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Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 6 Collared

Let the training begin

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 5 The Master awakens

Let the kinky times begin. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 4 Where's Jake, Edward"

Hot!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 3 Biggest mistake of my life

Oh no. What happened to Jake

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 2 Prologue Edward's POV

Omgosh!!!!! What a picturd5

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 2 Prologue Edward's POV

Omgosh!!!!! What a picturd5

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2018 4:10 PM Title: Chapter1 Prologue Bella's POV

Sounds very hot and Interesting. 

 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 18 The arrivial part 2

seth is a little young to be alpha

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 16 Questions and Answers

I want to review more but it looks I did a good job the first time I read this

Reviewer: evcullengirlna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter1 Prologue Bella's POV

just beautful

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 24

poorEmmett

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 25

Love it

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2013 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 25

Good story

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 25

I was not ready for it to be over. I am sad. My heart goes out to Emmett. Thanks for sharing your story with us. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 24

I am like Emmett, I am hoping for a miracle for Rose. Glad that Edward and Bella have reconnected. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 23

Can't they put Rose back together???? How did Emily turn into a wolf and Billy too??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 22

Who is the black wolf??? Leah maybe.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 20 Jesse & Zeds Mating

Glad that Jesse is not upset with Zed for biting him when he did. I am not to keen on Jesse feeding humans. I wished the both Zed and Jesse would feed on animals. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 19 The Make Up / The Awaking

So gald that Dom Edward is back. Love the scene. I hope Jesse is going to be ok. I am wondering how his blood lust is going to be.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 The arrivial part 2

Wow, so the wolves think that Bella killed Jacob and Sam. I hope that Seth can keep them under control. They have to follow a direct order from their Alpha, right. Well, Seth just needs to give them a direct order not to hurt the Cullens and their friends. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 16 Questions and Answers

Wow, a lot happened in this chapter. I am glad that Dom Edward stepped up and stopped Bella from hurting Zed. I like Edward better as a Dom then a sub. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 15 True mates no matter what

I knew it was Jesse. What did Zed do?? Bite his arm?? He did not make love to him??? I hope Jesse will understand the Zed could not control himself. Hope everything turns out ok. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 14 "The Playroom"

So Bella really did hit his cock for letting Master Zed fuck him. lol. Bad bad Bella. 

I am thinking that the mystery person is Jesse. Can't wait to find out. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 13 "The Table's Have Turned"

Love the pictures. I did not see that coming. I did not see Bella becoming his Domme. Wow!!!!! I am glad that Edward did not hurt Jesse. Thanks for not letting him hurt Jesse.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 12 " The Talk "

OMGosh!!!!! Please do not let Edward hurt Jesse. Please let him follow Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 11 I just don't understand

Why does Jesse know what Bella is? She is a vampire, why does she need help with her house, she could have done it. Love me some Master Zed. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reclaimed

Well, it seems like the boys did play while they waited on Bella to contact them. lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 9 Watched

I like how you are moving this story along. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 8 Master I need you

Wow, Edward is really taken with his Master. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 7 Dreams & Lies

In a way I do not blame Bella. She needs time to think about ALL he has told her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2013 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 6 Collared

Beautiful~~~~~

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 5 The Master awakens

I am loving the changes in Edward and Bella. Great story. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 4 Where's Jake, Edward"

I am loving all these pictures!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 25

Ty for writing and sharing hun

ty

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2013 5:48 AM Title: Chapter1 Prologue Bella's POV

Very Sexy!  Love the pictures!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 24

yummy   hope for more soon

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 24

Thank God your back!!!  great update... !  please don't wait  so long for the next one!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 23

Aww poor emmett

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 23

Awww no i really like rose as well :,(

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 8:19 AM Title: Chapter1 Prologue Bella's POV

Haha its ok

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 22

eeek

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 22

I thought sam was dead

Author's Response:

He Is I'm sorry I wrote the wrong thing .. thank you so much

 

Edward hugs and kisses to you dear !ed

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 2 Prologue Edward's POV

I love it!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

OMG, never thought it would come to this!

Reviewer: DarkAndAngsty Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 8 Master I need you

Oh, my, Master Zed is hot. I'd love a round with those two!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2012 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 8 Master I need you

ooookay! Master Zed... this should be interesting!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 7 Dreams & Lies

great chapter

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2012 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 6 Collared

brilliant!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2012 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 5 The Master awakens

great chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2012 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 21

I feel ya.  Had CT surgery myself.  Dont rush your healing or skimp on your physical therapy.



Author's Response:

Thanks for understanding !

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2012 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 20 Jesse & Zeds Mating

OH SNAP!  I really loved this!  I cannot wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2012 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 20 Jesse & Zeds Mating

So glad to see them mate.  very good chapter.. looking forward to the next one

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 20 Jesse & Zeds Mating

woo hoo for new mates

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 20 Jesse & Zeds Mating

So if zed and jessee are mated, forever, in l,ove, why did zed fuck Edwqrd when Bella left for a while?  If Edward and bella were truely mated Edward shouldn't want to fuck anyone, no matter how long Bella had been away.  zed should not have disrespected ther 'mating bond" Edward and Bella had.  Masybe, im confused....but locvin the story!!



Author's Response:

Zed did not know Jesse then.

Zed didn't understand the mating and how it felt !

and our poor Edward was doing what his

master has told him he had to do or he would

be punished !!!! But hey all is good now at least for now

the wolves are coming .

hahahahahahahaha !!!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2012 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 20 Jesse & Zeds Mating

good luck with whatever is going on... love the story

Reviewer: BrieFree Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 The Make Up / The Awaking

I think this has to be the most erotic reading of Edward and Bella I've read , I have to admit this turns me on . I had to take quite a few breaks to calm down, I wonder ..are you interested in collaborating on creating a hot story with Jasper and Alice? Or would rosalie and Emmet be a better choice?

Reviewer: kimee0479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Make Up / The Awaking

Wow! I cant wait to red more!!

Reviewer: kimee0479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 4 Where's Jake, Edward"

Wow! Lovethe story!!

Reviewer: BrieFree Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 6 Collared

Damn Edward, I knew he was a naughty boy but damn.. Now I'm finding myself more curious on how the other Cullen couples are like with each other. Hmm .

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 The Make Up / The Awaking

That was great, but everything is bold!  I know that it isn't supposed to be like that.  I cannot wait for more :)



Author's Response:

I don't know really all I know it too almost 2 hours to post with my net problems

so hope next one goes better Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Make Up / The Awaking

WOW...HOT!!!!! I am so very glad it's just Edward and Bella now and Zed has Jesse!!  I just had a hard time imagining Bella having to share Edward!!  Great chapter, can't wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:

thanks alot glad you like it

Reviewer: BrieFree Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 4 Where's Jake, Edward"

So far so awesome.. I'm curious to how the other wolfpack members will react to Bella's acts.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Make Up / The Awaking

Very hot chapter!  Please update very soon!



Author's Response:

thanks alot

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Make Up / The Awaking

yay!!! Dark Angel is back!!!!  Now Bella can have her Master again...  so Jessie is awake and seems to remember Zed well that's good now they have each other and Zed can leave Edward alone... ***snide smirks*** sorry love my Edward and Bella just sayin'   Love this story though!!!  Happy Thanksgiving!!!! Thanks for the chapter, I've missed it!!!! take care!!!



Author's Response:

Yes Dark Angel is back I missed him too

thank you for the love

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 19 The Make Up / The Awaking

yummyyummyyummyyummyyummyyummyyummyyummyyummyyummyyummy

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 11 I just don't understand

haha now eddie has two people out to bust his balls!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 10 Reclaimed

i wonder what bella is gonna think of ed and zed getting nasty while she was away?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 9 Watched

time for the past and the present to meet and help create a future.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 8 Master I need you

eddie zoned out for 2 months?!?!?!? how long did it take bella to get back to forks? how long till they meat again? and what is gonna happen with master zed?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 7 Dreams & Lies

wow eddie that sure was a big bomb to drop on poor bella! she has a right to be pissed and upset. that was a lot of no's for bella and a lot of yes's for eddie

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 6 Collared

loved the towel pic! ohlala!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 5 The Master awakens

oh nelly! time for the fun to begin! ed has a lot of years worth of dominance to work out.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 4 Where's Jake, Edward"

i am lovin all of your pics!! time for ed to have a talk with miss bella.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 3 Biggest mistake of my life

well hot damn! but something tells me sam killed jake....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 Prologue Edward's POV

nice pic! very nice. looks like it is time for eddie to let himself go...

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter1 Prologue Bella's POV

yummy!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 18 The arrivial part 2

Awww poor seth

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 18 The arrivial part 2

I think I got lost in this chapter.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 18 The arrivial part 2

OH SNAP!  I really loved that :)  Loved the pictures as always :D  Cannot wait for more lemons and to see what happens when Jesse wakes up :)

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 18 The arrivial part 2

Wow!!! The whole family knew about Edward and Zed?? Huh, I think Bella has to mae Edward promise that when they marry, he know that he will have to be faithful, Master or not. I think deep down, Bella is not over the fact that Edward was with a man and another that he had sex with said man when they were apart. I can't wait for more. This is a great story. I bet many laughs to come with Em arriving!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 18 The arrivial part 2

soooo good  I love Emmett!!!  I seriously wondering if Alice knew about Edwards past with Zed.. can't wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 17 The Arrival

fab chapter yey master edwards back.omg wonder who knocked edward over.update soon

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 16 Questions and Answers

fab chapter that was hot!hope jesses ok.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 17 The Arrival

guessing the end was alice.     Woo Hoo for finally talking and marriage agreement!!!

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 17 The Arrival

I am holding you to that promise too!  Great chapter, I really like Edward's roll in the beginning.  Thanks for bringing him back.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 17 The Arrival

Wow, really loved this!  Cannot wait to see who it is!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 17 The Arrival

well Holy Shit!!!! that was Fantastic.... can't wait for more

Reviewer: westernwaydomesticgoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 16 Questions and Answers

Loving this story so much please hurry up and write some more chapters.

Cannot wait to find out more about Jesse and Zed and how their relationship developes.

Reviewer: westernwaydomesticgoddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 7 Dreams & Lies

loving this story and keen to see where it will go

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 16 Questions and Answers

Wow, that was great ;)  Cannot wait to see what all happens when Jesse wakes up ;)



Author's Response:

awww thanks your the best

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 13 "The Table's Have Turned"

ahh.. I can not do this. Way to perverted for me.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry to hear that  it was posted as

nc/17 as well ass Bdsm  but thanks

for reading up to this point !

I do have 2 other storys you might

want to check out !!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 16 Questions and Answers

its between zed and jesse.   b needs to mind her biz.



Author's Response:

This is true but B

is worried about her friend

and B has alot going in her mind

at the moment !

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 16 Questions and Answers

WOW, that was intense!



Author's Response:

Thanks

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2011 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 16 Questions and Answers

this story just keeps drawing a person in....



Author's Response:

We aim to please !

Thanks for reading

Reviewer: gmteenz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2011 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 15 True mates no matter what

love it

Reviewer: Curlykate Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 10 Reclaimed

Fab story but if I were Bella I'd cut off his balls for cheating  like this.

Reviewer: Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 15 True mates no matter what

Wow, not lovie for the human!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 15 True mates no matter what

yey so glad him n jesse got together their perfect for each other.fab chapter that was hot!update soon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 15 True mates no matter what

yummy then oops

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review !!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 15 True mates no matter what

OH SNAP!  Very nice.  Love the pictures ;)



Author's Response:

awww... thanks

you are awesome lady!!!

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