Now thats what I am talking about!  Go Bella!  I am loving Misstress Bella big time.  I am glad she put him in his place and her demands are prefect!  She gave him herself 100% and he took advantage of it and he needed to be punished.  I loved the last whipping right on his peter!  Excellent!  Well done and I can not wait to read who Zen met up with.  I hope Edward keeps his promise to Bella!

Wow, that was great!  So glad they talked :D

The ten is for all the chapters. Interesting and instense writing. I hope to read more soon. You are doing exceptionally well for a first effort. Thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much that means alot to me reviews like this keep me going !

I am pretty sure what you are setting up here, I won't read on. BDSM is one thing this sharing 3 some part not for me.  One more chapter and I think I will know.

Having sex with a man is still cheating. BDSM or not. Cheating is cheating.

Not very happy with Edward now.

wow that was hot!hope it brings edward out his self.can't wait tiill he goes bck to dominant edward but mistress bella is hot too.fab chapter.still think zed should hook up with jesse their both hot!

Awww wanted one threesome..... ah well.  go bella  yum.

ok   her switching.... cool.   No ZED?!?!?!    nooooo he is hawt.

oooh  Ian Somerhalder is so f'ing hawt.  I love him.

Hmm so Zed can read her mind where eddie cant?

hmmm that car is fuck hawt.  Blue is my fav color too.   Glad she called him.   Wow  lots of wolves still in forks although no vamps around anymore.

checklists were interesting.    Zed is hawt.    cnat blame bella for wanting a little time to herself to think.

yumminess.

ah that explains my questions from the last chapter.   guess he decided not to wait for the wedding after all huh.  So why throw her into a tree?

interesting start.   Its a BDSM fic.  not too ruff.  If people dont understand what it is, there is a red X in the corner.

loved it !!!!!

Author's Response:

You are the best  thanks alot

That was definetly HOT!!!  So glad the Zed will not be joining them, can't wait to see who tell him the great news!!!

I wish I could give you a higher rating than this 10 'cause just the pics (thanks by the way for the fantasy material) are worth a 50 OMG!

And the story I gurry home everyday in hopes of a new hothothot!! chapter I"m gonna go for that shower and a siff HaHa ! drink now keep it up ooops ha!Ha!

Love it.

Good chapter, wish it was longer.

I just found this story and it is great, what an orginal idea!!!  How very very naughty!!!  I can't wait to see what happens next.

After talking to my Twilight partner in crime she suggested something that i hope could be where you are going with this. Does Zed have some hinding power like binding where he can make Edward do things that he should not have. Please tell me if I can hope for this since I really do not want to believe he would do this to Bella. drop a hint if you can. I will keep reading if you say there is a HEA for Edward and Bella together. I do love the pictures they are great.

Thank youave  for given her a backbone. I think she should send him away. So it is okay that he is fucking some guy but she can't. I would really like if you have Jesse and Zed leave and have Bella do some switch on Edward. I really love your writing but I still can not stand him hurting her so. Does he think it is okay that she is hurting because he was off getting his happy time.

Ok let me start with the picture!  AWESOME! 

Edward is a selfish, cheating piece of shit.  Not only did he keep very important information about his life and life style from Bella, he also cheated on her!  They are engaged to be married!  Does the commentment he made to her and the ring she wears mean nothing to him?  Now Zed want part of the fun, Hell no!  Please make our Bella stronge and tell these fuckers Fuck you and get out!  It would be cool to see Bella get it on with Jessie and have Edwrad endure the pain Bella is going though.  Or better yet Zed and Bella can both punish Edward by having sex with each other and not allowing Edward be a part of it and make him watch.  Edward does not deserve Bella and he has to earn her trust and love back.  How could he think that Bella would allow him to be her Dom and then allow another man be her Dom aswell.  She would be a slave to them both and she would get to pleasure them both and maybe she would get something out of it.  Please give our Bella a backbone and make her their Mistress!  Oh yes!!!

another really good chapter.  your writing has improved with every chapter

No, please, I sure hope Bella is not that dumb!!! RUN! Go to Jesse! It will never work for the 3 of them, Bellas love for Edward is for him, fine to be attracted to another,but not act on it. Come on, I feared this!

Author's Response:

Remeber I did promise a HEA.... Everyone makes mistakes even Edward and Bella or we wouldn't be human......hmmm I guess that would be vampire

Well, I  think this story is HOT!!! Yes, Edward should have been honest first, but remember over 100 years, a lot of confessing here. But, sex with Master Zeb....if Edward wanted to be Bella Master doesn't this "cancel" Master Zebs contract with Edward?? Or since she didn't sign yet it still on?? Bella should not let Edward "off the hook" so easy for having sex with him, calling for advice ok but sex, no. If it were me I would always wonder, am I enough, is he really wanting a man...Bella missing for 2 months is dramatic, as well as Edward on a beach and not knowing 2 months has past,.  Great story, can't wait to see what happens when all truth comes out. I just hope its not a 3 person orgy.

AMAZING :D

This is great, but what is hard to read is the big paragraphs, break them up.  Also, the grammar/spelling issues are hard to ignore.  I am copy/pasting into a Word document and making corrections so it is easier for me to read.  I really love this, don't get me wrong, it's just I am so anal about grammar/spelling.  Cannot wait to read more :)

This sounds great so far, but it is very hard to read.

i hope master zed can help them.fantastic chapter.

Hello!  Fisrt off great story!  I really like dom/sub Edward and Bella stories just as mush as Bella/Edward dom sub stories.  I was going to review tomorrow but I couldn't wait to get this out of my chest.  I have real issues with Edward. 

 He asked for honesty in his agreement with Bella and he was not honest with her at all.  He never told her he was with many other women, that at one point in his life he was a sub and most importantly that he was bi sexual.  That is something he should have disclosed to Bella at least when he got engaged to Bella.  How can he keep nsuch a thing from her.  Not only does she have to be aware of women going after her man but men too or Edward leaving her for one or the other. 

I am glad Bella left because she really needs to figure out if this is the life she wants to lead.  Will Edward marry her or is he just going to keep her as a sub forever?  He does not even tell Bella to her face about his past! How fucked up is that? I promise you I will review everything to put up a chapter because I want to see how Edwrad is going to react wothout Bella for a while. 

great chapter im sorry i was one of those readers not reviewing i will do better

I think I want my own Dark Angel to submit to ... yep yep yep....I need a cold shower

some hot shit going on  can't wait tell next chapter

Oh my my look at that pic  Nice  I am really looking foward to where these two are going

I'm so sorry but I was kinda busy reacting a few of the picture with my personal boytoy/2 legged sex toy!!!!!! whoops I drooled a little don't ask where hahahaha!!! You are the best!!! More More puleaseee!!

OMG!!!!!!! The picture is amazing!!!!!! Can't wait to read more.

I can't wait!!

Author's Response:

my beta should have my next chapter back to me soon

I'm surprised you got so many reads and so little reviews.  Those two are some very naughty dirty vampires, I'm very curious to see where you take the story

I am sorry not to have reviewed before now. I enjoy your story so far, the glimpse into Edwards mind today was great. It is nice to see him as worried about being rejected as Bella is. Great work.

Author's Response:

Well thank you very much I try to go back and forth

:-)

So hot!  

Hi, the story is good...the wording seems to be rushing, skipping over details so that the emotion and the feeling of being right there with your characters cannot quite develop.  I like the story and will keep reading, but it would be great if you spend some words describing the scene and the feelings the characters were having.

keep going