take care of yourself.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
Thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can thanks....
Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
Can't tell if Bella enjoyed any of that or not? I guess this Edward is not a patient man!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is developing feelings!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
Such a naughty Edward! Love it!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow! Ive really miss Edward, the monster and of course YOU! I literally couldn't get to this fast enough when the update popped in my Inbox . Looking forward to more. Laters Babe!
Date: 26 Mar 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
can't wait 4 more
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hope she is ok!! Can't wait for more updates! Keep them coming!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 17
I´m so happy to have a new update!!! I really missed this story and now I can´t wait the next chapter and know what happened in the end!!!
xoxo hope you be fine
Date: 20 Mar 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh dear, she's really got herself into trouble now
Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Reread your story ... for the umpteenth time. I keep checking in just in case you have updated your personal status. An new chapter would be excellent, but only if you are doing well.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 16
interesting plot line , bella become doll for edward and he doesnt feel herself yet but he doesnt like the way bella act on him , im sure he is feeling grows , keep up dark edward up i like him
Date: 27 Oct 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
This story continues to baffle me with Edward's thought process. He seems quite delussional if you ask me. I can't wait for the next chapter to see how Bella reacts.
Please update soon!!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hi, I folllowed you here, albeit I don't much like this site. Authors don't answer reviews, and reviewers give you just a sentence, if any. The same stories I posted on Twilighted net got very intelligent and challenging reviews, so I am not posting anything more here. Ah, I also believe thta the big censorship scare on fanfiction net is abating. For sure, there you would get many more reviews, as your story is exciting.
Well now, coming to it. A really horrible Edward, a monster and a jerk. It would be interesting to know if something peculiar happened to him when he left the family. Even many conventional vampires are better than him ...
Of course all conventional vampires are rapists, even when sex is not involved, because they make free of the bodies of their victims, taking what is not given willingly. (BTW, does Edward normally kills women who agree to have sex with him - as it seems to be the case before Bella - or not?)
The slow changing of his atitude you are doing beautifully ... however he has to pay for what he has done, it can't be, lo I am changed, now I love you and she forgives him.
Well, I can only wait, can I?
Author's Response:
I may repost yet on ff. I'm glad you like the story. No worries ... it won't be the 'I've changed, you love me now & we live happily ever after story'. It wouldn't make sense.
I hope to be posting again soon. I've been having health issues lately. Right now, I want to cry ... just had ANOTHER root canal and it HURTS!!! GAH!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 16
I"m really liking this story! Great job!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
diary details so very great, can't wait 2 find out what happens next
Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
very neat & awesome
Date: 29 Aug 2010 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
written & described well everything is
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
good & neat also written well
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
this here chapter is good & neat @ the same time